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Cho-E - Amputator

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Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 December 2011 at 01:03:08

Artist: Cho-E
Title: Amputator
Source: TouchMix
Tags: r300k TOMIX Android Gamevil Natteke
BPM: 108
Filesize: 4460kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy Style (2.18 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Hard Style (4.69 stars, 324 notes)
  3. Natteke Style (4.85 stars, 322 notes)
  4. Normal Style (4.16 stars, 191 notes)
Download: Cho-E - Amputator
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Aiming for the my best map, ranking is later <3
Hard Style: 100%
Normal style: 100%
Easy Style : 100%
Natteke Style : 100%

August 07 GMT+8 17:25PM :mp3 changes, please redownload

Dec 17th, resuming back my works after get bored with Prius @.@
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Omega
133 posts
Joined August 2009
Omega
Playtest, IRC mod.

Good job for a first map, have a star!

Remember to try and find a better background. Maybe you can try wallbase.net
The Audio seemed to be confusing and unclear at parts. Could you find a better MP3?
Niz_45
34 posts
Joined November 2010
Niz_45
Just a noob modding :P I'm not a mod :P
Lotsa AI spacing errors so I'm just gonna find the ones that bugs me :P

00:35:130 -> 00:35:685 - I suggest you use grid level 4 and place it like so



01:20:946 -> 01:24:000 - Jumps feels weird somehow.
02:03:986 - Either delete this or make more space for it.

That's it for me :P
Other than that it's awesome :D ~star~
Omega
133 posts
Joined August 2009
Omega
AImod spacing errors don't count, they're just oddities that you can ignore. But yeah, the ones you pointed out were definitely feeling off, Niz_45.
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
As Omega said, in hard diff distance error don't count much unless it sudden jump or the reverse. Im seeking a better BG for now. Will fix that one later
Niz_45
34 posts
Joined November 2010
Niz_45
I know :P but doesn't 70+ errors sounds too much? XD if it were insane I don't really mind :P .... well since this is hard I don't mind it too :P but if it's normal whoa really need to fix :P

Hope this will get ranked one day since it's a nice song :D
-goes back to find more errors-
Niz_45
34 posts
Joined November 2010
Niz_45
Just a suggestion for the jumps :P


Niz_45
34 posts
Joined November 2010
Niz_45
These are just some more suggestions :P
I just can't resist XD

00:34:564 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) : Add claps please ^^
00:35:675 (5) : Add finish
00:44:008 (3,4) : Add clap at beginning and ending of sliders
00:44:564 (5) : Add finish
01:01:786 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap
01:05:397 (5) : Add clap
01:19:564 (1,2,3,4) : Add clap
01:21:786 (4) : Position of note doesn't match with 01:23:453 (5) Fix please ^^
01:21:231 (2) : Same as above 01:24:008 (7)
01:28:453 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap
01:55:120 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap
02:04:008 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap
02:13:036 (11,12,13) : Add clap
02:30:675 (1,2,3,4) : Add clap


Please quote or copy paste this and put beside the suggestions (Done) (No) or something like that beside it so I would know which one was rejected XD
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

Niz_45 wrote:

These are just some more suggestions :P
I just can't resist XD

00:34:564 (7,8,9,1,2,3,4) : Add claps please ^^ Done
00:35:675 (5) : Add finish Nope
00:44:008 (3,4) : Add clap at beginning and ending of sliders only 3
00:44:564 (5) : Add finish Yup
01:01:786 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap yup
01:05:397 (5) : Add clap yup
01:19:564 (1,2,3,4) : Add clapyup
01:21:786 (4) : Position of note doesn't match with 01:23:453 (5) Fix please ^^ nah, doesn't affect gameplay. number 4 is already gone duirng that time anyway
01:21:231 (2) : Same as above 01:24:008 (7) ^
01:28:453 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap yup
01:55:120 (5,6,7,8) : Add clap Nope
02:04:008 (4,5,6,7) : Add clap Yup
02:13:036 (11,12,13) : Add clap Nah
02:30:675 (1,2,3,4) : Add clap Nah


Please quote or copy paste this and put beside the suggestions (Done) (No) or something like that beside it so I would know which one was rejected XD
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
not bad. can I make a diff?
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

Natteke wrote:

not bad. can I make a diff?
Eh, sure... :)
Niz_45
34 posts
Joined November 2010
Niz_45
Just another suggestion :P

01:45:953 (5) : Add clap at slider end.

That's it XD
TKiller
4,390 posts
Joined May 2009
TKiller
[Hard]

Set OD to 6, AR to 7.

first off, same pattern repeats 4 times in beginning

00:28:175 (8) - I suggest removeing this one, with respective spacing changes, so it becomes A B A A pattern, if you get what I mean

00:37:203 - try adding a beat here

00:37:342 (3,4) - and turining this one in a slider, might work out better than it is now

00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110733 not perfect, but you get the idea, current one is a bit boring. Might try very little spacings instead of huge ones as well, just think of a better shape.

00:49:286 (1) - move it away from spinner center, please

01:44:564 (3,4) - these shapes don't match a lot, 01:44:564 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110737 notice both timeline and spacing

01:47:897 - why no beats? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110738 or something as simple

01:54:564 - kiai time start :D

01:57:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - extremely repetetive, needs huge revamping, try to find a better order/shapes and contact me when you do. Don't be afraid to use a pattern you've already seen in a diffrent map too.

02:07:897 (3,4,1) - different spacings that don't fit

02:15:397 (4,5) - man, you do overuse this pattern

also, 00:26:231 - I'd map at least 10 secnods before that, but that's up to you.



This is a very quick opinion, I'm not going hard at all. Actually, a very good attempt, there are mappers who map much worse things even though they're supposed to be experienced. This one is pretty good.
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
Will look at your mod later TKiller. Will edit this post when I look at it ~

SPOILER
[Hard]

Set OD to 6, AR to 7. Considering, you and and Natteke will add some diff, use this sugggestion

first off, same pattern repeats 4 times in beginning >.<

00:28:175 (8) - I suggest removeing this one, with respective spacing changes, so it becomes A B A A pattern, if you get what I meanI leave it like that for now, it feel odd to me

00:37:203 - try adding a beat here Nope >.< I want that boring pattern of mine

00:37:342 (3,4) - and turining this one in a slider, might work out better than it is now Same explanation as above

00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110733 not perfect, but you get the idea, current one is a bit boring. Might try very little spacings instead of huge ones as well, just think of a better shape. Tried this one, and messed up my DS >.> I keep it for now until I found a better shape

00:49:286 (1) - move it away from spinner center, please Been discussed in IRC, I think I leave it for now

01:44:564 (3,4) - these shapes don't match a lot, 01:44:564 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110737 notice both timeline and spacing Uhm, I take more views on this. Beside adding your suggestion will remove my 1/4 stream

01:47:897 - why no beats? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/110738 or something as simple Added <3

01:54:564 - kiai time start :D Added <3

01:57:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - extremely repetetive, needs huge revamping, try to find a better order/shapes and contact me when you do. Don't be afraid to use a pattern you've already seen in a diffrent map too. Cant think off a better one, but I did change a "little" on the shape

02:07:897 (3,4,1) - different spacings that don't fit Alter it

02:15:397 (4,5) - man, you do overuse this pattern :P

also, 00:26:231 - I'd map at least 10 secnods before that, but that's up to you. I stay with that



This is a very quick opinion, I'm not going hard at all. Actually, a very good attempt, there are mappers who map much worse things even though they're supposed to be experienced. This one is pretty good.

Thanks mod <3 Will contact you when I'm free
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Apparently TKiller doesn't want me to make a diff so I won't post it, sorry
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old
~.~"
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
pretty nice stuff for first map, and i like the song very much
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
pretty nice...

like how u are using the original r300k version with the in-game sounds :-)
mine is without the in-game sounds (just bg and voice)

you can surely use my skin..just give me credits alright :-)

and one more thing:

here is a normal+: diff..u can add it if u want

Download: Cho-E - Amputator (Equivalent) [X3 TOMIX STYLE].osu
SapphireGhost
osu! Alumni
2,618 posts
Joined June 2010
SapphireGhost
Solid mapping work ~

[Normal Style] is quite slow, you might even consider making it [Easy Style] and turning down the settings by one, just a thought. The break should also be dragged to 00:45:120. And get those new combos placed.

[Hard Style], I would advise removing the overlap at 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:58:453 (2,3). You don't have overlap in the other parts of the beatmap so this would help to improve consistency.

Edit:
First kiai time should start at 01:20:120 and end at 01:37:897.
Second kiai time should start at 01:55:675 and already ends at 02:13:453.

Edit 2:
There's a simple storyboard below in the .zip file. Simply extract all the files and place them into the Song Folder and see if you like it.

That's all I have to say, really. Good luck with ranking and all that.

Download: Amputator Storyboard.zip
Equivalent_old
210 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Equivalent_old

SapphireGhost wrote:

Solid mapping work ~

[Normal Style] is quite slow, you might even consider making it [Easy Style] and turning down the settings by one, just a thought. The break should also be dragged to 00:45:120. And get those new combos placed. You know, I am a slow mapper <3

[Hard Style], I would advise removing the overlap at 00:43:453 (1,2,3,4,5)Changed the pattern and 01:58:453 (2,3)Nope. You don't have overlap in the other parts of the beatmap so this would help to improve consistency.

Edit:
First kiai time should start at 01:20:120 and end at 01:37:897.
Second kiai time should start at 01:55:675 and already ends at 02:13:453.
Sound better

Edit 2:
There's a simple storyboard below in the .zip file. Simply extract all the files and place them into the Song Folder and see if you like it.
Lol, thanks

That's all I have to say, really. Good luck with ranking and all that.

XepherX3 wrote:

pretty nice...

like how u are using the original r300k version with the in-game sounds :-)
mine is without the in-game sounds (just bg and voice)

you can surely use my skin..just give me credits alright :-)

and one more thing:

here is a normal+: diff..u can add it if u want

[attachment=0:ddeb3]Cho-E - Amputator (Equivalent) [X3 TOMIX STYLE].osu[/attachment:ddeb3]
Atm, I dont think i will force skin. Let the player have their own way of skin etc. Tbh, I do like to have some normal in my mapset, but there is something inside it doesn't please me much. When we both online, maybe we can disscuss about it further
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