1. Easy Style (2.18 stars, 130 notes)
2. Hard Style (4.69 stars, 324 notes)
3. Natteke Style (4.85 stars, 322 notes)
4. Normal Style (4.16 stars, 191 notes)

Niz_45 wrote:

These are just some more suggestions
I just can't resist XD

00:34:564 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) : Add claps please ^^ Done
00:35:675 (5) : Add finish Nope
00:44:008 (3,4) : Add clap at beginning and ending of sliders only 3
00:44:564 (5) : Add finish Yup
01:01:786 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap yup
01:05:397 (5) : Add clap yup
01:19:564 (1,2,3,4) : Add clapyup
01:21:786 (4) : Position of note doesn't match with 01:23:453 (5) Fix please ^^ nah, doesn't affect gameplay. number 4 is already gone duirng that time anyway
01:21:231 (2) : Same as above 01:24:008 (7) ^
01:28:453 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap yup
01:55:120 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap Nope
02:04:008 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap Yup
02:13:036 (11,12,13) : Add clap Nah
02:30:675 (1,2,3,4) : Add clap Nah


Please quote or copy paste this and put beside the suggestions (Done) (No) or something like that beside it so I would know which one was rejected XD

Natteke wrote:

not bad. can I make a diff?

SapphireGhost wrote:

Solid mapping work ~

[Normal Style] is quite slow, you might even consider making it [Easy Style] and turning down the settings by one, just a thought. The break should also be dragged to 00:45:120. And get those new combos placed. You know, I am a slow mapper <3

[Hard Style], I would advise removing the overlap at 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5)Changed the pattern and 01:58:453 (2,3)Nope. You don't have overlap in the other parts of the beatmap so this would help to improve consistency.

Edit:
First kiai time should start at 01:20:120 and end at 01:37:897.
Second kiai time should start at 01:55:675 and already ends at 02:13:453.
Sound better

Edit 2:
There's a simple storyboard below in the .zip file. Simply extract all the files and place them into the Song Folder and see if you like it.
Lol, thanks

That's all I have to say, really. Good luck with ranking and all that.

XepherX3 wrote:

pretty nice...

like how u are using the original r300k version with the in-game sounds :-)
mine is without the in-game sounds (just bg and voice)

you can surely use my skin..just give me credits alright :-)

and one more thing:

here is a normal+: diff..u can add it if u want

[attachment=0:ddeb3]Cho-E - Amputator (Equivalent) [X3 TOMIX STYLE].osu[/attachment:ddeb3]

1. Storyboard: The dark background can be smaller. Also you probably don't need it at all. Try checking these topics about some additional information:
   viewtopic.php?f=20&t=55177
   viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
   I have recently found out about these myself thanks to some good people, and these will improve the performance of your SB (weaker machines won't choke on it).

1. 00:28:453 (10) - I think the clap should be on the start of the slider, not the end.
2. 00:30:675 (6) - ^
3. 00:31:786 (7) - Add a Clap.
4. 00:34:008 (4) - Add a Clap.
5. 00:34:703 (8) - Add a Clap.
6. 00:35:675 (5) - This note would be a really good candidate for a new combo. Musical reasons (2 stanzas per combo used so far atleast, with the exception of this combo which is a pattern). Also remove clap, sounds better without it imo.
7. 00:36:231 (6) - If you changed the above (5) into a new combo, this note needs some better placing. Maybe something like this?
8. 00:40:675 (6) - New combo.
9. 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern got me. It's not really hard or anything just may be slightly hard for a "hard" difficulty. In any case, make (9) a new combo.
10. 00:44:842 (1) - Remove new combo from this note and place it closer to the note before it (and all others) so they don't have some big spacing irregularities.
11. 00:47:064 - Add a note here to follow the voice, feels kinda empty without it.
12. 00:47:758 (1) - Don't like this spinner at all, it doesn't really follow the voice either. I suggest you remove it and map the voice and beats instead. Here is a suggestion: http://puu.sh/3qmx (this is how it looked before @timeline). I didn't do any spacings or anything on the field, but I think notes that would exist like that on the timeline would match the music much better. Also notice how the new combo is on the big white tick, which means removing new combo from 00:49:286 (1).
13. 00:52:064 (7,8) - Reverse these, meaning 8 should be where 7 starts on the timeline and after it 7 should come. Like this. Fits the music much better.
14. 01:02:342 (9) - New combo. This means removing new combo from 01:03:731 (1). Also try to fix the spacing between (10) and (1) so it's more or less equal to their distance of their sliders.
15. 01:06:786 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:07:897 (1).
16. 01:20:953 (1,2,3,4) - These felt weird, because I heard voice better than the rest of the stuff, and it's not really matching it. Looking at the timeline, I suggest this. Don't forget to add a clap on 5. Sounds much better.
17. 01:22:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as the above pretty much, try to follow both the drumline and voice here.
18. 01:29:008 (8) - New combo.
19. 01:29:842 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I won't really say anything about these, they are alright, but if possible try to map the voice here as well, just like I gave you an example before. The song is quite dynamic and mapping 1/2s doesn't really make it interesting.
20. 01:42:342 (5) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:44:008 (1).
21. 01:55:675 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:57:897 (1).
22. 02:00:120 (5) - New combo.
23. 02:14:008 (1) - Clap on the start of the slider.
24. 02:16:786 (1) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
25. 02:17:342 (2) - Add a clap to the start of the slider.
26. 02:21:231 (4,5) - I think you should remove these and map the drums instead. 2 short streams would feel much more fun. (3+5)
27. 02:22:342 (6) - After you do the change above, this would be a much better spot for a new combo. Remove it from 02:23:453 (1) afterwards.
28. 02:30:258 - Since you mapped a stream which follows the drums for the ending, add a note here to complete the drumline. Also add a clap on it.
29. 02:30:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - Clap on all of these.

1. OD+1. OD3 in a normal when an easier diff is present isn't that nice, considering this normal is slightly harder than an average normal as well.
2. In general, the diff looks nice but it could look better if you used 1.1x distance snap mostly, because the circles and sliders touch eachother and doesn't look that nice. This is only a personal complaint and don't think of this as a really bad thing though.
3. 00:34:842 (3) - This one is really confusing for a normal diff. Ending on a blue tick when next note is a circle is a bad thing for easier diffs.
   It's slightly hard as well, but that's perfectly fine. I suggest this. Adding a slider there fits the music and while it requires slightly more work (cause you don't wait), it will be much easier to continue playing cause of a more familiar rhythm. Don't forget to put claps on both start and end as well.
4. 00:59:564 (1) - Clap.
5. 01:00:398 (4) - Clap on the slider end.
6. 01:01:786 (1) - Claps on every arrow and the start, leave the end as it is now.
7. 01:02:620 (2) - This slider doesn't sound so good. Maybe try this?
8. 01:04:008 (1) - Clap.
9. 01:04:564 (3,4) - These would sound much better if you reversed the position in the timeline. Like this. This also enables you to place claps better (which means clap on the slider end once you reverse them on the timeline).
10. 01:06:231 (2) - Clap.
11. 01:08:453 (3) - Clap.
12. 01:08:731 (4) - This slider also doesn't sound so good. Maybe shift it by 1/2 and add a circle in it's place? Like this. Also don't forget to add a clap on the slider end.
13. 01:10:675 (1) - Clap on start.
14. 01:12:897 (3) - Clap on start.
15. 01:15:120 (2) - Clap.
16. 01:17:341 (3) - Clap.
17. 01:17:620 (4) - Same as 01:08:731.
18. 01:39:564 (1) - Clap.
19. 01:41:786 (5) - Clap.
20. 01:44:008 (1) - End this slider at 01:44:564, it sounds bad like it is now.
21. 01:45:120 - Add a circle and put a clap on it.
22. 01:46:231 (3,4) - Clap on these.
23. 01:48:453 (1) - Clap on the start.
24. 01:55:120 (1) - Claps on the start and the arrows.
25. 02:06:786 (1,2,3,4) - These don't look nice spacing wise. I suggest you fix them so their transitions between them is the same. This is what I mean, check the spacing between them.
26. 02:12:341 (6,7) - Claps on these.

1. Why not use biggest circle size for this diff?
2. 00:35:120 - Because you started with a slider at 00:26:231 (1), this spot seems kinda empty. Maybe place a circle, or even 2 circles? Like this. Don't forget to put claps on these as well. Not terribly hard for an easy and adds some spice and removes emptiness.
3. 00:43:453 (5) - Clap at the end.
4. 01:05:120 (3) - This slider seems misplaced. I see that you're trying to follow the voice here as much as possible and this one is really off in that case. Not by itself, but because there is nothing at 01:04:564. I suggest to remove this slider entirely and map a longer one on that big white tick, like this.
5. 01:08:592 (1) - This spinner doesn't really fit imo. It's kinda short as well. Try something like this. Also notice how I placed a new combo on that (5) you have there.
6. 01:13:453 - Add a note here, your choice if you want to make your slider return once more or add a circle.
7. 01:14:842 (5) - New combo.
8. 01:49:564 (4) - New combo.
9. 01:52:897 (1) - Clap at the start and at the end.
10. 01:55:120 (1) - Clap at the start.
11. 02:04:008 - Add a note here, your choice if it's a circle or another repeat of the previous slider. Don't forget to add a clap on it.
12. 02:12:342 (5) - Claps on start, arrow and the end.
13. 02:15:676 (5) - New combo, remove it from 02:16:786 (1) afterwards.
14. 02:17:897 (2) - New combo, remove it from 02:19:564 (1) afterwards.
15. 02:20:120 (2) - New combo.
16. 02:22:064 (5) - Clap.
17. 02:22:342 (6) - New combo, remove it from 02:22:897 (1) afterwards.
18. 02:29:564 (2) - Clap?

Atm, I dont think i will force skin. Let the player have their own way of skin etc. Tbh, I do like to have some normal in my mapset, but there is something inside it doesn't please me much. When we both online, maybe we can disscuss about it further

Haneii wrote:

~General~
Add an epilepsy warning for all the diffs? I dont see the need for it
Love this song <3 <3

~Hard Style~
Besides the streams, it isn't really that difficult - and 1.6 SV? why so slow? O_O Explained before
Increase OD by 2? I'll stick with my setup for now
00:43:731 (3) - this note feels odd/ randomly added. Remove it or remap this combo to something that fits the music better? >.< I found it seem to be fine as it is now
01:54:564 - what's the purpose of this timing section? It for volume changes

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Equivalent wrote:

It for volume changes

Natteke wrote:

Since noone seems to be making a diff here we go http://puu.sh/3efB

Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.

Ekaru wrote:

BTW, tell me to recheck the map after Natteke gets off his lazy ass and this is moved to Pending. I don't star WIP maps as a matter of principle, so please tell me. Thanks.

Ekaru wrote:

Hard:

A bit hard for a Hard IMO with all the streams and what no, but it'll do. xD

Normal:

The only problem here is that you can't decide whether or not you want 1/2s to touch each other. Take 01:50:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3,4,5 don't touch each other, but 5,6,7 do.

This inconsistency makes the map ugly and can make it hard to read; the notes touching and not touching are read as different distances. So, please decide on one or the other and then fix it. Thank you.Easy fix

Easy:

00:57:342 (2) - Make this so it doesn't touch (1), please. Ok
01:25:675 (2) - ^ Ok

BTW, tell me to recheck the map after Natteke gets off his lazy ass and this is moved to Pending. I don't star WIP maps as a matter of principle, so please tell me. Thanks.He still not around till 18th August

Aleks719 wrote:

General
- Natteke is "he", not "she".
- Your comboburst is 438x767.Even if 438x767, I don't see it bothering the gameplay
Quote from Official Ranking Submission Criteria.

Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.

template comboburst is 388x767. Fix + Full submit please.
- Make kiai time similar for all diffs. 01:20:120 - 01:37:897 + 01:55:675 - 02:13:453 Mine have my own, Natteke have his own and that not a big issue

Natteke Style
00:35:258 - add note
00:53:314 - ^
02:31:231 - disable this kiai

Hard Style
00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - keep spacing constantly. Hard to read for the 1st timeI will keep it for now.
00:57:620 - add note Nope
00:58:036 - remove note^
01:36:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - disagree with this combo. Placing of notes is wrong. Listen music again.It play fine
02:02:064 - add note i guess, nope
02:11:231 (8) - add nc ok

Normal Style
AR -1 I will keep it for now
00:35:258 (x) - add 1/4 slider as before (like 1,2,3)?Nope

Easy Style
01:16:786 (2) - end of this slider must be on 01:17:897 (high white tick, 1/2 earlier)Nope

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~
some suggestions, and i'll skip Natteke's diff as you said in my queue:

[General]
comboburst may be a little bit untidy, and to be honest, it's quite large. maybe you would like to find an experienced skin maker to help the picture more clear.~.~ I just remove it, actually that just a speed work without looking twice

[Easy Style]
00:59:008(2) - make the overlapping perfectly.Lol, quite hard to interpret, but I get what you mean
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.Nope

[Normal Style]
00:35:258(x) - add a slider here, which ends on 00:35:397. lol,k
01:01:786(1,2) - [attachment=0:59a96]sdgsew.PNG[/attachment:59a96]01:47:897(x) - hmm...maybe add a note here? k
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.nope

[Hard Style]
00:37:758(4) - i think this note is unnecessary...remove it plz.Nope
00:43:453(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - creative spacing, fine for me...but idk what MATs/BATs would say. so please use normal spacing here.Was intended to be like it, but I do know it trips many many people first time play, including Uan too. I just decided to make stay there till I moved it to pending, here is the time
01:07:897(1,2,3,4,5) - it's better to remove (2) and (4). k
01:52:620(x) - add a note here.Maybe you're right
01:55:120(T) - the kiai should starts at 01:55:675.I like where it is now

that's all~
so
star~

1. Your offset is 20 ms off. Make it 100, which is -20 of your current one.
   Don't forget to resnap your notes and timing sections.
2. Tick rate 2 like suggested above would be sexy. Especially on Natteke difficulty.
3. Also the kiai time, again suggested above (lol)

Sakura Hana wrote:

[All diffs]
I highly suggest slider tick rate 2. Ok

[Natteke Style]
End the kiai? Ok

[Hard Style]
I dont really know what you were going for with your combos so imma do a full combo mod, please excuse me:

Combo mod

00:27:897 (6) - New combo.
00:31:786 (7) - New combo.
00:34:008 (4,7) - New combo. No
00:36:231 (6,1) - Switch New combo. No
00:41:231 (7) - New combo.
00:49:008 (6,1) - Switch New combo.No
00:50:953 (6) - New combo for new lyrical sentence.Ok
00:53:175 (1) - Remove new combo this is still part of the previous pattern.
00:53:731 (4) - New combo.
00:59:842 (6) - New combo.
01:02:342 (9) - New combo.
01:03:731 (1,2) - Switch new combo.No
01:05:953 (6) - New combo.
01:07:897 (1) - Remove new combo.No
01:12:897 (7) - New combo.
01:20:953 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:33:453 (5) - New combo.
01:55:675 (9) - New combo.
02:00:120 (5) - New combo.
02:06:786 (4) - New combo.
02:24:564 (5) - New combo.
02:26:786 (5) - New combo.
02:29:008 (3) - New combo.Nah, instead I put new combo on 02:30:120

Although, I like how my combos goes, but ok...

00:55:397 (X) - Add a note? Feels better to continue the rythm you've been using. I leave it for now
00:57:620 (X) - ^^
01:03:731 (1) - Feels like it should go 1/2 earlier. Seem fine to me >.<
01:07:620 (X) - Add a note, fits better for me.I leave it for now
01:16:508 (X) - Fells pretty empty, i suggest add a note here.^
01:25:397 (X) - You could add a note here and go with a diamond pattern^
01:26:508 (X) - Another note in here fits better.[b^[/b]
01:32:342 (3,4) - These sliders dont fit the music at all, i recommend you use some notes instead. Idk, but it seem fine to me
01:34:286 (X) - A note here would fit nicely to fill this gap.leaving it as it is
01:35:397 (6) - It's really awkward to have a slider cover from an offbeat to the downbeat, specially coz there's a new lyric on the downbeat starting that normally would have a new combo, so i'd suggest you break this sldier into a 1/4 slider and a note with new combo.Nope
01:37:342 (7) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and then put a note at where this slider used to end, since the held lyric is ending sooner which is what im guessing it was following because the background sounds have a constant rythm and nothing held, and since it's the start of a new lyric should probably have a new combo too.~.~ Can I leave it as it is?
01:38:175 (8,1) - Feels too empty i'd suggest adding 2 1/2 notes in between these.^
01:40:397 (2,3,4) - Sound really awkward.~.~
01:45:953 (5) - This slider sounds awkward too.~.~
01:47:620 (X) - Add a note to follow the lyrics better and it feels too empty. ~.~
01:52:064 (10) - Either move to the next white tick or remove, since it sounds pretty off. ~.~
01:52:620 (1) - If you removed the previous one, move this to the earlier white tick, otherwise remove it really.^
01:55:675 - Start the 2nd kiai here, the downbeat of the song, doesnt make much sense to start on the build up, let alone in middle of an stream.ok
02:02:064 (X) - Add a note here too please ;_; nope
02:02:342 (1,2,3) - Sounds really awkward.Idk, it seem good to me
02:06:508 (X) - Add a note here to fill in this gap, it sounds better. Nu?
02:07:342 (5,6) - You could add a note in between these 2 for a triplet, since the vocal has some sort of triplet on it. Nu?
02:09:842 (2) - Sounds better 1/4 later.I think I leave it
02:16:508 (X) - Could use a note here.Ok
02:19:286 (X) - ^^
02:22:203 (X) - Could use a note here with a new combo otherwise new combo on the next note.Nope
02:23:175 (X) - Could use a note here too. Ok
02:25:397 (X) - ^ No
02:27:620 (X) - ^ Ok

[Normal Style]

Combo mod

01:01:786 (1,2) - Switch new combo. ok
01:41:786 (5) - New combo.
01:46:786 (6,1) - Switch New combo.nah
01:51:231 (6) - New combo.
02:02:341 (5) - New combo.
02:11:230 (5) - New combo.
02:24:564 (5) - New combo.

00:28:731 (5) - A slider ending in the downbeat like this is pretty awkward, very rarely ends up being good since the slider's strong point is the start, not the end, i suggest you break this up into notes, if you do, new combo on the downbeat note.No
00:30:675 (1) - ^No
00:32:897 (5) - ^No
00:34:842 (3,4) - remove (4) and make (3) into a repeat slider that lasts until (4) endednope
00:36:786 (4) - I'd suggest a 1/2 repeat slider instead.nah
00:39:008 (8) - ^no
00:44:564 - Why a kiai fountain right before a break?!Is there anything wrong with it? It fit the finish sound
00:48:242 - This break doesnt make much sense to me.No break for normal? Are you serious?
00:54:564 (2,3) - Sounds weird because (2) is mapped to a note that stays held until 1/4 before (3) ends.Nope
00:57:897 (1) - Didnt expect a sudden switch to main beat from lyrics but that's me.That follow lyrics
01:04:564 (3,4) - (3)'s lyric is held until the end of (4) hence making (4) pointless.Nah, it stay
01:08:731 (4) - Start the slider from the middle of where it currently is, and turn the slider's start into a note, also slider would be better ending at 01:09:564.didn't understand, so no
01:10:675 (1) - Uhh where's the held note in this slider?it stay, that how i feel the music there.
01:14:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - What you did on the first combo fits the second and viceversa ._.dont know what you mean
01:37:897 (1) - I'd suggest adding another repeat to this slider.no
01:51:231 (6) - I'd suggest adding a hitsound finish here, to enphasize the pitch increasenope
01:55:675 - Start the 2nd kiai here, the downbeat of the song, doesnt make much sense to start on the build up.ok
02:13:453 ~ (end) - The difficulty suddenly decreases and the map becomes an [Easy] why? Is that any problem?

Whew only one more diff to go X_X
[Easy Style]

Combo Mod

00:29:564 (4) - New combo.
00:34:008 (3) - New combo.Nah
00:37:897 (3) - New combo.nope
00:37:897 (3,1) - Switch new combo.^
00:42:342 (4) - New combo.
01:39:564 (3) - New combo.
02:26:231 (1,2) - Switch new combo.

00:26:231 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really this whole combo would have been better if you didnt start (1) with a slider, since you're making 3 sliders end on a downbeat making it really awkward sounding. I put 1/2 notes
00:35:120 (X) - Adding a note here fits better..Nope
00:44:564 - Why a kiai fountain right before a break?[b~.~[/b]
I dont think that break fits tbh... Break stay
01:07:897 (5,6) - These stacked 1/2s are hard for new players to follow correctly It stay
01:08:592 (1) - Spinner is kinda short for the easiest diff. 2 sec spinner, I don't think it too short
01:10:675 (1) - Note is too close to spinner for the easiest diff.That why it is slider instead of notes
01:13:453 (4) - Hidden by a comboburst and can barely be seen, i wouldnt mind if this was a harder diffs, but newbies had a hard time noticing stuff like this.make it stack
01:41:786 (5) - You know already what i would say about splitting this in 2 because of the downbeat note, also new combo on the downbeat note, otherwise, new combo on this slider. No for split, but I make it new combo
01:55:675 - Start the 2nd kiai here, the downbeat of the song, doesnt make much sense to start on the build up.
02:03:175 (4) - No kick sliders on the easiest difficulty please. I make it to 1/2 stack
02:07:897 (4,5,6) - I already said something about stacked 1/2s so you probably can tell i will repeat the same thing.I tell the same thing too ~.~
02:21:786 (3,4,1) - I'd recommend unstacking these not only because of being stacked 1/2s but also since (1) is part of a new musical Nopepattern doesnt make much sense to stack it together with the pervious one.
02:24:008 (3) - You know what by now =P No changes, sorry

Ok guess your map needs way more work before i come here to recheck, wouldnt hurt to get some more mods as well, Good Luck!~

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Your offset is 20 ms off. Make it 100, which is -20 of your current one. I'll stick with Jarby offset
   Don't forget to resnap your notes and timing sections.
2. Tick rate 2 like suggested above would be sexy. Especially on Natteke difficulty.ok
3. Also the kiai time, again suggested above (lol)

ok


[Hard Style]

00:51:231 (6) - Add new combo.
01:05:953 (6) - ^
01:07:877 (1,2,3) - Remap this please. Anti jumps feel off, awkward, and look wrong. Just make it the spacing like you did before, or stack it.I stack it
01:20:933 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:33:433 (5) - Add new combo.
01:34:544 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:35:933 (9) - Add new combo.
01:36:488 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:38:155 (9) - Add new combo.
01:39:544 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:655 (9) - Add new combo.
02:00:100 (5) - ^
02:06:766 (4) - ^
02:30:099 (5) - ^
02:30:655 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Normal Style]

00:37:897 (5) - Add new combo.
01:38:711 (x) - Add a note here.
01:39:544 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:766 (7) - Add new combo.
01:46:766 (6) - ^
01:47:877 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:51:211 (7) - Add new combo.
01:52:877 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Easy Style]

00:38:988 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:100 (5) - Add new combo.
00:44:544 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:766 (3) - Add new combo.
01:35:655 (3) - ^
01:40:655 (4) - ^
02:26:211 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:26:766 (6) - Add new combo.

gina91189 wrote:

This offset is fine with me, it could be a little fast at the beginning, but it gets better after that.
Btw, I don’t understand this song at all, what language is this? Would you mind give me the lyrics >w<?

[Easy Style]
Fine.

[Normal Style]
01:17:620 (4) – end this at 01:18:453 ? ok
No other suggestions.

[Hard Style]
I got no problem with this diff too.

[Natteke Style]
Well … I just think the first part has weird rhyme, but it doesn’t really matter.
Others are good.

Sorry, I’m not pro ;<
Star ;3

GladiOol wrote:

The offset is 100 ~.~

If you ever want this ranked you better change it, but oh well why am I here it's just 20 ms, I mean that's not like the diffrence between hitting 300 and 100. I'm so silly ^___~

1. Why these tags ?
2. Offset is 81. Remember to resnap all notes and the kiai timing sections.
3. 00:44:542 - Why would you throw in a kiai fountain right before a BREAK

1. The AR is too high for an Easy and for such a calm song. Reduce AR by 1. I also suggest to use the biggest circle size, because they're a lot easier to hit.
2. 00:26:191 (1,2,3) - Quite harsh of a beginning for an Easy. Without any countdown or 1/1 beats before to give the rhythm, you start with a 1/2 stack. I'm not a big fan of 1/2s in an Easy in the first place, but it's kinda fine since the BPM is low (although I'd suggest to use a slider for the first 1/2s in the diff), and stacks make rhythms harder to read, since there is no spacing to help it.
3. For the whole beginning (until 00:35:080 - ): the slider placement is awkward, because all the sliders start on a second tick, which forces new combos to be on second ticks as well, which makes them feel wrong. The comboing itself seems quite random, when it could be a lot simpler to make sliders start on first ticks and end on seconds, adding a new combo every big white tick.
4. 00:35:080 - The lack of note here feels extremely bad, because it stops for no apparent reason the 1/1 rhythm and the clap rhythm you had established just before.
5. 00:37:857 (3,1) - If you fixed the two above comments, revert these new combos, then add a new combo on 00:40:080 (2) -
6. 01:00:080 (3) - The ending point of this slider sounds weird. The vocals being completely off, it can't follow the vocals (as it would end between this tick and... the tick 1/8 before). It'd be a lot better to make it end on the next white tick (with a clap), since it would then follow the drum and be less confusing rhythm-wise.
7. 01:02:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is rather long. Add a new combo on (3) or (4) (both make sense) to cut it.
8. 01:03:691 (2) - I find this to be rather confusing, because it starts on a red tick but there's nothing in the song in that particular tick. Also, the stack might make the rhythm confusing.
9. 01:07:857 (5,6,7) - Due to stacking, these look too far from the end of the previous slider.
10. 01:10:635 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. Remember new playesr don't spin well and need time to readjust their aim. Also, it has the same problem as the sliders in the beginning, so replacing it with a single circle on the big white tick would be ideal.
11. 01:16:746 (2) - You're following the vocals. This should end 1/2 earlier.
12. 01:19:524 (1) - This slider has the same problem as the slider in the beginning. Also, I don't really like combos starting before kiai and ending in the kiai, because kiai times are usually meant to be special and should have their own comboing. I suggest to make a slider starting where 01:18:691 (3) - is and ending at 01:19:524 - and add a circle at the beginning of the kiai.
13. 01:26:746 (3) - New combo to stay consistent with the comboing (one new combo every big white tick).
14. 01:35:635 (3) - Same.
15. 01:37:857 - The hitsounds of the section starting here are too low. This leads to unhearable beats such as 01:39:524 (3) - . It also has very bad comboing...
16. 01:41:746 (1) - Same problem as the sliders in the beginning.
17. 01:48:413 (3) - Same.
18. 01:55:080 (1) - Same.
19. 01:57:857 (4) - For consistency with your previous comboing, add a new combo.
20. 02:02:302 (3) - Same.
21. 02:06:746 (3) - Same.
22. 02:11:191 (4) - Same.
23. 02:22:302 (1) - The clap here is out of place and breaks the pattern. Replace it with a finish ? It will be more consistent with what you did before as well.
24. 02:22:857 (2,3,4) - Same problem as in the beginning. It also causes the comboing to be bad.
25. 02:28:413 (1) - Same...

1. This is WAY TOO HARD for a Normal.
2. AR6 OD3 doesn't make sense. Especially not for a Normal, for which the AR is way too high.
3. The beginning has the same issues as in Easy: wrongly placed sliders that force new combos to be on wrong ticks, thus bieng inconsistent and feeling bad.
4. 00:26:209 (1) - Way too hard for a Normal, especially for the very first beat of the diff. Kick sliders are confusing because the number of repeats can't be expected, and can't be sightread either because the cursor hides the repeat arrows.
5. 00:33:986 (1,2,3) - That kind of pattern is too unintuitive and confusing for a Normal...
6. 00:42:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same...
   This will need a major overhaul. Some of the rhythms used are simpler than the ones used in Easy. The difficulty is extremely uneven, the beginning being way too hard, then some parts being way too easy.

1. This is too hard for a Hard... There are too many streams (and not all of them fit...) and some of them are quite confusing (starting on blue ticks for instance). Here again, the AR is way too high (especially compared with the OD...).
2. The comboing is quite weird to me (I don't really understand it...).
3. 00:44:681 - The hitsounds are too low for this section.

• is fine <3