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Moming Qimiao - Qing Jin Tian Xia

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cmn_891127
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月5日 at 11:57:01

Artist: Moming Qimiao
Title: Qing Jin Tian Xia
Tags: Hetu Finale
BPM: 131.27
Filesize: 9827kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.2 stars, 226 notes)
  2. Hard (4.64 stars, 506 notes)
  3. Normal (3.62 stars, 298 notes)


Download: Moming Qimiao - Qing Jin Tian Xia
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My 1st map~
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cloness
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cloness
._.star
cmn_891127
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谢谢楼上~
Ibuki Suika
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Ibuki Suika
star~ :D
[normal]
这应该是我遇到的4星里最多分的图了.. :?
00:15:464 -时间向后移一小格?感觉太急了点..
00:27:030 -同上
01:36:427 -同上
01:47:994 -同上

spinner虽然不急但是后面的第一个note都离中心太远.
像00:37:060的.上下上下可以变成下上下上

总感觉rap那段节奏有点乱,一打就一堆100,, :(

[hard]
我是彩笔打不过,连打十分苦手,还有感觉spinner太多了 :( 14个...Orz
cmn_891127
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谢谢楼上的建议~~已按楼上修改过了，但是rap部分还是不知道怎么改比较好~
ps：需要太鼓的建议……本人主攻太鼓……
Ibuki Suika
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Ibuki Suika
其实你可以去osuchina那里求mod的 :D
cmn_891127
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额……原来如此~不过我现在发现大问题了，我打算做的easy模式，结果怎么也降不到3星以下，真悲剧
NatsumeRin
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随便看到这里。
别人发的贴，如果对你的图没有帮助，不要给kud，给了也回被BAT deny掉，而且给别人印象只会更差。（既然给星就有kud拿，为什么要帮你mod呢？）
这个贴不要给kud.
cmn_891127
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……谢谢楼上……
Ibuki Suika
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同前面,按规定是不能给2L和6L kd的... :?
cmn_891127
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额……我原来以为……有人回复就应该给的……我错了……
Cirno
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Cirno
好吧骗kudos不要给

[General]
你需要3星以下难度才能rank，挪去WIP吧

[Normal]
* AIMOD里有Snapping，你要Resnap
分很高，刷分者的福音 降低一下得分，可以缩短也可以降低难度

[Insane]
* AIMOD里有Snapping，你要Resnap
打起来感觉诡异._.不过我玩的很差所以……
Spinner后面跟note间隔太短了
感觉有点08年图的风范

我只想问你……[Normal]和[Hard]开Distance Snap没有 :o 没有的话打开重新排版一次吧，不然你这图就好似SRW - Steel Lonely Wolf :o
排完再说其它吧= =现在这个状态……暂时不能给星
cmn_891127
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说实话……我开了
至于为什么出现如此多的……spacing，好像是我最后调个一下难度，才蹦出来的……
而且我把距离改后再改回来，aimod里就消失了，不过在打开还是会出现
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Cirno
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cmn_891127 wrote:

说实话……我开了
至于为什么出现如此多的……spacing，好像是我最后调个一下难度，才蹦出来的……
不是……你应该看看Auto君打图，你就明白我说的是什么了（你应该会看到Auto君鼠标不停变速）……现在这不是人打的 :o
cmn_891127
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嗯~我发现了……
应该是这个问题吧
Two objects exist 181ms apart (less than 200ms)
这个我发现不好调……要是按格放的话，时间又会多了，不按格放的话，手会颤抖，放不准，求帮助
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Cirno
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cmn_891127 wrote:

嗯~我发现了……
应该是这个问题吧
Two objects exist 181ms apart (less than 200ms)
不是……*sigh* spacing指的是东西在屏幕上的位置，不是时间轴 你还是看一遍Auto吧，一般来讲Hard和以下难度鼠标移动都应该大部分等速，你现在这个……

*看到Faust的贴突然想起，Source应该是Touhou而不是专辑名
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Faust
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Excuse me, the artist is not SOUND HOLIC. SOUND HOLIC is the publisher for the album this track is in.

It should be "709sec. - FIRE FLOWER"

You can refer here for information on the album and arranger. http://vgmdb.net/album/20602
cmn_891127
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改好了……
我才看到有第二页……
还有问题……
1 那个绿色的线是不用改了么
2 降低难度不减分啊，分太多了会有什么问题么，我太舍得删


thx for Faust
but if i change the artist, this map cannot be downloaded
How to complete it?
Snowy Dream
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唔 吓死偶了
刚看到前几贴给个star就给kud。。。
还好有铃酱提醒=。=
那几个乱加的估计会被收回去
star先~
不要给这贴kud
Faust
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cmn_891127 wrote:

改好了……
我才看到有第二页……
还有问题……
1 那个绿色的线是不用改了么
2 降低难度不减分啊，分太多了会有什么问题么，我太舍得删


thx for Faust
but if i change the artist, this map cannot be downloaded
How to complete it?
o_O?

Cannot be downloaded? ?????
Cirno
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关于怎么改标题:
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

Normal建议OD+3, Hard建议OD+5……（如果你的OD不是故意的话） 现在这个OD很有迷惑性._.
Mistimed Hits 55%+ ，建议找人给你测测timing
我也是一新手帮不上什么别的忙m(_ _)m抱歉 不要给kds

star
Faust
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I thought you could edit the information and do a full submission. It doesn't work now?
cmn_891127
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first, thx Cirno & Faust, the problem about artist had solved

second, OD & offset also changed(hope better)

final, wish you mod this map further

那个~~感谢ddddd519的星星~
scarlethana
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首先辛苦了
☆一个
下面是一些意见仅供参考

Hard:
00:15:915 (x) - 增加一个新note?
- 00:20:253 (x) - 同上
- 00:27:482 (x) - 同上
- 01:36:879 (x) - 同上
- 01:48:446 (x) - 同上
00:41:397 (4) - slider的节点太多了听起来有点乱
- 00:52:964 (4) - 同上
- 02:02:361 (4) - 同上
- 02:13:927 (4) - 同上
00:46:277 (8) - 这个note应该变成new combo?
02:19:620 (5) - 这个note应该在02:19:530 note的位置需要再重新调整一下
03:17:723 (1) - 这个note应该在03:17:542
03:17:903 (2) - 这个note应该在03:17:723

Insane:
其实1/4绝对够用了 1/8这太触了
00:18:988 (4) - 让slider结束在00:19:168
00:19:440 (5) - 这个note应该在00:19:349
00:30:554 (4) - 让slider结束在00:30:735
00:45:735 (8) - 这个note应该变成new combo?
- 00:51:518 (9) - 同上
- 00:57:301 (12) - 同上
- 02:06:699 (8) - 同上
- 02:12:482 (9) - 同上
- 02:18:265 (12) - 同上
01:04:620 (1) - 让spinner结束在01:05:614
01:16:187 (1) - 让spinner结束在01:17:181
01:39:952 (4) - 让slider结束在01:40:132
01:51:518 (4) - 让slider结束在01:51:699
03:13:114 (1-7) - 在时间轴上全部往前挪1/16格 从03:13:024开始
03:15:373 (5) - 太靠近屏幕边缘了 重新调整一下note的位置
03:56:578 (3) - 让slider结束在03:56:759
04:01:006 (1) - 让spinner结束在04:02:000

全局:
Distance Spacing = 0.8x 是不是有点低了? (鼠标放在distance snap上按alt在屏幕右上方看)
想要把note的距离分开的话一般还是调到1.2x以上比较好

easy和normal还没有看
10点来钟本来已经困的不行了
结果居然又熬到1点了
我真糟糕 >.<
cmn_891127
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太感谢了……我一会就去改去……
应该能给kudosu……
Numbers 596108
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Numbers 596108
hi~我是來mod的
不過我只mod Taiko diff而已

= Hard =

00:47:658 (20,21,22,23,24) 會不會覺得這裡怪了一點...?似乎是踩了藍線了
02:08:662 (20,21,22,23,24) 會不會覺得這裡怪了一點...?似乎是踩了藍線了


= Insane =
難度名 : 建議改成Lunatic


00:37:086 (1~16) 請移除所有大圓,這樣真的很怪...
00:48:652 (1~16) ^
01:58:050 (1~16) ^
02:09:616 (1~16) ^

全部該改的 :

SPOILER
00:16:845 (14) 為什麼從紅線開始?總覺得這樣有點怪,建議是從白線擺放
01:00:219 (X) 應該把kiai拉到這
01:00:219 (???) 建議從這裡以後到kiai結束的所有大圓都改掉,沒必要添加這麼多,或許添加這只是累贅...
01:23:531 (X) 這裡不添加note嗎? 太鼓裡通常是不容許有Break Time的
01:37:990 (14) 為什麼從紅線開始?總覺得這樣有點怪,建議是從白線擺放
01:49:375 [14(16)] ^
02:22:628 (X) kiai移到這
02:22:628 (???) 建議從這裡以後到kiai結束的所有大圓都改掉,沒必要添加這麼多,或許添加這只是累贅...
02:45:761 (X) 這裡不添加note嗎? 太鼓裡通常是不容許有Break Time的
03:33:472 (X) 在這裡添加kiai ,然後再看 01:00:219的問題
03:58:411 (13) 請移除掉這個finish,不然你就換成小圓,這樣打太鼓會很辛苦
03:59:496 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) 問題跟上面一樣
03:59:586 (18,20,22,24,26) 要不要把它給刪了?打起有些怪怪的
04:04:194 (14) 請移除掉這個finish,不然你就換成小圓,這樣打太鼓會很辛苦
04:09:978 (13) ^
04:11:062 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) 同03:59:496
04:11:062 (18,20,22,24,26) 要不要把它給刪了?打起有些怪怪的
04:15:761 (14) 刪了這個大圓...
04:19:556 (15) 刪了這個大圓...
04:19:737 (X) 結束kiai

這就是全部了,非常多,慢慢改吧~

給個提示...已經2個Taiko diff了,這樣很難rank
cmn_891127
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终于有人改太鼓的图了……先激动一下……

我把大圆基本上都去掉了，就保留了高潮部分的每段最后两个，就是这个样子：oooxxooxxoooO_O

至于最后有四段重复部分的是否开ki，因为之前有人说闪光太耀眼了（我也觉得……甚至想都关了），于是前面的两个就没有算在ki里面



0989596108 wrote:

給個提示...已經2個Taiko diff了,這樣很難rank

额……删掉hard好心痛

话说……我osu的图都做满了

唉唉~~怎么才能不删又rank呢，难道再做一个水果的？？？
Numbers 596108
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Numbers 596108
你在做個水果的就不能被rank了= =
水果會被rank的可能比做Taiko還小
留下來是沒問題,不過可能性很低就是了
cmn_891127
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……果断的删……
scarlethana
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scarlethana
刚才去Test了一下
以下数据仅供参考
谱面用的是更新过的Hard难度

无任何改动情况下
Mistimed Hits: 46%

后来将offset的值调小了15ms再试
Mistimed Hits: 33%

一半多的100出现在rap那一段 如果不算这一段的话是27%
大概是我不太擅于把握rap时候的节奏
我太弱了 >_>

个人觉得这是个比较满意的值
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=34996
我自己的这个图我自己打
Mistimed Hits都低不过40%

除此之外
在难度名上的问题是
Lunatic既然出现 就不需要Insane了
建议是把osu难度的Insane改成Lunatic 然后把taiko难度改成Taiko Stage
或者干脆把Insane改成Phantasm (拖出去棍碎

最后还有一个非常糟糕的错误
Hard:
00:35:821 (1) - 这个位置你同时放了2个spinner上去 无论怎么转都会miss的 去掉一个

ps:这帖不需要给kud了吧 大概
Numbers 596108
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Numbers 596108
噢...忘了一點,如果Taiko已改成Lunatic,就把osu的diff名也改成Lunatic,Extra,Phantasm(?)挑一個修改

你也可以找P.1的NatsumeRin來mod Taiko,他是神觸
cmn_891127
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改完了……
Numbers 596108
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Numbers 596108
改完就好lol
scarlethana
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scarlethana
我其实很不想吐槽Lunatic又被Insane吃了..
cmn_891127
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周末现身……
还是最简单的名字好啦~怕别的名字吓人……
cnryoncn
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C78纯支持，飘过……
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Can I make a diff ?
cmn_891127
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no problem, you can send to cmn_891127@qq.com or add Attachments
I like this song very much, and happy to know you like it too
scarlethana
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scarlethana
藤原豆腐店什么的 最糟糕了 ~>.<~
Beren
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★
cmn_891127
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谢谢楼上了~
sekiovo
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路过...
Kotone
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Kotone
see this: http://www.sound-holic.com/_c78_list.html
Vocal by 709sec then circle is SOUND HOLIC
so~
Artist: SOUND HOLIC feat. 709sec.
Title: FIRE FLOWER
Tags: Endless Seeker Reach for the Moon Immortal Smoke Fujiwara no Mokou
cmn_891127
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thx~
Timazak
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Cool song! star.
This is my 1st mod :D
Sorry if there is already-answered question.

[common]
Change timming Offset to 13,973(I think this is 'just' timing.)
If it's possible, delete sound data from .FLV movie file.

[Easy]
I see no problem.

[Normal]
03:17:677 (1)(2) set 1/4 beat before (to 03:17:587)
03:19:033toEND All slider length is short to rhythm of song, I think.
Maybe,Slider Velocity is changed, but mapped slider length is not changed.

[Hard]
whole-time :: Slider Velocity is lower to normal,but it's OK?(Hard=x1.0 Normal=x1.2)
00:54:454 (1)== so long (overlap with(2))
00:59:515 add Circle(finish sound is good)
03:17:677 (1)(2) set 1/4 beat before (to 03:17:587)(same to normal)
vibrate slider is cool! :D

[Insane]
00:47:011 (5)=()(6)...(10) slider is so long, and (6)...(10) set 1/4 beat before, like 02:07:975

[Extra]
00:21:744 (5)=() set slider length to 00:22:105, like 01:42:707.It's too short distance to next circle (1).
00:33:310 (5)=() same as above.
00:58:701 Set holdtime of spinner 1/2 beat shorter, I think it's better.
Do as well to other spinners before from this time.
01:54:274 (5)=() same as above.
There is 2nd Break time 02:45-03:08.I think this is one of the heat-up time of this song,
so to play beats maybe good in Insane and Extra level.

thanks.
Kyonko Hizara
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yj640916
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:)
[Easy]
没问题
[Normal]
3:33:095 （1）从这里开始到歌曲结束slider结尾没有与时间线重合，最好都重新拉一下。
下面是其中一部分
3:34:179 （4）slider有问题，部分没有与时间线重合重新拉一下，最好在3:35:067结束
-3:37:794 （8）同上，最好在3:37:517结束
-3:39:963 （3）同上，最好在3:40:324结束
-3:42:131 （1）同上，最好在3:42:673结束
-3:42:854 （2）同上，最好在3:43:396结束
-3:43:396 （3）同上，最好在3:44:119结束
-3:44:300 （4）同上，最好在3:44:661结束
-3:45:746 （8）同上，最好在3:46:469结束
.....
[Hard]
没什么大问题
[Insane]
整体偏简单
Apprpoach Rate+2
排版有些单调
Insane难度不要受Spaceing约束，可以试图增加一些中距离的跳跃
你自己决定
[Extra]
整体偏简单
Apprpoach Rate+2
不要受Spaceing约束
看你自己决定
[General]
Easy感觉对新手来说会很难
Insane Extra 又有些单调，偏简单

Star~~~
cmn_891127
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thx 4 modding

真是懒得打英语……头疼
其实，normal我想重新做的……
我也觉得重复的太多了，果然是懒人
我是彩笔，我是沙包 :?
insane， extra难度不够……
extra我照着不到20S就死的的难度做吧~
关于easy降低难度……
移动速度我是我想降了，不能太慢了吧（无视我吧）~
难道要靠调节difficult？
求具体建议……
还有其实……跳跃一直很头疼……所以……
总之，改吧

还有一个问题，我觉得hard和insane里面点点有点多，要不要把一些改成条条？
无奈的求助中……
先把extra变成insane……


easy & normal fixed
Kotone
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难度不够就讓我做guest diff?
好想map這個...
cmn_891127
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嗯嗯~
做个超难的~
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