Hello
General* Your BG is very low-quality and very small BG. You need some bigger image and good quality
* I have 2 OSB in your mapset. Remove them
* Set the preview time to 01:06:581
* I think 1st and 4th kiai is not fit to the song
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Easy00:10:657 (1) - These spinner are too short. You need to extend it or replace this into one slider. Otherwise, some noobs is don't have a time to clear this spinner
00:11:798 (1) - Do not place the circle after spinner, it's not beginner friendly
00:31:363 (1) - Again, it's short spinner
00:32:668 (1) - Same issue as 00:11:798 (1)
01:06:581 (1) - Too far from spinner, you need close this to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay
01:48:320 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
01:53:537 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:03:972 (1) - Not stack perfectly with previous note
02:22:233 (1) - Same issue as 00:11:798 (1)
02:27:450 (1) - I think placing this slider on HP Bar is odd to see. Can you move this slider down?
02:47:668 (2) - The slider body is hidden because the tail slider. If the slider body is hidden, the noobs is confusing where to slide the slider
02:53:537 (1) - Too far from spinner, you need close this to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay
03:06:581 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
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balbal00:10:657 (1) - Unstack this? I think it's odd having a stack in 1/2 stream in this diff.....
00:58:592 (5,1) - Stack with tail slider?
01:04:624 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:950 (2) - Unstack this? I get confuse this while gameplay
01:05:440 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:917 (1) - ^
01:14:407 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
01:26:798 (1) - The repeating arrow is hidden, because the slider and hitburst. It's unrankable you know
01:55:820 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - IMO, this combos are make no sense
02:09:679 (1) - Remove new combo
02:10:168 (1) - ^
02:24:842 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
02:25:494 (1,1,2,3) - Make this pattern more pretty please..... It's kinda odd to look
03:13:755 (1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
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One-way00:08:700 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:35:113 (1) - ^
01:07:396 (3) - Too close from tail slider
01:17:342 (2) - Make this hitsound from soft-hitnormal to normal-hitnormal
01:52:233 (1,1,1,1) - You don't need add some combo like this
02:17:016 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - These combos are make no sense at all
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I think these map needs more work, but not bad at all
Also, sorry for very long mod~