This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月15日 at 0:07:11

Artist: Porno Graffitti
Title: Apollo
Tags: j-pop jpop
BPM: 85
Filesize: 2776kb
Play Time: 02:18
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.23 stars, 134 notes)
2. Hard (4.75 stars, 350 notes)
3. Normal (3.95 stars, 188 notes)

Download: Porno Graffitti - Apollo
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#4

Hi, here is the Mod :3

General
Make hitsounds louder.. cant even hear them some times

Easy
A lot of things here have a bit wrong spacing but i just listed these where it is really notable ^^

00:38:610 (4) - Move to x406 y308
00:43:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm is a bit weird maybe change the 1,2 more round or the 4,5 to less round or change the slider^^
00:52:832 (1,2,3,1) - Looks weird ..maybe make the circles something else so its a bit more round
00:57:888 (1) - Remove clap
01:41:818 (2,3) - Correct spacing please.. looks weird (i know its just a bit but it looks much better if its all the same o:)
01:44:030 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:667 (1,2) - ^

Normal
This dif is good :3 just some things

01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Make this louder or make normal hitsounds because i cant even hear there hitsounds and its not playing that good^^
02:05:521 (4) - Maybe make this to a circle just.. fits better for me^^
02:10:577 (3) - Remove clap at the end of this slider

Hard

00:08:966 (5) - New combo
00:14:260 (4) - ^
00:28:655 - Make a hitcircle here?^^ (at x228 y184)
01:30:757 (1) - Remove new combo
01:47:507 (6) - Make this somewhere else its at the combo number and its not looking good there
01:58:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as normal
02:06:785 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make spacing normal because these jumps are really hard with the 2 circles i think

Parachute wrote:

Hi, here is the Mod :3

General
Make hitsounds louder.. cant even hear them some times I know your mean, but it's already 90% so it's difficult...

Easy
A lot of things here have a bit wrong spacing but i just listed these where it is really notable ^^ o.w? I put notes with ×1.1 DS...

00:38:610 (4) - Move to x406 y308 no fixed because I put notes with DS
00:43:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm is a bit weird maybe change the 1,2 more round or the 4,5 to less round or change the slider^^ ok, I changed placement
00:52:832 (1,2,3,1) - Looks weird ..maybe make the circles something else so its a bit more roundfixed
00:57:888 (1) - Remove clap fixed
01:41:818 (2,3) - Correct spacing please.. looks weird (i know its just a bit but it looks much better if its all the same o:) maybe fixed
01:44:030 (1,2,3) - ^
01:50:667 (1,2) - ^

Normal
This dif is good :3 just some things

01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Make this louder or make normal hitsounds because i cant even hear there hitsounds and its not playing that good^^ fixed~
02:05:521 (4) - Maybe make this to a circle just.. fits better for me^^ fixed
02:10:577 (3) - Remove clap at the end of this slider I just feel weird... so nofixed

Hard

00:08:966 (5) - New combo fixed
00:14:260 (4) - ^ fixed
00:28:655 - Make a hitcircle here?^^ fixed (at x228 y184)
01:30:757 (1) - Remove new combo it needs because player will be easy to hit I suppose.
01:47:507 (6) - Make this somewhere else its at the combo number and its not looking good there well, in grid line this placement. so currently no fixed but if other modders say that, I'll fix it.
01:58:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as normal fixed
02:06:785 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make spacing normal because these jumps are really hard with the 2 circles i think maybe you're right, but it is the most difficult diff. so I don't change now.

thanks for modding and star~

PORNO GRAFFITTI IN OSU

AAAJGHJDHGLH

YAY! <3


[Hard]
00:38:768 (4) - Maybe new combo here?
00:33:712 (4,5) - These would be better as a one long slider. Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1t2cI
^if you do this, move the end of (3) about 3-4 grids down. Looks smoother.
^Aaaand maybe move (5,6,7) 4 grids up to get rid of some little overlapping with sliders.
00:41:296 (4,5) - Make these into a one long slider also, fits the rhythm better.
01:39:448 (4) - Maybe new combo?

[Normal]
00:52:832 (1,2) - Use similar rhythm as (2,3) in the previous combo, it fit's nicely.
01:54:143 (2) - Try not to use fast notes in easier diffs. >: Maybe same thing here as before?

Star!

かじやったさんこんばんは!!
From in via game chat ~M4M~

[General]

[Hard]
[Normal]
[Easy]
いい曲ですね！頑張ってください(　・ω・)ノ★

Lanttu wrote:

PORNO GRAFFITTI IN OSU

AAAJGHJDHGLH

YAY! <3 YEAY >0< osu needs more porno graffiti I suppose :3


[Hard]
00:38:768 (4) - Maybe new combo here? I usually put NC per 8 beats sorry><
00:33:712 (4,5) - These would be better as a one long slider. Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/1t2cI nice :3
^if you do this, move the end of (3) about 3-4 grids down. Looks smoother.
^Aaaand maybe move (5,6,7) 4 grids up to get rid of some little overlapping with sliders.
00:41:296 (4,5) - Make these into a one long slider also, fits the rhythm better . fixed
01:39:448 (4) - Maybe new combo? same as above

[Normal]
00:52:832 (1,2) - Use similar rhythm as (2,3) in the previous combo, it fit's nicely. fixed
01:54:143 (2) - Try not to use fast notes in easier diffs. >: Maybe same thing here as before? well, I suppose following vocal may be more better because of flow and there is a easier diff excluding this diff. but othere modders mentionthat, I'll fix it.
Star!

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

[General]

1. Mp3の音質(ビットレート)を128kbpsから最大の192kbpsまであげれたらあげたほうがいいかも!! 128~192の範囲内なので今のところはno fixedです＞＜
2. AudioLeadIn: 0で十分だと思う1000もいらない気がする!!　fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:08:260 - 3がちょうど真ん中に来たら綺麗かなって そうさせたいのは山々何ですが、等間隔に配置するとどうしても1 gridずれてしまい、そのズレよりは綺麗に配置したほうが見栄えがいいのでここはno fixedです
2. 00:11:083 - Whistleとかどう？　fixed
3. 00:16:730 - ^ fixed
4. 00:21:702 - スタックを綺麗にできたらもう少し見栄えよくなるかもかも 多分fixed?
5. 00:34:818 - いきなりのジャンプだからCtrl+Gのほうがいいかも？ 前にジャンプを一度入れてあるので予想しにくくはないと思うのですが…もし同様の指摘を受けたら変更します
6. 01:04:999 - ここと　01:05:078 - ここにnote追加して３連打とか 前の一つのみ追加　連打は合わないような気がしました...
7. 01:13:532 - かこもう！　？
8. 01:55:566 - Nc　01:55:724 - RemoveNc　どう？　NCは8拍子毎に打っているので、三連打ではNCの間隔は変えないようにしています（連打が多かったりすると追加したりしますが…) ここも見づらいなどの指摘を受けたら変更します
9. 02:16:108 - ここだけ？スライダーの下にnoteがあるから変えれるのであれば変えたら簡単になるかも!!　fixed
10. 02:21:007 - みづらいからCtrl+Gのほうが私は好きですｗ 配置を変えました

[Normal]

1. 00:47:459 - HardではFinishを使っていますがNormalがClapなのはミス？ ミスです　fixed

[Easy]

1. looks good

いい曲ですね！頑張ってください(　・ω・)ノ★

thanks for modding and star!

General

Easy

Normal

Hard
いつもお世話になってます
頑張ってください～

jamxx wrote:

General

1. tagにj-pop追加?
2. soft-slidertickとsoft-hitclapの音量が同じですが、譜面中でtickの音量を下げてない箇所があるためclapより大きく鳴っている場所があります。緑線引くのもいいですが、tickのwavファイルをいじった方が楽なので、-4dbした物を置いておきます。 http://puu.sh/1to4i ありがとうございます！　使わせていただきました！

Easy

1. 00:23:756 (4) - 終点clap忘れ?　fixed
2. 00:26:285 (3) - clap削除? fixed
3. 00:27:549 (1) - こちらも終点clap fixed
4. 00:47:459 (4) - もう少し上に移動した方が流れがいいです fixed
5. 01:04:051 (2) - 始点のclapが浮いて聴こえるので削除 fixed
6. 01:16:219 (2,4) - clapのタイミングから外れるのでwhistleでもいいと思いました fixed
7. 01:20:643 (x) - kiaiここまで? oops... fixed
8. 01:52:879 (3) - clap→whistle 一箇所しか無いのでここだけつけると逆に浮くような気がするのでここはそのままで
9. 02:02:676 (2) - hitsound忘れ?　fixed
10. 02:14:844 (2) - 01:04:051 (2) - と同じ fixed

Normal

1. 01:01:365 (4,5) - このスタックはわかりにくい気がしたので、重ねないほうが叩けるように感じました Easy difがあることと、スタックを避けてDS通り配置するとスペーシングが変わり見た目が雑に感じるように思えるので今のところはno fixedです。同じような提案があれば変更します
2. 01:03:419 (2) - 終点clap削除　fixed
3. 01:04:367 (x) - ここのtickでスネアの音入れるといいと思いました fixed
4. 01:09:898 (5) - 始点clap削除 fixed
5. 01:33:601 (1) - 次への流れが悪い気がしたので、01:32:969 (6) - も直線ですし、ここも真上に直線で伸ばしてもいいと思います 別の形でfixed
6. 01:57:304 (4) - 折り返しにclap fixed
7. 01:58:568 (1,2,3) - このままでも十分ですが一番のサビに入る部分のように作ると、よりかっこ良くなると思いました。以下は提案の画像です。
   
   SPOILER

   
   音取りとしては提案のほうが合っているのですが、やはりつながりが多少悪いのでいい案だと思うのですが、一旦保留にさせてください＞＜
8. 02:10:577 (3) - 始点clap削除　fixed
9. 02:14:686 (4,5) - このスタックも同様に重ねないほうがいいと思います上と同じ
10. 02:18:162 (4) - 終点clap fixed
11. 02:20:375 (4) - 終点clap削除 fixed

Hard

1. 00:37:820 (1) - 終点clap忘れ?　fixed
2. 00:52:832 (1) - HPバーにスライダーが被っているので、00:51:884 (4) - の角度を変えるなどしてもう少し下に持ってこれるといいと思います fixed
   
3. 01:30:757 (1) - ここのnew comboは無い方がまとまって見えていいと思います fixed
4. 01:50:983 (1) - 終点clap忘れ? fixed
5. 02:06:785 (3) - ここからのパート、hardにしては少しジャンプがきついように感じたので02:07:101 (5,6) - を動かして1.6xくらいに近づけてみては? ジャンプは大体×2.0で合わせてるので今のところはno　fixedで、同様の指摘を受けたら変更します
6. 02:21:007 (9) - 折り返しのclapは無いほうがすっきりして聴こえると思いました fixed

いつもお世話になってます
頑張ってください～

ヒットサウンドに関しては結構迷っていた部分もあったので、非常に役に立つmoddingでした。　thanks for modding.

mod req via forum-PM.
sry for delay; im learning drawing on weekend these days. T_T

[Hard]

1. 00:50:067 (5) - delete this note, or add a note at 00:50:225 -
2. 01:02:866 - add note to make a consistent rhythm with 01:01:207 (2,3,4) -
3. 01:20:485 (8) - try 2 notes to instead it.
4. 02:12:869 (6) - delete this. not fit music
5. 02:21:007 (9) - try change to 3 notes to end whole music

[Normal]

1. 00:10:730 (4) - add whistle at end to fit music?
2. 01:03:419 (2) - add clap at end

[Easy]

1. 00:11:083 (4) - add whistle at end to fit music?
2. 00:14:613 (1) - change clap to finish?
3. 00:17:436 - for HP drain 2, this break can be deleted
4. 00:47:459 - same
5. 01:48:139 - same
6. 00:27:549 (1) - change valume to 80% at end
7. 01:52:879 (3) - 1 grid left?(grid level 4

good map anyway(*'︶'σ)σ♡!!
GL~

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via forum-PM.
sry for delay; im learning drawing on weekend these days. T_T np :3

[Hard]

1. 00:50:067 (5) - delete this note, or add a note at 00:50:225 - delete it
2. 01:02:866 - add note to make a consistent rhythm with 01:01:207 (2,3,4) - fixed
   
3. 01:20:485 (8) - try 2 notes to instead it. fixed
4. 02:12:869 (6) - delete this. not fit music fixed
5. 02:21:007 (9) - try change to 3 notes to end whole music fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:10:730 (4) - add whistle at end to fit music? fixed
2. 01:03:419 (2) - add clap at end fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:11:083 (4) - add whistle at end to fit music? fixed
2. 00:14:613 (1) - change clap to finish? I don't hear finish in back music, so probably clap seems better I suppose.
3. 00:17:436 - for HP drain 2, this break can be deleted fixed
4. 00:47:459 - same
5. 01:48:139 - same
6. 00:27:549 (1) - change valume to 80% at end oops... fixed
7. 01:52:879 (3) - 1 grid left?(grid level 4 fixed

good map anyway(*'︶'σ)σ♡!!
GL~

thanks for nice modding! it's so useful owo))//

Ask me in-game if you have any questions.

[Hard]

1. 00:42:087 (6,2,4) - I think they are curved too much, I'd prefer something like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:01:997 (5) - atm it looks like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   How about this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:999 (6,7,8,1) - the distance is too high imo. You use either 1,0x or slider jumps and suddenly you make this circle jumps. It doesn't really fit either. At least lower the distance a bit, atm is is just exaggerated. I can't really explain well why excatly I don't like these jumps so you can ignore it if you want to.
4. 01:44:504 (5,6) - instead of circle-slider, slider-circle would feel better here. How it is now:
   
   SPOILER

   
   How it should be:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. It's probably too late now but I find it a bit suboptimal that Hard has a SV of 1,6, Normal has a SV of 0,8 and Easy has one of 0,7. The spread is not really good.
2. 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) - what about this instead (fits the rhythm better): ctrl+shift+s 0,75x on the slider (1), delete (2,3,4) and copy the slider (1) to the previous position of (2).
3. 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:38:926 (5) - this would look better of it was around x:244 y:144 so that (3,4) would better better over to the slider. (6) should be around x:64 y:220 then.
5. 01:45:926 (5) - NC here already?

[Easy]

1. 01:19:379 (3) - the repeat doesn't really fit. Either so some circles here or make the repeat on (4) and make (3) a normal slider or or mix of this.
2. 02:16:266 (1) - make it so that it fits (2) more:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Do you see how it fits the approach circle of (2)?
   

   144,192,136266,6,0,B|176:216|248:216|280:192,2,140,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Sorry, I am not good in modding these kind of maps (symmetry, "roundish" patterns etc.). My mod is basically useless, feel free to ingore every point.

Tshemmp wrote:

Ask me in-game if you have any questions.

[Hard]

1. 00:42:087 (6,2,4) - I think they are curved too much, I'd prefer something like this: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:01:997 (5) - atm it looks like this: umm, sorry no fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
   How about this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:999 (6,7,8,1) - the distance is too high imo. You use either 1,0x or slider jumps and suddenly you make this circle jumps. It doesn't really fit either. At least lower the distance a bit, atm is is just exaggerated. I can't really explain well why excatly I don't like these jumps so you can ignore it if you want to. fixed
4. 01:44:504 (5,6) - instead of circle-slider, slider-circle would feel better here. How it is now: umm, maybe I'll fix it if others say one more.
   
   SPOILER

   
   How it should be:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. It's probably too late now but I find it a bit suboptimal that Hard has a SV of 1,6, Normal has a SV of 0,8 and Easy has one of 0,7. The spread is not really good.
2. 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) - what about this instead (fits the rhythm better): ctrl+shift+s 0,75x on the slider (1), delete (2,3,4) and copy the slider (1) to the previous position of (2). well, I like this pattern so no fixed sorry.
3. 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:38:926 (5) - this would look better of it was around x:244 y:144 so that (3,4) would better better over to the slider. (6) should be around x:64 y:220 then. maybe fixed?
5. 01:45:926 (5) - NC here already? fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:19:379 (3) - the repeat doesn't really fit. Either so some circles here or make the repeat on (4) and make (3) a normal slider or or mix of this. really? I don't think so... but if others say that I'll fix.
2. 02:16:266 (1) - make it so that it fits (2) more: fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   Do you see how it fits the approach circle of (2)?
   

   144,192,136266,6,0,B|176:216|248:216|280:192,2,140,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Sorry, I am not good in modding these kind of maps (symmetry, "roundish" patterns etc.). My mod is basically useless, feel free to ingore every point.

thanks for moddings~

Hello Kajiyatta~
Modding via M4M <3

It's a great mapset already, so I'll just give my suggestions on how to make it even better.
All suggestions, please take from them what you wish and adopt them into your own style.

[Easy]

00:06:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This part is super slow so I think a more interesting arrangement for these sliders would have a better impact on new players. We should try and keep some sort of symmetry around the y axis here imo. Maybe something like this?
Afterwards the 00:11:789 (1,2) could flow towards the center of the screen to setup for he spinner. It might feel nicer.

00:35:766 (1,2,3,4,1) - These objects could be arranged a lot better imo. We should have the 00:35:766 (1,2,3) flowing nicely in a line towards the bottom corner. Also why not have the 3 blanket the 4? The 3 - 4 - 1 are sort of ugly to me in that the flow is not curved at all.

00:37:662 (3) - NC here to keep pattern of previous new combos. Plus the 00:37:662 (3,4,1,2) is all one vocal idea. You should not NC at 00:38:926 (1).

01:13:058 (1,2,3) - I think you should repeat the same pattern as before, the 01:02:945 (1,2,3). Players will be expecting that pattern and it plays/fits nicer than the repeating slider 3 imo.

[Normal]

00:27:549 (1,2,3) - This looks super ugly. Why not have the 00:26:601 (2,3,4,1,2) make up a nice star pattern? Something to make the 2 flow from the 1 a bit better.

00:40:190 (1,2,3,4) - You have a lot of these beautiful symmetric patterns, but a lot of the magic is take away because they aren't centered on the grid. Maybe if you made the 00:38:926 (5) curve a bit more you could have the 1-2-3-4 centered and it would look much nicer.

01:01:365 (4,5) - I think to follow the vocals better we should have the double stack at 01:00:733. Like this:


02:03:625 (1,2,3,4) - This plays bad imo. It's just feels so slow in comparison with the 02:01:096 (1,2,3,4). I suggest a different rhythm to speed it up. Maybe:

02:13:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you do change the rhythm at 01:01:365 (4,5) then you should change it here also for consistency.

02:17:530 (3,4) - Try and arrange it so these are perfectly centered.

[Hard]

Nice diff. :3
It's really fun.

In general here, I think it's quite difficult in comparison with the normal diff. You have some Insane level mechanics in here that I think you could probably do without since it's just a hard diff, and I'll point them out.
The BPM is quite high so we need to be careful here.

00:10:730 (2) - I think it would be more fun if you deleted this and had three circles flowing into the 00:11:789 (1) in a straight line just like 00:07:907 (2,3,4). It feels really nice in this section.

00:18:068 (4,5) - You should have SV lower here since the player can't really tell that the BPM has essentially more than doubled until 00:19:964 (1). The 4 and 5 should not be a 1.0 SV as it's really suprising coming out of the previous section.

00:42:087 (6,2,4) - You should remake these sliders with the new slider algorithm so that they look perfect.

00:59:785 (1) - I disagree with this SV change. I feel like because the the 00:59:785 (1,1) is such a large jump, the player really doesn't have time to notice the SV slowdown, and cannot appreciate it. The effect you were going for with the slow down is negated by the jump imo.

01:35:971 (1,2,3) - You don't need these triplets in this map imo. They aren't fitting to the music and add extra difficulty that you really don't need. Just delete the 2 imo.

01:43:635 (2) - Delete the 2, it's not necessary.

01:55:645 (7) - Delete.

These triplets aren't coinciding with anything in the music and will probably be very difficult for a player at this skill level, especially at this high of a BPM.

01:58:331 (9) - Delete
02:02:597 (6) - ^

02:06:785 (3,4,5,6) - These are insane difficulty jumps imo. I don't think you should do this in a hard difficulty.
Please just make it less of a jump.


Ok, well anyways I hope it's helpful. Great maps!
If it's hard to read let me know.
I'll leave star. <3

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello Kajiyatta~
Modding via M4M <3

It's a great mapset already, so I'll just give my suggestions on how to make it even better.
All suggestions, please take from them what you wish and adopt them into your own style.

[Easy]

00:06:142 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This part is super slow so I think a more interesting arrangement for these sliders would have a better impact on new players. We should try and keep some sort of symmetry around the y axis here imo. Maybe something like this?

Afterwards the 00:11:789 (1,2) could flow towards the center of the screen to setup for he spinner. It might feel nicer. I feel current flow seems good and simple, so no fixed.

00:35:766 (1,2,3,4,1) - These objects could be arranged a lot better imo. We should have the 00:35:766 (1,2,3) flowing nicely in a line towards the bottom corner. Also why not have the 3 blanket the 4? The 3 - 4 - 1 are sort of ugly to me in that the flow is not curved at all.

fixed.

00:37:662 (3) - NC here to keep pattern of previous new combos. Plus the 00:37:662 (3,4,1,2) is all one vocal idea. You should not NC at 00:38:926 (1). woo, i forgot it... fixed.

01:13:058 (1,2,3) - I think you should repeat the same pattern as before, the 01:02:945 (1,2,3). Players will be expecting that pattern and it plays/fits nicer than the repeating slider 3 imo. but maybe the samep pattern makes players bored imo... if other modders mentions that, I'll change.

[Normal]

00:27:549 (1,2,3) - This looks super ugly. Why not have the 00:26:601 (2,3,4,1,2) make up a nice star pattern? Something to make the 2 flow from the 1 a bit better. umm, i just make symmetrically so no fixed.

00:40:190 (1,2,3,4) - You have a lot of these beautiful symmetric patterns, but a lot of the magic is take away because they aren't centered on the grid. Maybe if you made the 00:38:926 (5) curve a bit more you could have the 1-2-3-4 centered and it would look much nicer. semi-changed

01:01:365 (4,5) - I think to follow the vocals better we should have the double stack at 01:00:733. Like this:

another fixed.

02:03:625 (1,2,3,4) - This plays bad imo. It's just feels so slow in comparison with the 02:01:096 (1,2,3,4). I suggest a different rhythm to speed it up. Maybe:

fixed

02:13:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you do change the rhythm at 01:01:365 (4,5) then you should change it here also for consistency. fixed

02:17:530 (3,4) - Try and arrange it so these are perfectly centered. fixed

[Hard]

Nice diff. :3
It's really fun.

In general here, I think it's quite difficult in comparison with the normal diff. You have some Insane level mechanics in here that I think you could probably do without since it's just a hard diff, and I'll point them out.
The BPM is quite high so we need to be careful here.

00:10:730 (2) - I think it would be more fun if you deleted this and had three circles flowing into the 00:11:789 (1) in a straight line just like 00:07:907 (2,3,4). It feels really nice in this section. a bit weird I feel, so no fixed.

00:18:068 (4,5) - You should have SV lower here since the player can't really tell that the BPM has essentially more than doubled until 00:19:964 (1). The 4 and 5 should not be a 1.0 SV as it's really suprising coming out of the previous section. well, as previous vocal part ends, so player can expect the high BPM coming and this diff is the most difficult diff, so maybe no problem. but others say that, I'll fix it.

00:42:087 (6,2,4) - You should remake these sliders with the new slider algorithm so that they look perfect. I hate circular slider...so, I don't use new slider algorhythm in my map sorry ><

00:59:785 (1) - I disagree with this SV change. I feel like because the the 00:59:785 (1,1) is such a large jump, the player really doesn't have time to notice the SV slowdown, and cannot appreciate it. The effect you were going for with the slow down is negated by the jump imo. maybe I know some say your suggetions right, but others mention that lower SV seems more better. I just select later one because the vocal and music becomes lower.

01:35:971 (1,2,3) - You don't need these triplets in this map imo. They aren't fitting to the music and add extra difficulty that you really don't need. Just delete the 2 imo. fixed

01:43:635 (2) - Delete the 2, it's not necessary. fixed

01:55:645 (7) - Delete.fixed

These triplets aren't coinciding with anything in the music and will probably be very difficult for a player at this skill level, especially at this high of a BPM.

01:58:331 (9) - Delete fixed
02:02:597 (6) - ^ fixed

02:06:785 (3,4,5,6) - These are insane difficulty jumps imo. I don't think you should do this in a hard difficulty. fixed tiny jump
Please just make it less of a jump.


Ok, well anyways I hope it's helpful. Great maps!
If it's hard to read let me know.
I'll leave star. <3

thanks for modding & star~

Hello kajiyatta . I'm sorry , I had forgotten the M4M

[Easy]

1. 00:11:083 (4) - I think if you remove the whistle for a consistency in this part. Or if you want put whistle
   to 00:08:260 (2) and 00:13:907 (2) , sounds better imo .But if you want, just remove the whistle here for consistency
2. 01:42:134 (3) - This flow flows very bad in my opinion. Maybe you could do the following to make this part more fun
   and beautiful. Try to create a better blanket in (3) with (2). I leave the code if you want to test
   
   Code

   116,160,101818,1,8,0:0:0
   44,184,102134,2,0,P|88:232|164:220,1,140

3. 01:48:139 (2) - This is easy to move. Move the circle to x :256 y:292 . You wonder is necessary or why? Beginners
   maybe confused with the direction of this circle, the circle also would be better if it is aligned with the slider above, this makes it
   easier to follow by example with flashlight

[Normal]

1. 00:27:549 (1,2) - Between the end of the slider and the circle there is a bad flow, which could perhaps be a little uncomfortable. In my opinion you should move the circle about 2 0 3 grids aligning right tail slider and fix the spacing of these circles. I leave the code if you want :
   
   Code

   144,268,29129,1,8,0:0:0
   188,200,29445,1,0,0:0:0
   120,156,29761,1,8,0:0:0

2. 01:04:051 (3) - Remove the clap of the end of the slider. Sounds bad with the music in my opinion
3. 01:40:238 (3) - Would be better if you do it right the slider. In conclusion eliminates the second point to form a pyramid with sliders
4. 01:41:502 (3) - This is easy to fix. Make the most curved slider, for better blanket with the next sliders
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:04:573 (2) - You could do a better blanket between these three sliders ?Maybe you could do so :
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:12:316 (3) - I know you're following the same consistency with your sliders. But you're forgetting to follow the music. In this part of the slider is not music. In my opinion the rhythm would be this:
   
   SPOILER

   

Sorry for the double post but I can't edit my mod above. I have no idea why

Good Luck in your map

XinCrin wrote:

00:11:083 (4) - I think if you remove the whistle for a consistency in this part. Or if you want put whistle
to 00:08:260 (2) and 00:13:907 (2) , sounds better imo .But if you want, just remove the whistle here for consistency fixed
■01:42:134 (3) - This flow flows very bad in my opinion. Maybe you could do the following to make this part more fun
and beautiful. Try to create a better blanket in (3) with (2). I leave the code if you want to test I don't like new algorithm, but maybe I'll change it another pattern.
■01:48:139 (2) - This is easy to move. Move the circle to x :256 y:292 . You wonder is necessary or why? Beginners
maybe confused with the direction of this circle, the circle also would be better if it is aligned with the slider above, this makes it
easier to follow by example with flashlight fixed

Normal
■00:27:549 (1,2) - Between the end of the slider and the circle there is a bad flow, which could perhaps be a little uncomfortable. In my opinion you should move the circle about 2 0 3 grids aligning right tail slider and fix the spacing of these circles. I leave the code if you want : fixed
■01:04:051 (3) - Remove the clap of the end of the slider. Sounds bad with the music in my opinion fixed
■01:40:238 (3) - Would be better if you do it right the slider. In conclusion eliminates the second point to form a pyramid with sliders maybe fixed
■01:41:502 (3) - This is easy to fix. Make the most curved slider, for better blanket with the next sliders fixed
02:04:573 (2) - You could do a better blanket between these three sliders ?Maybe you could do so fixed
■02:12:316 (3) - I know you're following the same consistency with your sliders. But you're forgetting to follow the music. In this part of the slider is not music. In my opinion the rhythm would be this: I feel a bit difficult this rythem...

well, I don't know why previous your post doesn't allow to "quote"... but thanks for moddings!

Hey! Cool map here. Time for a mod. :p

[General]
-Use Tick Rate 2, sounds better

[Hard] AR +1 is more readable to me.
00:31:183 (4) - Delete this and move 00:31:341 (5) - there instead so it fits with the vocals?
00:34:818 (7) - Take off the repeat and place a circle at 00:35:134 with New Combo. (New Combo is on the white bar that way + good flow into next circle)
00:43:351 (2) - Take off the repeat and make a 1/1 slider starting at 00:43:825 - (Delete anything that is in the way)
00:59:785 (1) - I think a circle instead of slider is better here
01:20:485 (8,9) - Reverse these two circles (better flow with the direction of previous slider)
01:43:398 (8) - New Combo should be here :p
02:00:464 (1) - Again, I think a circle is better.
Very fun difficulty, good job!

[Normal]
00:08:260 (2) - I think only a circle here is better (and doesn't overlap with next slider)
00:10:730 (4) - Again, except this time place the circle at 00:11:083 -
00:47:617 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
00:57:888 (1,2,3,4) - I think instead of sliders, use stacked 1/2 circles. More fun :p
01:03:419 (2) - This is a bit weird, it breaks the regular flow you had before. I suggest you do something like you did at 01:10:530 (1,2,3) - because it is very, very good.
01:48:297 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
Very well mapped Normal~

[Easy] There are many many sliders in this diff Sliders are harder than circles for new players, so use more circles. :p
00:47:617 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
01:02:945 (1,2) - This is confusing for a new player, please map this on white lines instead
01:48:297 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
02:11:210 (1,2) - Confusing again :p
02:13:738 (1,2) - ^

Very good map in general. Good luck!

Mr Color wrote:

Hey! Cool map here. Time for a mod. :p thx :3

[General]
-Use Tick Rate 2, sounds better umm, this suggestion is first, so I'll wait for some modders and some say that, I'll change this.

[Hard] AR +1 is more readable to me. maybe a bit slow in AR7, but it's my aimming. there are so many high AR maps, but I don't like them.
00:31:183 (4) - Delete this and move 00:31:341 (5) - there instead so it fits with the vocals? fixed
00:34:818 (7) - Take off the repeat and place a circle at 00:35:134 with New Combo. (New Combo is on the white bar that way + good flow into next circle) fixed
00:43:351 (2) - Take off the repeat and make a 1/1 slider starting at 00:43:825 - (Delete anything that is in the way) I put it symmetrically with previous slider (6), so no fixed.
00:59:785 (1) - I think a circle instead of slider is better here aha, it's second time in this suggetion, ok fixed.
01:20:485 (8,9) - Reverse these two circles (better flow with the direction of previous slider) another fixed.
01:43:398 (8) - New Combo should be here :p I forget it... thanks.
02:00:464 (1) - Again, I think a circle is better. fixed
Very fun difficulty, good job!

[Normal]
00:08:260 (2) - I think only a circle here is better (and doesn't overlap with next slider) fixed
00:10:730 (4) - Again, except this time place the circle at 00:11:083 - fixed
00:47:617 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you d on't want to map it put break here.
00:57:888 (1,2,3,4) - I think instead of sliders, use stacked 1/2 circles. More fun :p a bit difficult I suppose...
01:03:419 (2) - This is a bit weird, it breaks the regular flow you had before. I suggest you do something like you did at 01:10:530 (1,2,3) - because it is very, very good. fixed
01:48:297 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it adda a break.
Very well mapped Normal~

[Easy] There are many many sliders in this diff Sliders are harder than circles for new players, so use more circles. :p
00:47:617 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
01:02:945 (1,2) - This is confusing for a new player, please map this on white lines instead
01:48:297 - There is nothing for a long time here You can put a break here if you don't want to map it
02:11:210 (1,2) - Confusing again :p
02:13:738 (1,2) - ^
all fixed.

Very good map in general. Good luck!

it's so useful for me. thanks for modding and star

Well, that name really threw me off.

I thought the song would be different, but it's actually catchy. Whoa. Anyway, M4M request from my queue~

That's basically all I have to say about this. Very nice map! GL on rank~

Tsusuko wrote:

Well, that name really threw me off.

I thought the song would be different, but it's actually catchy. Whoa. Anyway, M4M request from my queue~

General

good

Easy

00:06:142 (1) Add finish to slider head whistler feels good for me.

Normal

AR +1? fixed
00:06:142 (1) Finish same as Easy
00:57:888 ~ 00:59:785 (1,5) Using the custom claps for this part might sound better, imo umm, I suppose normal-clap feels better but I'll wait for another modders.
01:58:568 ~ 02:00:464 (1,3) ^ ^

Hard

00:06:142 (1) yeah finish same as Easy
00:57:888 ~ 00:59:785 (1,5) same as normal same as Normal
01:58:568 ~ 02:00:464 (1,7) ^ ^

That's basically all I have to say about this. Very nice map! GL on rank~

thanks for moddings & star~

here have a star

Hi there, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[General:]

• 
  Haha the background. Nice.
  Nice combo colors, but I think 1 and 2 may look too similar compared too the other colors. Maybe change 1? Just a loose thought, you don't have to.

[Easy:]

• 
  00:22:492 (3,4) Maybe this instead?
  00:37:346 (2) Delete maybe?

[Normal:]

• 
  * 00:11:083 (4,1,2,3,4) It might be better if you put it in like a flower or star shape. Maybe something like this? (Its not a perfect representation, but you should get the main picture.)
  00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) and 00:22:492 (1,2,3,4) It might be better if these two were symmetrically rhythmic ( like in 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) and 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) )
  * 01:02:945 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you followed the rhythm like the rest of the chorus. As is, this makes the drums sound weird.
  * 01:10:530 (1,2,3) ^
  01:20:643 (1) Maybe you should replace this with a spinner that starts here and ends at around 01:23:172 ?
  01:47:507 (4) Why is the tick silenced?

[Hard:]

• 
  OD -1?
  00:44:773 (5,1) I feel that it would be better if you took the repeat off of 5, move 1 to where 5 usually ended, and add a circle (stacked on top of 2) where 1 usually ended. (But i don't know about the spacing for 5 and 1. Maybe you could keep it the same, idk.)
  01:43:398 (1,2,3) If you can, I suggest that you stack 1 on top of 2 and 3, or stack 2 and 3 below 1.
  01:59:042 (2,3) and 01:59:990 (5,6) Maybe you could follow the same structure as 01:58:568 (1) and 01:59:516 (4)
  02:00:464 You could add a 2 beat spinner here (and just break 1 into a circle at the endpoint). Idk, just a thought.
  02:19:269 (2) Kind of like what I was suggesting in the beginning of this difficulty, you could cut the repeat off of 2, move it a 1/2 beat over (so that it ends at the same place) and add a circle here.

Sorry for the small mod. Take my star.

CrestRising wrote:

Hi there, from my queue.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

[General:]

• 
  Haha the background. Nice.
  Nice combo colors, but I think 1 and 2 may look too similar compared too the other colors. Maybe change 1? Just a loose thought, you don't have to. a bit canged

[Easy:]

• 
  00:22:492 (3,4) Maybe this instead? good!
  00:37:346 (2) Delete maybe? maybe it's not difficult.

[Normal:]

• 
  * 00:11:083 (4,1,2,3,4) It might be better if you put it in like a flower or star shape. Maybe something like this? (Its not a perfect representation, but you should get the main picture.) fixed
  00:19:964 (1,2,3,4) and 00:22:492 (1,2,3,4) It might be better if these two were symmetrically rhythmic ( like in 00:25:020 (1,2,3,4) and 00:27:549 (1,2,3,4) ) keeping same patterns make player boring imo...
  * 01:02:945 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better if you followed the rhythm like the rest of the chorus. As is, this makes the drums sound weird. fixed
  * 01:10:530 (1,2,3) ^ fixed
  01:20:643 (1) Maybe you should replace this with a spinner that starts here and ends at around 01:23:172 ? a bit weird for me...
  01:47:507 (4) Why is the tick silenced? not backbeat here.

[Hard:]

• 
  OD -1? wait for other modders...
  00:44:773 (5,1) I feel that it would be better if you took the repeat off of 5, move 1 to where 5 usually ended, and add a circle (stacked on top of 2) where 1 usually ended. (But i don't know about the spacing for 5 and 1. Maybe you could keep it the same, idk.) sorry no fixed.
  01:43:398 (1,2,3) If you can, I suggest that you stack 1 on top of 2 and 3, or stack 2 and 3 below 1. maybe fixed?
  01:59:042 (2,3) and 01:59:990 (5,6) Maybe you could follow the same structure as 01:58:568 (1) and 01:59:516 (4) boring imo... but if others mention that I'll fix it
  02:00:464 You could add a 2 beat spinner here (and just break 1 into a circle at the endpoint). Idk, just a thought. music becomes silence so I feel spacing better
  02:19:269 (2) Kind of like what I was suggesting in the beginning of this difficulty, you could cut the repeat off of 2, move it a 1/2 beat over (so that it ends at the same place) and add a circle here. current rhythm seems better i suppose...

Sorry for the small mod. Take my star.

thanks for moddings and stars! it's useful for me

ポルノ好きなので★。以前map見ましたが指摘する点が無かったのでmodはしません。
頑張ってください

thanks=

[General]
01:10:530 - Add a kiai fountain here.

[Easy]
00:11:083 (4) - Nc here and not on 00:11:789 (1)
00:19:964 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571783
00:21:228 (2) - ^
00:45:247 (1) - Make it symmetrical.
00:47:459 (4) - Replace with a slider and remove the break http://puu.sh/1OwtW
01:48:139 (2) - ^
02:18:794 (1) - The spinner should ends at 02:20:691

[Normal]
I think about 1,10x spacing is better than 1,00x for a normal.
01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5)

[Hard]
Od5.
00:54:728 (7) - Like 00:54:096 (5)
01:54:617 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571793
01:55:092 (5) - ^
02:21:323 (11) - Add new combo.

Kiyro wrote:

[General]
01:10:530 - Add a kiai fountain here. fixed

[Easy]
00:11:083 (4) - Nc here and not on 00:11:789 (1 ) no fixed
00:19:964 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571 783 maybe current placement better imo
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:45:247 (1) - Make it symmetrical. fixed
00:47:459 (4) - Replace with a slider and remove the break http://puu.sh/1OwtW break here iscomfortable
01:48:139 (2) - ^
02:18:794 (1) - The spinner should ends at 02:20:691 umm... end at long White line seems better because this part is last of song.

[Normal]
I think about 1,10x spacing is better than 1,00x for a normal.
01:58:568 (1,2,3) - Like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) ok

[Hard]
Od5.
00:54:728 (7) - Like 00:54:096 (5) here jumping seems better
01:54:617 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/571793 I'll consider it
01:55:092 (5) - ^ ^
02:21:323 (11) - Add new combo. nope.

thanks for modding.

M4M

General

Use another colour instead of purple, it doesnt fit the BG

Easy

00:39:874 (4) - 1 grid right

Normal

01:58:568 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern makes it looks like its faster as it is, space it so that the sliderds dont overlapp

Hard

00:16:024 (4,1) - Spacing, too close to each element and
00:18:068 (4,5) - are too far apart
00:34:502 (6,7) - This jump doesnt work due to it breaking the flow of the preview combo
00:37:030 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - You follow the vocal and then you just randomly make something different, change it
00:44:299 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:57:572 (7) - Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:57:572 -
01:19:537 (4) - Delete the repeat of the slider
01:20:011 (5) - NC here then
01:43:556 (2) - Delete this, nonsense circle
01:47:823 (7) - Should be 2 1/2 note stacked
01:55:724 (1) - Put a single circle here
01:56:040 (2) - Delete this slider, it doesnt go 2 to the vocal
01:58:252 (8,9,10) - Pointless and nonsense 1/4 notes
02:20:770 (7) - Delete this circle
02:20:691 (6) - NC

Good luck

BounceBabe wrote:

M4M

General

Use another colour instead of purple, it doesnt fit the BG I'll wait for another opinions.

Easy

00:39:874 (4) - 1 grid right

Normal

01:58:568 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern makes it looks like its faster as it is, space it so that the sliderds dont overlapp fixed

Hard

00:16:024 (4,1) - Spacing, too close to each element and
00:18:068 (4,5) - are too far apart ^
00:34:502 (6,7) - This jump doesnt work due to it breaking the flow of the preview combo I know this jump has long distance, but it's the most difficult diff and to be symmetrical.
00:37:030 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - You follow the vocal and then you just randomly make something different, change it well, following to music I suppose in this part...
00:44:299 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:57:572 (7) - Remove this slider and put a circle at 00:57:572 - another fixed
01:19:537 (4) - Delete the repeat of the slider umm, a bit weird for me...
01:20:011 (5) - NC here then nope
01:43:556 (2) - Delete this, nonsense circle fixed
01:47:823 (7) - Should be 2 1/2 note stacked current rhythm seems better for me.
01:55:724 (1) - Put a single circle here I'll consider it, maybe other modders say that I'll fix.
01:56:040 (2) - Delete this slider, it doesnt go 2 to the vocal nope
01:58:252 (8,9,10) - Pointless and nonsense 1/4 notes deleted a note
02:20:770 (7) - Delete this circle fixed
02:20:691 (6) - NC[/color] nope

Good luck

thanks for modding

m4mありがとうございます。

譜面については言うことなしでした。
Modしてもらって申し訳ないです。

気付いているかもしれませんが、日本名タイトル、アーティストへの変更だけしておいて下さい。

+kdstar

frost-b-spec wrote:

m4mありがとうございます。

譜面については言うことなしでした。
Modしてもらって申し訳ないです。

気付いているかもしれませんが、日本名タイトル、アーティストへの変更だけしておいて下さい。 fixed

+kdstar

thanks for mod & star~

Hi kajiyatta ~

From my queue

[Easy]

00:54:254 (1,2,3,1) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdzS change?

01:13:769 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdBF

01:40:396 (3,4) blanket please


[Normal]

00:20:675 (1,2,3) specing http://puu.sh/1ZdHR

00:30:709 (2) This is slider -> http://puu.sh/1ZdG5

00:33:237 (2,3) Straight flow of the slider is hard. -> http://puu.sh/1ZdJ7 This flow is better

00:56:308 (2,3,4,5) This pattern is recommended -> http://puu.sh/1ZdLA

01:08:002 Straight flow of the slider is hard.

01:18:115 (1) ^

01:30:915 (1,2,3,4) The flow pattern is hard

02:04:336 (1,2) blanket please


[Hard]

00:03:158 (1,2,3) This pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdQF Moving to very good.

00:35:292 (1,2,3) specing

01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) This is pattern procedure http://puu.sh/1ZdTp change?

02:00:385 (6,7) Why is the jump? Please paste notes and six times

02:02:518 (5) Ctrl+G This flow is very good.

02:07:101 (3,4,5,6) why is the jump....

02:18:636 (8,1) OMG .. why is the big jump.. change please..

Many slider straight overall.
The map looks a little stiff.
But the tempo and maps. Slider look more
Recommends that complement


Good Luck!

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi kajiyatta ~

From my queue

[Easy]

00:54:254 (1,2,3,1) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdzS change? fixed

01:13:769 (1,2,3) This is pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdBF fixed

01:40:396 (3,4) blanket please current seems no problem


[Normal]

00:20:675 (1,2,3) specing http://puu.sh/1ZdHR fixed

00:30:709 (2) This is slider -> http://puu.sh/1ZdG5 fixed

00:33:237 (2,3) Straight flow of the slider is hard. -> http://puu.sh/1ZdJ7 This flow is better I know your mean, but this part is consistence.

00:56:308 (2,3,4,5) This pattern is recommended -> http://puu.sh/1ZdLA none

01:08:002 Straight flow of the slider is hard. I don't think such a thing, but if other modders say same opnion, I'll change.

01:18:115 (1) ^

01:30:915 (1,2,3,4) The flow pattern is hard fixed

02:04:336 (1,2) blanket please fixed


[Hard]

00:03:158 (1,2,3) This pattern -> http://puu.sh/1ZdQF Moving to very good. should start at vocal I suppose.

00:35:292 (1,2,3) specing it's not wrong spacing, to be symmetrical (6,7,1,2)


01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) This is pattern procedure http://puu.sh/1ZdTp change? fixed

02:00:385 (6,7) Why is the jump? Please paste notes and six times previous same part, I did it. so alike this.

02:02:518 (5) Ctrl+G This flow is very good. non. aimming to jump

02:07:101 (3,4,5,6) why is the jump.... fixed

02:18:636 (8,1) OMG .. why is the big jump.. change please.. non, I suppose some jump need for this diff because of fun.

Many slider straight overall.
The map looks a little stiff.
But the tempo and maps. Slider look more
Recommends that complement


Good Luck!

thanks for modding~

Hi XD from Mod queue

Nice song

[General]
6143 for offset is a bit late. change it into 6098 . much fitter

[Easy]
00:11:745 (1) - 1 grid up for better polygonal
00:19:964 (1) - if you are using this rhythm from the start, then use it untill 00:24:704 , it sounded awkward having 2 different rhythm in 1 bars
00:19:964 (1) - give this slider a curve to make it more interesting XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZGNk
00:21:228 (2) - ^
00:25:020 - the prevous rhythm was start at the first white line and end in 4th white line, its sounded awkward too.. if I could suggest you, change this 4 circles into 00:27:549 (1) - this rhythm XD
00:30:077 (1) - you should keep this slider 'straight' err.. I don't know what its called since its a long time I mod maps @A@ you put 2 same slider mirrored.. so it would be good if you just keep it straight XD http://puu.sh/1ZH1x
00:31:341 (3) - add an angle to fit the drum XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZH4l
00:33:870 (2) - ^
00:32:289 (4) - can't you make it like this? better imo http://puu.sh/1ZH7K
00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it looks like this? http://puu.sh/1ZHca ; so 00:37:662 (1) - x:260 y:312 ; 00:38:610 (2) - x:440 y:352 ; 00:39:874 (4) - x:256 y:164
00:40:190 (1,2) - move this somewhere if you change ^
00:47:459 (4) - x:248 y:164? its centered with 00:45:247 (1) XD
01:10:530 (1) - I prefer you put it down here x:368 y:92 for better flow with 01:09:266 (3)
01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - what pentagon is this? ;A; I'll give you a perfect pentagon =3= 01:16:219 (2) - x:76 y:224 ; 01:16:851 (3) - x:144 y:364 ; 01:17:483 (4) - x:296 y:344
01:55:724 (1) - the 2nd slider point move it 1 grid to the right XD will be more fit with the angle
02:18:162 (2) - remove clap add whistle

[Normal]
00:31:341 (3) - inconstant spacing
00:55:044 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZHsf following the vocal XD
01:09:266 (4) - second slider point move it 2 grid to the right for constant spacing and better symmrtric
02:10:577 - add clap here hitsound pattern (the drum also sounded like that if you hear it carefully)
02:20:691 - ^
00:38:294 - ^
00:39:558 - ^
01:09:898 - ^
01:20:011 - ^
phew XD nice flow

Nothing to comment on hard diff XD its good ;D

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o

~GoodLuck XD

~Take my star > w <)/

Teru21 wrote:

Hi XD from Mod queue

Nice song

[General]
6143 for offset is a bit late. change it into 6098 . much fitter I'll wait some modders for timing. it's quite difficult

[Easy]
00:11:745 (1) - 1 grid up for better polygonal fixed
00:19:964 (1) - if you are using this rhythm from the start, then use it untill 00:24:704 , it sounded awkward having 2 different rhythm in 1 bars I know this mean but still current placement is ok.
00:19:964 (1) - give this slider a curve to make it more interesting XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZGNk cool
00:21:228 (2) - ^ ^
00:25:020 - the prevous rhythm was start at the first white line and end in 4th white line, its sounded awkward too.. if I could suggest you, change this 4 circles into 00:27:549 (1) - this rhythm XD keeping same rhythm makes bored I suppose...
00:30:077 (1) - you should keep this slider 'straight' err.. I don't know what its called since its a long time I mod maps @A@ you put 2 same slider mirrored.. so it would be good if you just keep it straight XD http://puu.sh/1ZH1x fixed
00:31:341 (3) - add an angle to fit the drum XD something like http://puu.sh/1ZH4l ok
00:33:870 (2) - ^ ^
00:32:289 (4) - can't you make it like this? better imo http://puu.sh/1ZH7K straight seems better i suppose
00:37:662 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't it looks like this? http://puu.sh/1ZHca ; so 00:37:662 (1) - x:260 y:312 ; 00:38:610 (2) - x:440 y:352 ; 00:39:874 (4) - x:256 y:164 another fixed
00:40:190 (1,2) - move this somewhere if you change ^ ^
00:47:459 (4) - x:248 y:164? its centered with 00:45:247 (1) XD fixed
01:10:530 (1) - I prefer you put it down here x:368 y:92 for better flow with 01:09:266 (3) fixed
01:15:587 (1,2,3,4,1) - what pentagon is this? ;A; I'll give you a perfect pentagon =3= 01:16:219 (2) - x:76 y:224 ; 01:16:851 (3) - x:144 y:364 ; 01:17:483 (4) - x:296 y:344 hmm? I tried this but it's weird...?
01:55:724 (1) - the 2nd slider point move it 1 grid to the right XD will be more fit with the angle
02:18:162 (2) - remove clap add whistle fixed

[Normal]
00:31:341 (3) - inconstant spacing fixed
00:55:044 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ZHsf following the vocal XD usually I follow the music not vocal in this diff for newbie.
01:09:266 (4) - second slider point move it 2 grid to the right for constant spacing and better symmrtric fixed
02:10:577 - add clap here hitsound pattern (the drum also sounded like that if you hear it carefully) some added
02:20:691 - ^
00:38:294 - ^
00:39:558 - ^
01:09:898 - ^
01:20:011 - ^
phew XD nice flow

Nothing to comment on hard diff XD its good ;D

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3

~GoodLuck XD

~Take my star > w <)/

thanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!

kajiyatta wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

Not trying to make an Insane diff? there will be a cool stream if there are insane diff here o3o I made but not satisfied, so deleted. if anyone wants to make Insane, maybe I'll accept hehehe :3

thanks for modding & star, quite useful for me!

XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D

Teru21 wrote:

XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D

I checked this but awfully sorry, I don't satisfy this diff... no offence was meant.

flankly speaking I didn't have a intention of making Insane when I uploaded this map. so keeping Easy, Normal, Hard style seems ok.

but thank you for your effort and interest. if you make full mapped, I'll add it to external download link (but not official pending sorry...)

kajiyatta wrote:

Teru21 wrote:

XD thanks for saying my modding quite useful XD I'm so happy about it XD

Just messing up XD http://puu.sh/20oRG tell me if you like it, I'll continue ;D

I checked this but awfully sorry, I don't satisfy this diff... no offence was meant.

flankly speaking I didn't have a intention of making Insane when I uploaded this map. so keeping Easy, Normal, Hard style seems ok.

but thank you for your effort and interest. if you make full mapped, I'll add it to external download link (but not official pending sorry...)

its okay www i told you if you like it or not btw www XD and you answered it clearly, just make me more happy wwwwww X3

lol~
M4M~

[EASY]
look fine~

[Normal]

1. 00:47:775 - maybe u can put a spinner on here~just suggestion~
   
   1. 00:49:671 - end
2. 01:48:455 - ^
3. 01:58:568 (1) - try to use 1/4 slider? like or same with before

[Hard]

1. 01:38:974 (3) - cancel reverse and add a note on 01:39:290 - ? just suggestion~
2. 01:50:667 (11) - cancel a reverse....try only one reverse?

nice mapset~
lol~star~
and good lucy~

Athena Tennos wrote:

lol~
M4M~

[EASY]
look fine~

[Normal]

1. 00:47:775 - maybe u can put a spinner on here~just suggestion~ this part becomes calm music and vocal, maybe unnecessary.
   
   1. 00:49:671 - end
2. 01:48:455 - ^
3. 01:58:568 (1) - try to use 1/4 slider? like or same with before it seems a bit difficult for Normal I suppose

[Hard]

1. 01:38:974 (3) - cancel reverse and add a note on 01:39:290 - ? just suggestion~ current seems fine
2. 01:50:667 (11) - cancel a reverse....try only one reverse? nice, fixed

nice mapset~
lol~star~
and good lucy~

thanks for modding

o/ hi kajiyatta
from my q







gl ~

B2IN wrote:

o/ hi kajiyatta
from my q

　General

1. Can you increase Slider Velocity from Normal diff ? Because Normal slider is 0.8x, Hard slider is 1.6x. from 0.8x to slider to 1.6x is too far. consider this opinion. fixed

　Easy

• fine.

　Normal

1. 01:44:030 (2) - try this alin for symmetry with 01:42:766 (5) . fixed
2. 01:58:568 (1,2,3) - unfit with music. make this like 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) . same pattern seems bored I suppose. and current follows the vocal, so no fixed.

　Hard

1. 00:48:723 (4,5) - kinda odd beat. because i felt some empty. remove (5), and add note on 00:48:565 , 00:49:039 . like this tried this but I suppose a bit weird...
2. 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - not bad. but try this. better fit with music haha, I tried before of course, but only notes seems poor and difficult for Hard I suppose.
3. 01:20:011 (5,6,7,8,9) - you should make this to regular pentagon. (9)x220 y144 //(6)x240 y220. fixed
4. 01:38:974 (3) - missing clap on 01:39:290 . oops... fixed
5. 01:58:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) same as.

gl ~

thanks for modding.

:3 recheck


that's all~ gl

B2IN wrote:

:3 recheck

　Normal

1. 00:35:766 (2) - missing clap on slider.
2. 00:47:143 (5) - unsnapped slider.
   All fixed

that's all~ gl

thanks~

FROM MY MODDING QUEUE \:D/

[General]

1. Max BG 1024x768
2. Mp3 128-192kbps
3. Preview point all the same
4. Kiai time should be consistent in all diff except guest
5. One difficulty<
6. Tag consistency
7. Audio lead-in consistency
8. Combo colour consisitency
9. Please delete the osb file since you don't have storyboard :3

[Easy]

1. HP Drain: 4 or less
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
5. Slider velocity: 1.00x or less
6. Combo not higher than 6 unless it is suitable
7. Everything is perfect, in my sense \:D/

[Normal]

1. HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 5 or below I think AR-1 is better ._.
4. Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
5. Combo not higher than 8
6. Perfect too!

[Hard]
I can find nothing wrong lol


Perfect map imo and the flow and pattern are easy to follow
Also, song is good. Sorry that my mod is a bit too short
BTW, Star :3

IamKwaN wrote:

FROM MY MODDING QUEUE \:D/

[General]

1. Max BG 1024x768
2. Mp3 128-192kbps
3. Preview point all the same
4. Kiai time should be consistent in all diff except guest
5. One difficulty<
6. Tag consistency
7. Audio lead-in consistency
8. Combo colour consisitency
9. Please delete the osb file since you don't have storyboard :3

ok

[Easy]

1. HP Drain: 4 or less
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 4 or less
4. Overall Difficulty: 4 or less
5. Slider velocity: 1.00x or less
6. Combo not higher than 6 unless it is suitable
7. Everything is perfect, in my sense \:D/

[Normal]

1. HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
2. Circle Size: 3 or 4
3. Approach Rate: 5 or below I think AR-1 is better ._. Easy has AR3, so Normal seems fine with AR5
4. Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
5. Combo not higher than 8
6. Perfect too!

[Hard]
I can find nothing wrong lol


Perfect map imo and the flow and pattern are easy to follow
Also, song is good. Sorry that my mod is a bit too short
BTW, Star :3

thanks for modding & star~

Hiyaaa M4M from #modreq



I hope this help you, star and good luck! ^q^

- t e n n y a - wrote:

Hiyaaa M4M from #modreq

General

• nothing~!

Easy

1. 00:17:436- : Prefer to add break here owo fixed
2. 00:47:459 (4)- : make this right at the middle of screen? move this to x256 y80 would be nice ixed
3. 00:49:988 (1)- : add clap? for hit sound balance fixed
4. 01:50:667 (1)- : ^ fixed
5. 01:52:879 (3)- : remove clap, not fit imo fixed
6. 02:15:318 (2,3)- : reverse them? It can confuse easy player imo owo current seems better imo

Normal

1. 00:52:832 (1)- : make this more symmetric? like move 2nd slider point to x56 y156 and 3rd point to x60 y100? fixed
2. 01:10:530 (1)- : 1 grid to left? o.o fixed
3. 02:09:945 (2)- : 2nd slider point to x276 y172? fixed

Hard

1. 01:20:011 (5)- : how about NC here? keep current pattern sorry><
2. 02:20:691 (6)- : ^
   Nice diff really (:'''3)rz

I hope this help you, star and good luck! ^q^

thanks for modding & star

Hi
Your map seems perfect to me
so just some suggestions here.

[Easy]

1. 00:25:653(2,4)i dont think those two whistle suit the music,maybe remove them for consistence
2. 00:27:549(1,2,1,2)one grid left to make the slider head under 00:25:020(1)
3. 00:35:766(1)its may looks better if you copy 00:37:662(1)
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:379(3,4)try this rhythm?
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:16:898(1)miss a whistle here?

[Normal]

1. 00:37:978(2,3)circle2 x:451 y:259 circle3 x:371 y:273
2. 01:20:643(5)maybe put it in this way?
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:47:507(4)repeat it to follow the vocal?
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:20:691(3)do not repeat this one :3
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 01:03:419(2)copy 01:02:945(1) then ctrl+h g instead of use ctrl+>>
2. 01:54:617(4,5)^
3. 02:00:464(7)add finish here?
4. 02:21:165(9,10)1 gird left and 1 gird down to make a regular pentagon

That‘s all
Good luck :3