Tonoicutzu wrote:

hello there :3
here's my mod

[General]
in both diffs this slider 00:03:757 is too long, i suggest you should change it's lengh to end here : 00:04:671
that spinner sounds bad, i think you should mute the end and change it's length to end here : 00:09:470
all change to long spinner
good map, nice storyboarding

[Normal]
I think you need to delete all timing points from here : 03:18:814
fixed

[Hard]
01:28:545 : this slider sounds really bad (imo), change it's length to end here : 01:29:459 , not here 01:29:687
01:57:569: this slider sounds bad (imo), change it's length to end here : 01:58:026
01:58:026: add circle
these all fixed
02:27:051: this slider sounds bad (imo), change it's length to end here : 02:27:965
03:09:102: this slider sounds bad (imo), change it's length to end here : 03:10:473
03:25:556: this slider sounds bad (imo), change it's length to end here : 03:26:470
03:54:809: this slider sounds bad (imo), change it's length to end here : 03:55:723
the blue, i think they are my style, not the mistake or error

nice song, relaxin~. Great job, Star

gdeath wrote:

[Hard]
00:01:929 (1) - 这个高slidertick，长slider，无伴奏。到这这里拉slider的时候滴滴滴有点犯耳...
要不把这个slider中间一段设置成静音要不用cutsom silent tick, 不过考虑到后面也有有些同样的情况，还是用slient tick比较省事省心。
我帮你弄好了，顺便降低了些开头的音量。因为觉得稍微有点响。你看看
已经改好了

[Normal]
如果觉得还行的话，也可以同样操作Hard的建议。
已经改成spinner了。。不过声音改了

非常感谢~~~

Starrrrrrrrrr.

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~ this is recheck

[Normal]
<01:02:491> 你忘了砍掉這個(4)
fixed
<02:02:825> (1~) 仍然感覺不好啊..大約是(1,2,3)三個notes都得延1/8 beat 但是這在normal不可行, 目前這樣我若跟著節奏去打不專心看圈圈是很容易打出100的, 而且打的時候很不對勁..
这个，之前两个modder都没有提，虽然我也打得很郁闷，但是还是不知道应该怎么办，需要再找modder

[Hard]
上一個貼中的 "Normal 中提到的三段一樣有問題" 我指的是00:49:693, 01:00:892和02:02:825
汗
<00:49:693> (1~6) 全部往後移1/8 beat (1位在00:49:750), 由於這是Hard而且這段和前後兩段有些距離, 我個人認為不會因為移到1/8 line造成誤解, 不過如果你要Rank, 可能得找個BAT/MAT問一下
有机会一定问一下
<01:00:892> (1~6) 地獄般的難改啊...(1)的正確點要後移1/8 beat, 01:01:349有一個明顯的背景伴奏音, 但歌手的音遲了些才出來(比較接近01:01:406), 也就是(2)非常難下, 更麻煩的是(3,4)基本上是準的 (也就是你用1/8 line去遷就(1,2)的話, 一般水平的玩家打(3,4)的時候就會很憤怒~~什麼MAPPER啊!), 由於色這個音歌手拖很長, 所以實際上你會發現(5)按下去後過了將近1/4拍歌手才唱出來, (6)則是還沒打出來1/8拍前歌手就唱出來了, 我試著擺了很多種, 但實在對這段沒輒...
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請你慎重考慮一下在00:39:409~01:06:834 remap成跟樂器不要跟歌詞
我需要仔细研究
<02:02:597> delete
这样很好看，所以就不删了
<02:02:825> (1,2,3) 後移1/8拍, 一樣你得請問BAT/MAT這能不能被接受
好的
<02:05:796> (1) delete, 改放note在02:06:025
还是不要了，之前一段也是五个字，但提前在白线放了slider，为了统一形式,不改了


其他部分我試玩了兩次, 應該沒什麼大問題
实在是太感谢了，提了好多有用的建议

star for you now

kathy4006 wrote:

:D

很喜欢这首歌 于是果断Star
抱歉无法给出什么建议,
AFK已久的沙包路过...

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

很多时候rank很难不是由于图不好，而是关系问题，不过加油吧，这么多star，别浪费了

1. Artist: Moming Qimiao

1. BPM: 131.280
2. Offset: 1026
3. 我也不太清楚 因为开始有的地方还是需要前后移1/8才听起来像一回事... 但是原来的很多地方都有问题 (我是渣timing啊

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

很多时候rank很难不是由于图不好，而是关系问题，不过加油吧，这么多star，别浪费了

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. Artist: Moming Qimiao

fixed

[Timing]:

1. BPM: 131.280
   fixed
2. Offset: 1026
   fixed
3. 我也不太清楚 因为开始有的地方还是需要前后移1/8才听起来像一回事... 但是原来的很多地方都有问题 (我是渣timing啊

改Artist参照http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

先不用给kudosu了 timing修一下之后再继续 ^^/
我手欠的给了。。。。怎么办啊。。。我错了
弃坑改歌什么的被抓住可是会被说的哟...//啊!...

DarkRingSystem wrote:

;) kira~Chinese song!
noob mod
[Timing]
就打的来说131.280的bpm 就中间一段很准 前后都有少许偏差.后面还是131? 老实说问题不大

这首歌的time太纠结了

[skin]
强烈建议加入scorebar-ki scorebar-kidanger 和 scorebar-kidanger2 水墨风格的皮肤元素 就算只改成个水墨色也行
原始的皮肤紅黄的太违和了 orz

大概是比较懒吧。。。我再找点图片去

[hard]
HP -2

这样会变成4.5，不过想在这个样子实在是比较容易死掉

只说说建议 很多slider 回转都在蓝线上 这样打起来因为是slider 可能问题不大 但是节奏上
来讲 就不是那么好听 建议把她们拉长到下一个白线上 如:
00:44:673 (8)
00:59:298 (8)
01:28:548 (2)
等等..

话说 后面没歌词了?//这个，因为今天用同学电脑上的，已经做完了，过几天传

good luck

LKs wrote:

不用normal音效吗

Jarby wrote:

Beautiful map.

Normal:

02:36:201 (1) - This also feels a bit out because of how the instrument isn't precisely consistent like that and there's no lead in to it. It's about as good as it will fit as is, but I suggest simply removing it here. The future cases similar to it are fine.
04:15:271 (1) - End this 1/4 sooner to better fit the piano there.

Hard:

Please raise stack leniency to at least allow objects that are 1/2 apart to be stacked.
00:01:939 (1,2,1) - This plays really strangely because the opening rhythm doesn't exactly fit with the song's BPM and is a bit hard to lay out for a map in the first place.
02:36:201 (1) - This also feels a bit out because of how the instrument isn't precisely consistent like that and there's no lead in to it. It's about as good as it will fit as is, but I suggest simply removing it here. The future cases similar to it are fine.
03:20:308 (6) - This falls under the screen in gameplay. Please adjust it.
04:15:271 (1) - End this 1/4 sooner to better fit the piano there.

Please get in contact with me once changes have been made.

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

;)

qihanzhang wrote:

good map,star~

Katsuri wrote:

Make your prev points consistent
Make your Lead Ins consistent

No star~

*Edit* I'll give you star after a full mod(coming)

Katsuri wrote:

Hard

01:02:044 (4) - I suggest you to delete the note after this slider and finish it on the next white tick..

fixed
02:39:972 (3) - Move it to 1/4 beat before?
it's a little difficult to hit, so I don't change it.
04:15:157 (1) - Finish it 1/4 beat later.

Jarby wrote:

Right, I think you misunderstood what I meant with the final spinner for Normal and Hard. I meant for it to be played like this.

I agree with Jarby, since it really a little strange to end at the white line, so I don't change it.

Katsuri wrote:

Proto-Bubbled

Colin Hou wrote:

Jarby so cool

James2250 wrote:

-You are using silenced slider ticks for at least 15 seconds during the map on Hard which generally isn't recommended. I would try and find a custom soft one instead if you don't want to hear them as much
it have find a new slider tick.

-Make sure you have all of the unnecessary transparency cut off of the "DARK" sb elements (I know that the other "START" elements work better with it)
fixed

-Go through and make sure none of your hitbursts go over the standard template dimensions (which is 256x256). Look at your 100k/300k/300g etc
fixed

-I keep hitting early on some parts of the map but I am not 100% on the timing, would be nice if you could get a double check on that quickly
I change the timing, BPM:131.27, offset:1024, it may avoid the problem

-Seeing as you have a custom hitcircle and hitcircle overlay you need to include an approach circle in your folder
fixed

-Kiai time shouldn't really be going into the breaks if you could end it before them
fixed

-You need to include a cursor trail in the folder to go with the custom cursor
fixed


Easy:
-Seeing as this difficulty is only half mapped it needs the lyrics cut from the second half of the song or else the map will not end naturally by itself when the player finishes the map (although seeing as there are only 3 difficulties it would be a better idea to just fully map this difficulty to balance everything out more)
finished

-The other 2 difficulties aren't too bad but this difficulty could really use some more hitsounds in places so it doesn't sound so empty
fixed

-This difficulty doesn't really need the Overall Difficulty on the minimum setting. I recommend you do at least +1/+2 for it.
fixed, +1


Normal:
-Still a lower OD than I would expect for a Normal
fixed


Hard:
03:51:389 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - odd to have these being the only jumps in the whole difficulty, they seem kind of out of place
reduced the distance

All of the maps check out pretty nicely but quite a lot of general issues to look over before this can be rebubbled

whymeman wrote:

. . .

spinner-background and spinner-metre SHOULD be 1023 x 692. But, your spinner-background is 1023 x 697. Please fix that.
fixed

Also, if you're going to make spinner-osu completely blank, then please set the dimensions to 1 x 1 to reduce wasted load. section-fail and section-pass are also big blocks of empty transparency that most be reduced to 1 x 1 if you wish to not use it and reduce the load.
fixed

And where is the approachcircle?
fixed

I'm sure James just went over that in his post....

I'll have to check back with this map later on. It looks like the stuff from James's mod post wasn't applied at all yet either....

qinche wrote:

preview point在一个很奇怪的点上？能请换一个正好卡在歌词上的吗O.O？
改好啦~

在我听来offset至少晚了40ms。
时间问题实在是很纠结，我已经尽量使方差最小了，这样开头就必然会快一点，第二个kiai前也会有点快。

qinche wrote:

如果你一定需要一个approach circle又不想用原来那个，可以放进去默认的那种。去options的皮肤那里下载官方的template皮肤，从里面找到approach circle丢进文件夹就好。

1. mp3是124kbps..似乎必須是128-192之間
2. BLACK.jpg和WHITE.jpg請resize成640x480..這是非滾動類sb大小的上限
3. 各難度的結束spinner, 紅線是裝飾音起點亦是理論上較好的結束點, 藍線是實音, 我個人會選擇紅線結束map, 請你考慮看看

1. nothing

1. 01:34:038 (4) - 高白線上有鈴聲卻沒slidertick, 建議這邊改成01:34:038下圈和01:34:266開始的一拍slider
2. 02:43:513 (1) - 認為起頭別whistle好聽的多, 後面幾個短的1/8一樣

1. 00:12:109 (7,8) - delete
2. 00:12:679 (x) - 可以考慮下一個圈
3. 01:24:669 (7,8,9) - 感覺位置剛好擺錯了, 更像是01:24:896~01:25:125適合有三連; 02:23:174 (7) - 一處同
4. 01:34:039 (4) - 同Normal..不過這次有tick了, 可以考慮tick上作功夫
5. 02:36:429 (1) - 這邊到02:51為止都沒音效, 除了過於平淡以外還讓人感覺02:51以後的whistle鈴聲是突然出來的
6. 03:34:935 (4,5,6) - 感覺位置剛好擺錯了, 更像是03:34:705~03:34:935適合有三連; 03:42:248 (4) - 一處同
7. 03:49:561 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 我覺得這最好remap..