200,208,79859,6,0,B|240:232|272:232|312:208,1,120

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
都是建議,看下就好~

[General]
default-comma.png,default-dot.png,default-percent.png,default-x.png這4個文件應該是多余的...吧 大概是我猜，删掉了
另外如果lks要來一發的話請記得在tags里面補充他的名字 这个难度的可玩性太低（虽然艺术价值高），我不会加的

[Easy]
00:05:751(4) - 加個finish然后音量增加到60%如何? 好主意但60%太高了，45%。
00:06:109(T) - 這條綠線有用...? 删了
01:16:466(1,2) - 這有4個歌詞,note只有2個怪怪的... 这是Easy别多想
01:19:859(1,2) - 這note放在easy似乎有點不好掌握節奏...刪掉這兩個note然后試試這個? 不会太难吧，最多熟下歌就好，外加我也懒得动后面

200,208,79859,6,0,B|240:232|272:232|312:208,1,120

當然如果要改的話01:22:180(2)以及后面的note都要搞一下...
01:30:751(T) - 這條綠線有用...? 已删
01:31:466(T) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:06:466(1) - 開頭用sc1的finish? 不，这里节奏够，就把重音都给上了
00:17:537(4) - whistle. 恩，也把3的删了，想了想还是走正常向
00:43:966(3) - 。。你误会了我的意思是尾不要全叠在之前上这样省的被人指摘Normal用挡
[attachment=0:f48db]dfaerw.PNG[/attachment:f48db]
00:51:466(3,4,5) - 5的clap扔到3上? 不，因为clap是自给节奏，为了体现变化现在我把5的whistle删了
01:31:466(T) - 這條綠線有用...? 我的绿线都从高难度copy的所以有浪费不奇怪。。。
02:02:180(5) - 用02:00:037(5)的開頭覆蓋好... 这个倒不必，因为节奏差很远了，这里出来时上个5连影子都不剩了，大丈夫。

[Hard]
00:17:180(4) - 用00:15:930(4)覆蓋好... 取的是平行的意思，不是想盖，而且同样是节奏远，已经没有遮挡效果。
01:16:109(1) - 變成3個note會比較好吧...? 我想体现节奏渐变
02:13:028(2) - 囧這個note的位置... 还能扔哪233

[Rin]
00:11:466(3) - 話說這樣的變速真的大丈夫嗎-__- 虽然可能喜欢这么用的只我一个但我还是说大丈夫，体现爆finish的那一下滑速
00:17:894(1) - 這個slider感覺很詭異...没办法的办法，让我拉个3/2长的slider还是让我死
00:39:680(3) - 用00:38:609(3)的開頭覆蓋好... 节奏久远大丈夫系列
00:56:466(1) - 縮短至00:57:359,然后剩下的依據歌曲給的節奏map? 主要是体现乐器的消失 （所以前面欢快的给红线上了4个whistle），这里就静下
02:08:609(1,2,1) - 總覺得少了幾個note... 这里为了排版牺牲节奏了
02:13:028(2) - 位置依舊囧啊~ 除了叠真心没办法
kiai段的節奏真的是很棒

哈哈哈哈
so
star~

EDIT:忘了說了...那段很長的空缺,真心求加break...
意义何在那时break很煞风景啊

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-Your skin numbers are spaced too far apart when playing...if someone FCs with hidden/HR/anything else and gets 10 million+ points, it will look strange. I don't know how to fix it though

I just take them from S i R i R u's Koi Yomi Zakura Skin (wish permission), and it only affect few people when playing (because i guess no more than 20 guys could hidden/HR it). So i'll choose to leave it there

Easy:

00:00:752 (1,2) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124120 (then make 2 a mirrored version of this) ok done.
00:09:323 (4) - New combo fixed.
00:15:037 (5) - ^ ^
01:26:466 (1) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/124115 This one doesn't need to be exactly symmetry about axis-y, i prefer the current one.
01:35:037 (5) - New combo ok.
01:40:751 (5) - ^ no change to this one (and the next nc) because it will be easier to read.
01:42:180 (3) - Remove NC? ^

Normal:

01:35:037 (1) - Too close to (4), it might confuse newer players it's 2/1 between them and it should be long enough imo

Hard:

01:07:894 (1) - Any particular reason why the spacing decreases after this note? This group of notes sounds lighter (according to vocal), also if i continue the spacing, (3) would be at a too high place.
01:08:073 (2,3,4,5) - (nazi) I recommend moving these 1 level 4 grid to the right o.o If you do, then stack 01:09:323 (1) under (5). ...well i don't really want to touch this.
01:13:609 (1) - I found this jump a bit odd. It's the only jump in this section It's near enough and i don't think that could be called a jump....

Rin:

00:22:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - I found this hard to read because of (3) Because the rhythm is call for a "back" here, also among the test players i asked they all can read this clearly
00:33:251 (3,1) - This is perhaps too confusing, because (2) and (3) are the same distance as (3) and (1) on the playfield but not the timeline In this part you can find if a new combo is there and it's "from left to right", it would be a jump. Also knowing the song and look at approach circle could help a lot. And in the tests they work fine.
00:34:144 (3,1) - I found this confusing because I was expecting the distance between 00:33:251 (3,1). My advice is to try to make another less confusing pattern instead of 00:32:180 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) ^
00:56:287 (11,12,1) - Space this the same as the other streams? i can't. (1)'s track would cover the previous notes and they make up a flower formation, so the notes has to be there.
01:00:573 (2) - Unstack this? emm ok.
01:06:287 (2) - ^ ^
01:13:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend making this more like groups such as 01:09:323 (1,2,3,4,5) (without the jumps) i prefer to use jump here. Also you can find the previous 01:07:894 (1,2,3,4,5) & 01:02:180 (1,2,3,4,5) are using jumps
01:32:180 (1) - I recommend making it a 1/2 slider. As it is, it feels awkward pausing like that with close spacing... (same with 01:32:894 (3), 01:33:608 (3), 01:37:894 (1), 01:38:609 (3), 01:39:323 (3)) It's more like a feeling when hitting drums, when a 1/1 comes between notes, your hand will raise up and have a pause there, your wrist is ready for the next hit. And this part is just a "drum part"

Nice map *star*

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[General]

1. The folder is kinda big (23.5 MB) try to , reduce the size of the video ? It's not that big... the video is of a nice quality so i don't want to change.

2. In my memory , "pause-overlay" can use .jpg and it works o.o ehh.... what's the difference... the current png works fine?

3. Add Kana-chan KanaRin into the tags done.

[Normal]

01:00:751 (1,2) - spacing , different to 01:06:466 (1,2) You don't need that to be all the same, all you need is that part is readable...

01:33:609 (3,4) - I feel kinda hard to read here , but it's fine there is 2/1 between these 2 notes so it should be fne.

[Rin]

00:16:823 (2) - Maybe reverse that players can hit move and 1/4 notes smoother I don't see a reason to do this, all the 1,2,3 is a from up to down (also the hitsounds), so i don't really get it...

00:16:823 - 01:20:394 - I like this part x3

---------

Very good mapset and hitsound , I like it

But I have no kudo star to shoot now ... σ_σ

/me runs away

NatsumeRin wrote:

2. In my memory , "pause-overlay" can use .jpg and it works o.o ehh.... what's the difference... the current png works fine?

NatsumeRin wrote:

Still keep it there because it seems no one could give a very clear answer... Also net speed is slow i feel a bit lazy to upload this.
But i'll change it if it's really needed to reduce file size.

lovhin456 wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

Still keep it there because it seems no one could give a very clear answer... Also net speed is slow i feel a bit lazy to upload this.
But i'll change it if it's really needed to reduce file size.

Png images take up more space, jpg images are less in size, as far as I know that's the only difference. But sometimes if you change png images to jpg they lose quality. Just wanted to clear things up ~

Neptunus wrote:

大萝卜来提建议了：
HD：
00:01:466 (3,4,1) - 3和4的距离小于4和1的距离 这无所谓啊你肯定看的出这是1/2,而且不点到note上我相信你看不出来间距不等.
00:03:251 (4) - Anti jump， 没有什么预兆，而且并非在new combo出现，长slider也好，可是这俩太短了，其实完全等到00:03:609 (1) - 再跳更好~ 哪有Anti-jump,后面的1,2,3,4明显不是1/2那么就是1/1啊,而且音乐到这里是自然慢
00:58:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3和4的SPACING 简单的讲,如果是肉眼看不出来的spacing,我不觉得有必要改
01:02:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - 3的SPACING ^
01:04:680 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个画的和前面几个的形状完全不一样啊 不太正吧,这个改了下
01:07:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同样也是spacing，而且这几个的间距明显比前几个五角星缩小了很多 这里是音在往下走,外加如果再扩大,3就出屏幕了
01:13:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - 再例如这个，4和5的spacing 其实这有任何问题吗
01:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个。。俺不知道行不行，因为前面相同的图形，全都是1/4，这里突然anti jump。。首先前面没有1/4,然后你看一下摆的顺序
01:52:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4的spacing 以上回了很多了
02:00:573 (5,1) - 5或者1的spacing调整一下 1以后右拉了一格不过说实话我觉得没任何意义


Rin：
这个的SV上了2了，并且有突然变速（特别是加速），是不是需要把STR调成2才行？（以前有modder跟我说过此类问题，我的BPM136， 2.0， STR 1 他说unrankable，必须调成2） 首先,STR到2的意思是1/2时有tick,我给的加速slider都是1/2长度,难道还要调成4吗,这太搞笑了.哪个modder讲的让他来这挑啊233
00:03:430 (6) - 同样的，建议这个别跳，从00:03:609 (1) - 这个开始跳就好 这个为了突出的是接下来的速度减慢
00:32:716 (1,2) - 建议去掉new combo 否则看起来太乱 从左到右+new combo=跳. 我不加真心很多人看不懂
再就是，各种五角星的spacing，这里就不一一指出了，包括各种大间距和小间距的五角星，而且这个难度的五角星的spacing非常不均匀，也许是故意设置的？有的spacing大有的小，有点变换无常了，建议那几个紧贴着的稍微改大一点间距
01:42:359 - 这里不加break么？？ 不加


其他的DIFF ok

GJ， star！

val0108 wrote:

[Normal]
01:35:037 (1,2) - 8grid down as it's mentioned many times i have changed it.
ALL Spacing so farrrr ;_____;
[Easy]
02:07:894 (2) - so far for them. changed to a spinner.

others diff looks fine.Perfect map!!I can't MOD!! x))
gooooood!!

EDIT:I don't need a kds

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que
NR泥嚎，我来nazi了

[General]
我不知道png们留透明边会不会被吐槽 被吐槽的是犀利撸，大丈夫。
others fine

[Easy]
00:15:037 (1,2,3) - 这里spacing似乎不太好看（nazi 好像是。
02:10:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - up 4 gird ?(gird lv3 哦对之前改完之前的slider忘动这个了

[Normal]
02:11:466 (5) - 不知道这个会不会被吐槽 大概不会至少问过妖妖妖
接近hard之外，没啥了

[Hard]
01:30:394 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里我差点fail 好可怕，不过Hard没一点难点也没意思

[Rin]
00:11:466 (3) - 0.0 这不值得惊讶嘛
00:32:716 (1,2,3) - 这里最好ctrl+h，我完全搞不懂这是为了干啥 ._. 好吧我把2ctrl+h了但我觉得少了韵味。。。
00:56:466 (1) - 这个shape有点怪，如果只是为了叠上00:55:573 (5,8)这两个的话我觉得没有啥意义 ._. 一方面是为了叠上另一方面画的是个还没满的心。。。

这图碉堡了

218,324,58073,1,0
262,258,58251,1,2

wmfchris wrote:

-> nice skin啊 挑易一下[Taiko]用BG 就是kana這字太小了光看BG大概不知道誰做的 ><

[Taiko]
00:43:609 (257-262) - d d K---k k D
00:45:037 (264-267) - d d k d
00:48:430 (285-287) - ddk
00:49:680 (294-297) - k ddd
01:02:359 (365-368) - k d d k ->前面k d k d k了3次 結句可以稍為變一下, 也能配合後面的k k d k d
01:13:787 (421-424) - ^, 大圓按前面放可不要
01:15:087 - (比起整體難了很多 建議改一下 long slider有類此效果但平靜一點 可以配合後面模糊的鼓聲 後面可放spinner)
01:26:466 (515) - remove finish
02:11:644 (s) - 延長1/2統一長度 反正打完spinner的時間有早沒遲

8/10, 這首跟音樂很好放 也沒啥特別的地方

[Rin]
循例講一下這超過了3 SV 而且0.6x 0.8x很易跟0.5x 0.75x混淆 統一一下？无所谓反正打时肯定感觉不到，我设这些实在有点讽刺所谓规则的意思。。。
00:11:466 (3) - add clap? 很奇怪
00:17:537 (5,6,1) - spacing, but it's fine for me changed a bit
00:22:716 (4,5,6) - spacing, move it left a bit looks more symmetrical ok
01:04:680 (1,2) - ^ 这个没动
01:07:001 (2-6) - 這串的spacing誤差有點明顯了 changed a bit

[Hard]
00:11:466 (3) - + clap here? 不会很奇怪吗。。。
00:58:073 (2,3) - try this to make spacing nice? 改了

218,324,58073,1,0
262,258,58251,1,2

Normal and Easy would be fine for me.
Go and hv your star :3

我已經無地自容了 (逃

eldnl wrote:

[Rin]

00:11:466 (3) This slider is wrong, basically the rhythm that are you following sound here 00:11:287 to here 00:11:466. Make something like this?: http://puu.sh/40yF I guess you misunderstand my meaning here. (3) is just one beat (the slider's end is muted), the fast slider is for the feeling of that hitsounds (a blast or something about it). So it's nothing wrong there.
00:32:537 (2,1,2,3,1) Weird spacing, please make a more readable pattern? If you noticed, all combos "from left to right" is 1/2, and all "from right to left" is 1/1
01:05:394 (5) Wrong place, the star looks bad adjust a bit.


[Normal]

01:13:609 (4) Considering the previous spacing this note is too far to the previous note. changed the previous note a bit.
01:22:180 (4,5,6) Inconsistent spacing. people could read it easily even for first time players, no change.

That's all, the other diffs looks really nice.

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

Easy

1. 00:37:894-Remove new combo?? no. new combo per 2 long white line there.
2. 00:39:323-Put a new combo here? ^
3. 01:05:751 (3)-Fix the spacing on this a little bit by using the distance snap and move it one grid to the right. fixed.

Normal

1. This Normal might be a bit hard but nothing crucial about it. :p Mainly because of spacing, i think if i have to stack some notes it would be ugly for this song, but i tried my best not to use that much 1/2 notes.
2. 02:11:466 (5)-This slider is kind of overlapping itself... Well, it's sort of close to being it. ^^' But it might be a good idea to redesign that slider to something different. If don't that's fine, I guess. no. I asked a MAT and a BAT to made sure it's fine already.
3. 02:11:823-The volume on this timing point is too low... It would be great if you set the volume to 10%. Any difference? in fact the slider is all for the last sound, the path should be really in a silence.[/*:m:df788]

Kana's Taiko Oni

1. 00:15:930 (81, 82, 83)-kdk is better, I believe.
2. 00:18:251 (95)-Remove this note. I don't think it's fitting here.

Hard

1. 00:05:394-The volume on this timing point is too low... set it to 10%. (: no really difference there of 5% and 10%...
2. 02:11:823-^ ^

Insane

1. 00:05:305-The volume is set too low. Set it to 10%. no really difference there of 5% and 10%...
2. 00:56:823-^ ^
3. 02:11:823-^ ^

And that's it. Here's a star~

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
我不知道png们留透明边会不会被吐槽
others fine

1. 沒什麼..

1. 00:06:466 (1) - 個人感覺這裏加個Finish會比較好.畢竟是第一個重音..
2. 00:54:323 (3) - Whistle?感覺和後面的一樣會好一點...因為這裏用了斷音的效果,聲效一樣會比較好..
3. 01:20:751 (1) - 這個可以換一個位置嗎?Spinner的OSU和(1)-的hitburst有一點cover掉了...有點怕新手跟不來..
   
   看圖

   
4. 01:40:037 (4) - 加上whistle?感覺會好聽一點..
5. 02:06:555 (x) - 個人覺得這個spinner的開始點有點急,考慮把它移到02:06:644 - 這裏?結束點不變

1. 00:22:180 (3) - 考慮用1/1代替這個?
2. 00:50:037 (2) - 這樣?在slider後部分多加一個折點...感覺好看多 \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126105
3. 00:52:894 (2) - ^液...一樣.
4. 01:02:180 (4) - 這裏可以換成1/2 slider+5個reverse..
5. 01:27:180 (2) - 其實我覺得把這個Slider依到01:27:001 - 會比較舒服...但礙於現在的排版,不容易修改..麻,你決定,如果改了還要在01:27:537 - 多加個note

1. Volume -10%?
2. 00:00:751 (1-17) - 其實這裡有很多配搭都可以的,我自己比較喜歡的是:dkdkdkdkkdkdkkdkk
3. 00:18:430 (96) - change it to k?
4. 00:18:787 (97,98) - 換成Big kat?這樣可以更強調這2個clap喔..
5. 00:20:216 (103,104) - ^Same!
6. 00:42:001 - 感覺這裏加個note會好一點...
7. 00:57:359,00:57:537,00:57:716 - 各加一個note,而且都是kat.
8. 00:57:894 (342) - 這個d會比較好聽..
9. 01:50:216 - 加note?
10. 01:51:823 (620,621) - 換成k?
11. 02:08:698 (749) - 換成d?
12. 02:11:644 (x) - 移走Spinner?然後在02:12:894 - 和02:13:013 - (1/3) 加note.

1. 00:11:109 (2) - 這裏不要跳?雖然不太難,但是感覺有點怪.說不出的感覺= =可能是我叒 看看這個?
2. 00:18:787 (1,2) - 這裏為甚麼不和後面的(1.2)-一樣?感覺Spacing可以在大一點..
3. 00:55:037 ~ 00:56:466 - 可以考慮x xxx xxx xxx x x的節奏?(x為1/2拍) 如果改的話,個人建議用slider-note-slider-note的擺法,這樣不會太難..

1. 招牌難度 :O
2. 00:15:751 (3,4,5,6,2) - 這個5邊形咁覺放的有一點不好..00:16:823 (2) -感覺要放下一點.如果改了(3)- 可能需要移動來配合(2)-
3. 00:32:180 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - 這堆有一點難度,出來得效果不太好,換一下new combo的位置會好一點,我覺得:00:32:716 (1) - new combo 00:33:251 (1) - new combo.
4. 00:56:466 (1) - Slider略醜..
5. 00:58:966 (1) - 考慮把這個(1)- 疊在(4)- 的上面00:59:681 (5) - 疊在前面combo的(5)- 上面
6. 01:18:609 (x) - 這個加條綠線增加音量,做一個crescendo的效果..
7. 01:42:359 (x) - 考慮這裏加個break?因為HP setting的關係,不加break的話這裡會扣掉1/4良的HP,如果之前有miss的話這裡就等著悲劇..

1. 01:57:894 - From this point onward you can hear a large drum being hit in the music. Strongly advising using a custom1 normal finish on the following notes:
   notes

   01:57:894
   01:58:609
   01:59:323
   02:00:037
   02:00:751
   02:01:466
   02:02:180
   etc, you can hear in the background
2. Just a suggestion, but if you could colorize the slider border using a custom code to something darker than white (light gray would be okay I think, slightly reddish, so 232 224 224 color would be okay I think). I think this would look a little better.

1. 00:11:466 (3) - Maybe new combo? As far as I know changing slider speeds within a same combo without seeing a tick on it isn't allowed, so this is just for clarity.
2. 00:20:751 (1,2,3,4) - You should probably reverse this combo so (1) is where (4) is currently, (2) is where (3) is currently ,etc. Main reason is questionable readability of the current (2), because it's almost completely hidden behind the hitburst of a previous combo. If there was only a static background this could be seen nicely, however with video it's certainly very hard to notice. Reversing it would give you an extra 1/2 of time for the hitburst to vanish and it would improve the readability. Other patterns look fine because you expect such shapes, here you can't expect a star if you see only one note.
3. 00:56:287 (11,12) - Is there a reason why you changed the spacing? I think it looks better if you used same spacing like in the streams before that. Might have to curve the slider that comes after a little bit then.
4. 00:56:466 (1) - This slider is fine, however there are other stuff in the background which are better (if you ask me) if you map. 00:57:359, 00:57:448, 00:57:537, 00:57:716 are the locations of said notes, and sliding over them (in silence) is something I don't really like. Since the slider itself isn't that wrong, this is only a suggestions and do as you wish.
5. 01:42:180 - While the HP drain is actually quite low, why not place a break here? When playing unless I either see letters of a rank in top right, or I see the HP drain standing still, I am still anticipating a note to come, which kinda defeats a purpose of such emptiness (and having a break). You should place a break here.
6. 02:07:894 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - If possible, I suggest that you place the combo colors yourself. First the red, then a color which you want, then red again, etc. It doesn't break anything and makes this so much easier to read (i am actually almost colorblind to some colors ;-; )
7. No spinners on the map. I guess that's okay if you really want it that way, but OD7 is low enough to allow quite some SS ranks, and without a spinner there wouldn't be any score variation between those.

1. 00:11:466 (3) - Just like in Rin difficulty, would be nice to place a new combo here.
2. 01:42:180 - Add a break here, same reasons like in Rin diff.
3. Just like in Rin difficulty, you don't have a spinner. Same reasons apply here.

1. 01:03:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't really want to nazi, but this star shape doesn't look properly made (the left side is too close to the middle). It's kinda obvious while playing as well, maybe try to fix it?
2. 01:42:180 - Add a break here.

1. 01:19:859 (1,2) - I suggest that instead of these 2 circles you map a slider (it would fit because you could blanket it right next to the upcoming one as well). I don't think a new player would really notice they are 1/3 (not the tick, but the note style I mean). Up to you though, because this is not really wrong and it's only a suggestion.
2. 01:42:180 - Place a break here.

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Rin大教我摆五角星 \:D/
我只会nazi

Normal
01:06:466 (1) - 挡前面slider尾的话建议左移一格(grid4 其实是我懒,fixed.
01:31:109 (6,7) - 上移一格(grid4 挪了
02:13:073 - Hard和Rin这里都有note Normal怎么不加一个o.o 对Normal来讲难了

Hard
00:37:894 (1) - slider尾finish? 没理由貌似
01:09:323 (1) - finish? 这一段的finish位置都是安排好的,所有五边形位置都不会有(Hard和Rin)而是在两个五边形之后的那个起音上安排.按照音的不同音量还有区别
01:14:323 (5,1,1,2,1) - 上移一格(grid4 ..好
01:41:823 (5,6,7) - 上移一格(grid4 ok
02:02:180 (1) - 下移一格(grid4 好

Rin
00:37:894 (1) - 左上移一格(grid4
00:46:019 (2,3) - 2的hitsound把后面这slider开头的hitsound挡住了..至少我听起来比较怪 把2的clap放3开头?(3的finish不去掉 也好,这样很干脆
00:55:216 (2,3,4) - 右移1格(grid4)没猜错的话后面那个slider应该是要穿过2,8,5吧 对
00:56:287 (11) - 下移一格会不会好点?(grid4 恐怕不会,太近了
01:46:466 (1) - 上一格(grid4 ...k
01:58:430 (4,1,2,3) - 左上移一格(grid4
01:58:966 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点怪 打时你看叠完什么样就知道为什么这么摆了
这是用relate每个note转72度之后调整大小摆出来的x_x
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SPOILER

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nazi会不会很蛋疼... 说实话,会,但有用就行.

[Stress]MOD完发现M4M的queue满了

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,128
SliderBorder : 240,240,240

Equivalent wrote:

Hi,

General:
I dont really like bright BG, they are so annoying during kiai time. Well, it just personal preference ...in fact i guess there are only 2 or 3 BGs for this song (originally), this one is my favourite
Just a question: who is omoiyoshino? http://loos.jp/yoshino/
01:42:180 till 01:46:466 I suggest add in break for all difficulties. especially in [Rin] when autoplay I see the hp drop till the mid of the hp bar, if someone can't fc the earlier part or miss they would "die" here. Indeed, but that's the effect i want. to prevent people from failing there, the part before is made in a easy way and using massive new combos.

Skin:
->make approach circle.png to 128x128 thanks for reminding i really didn't notice that.
->delete star.png, star.png is only for custom skin that changed the appearance of star at the difficulty menu. If by single map, it useless. True, fixed.
->As your map here is likely almost fully skin, why not add sliderscorepoint.png as well. Afterall, I think it will be looking ugly if mix with other custom skin sliderscorepoint How could i miss that, thanks!
-> Spinner approach circle is white thus making it blend with the spinner background color. If me, I would change it to another color, quite hard to see the spinner approach circle It's from the original skin by S i R i R u so i won't touch this.
->I suggest add in below codes under colours section as you know there are some custom skin that force dark slider border, thus making it look ugly Done with this! You're a pro skin modder

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,128
SliderBorder : 240,240,240

Easy:
No issue

Normal:
The only thing that bother me here is 02:11:466 (5) The slider start and end is overlapping thus making it look ugly and I think without the snaking slider effect, quite hard to see which is which. I think will be harder to read when playing with hidden mod on. Already asked a BAT to make sure of that. also from testplays i can see it works fine.


Hard:
No issues as well

Rin:
00:46:109 (3) I dunno about others, but for me it seem hard to read this don't worry, we have test players there ww, and yeah no one missed that.

Star for you

1. 01:58:966 (1) - Remove new combo?

1. 00:58:966 (4,5) - Up 1 grid? I know you put them to stack (6) with (1), but its pentagon looks like broken.

1. 00:07:359 (4) - The players will be kinda confused by this whistle-sound imo. Remove and Add at (5)?
2. 00:08:787 (4) - ^
3. 01:35:394 (2,4) - Remove finish-sound to accent sound with following the vocal?
4. 02:04:323 (4) - Add finish-sound.

1. 01:31:466 (5) - Down 1 grid?

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for request~

[Easy]

1. 01:58:966 (1) - Remove new combo? yes this should be removed....

[Normal]

1. 00:58:966 (4,5) - Up 1 grid? I know you put them to stack (6) with (1), but its pentagon looks like broken. i adjusted the other notes.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:359 (4) - The players will be kinda confused by this whistle-sound imo. Remove and Add at (5)? meh it's the way arrange them.
2. 00:08:787 (4) - ^ ^ don't like too regular hitsounds here.
3. 01:35:394 (2,4) - Remove finish-sound to accent sound with following the vocal? true, this makes sense.
4. 02:04:323 (4) - Add finish-sound. i don't think so...

[Rin]

1. 01:31:466 (5) - Down 1 grid? ok

Wow there are too many pentagons like sakura, awesome formation<3

...Hum? Is my mod needed? i find at least 2 useful points...
What a perfect mapset...!
Sorry nazi mod. No kds please. whatever, as you said.
I can't tell you useful suggestion.
Good luck~

Lilac wrote:

I don't want to drag this out any longer.

[Skin]
comboburst-1.png is facing the wrong way, please horiztonally flip it. fixed.
Certain sliderfollowcircle.pngs have parts of the butterflies cut off, you might want to fix them up. it's in the original skin by S i R i R u, so i'll just think it's fine.

[Easy]
01:19:859 (1) - I think the circle appears too quickly to be hit. changed to a slider so it may be more lenient.
02:10:037 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can think of a more interesting pattern than that. as you wish. i hope it's better now. not sure how interesting could 5 1/1 notes be...

[Normal]
I'm thinking this is getting quite hard to play. I guess mainly because of spacing, so i didn't put much 1/2 notes there. it should still be ok imo

01:30:751 (4,5,6,7) - I think that's too many in a stream. changed to a slider-circle-slider pattern.
02:11:466 - I'm worried about this slider being unreadable. made the beginning and the end farther, in fact it's even recognized as "fine" before.


[Hard]
01:51:644 (6) - I'm thinking that the slider return arrow is partially covered by the previous combo. not really?

SPOILER

[Rin]
00:20:394 (2,1) - The spacing for this seems really close. I often hit earlier than I should be, please move it further if you can. i don't think so for this one. all the "rhythm" parts (00:17:894 (1) - 00:19:323 (1,2,3,4) - 00:20:751 (1,2,3,4) - ) goes from right to left and groing "higher+tighter" the "clap*2" parts goes from left to right with "lower+farther", and these two meet here and start a new flow << this is my thinking of mapping these part so no change.

It's a very nice map though. Keep it up.

Lilac wrote:

Comment to be about the combo colours because I think some of them are too light and interfere with the playability.

Consider among the about 20 mods, only lovhin456 mentioned combo colors (with a totally different set), i think it won't be too annoying during gameplay. Also they're not blending to the BG/video so i think they're fine.

01:16:466 (1,2) - Now that I look back at this in the Rin difficulty, it doesn't seem very playable to me... I'll more than likely get a 100 while quickly rushing to the next object.

i've got many test players for that part, and they could all get it in at most 2~3 retries. some of them could fc the map in the first try.
SnowWhite: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130399
ycsnake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130400 (first play, the slider brake is happened in another place)
Kanon: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130404 (first play, a slider break during that part, then he could get it) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130417
Also called CXu, karenying, Astom (posted) and osuplayer111 to test before, and they can deal with the part quite well.

Comment about those two then I'll bubble.

Garven wrote:

[General]
c73 is a really broad tag. meh, something like that should be there, though even myself doubt if anyone will use that for searching....
I don't have problems with the colors blending - it's mostly that the video is too spastic and twitchy so it distracts me. No Video...(sigh*, people like score more...)

[Easy]
01:19:859 (1) - This is really soon after a spinner for an easy. Might be best to use a long slider instead of that spinner. Can't really agree. Auto could get 7000+ on the spinner, then the recovery time is 3/2 (>500ms), plus it's a slider to follow, some more leniency is given there. It's nearly a 2/1 note after spinner, so can't agree with this.
02:10:037 (1) - Also fairly soon after a spinner. You may want to either simplify the rhythm (easy to do since the song is winding down anyway) or change up the spinner again or something. Again i think that's even lenient enough for first time players...
02:11:644 (1) - Strange you use a short spinner here but a slider for all other difficulties changed this.

[Normal]
The spacing feels really high for a Normal.
Otherwise this is made fairly well.

[KanaRin]
02:12:805 - End spinner here and add notes at 02:12:894 - and 02:13:073 - ? the problem is in taiko diff, spinner don't end at a certain point, the length is only related to the hits you needed...so it probably won't make sense.

[Hard]
01:30:751 (1,2,3) - This didn't flow very well. I liked it with 2 and 3's positions swapped better. as you wish. plus it's the only hard point in Hard diff...

[Rin]
01:07:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know you're going with all those nice overlapping patterns, but this first set doesn't flow very well. I rotated the 5 beats by about 70 degrees and found it flows much better that way. ...sorry but it's kind of my feeling here: it should be "tighter" (you could also see this in Hard diff) because it's in a lower pitch here...
So much new combo spam at the end ><

Good stuff as always, Rin.

Raging Bull wrote:

What's with the rating for this song? = =;;

Garven wrote:

Now I want to go play some Ragnarok Battle Offline because of this vid. XD

Aleks719 wrote:

LKs' diff in Creator's Words isn't working.