1. Easy Style (2.18 stars, 130 notes)
2. Hard Style (4.69 stars, 324 notes)
3. Natteke Style (4.85 stars, 322 notes)
4. Normal Style (4.16 stars, 191 notes)

Niz_45 wrote:

These are just some more suggestions
I just can't resist XD

00:34:564 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) : Add claps please ^^ Done
00:35:675 (5) : Add finish Nope
00:44:008 (3,4) : Add clap at beginning and ending of sliders only 3
00:44:564 (5) : Add finish Yup
01:01:786 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap yup
01:05:397 (5) : Add clap yup
01:19:564 (1,2,3,4) : Add clapyup
01:21:786 (4) : Position of note doesn't match with 01:23:453 (5) Fix please ^^ nah, doesn't affect gameplay. number 4 is already gone duirng that time anyway
01:21:231 (2) : Same as above 01:24:008 (7) ^
01:28:453 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap yup
01:55:120 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap Nope
02:04:008 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap Yup
02:13:036 (11,12,13) : Add clap Nah
02:30:675 (1,2,3,4) : Add clap Nah


Please quote or copy paste this and put beside the suggestions (Done) (No) or something like that beside it so I would know which one was rejected XD

Natteke wrote:

not bad. can I make a diff?

SapphireGhost wrote:

Solid mapping work ~

[Normal Style] is quite slow, you might even consider making it [Easy Style] and turning down the settings by one, just a thought. The break should also be dragged to 00:45:120. And get those new combos placed. You know, I am a slow mapper <3

[Hard Style], I would advise removing the overlap at 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5)Changed the pattern and 01:58:453 (2,3)Nope. You don't have overlap in the other parts of the beatmap so this would help to improve consistency.

Edit:
First kiai time should start at 01:20:120 and end at 01:37:897.
Second kiai time should start at 01:55:675 and already ends at 02:13:453.
Sound better

Edit 2:
There's a simple storyboard below in the .zip file. Simply extract all the files and place them into the Song Folder and see if you like it.
Lol, thanks

That's all I have to say, really. Good luck with ranking and all that.

XepherX3 wrote:

pretty nice...

like how u are using the original r300k version with the in-game sounds :-)
mine is without the in-game sounds (just bg and voice)

you can surely use my skin..just give me credits alright :-)

and one more thing:

here is a normal+: diff..u can add it if u want

[attachment=0:ddeb3]Cho-E - Amputator (Equivalent) [X3 TOMIX STYLE].osu[/attachment:ddeb3]

1. Storyboard: The dark background can be smaller. Also you probably don't need it at all. Try checking these topics about some additional information:
   viewtopic.php?f=20&t=55177
   viewtopic.php?f=60&t=43552
   I have recently found out about these myself thanks to some good people, and these will improve the performance of your SB (weaker machines won't choke on it).

1. 00:28:453 (10) - I think the clap should be on the start of the slider, not the end.
2. 00:30:675 (6) - ^
3. 00:31:786 (7) - Add a Clap.
4. 00:34:008 (4) - Add a Clap.
5. 00:34:703 (8) - Add a Clap.
6. 00:35:675 (5) - This note would be a really good candidate for a new combo. Musical reasons (2 stanzas per combo used so far atleast, with the exception of this combo which is a pattern). Also remove clap, sounds better without it imo.
7. 00:36:231 (6) - If you changed the above (5) into a new combo, this note needs some better placing. Maybe something like this?
8. 00:40:675 (6) - New combo.
9. 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern got me. It's not really hard or anything just may be slightly hard for a "hard" difficulty. In any case, make (9) a new combo.
10. 00:44:842 (1) - Remove new combo from this note and place it closer to the note before it (and all others) so they don't have some big spacing irregularities.
11. 00:47:064 - Add a note here to follow the voice, feels kinda empty without it.
12. 00:47:758 (1) - Don't like this spinner at all, it doesn't really follow the voice either. I suggest you remove it and map the voice and beats instead. Here is a suggestion: http://puu.sh/3qmx (this is how it looked before @timeline). I didn't do any spacings or anything on the field, but I think notes that would exist like that on the timeline would match the music much better. Also notice how the new combo is on the big white tick, which means removing new combo from 00:49:286 (1).
13. 00:52:064 (7,8) - Reverse these, meaning 8 should be where 7 starts on the timeline and after it 7 should come. Like this. Fits the music much better.
14. 01:02:342 (9) - New combo. This means removing new combo from 01:03:731 (1). Also try to fix the spacing between (10) and (1) so it's more or less equal to their distance of their sliders.
15. 01:06:786 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:07:897 (1).
16. 01:20:953 (1,2,3,4) - These felt weird, because I heard voice better than the rest of the stuff, and it's not really matching it. Looking at the timeline, I suggest this. Don't forget to add a clap on 5. Sounds much better.
17. 01:22:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as the above pretty much, try to follow both the drumline and voice here.
18. 01:29:008 (8) - New combo.
19. 01:29:842 (9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I won't really say anything about these, they are alright, but if possible try to map the voice here as well, just like I gave you an example before. The song is quite dynamic and mapping 1/2s doesn't really make it interesting.
20. 01:42:342 (5) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:44:008 (1).
21. 01:55:675 (9) - New combo. Remove new combo from 01:57:897 (1).
22. 02:00:120 (5) - New combo.
23. 02:14:008 (1) - Clap on the start of the slider.
24. 02:16:786 (1) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
25. 02:17:342 (2) - Add a clap to the start of the slider.
26. 02:21:231 (4,5) - I think you should remove these and map the drums instead. 2 short streams would feel much more fun. (3+5)
27. 02:22:342 (6) - After you do the change above, this would be a much better spot for a new combo. Remove it from 02:23:453 (1) afterwards.
28. 02:30:258 - Since you mapped a stream which follows the drums for the ending, add a note here to complete the drumline. Also add a clap on it.
29. 02:30:119 (5,1,2,3,4) - Clap on all of these.

1. OD+1. OD3 in a normal when an easier diff is present isn't that nice, considering this normal is slightly harder than an average normal as well.
2. In general, the diff looks nice but it could look better if you used 1.1x distance snap mostly, because the circles and sliders touch eachother and doesn't look that nice. This is only a personal complaint and don't think of this as a really bad thing though.
3. 00:34:842 (3) - This one is really confusing for a normal diff. Ending on a blue tick when next note is a circle is a bad thing for easier diffs.
   It's slightly hard as well, but that's perfectly fine. I suggest this. Adding a slider there fits the music and while it requires slightly more work (cause you don't wait), it will be much easier to continue playing cause of a more familiar rhythm. Don't forget to put claps on both start and end as well.
4. 00:59:564 (1) - Clap.
5. 01:00:398 (4) - Clap on the slider end.
6. 01:01:786 (1) - Claps on every arrow and the start, leave the end as it is now.
7. 01:02:620 (2) - This slider doesn't sound so good. Maybe try this?
8. 01:04:008 (1) - Clap.
9. 01:04:564 (3,4) - These would sound much better if you reversed the position in the timeline. Like this. This also enables you to place claps better (which means clap on the slider end once you reverse them on the timeline).
10. 01:06:231 (2) - Clap.
11. 01:08:453 (3) - Clap.
12. 01:08:731 (4) - This slider also doesn't sound so good. Maybe shift it by 1/2 and add a circle in it's place? Like this. Also don't forget to add a clap on the slider end.
13. 01:10:675 (1) - Clap on start.
14. 01:12:897 (3) - Clap on start.
15. 01:15:120 (2) - Clap.
16. 01:17:341 (3) - Clap.
17. 01:17:620 (4) - Same as 01:08:731.
18. 01:39:564 (1) - Clap.
19. 01:41:786 (5) - Clap.
20. 01:44:008 (1) - End this slider at 01:44:564, it sounds bad like it is now.
21. 01:45:120 - Add a circle and put a clap on it.
22. 01:46:231 (3,4) - Clap on these.
23. 01:48:453 (1) - Clap on the start.
24. 01:55:120 (1) - Claps on the start and the arrows.
25. 02:06:786 (1,2,3,4) - These don't look nice spacing wise. I suggest you fix them so their transitions between them is the same. This is what I mean, check the spacing between them.
26. 02:12:341 (6,7) - Claps on these.

1. Why not use biggest circle size for this diff?
2. 00:35:120 - Because you started with a slider at 00:26:231 (1), this spot seems kinda empty. Maybe place a circle, or even 2 circles? Like this. Don't forget to put claps on these as well. Not terribly hard for an easy and adds some spice and removes emptiness.
3. 00:43:453 (5) - Clap at the end.
4. 01:05:120 (3) - This slider seems misplaced. I see that you're trying to follow the voice here as much as possible and this one is really off in that case. Not by itself, but because there is nothing at 01:04:564. I suggest to remove this slider entirely and map a longer one on that big white tick, like this.
5. 01:08:592 (1) - This spinner doesn't really fit imo. It's kinda short as well. Try something like this. Also notice how I placed a new combo on that (5) you have there.
6. 01:13:453 - Add a note here, your choice if you want to make your slider return once more or add a circle.
7. 01:14:842 (5) - New combo.
8. 01:49:564 (4) - New combo.
9. 01:52:897 (1) - Clap at the start and at the end.
10. 01:55:120 (1) - Clap at the start.
11. 02:04:008 - Add a note here, your choice if it's a circle or another repeat of the previous slider. Don't forget to add a clap on it.
12. 02:12:342 (5) - Claps on start, arrow and the end.
13. 02:15:676 (5) - New combo, remove it from 02:16:786 (1) afterwards.
14. 02:17:897 (2) - New combo, remove it from 02:19:564 (1) afterwards.
15. 02:20:120 (2) - New combo.
16. 02:22:064 (5) - Clap.
17. 02:22:342 (6) - New combo, remove it from 02:22:897 (1) afterwards.
18. 02:29:564 (2) - Clap?

Atm, I dont think i will force skin. Let the player have their own way of skin etc. Tbh, I do like to have some normal in my mapset, but there is something inside it doesn't please me much. When we both online, maybe we can disscuss about it further