感动的一塌糊涂LS的两位T口T
thank you for you mod XD!winber1 wrote:
One-Way
--AR +1 (I would prefer you AR +2 tho, but at least +1)
--I find the spacing to be a little small actually. If the spacing was larger, i'd find the song more fun to play :3.. oh well
--in all honesty, i actually want more notes to be placed in the kiai section. (in these kiai times: 01:06:581 - , 02:01:363 - , 03:03:972 - ) I'd like it better if it was mostly constant 1/2 ticks :3
00:30:874 (x) - add note. This space is very awkward.
00:38:374 (2) - *nazi* up 1 grid
01:06:907 (2,3) - anti-spacing doesn't fit here imo. Although I actually read it correctly (on AR 9), I don't really like it here.
01:08:700 (8,9) - blanket combo 8 better? >_>
01:16:352 (3) - add one more repeat on to the note
01:19:950 (2,3) - why did you change the spacing like this o_o... space the same as before?
01:27:287 (3) - unstack?
01:39:353 (4) - this placement of the note really bothers me... also, it just looks like you didn't know where else to put the note even if it's not the case
02:36:581 (11,1) - erm.. i don't like this anti-spacing either.
02:39:679 (1) - remove new combo
balbal
--Use AR 6 or 7.
--If this is supposed to be a hard, the OD and HP drain are WAY too low..
00:03:646 (5) - not perfectly stacked..
00:07:885 (5,6) - spacing.
00:09:842 (1) - remove combo
01:05:440 (1) - ^
01:14:896 (1,1) - ^
01:26:472 (1,1) - ^
01:55:820 (1) - ^
02:00:711 (1) - ^
02:09:679 (1,1) - ^
02:10:820 (5) - new combo
02:25:168 (1,1,1) - remove combo
03:04:787 (3,4) - i would space this out more..
Easy
--Use OD 3 or something, and perhaps decrease hp drain by 1 to match the OD?
01:50:929 (1) - remove combo
01:52:233 (1) - ^
01:54:842 (1,1,1) - ^
02:19:624 (1,1) - the slider seems to come after the spinner a little soon. so you can end spinner at 02:21:581?
02:27:450 (1,2) - spacing
02:36:581 (5,1) - ^
02:53:537 (1) - This note comes a little soon and it definitely too far away from the center. so you should end the spinner a little earlier.
03:13:755 (1) - end spinner here?
Cool map! :3
谢谢瓦XD!!!spboxer3 wrote:
[Easy]
AR調到2或3
00:33:972 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距?
02:48:972 (4) - 堆疊! 需要把(4)擺在(3)的結尾上 完全重疊!
[balbal]
01:20:113 (3,4,5) - 不同的間距?
02:07:722 (5,6) - 不好看~容易造成誤解
[One-way]
01:06:907 (2,3) - 不容易看懂spacing的位置 因為(1)(2)的間距和(2)(3)還有(3)(4)的間距完全相同
01:27:124 (2,3,4,5,6) - 說實話有點不好看...改一下吧[nazi]
02:05:929 (8) - 結尾出去外面了...上下是OK的 可是左右CTB會接不到...改一下吧
大致上沒什麼問題的!!
話說看到你的map讓我聯想到Hatsune Miku - Kusaregedou to Chocolate XDDD
star~
谢谢瓦谢谢XD!THANK!Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:
8-)
NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
352*200的BG寒酸到不能理解,实话说pixiv上也没什么好的但至少总要强于一个视频截图。SPOILERoffset: 1372 (+8),另外lead-in建议记事本进osu改成1000[attachment=0:5c508]BG.jpg[/attachment:5c508]
根据目前Vocaloid系列惯例,Yucha-P写在source,而vocaloid写进tags
整体感觉挤,虽然歌比较快,但是note和note之间一直要叠一些实在不好看。
我没看出手动变combo color的原因……
[Easy]
00:42:777 (3,1) - 按照slider轨迹的延长线摆过去不好么,现在很生硬。
01:14:896 (2) - 结尾音很多余,考虑换circle或降低尾音音量
02:27:450 (1) - 碰到血条了,美观上差些
02:50:929 (1) - 建议结尾在02:52:722,现在的位置后面note跟的太快了,对EASY来讲
[balbal]
HP4,OD4,AR6建议。最少不能低于Easy的难度设定。靠这个来压星,是一定unrankable的。
00:23:211 (3,4) - 难看,主要在于3和4重叠部分太多了,显得非常挤
00:27:124 (8,1) - spacing
00:29:081 - 加音建议
01:04:950 (3,4) - 可以的话不建议和前面的2叠,因为除了增加难度似乎没什么意义,而和Easy比这够难了
01:26:798 (3) - ctrl+r
01:59:733 (2,3,4) - 虽然想法不错,但是真心太挤
02:02:994 (5,6) - 不建议。这难度里大部分的叠用的1/2,这里可能会混淆
02:10:331 (4) - 碰到血条了
02:38:211 (3,4,5) - spacing
03:13:755 (1,2,3) - [stress]摆开一点吧
[One-way]
AR没必要9 (BPM184并非很快,你又不遮,没什么考验读的地方)OD+1拉到7。圈可以大一号
00:10:331 (8) - 拉出去不要和7叠,然后把1叠在上面,来造这个停顿感
00:36:418 (1) - sliderwhistle消掉
01:42:940 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:48:320 (1) - 这里开始的几个小节明显是一种结构,而你摆01:48:972 (3,4,5,6) 和01:50:277 (3,4,5,6) 这些却显得过于随意了,如果能把结构处理好,相信图的质量也会上一层
02:01:690 (2,3) - 这个在Insane里永远是被读成1/2的,建议改
02:42:940 (1,2) - ^
没有很多问题但是这个难度有不少地方给人一种“如果是Insane,那么不该是这个样子“的感觉。建议多打打图再改进。
thank you thank youXD!KingsAL2 wrote:
- One-way
00:33:328 (4,5) - Spacing
01:11:154 (7) - New combo
02:10:013 (4,5) - Semi jump... New combo for 5 plz.
02:15:393 (4) - New combo for jump
02:24:035 (6) - New combo
02:29:252 (8) - ^
03:07:404 (6) - ^
The spacing is a bit weird
Just that, ~.~
STAR and good luck
• Tick rate should be the same on all difficulties.well, that's not obligatory in guests, plus it's a guideline
in the folder are 2 .osb files... but you haven't SB, so delete this files and full submission ^^said much times, it's not obligatory as 2 empty osb's are only a few bytes. only do while full submitting for other thing...
OMG I forget it.....HakuNoKaemi wrote:
in the folder are 2 .osb files... but you haven't SB, so delete this files and full submission ^^said much times, it's not obligatory as 2 empty osb's are only a few bytes. only do while full submitting for other thing...
48,176,153980,2,0,B|48:96|128:96,1,95
328,224,68545,2,0,B|296:184|256:240,2,70
thank~~~~~!KiriNoMorii wrote:
S t a r ~
187,199,5774,1,000:08:708 (2,1) - spacing error (don't tell me this is an intended anti-jump cause this would be ridiculous)
232,115,5937,1,0
315,159,6100,1,0
271,242,6263,1,0
57,177,9198,5,000:22:567 (2,3) - spacing
84,86,9361,1,0
114,175,9524,1,0
97,81,9687,1,0
165,147,9850,1,0
104,73,10013,1,0
195,98,10176,1,0
105,65,10339,1,0
135,244,65448,5,001:07:078 (3,4,5) - keep jump distances between these 3 notes consistent
49,150,65611,1,0
171,122,65774,1,0
64,219,65937,1,0
103,102,66100,1,0
187,192,66263,1,0
thank you so much!Lilac wrote:
I'm sad to say this. I like this Hatsune Miku song...
[General]
Use more hitsounds overall, just only using Finishes is a bit...terrible.
[Route]
You have some unsnapped objects. Check AIMod.
I dislike how this difficulty is created. Your spacing isn't consistent with the Slider Velocity. SV is too fast and your spacing is to close together. Also, the rules currently state that having a Easy, Hard, Insane spread is not allowed...but that's still under debate so I wouldn't stress about it THAT much yet.
[One-way]
Unsnapped notes.
However, it's nice. I like it.
谢谢你简直太好人了T TKanon wrote:
General
BG尺寸不对 我给你弄好了,换掉FULL SUBMIT就行 http://puu.sh/3jtd
Normal
为什么HISOUND切换成N以后只有几个FINISH。给人很偷懒的感觉,弄个自定义的CLAP也好。
为什么最后一段都没有NOTE了,还有绿线和KIAI,不用的话请删掉。
排列没什么问题
Route
这是HARD把? 是的话 AR 7 OD HP至少+1 用大圈不如小一号了 看起来自然点
00:10:665 (1,2) - 这里减速很奇怪。。要变速也应该加速吧?
00:11:806 (3) - new combo?
00:31:371 (1) - 这个转盘不符合歌曲,删了吧
00:54:524 (3,4) - 这里节奏不好
02:23:382 (4,5) - ^
02:27:458 (1,2,3,1) - ^
03:14:252 (3) - 结尾FINISH
这个DIFF问题挺多的 加油了.
HITSOUND最好重新弄一下。。不然换了N以后全靠歌自带HITSOUND太偷懒了。
One-way
00:11:480 (3,4) - new combo?
03:09:361 加个NOTE更舒服点
这个DIFF排列挺不错的
star~
另外建议你下次把图作到你认为比较完美了在找MAT ,这样一发给星,接着给泡的几率要大的多。毕竟MAT很忙,第一印象决定一切。