Nice beatmap !
☆~Star~☆
☆~Star~☆
Thank you very much ShiirnShiirn wrote:
General
Hate the song. Ooo~ooh not good _:<
Offset to 664. Even if you need to put the SV changing section on the same line as the offset. fix
Easy
Nothing much.
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Schizo slider much? no :<
Hard
Fine.
Insane
Don't need tick2. It does need tick 2^^
Thank you very much Leorda !!Leorda wrote:
Hallo Halo
General
* Make sure you resnap all the timing sections. Especially for kiai fix
* I think it's good if you make a lyric SB beside chorus only I think lyric on chorus is good enough
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Ugly slider ...
00:18:846 (2) - I really don't like overlapped by 00:17:028 (4) fix'd with 00:17:028
00:25:028 (2) - I think place slider here makes my flow are broken. Perhaps like this? http://puu.sh/1oYQ no sry > <
00:49:573 (7) - Inconsistent spacing fix
00:58:119 (1) - ^^
01:04:664 (1) - ^^
01:05:755 (3,4,5) - I think this timing pattern might too hard for average player It's ok IMO
01:25:937 (1) - Not stack perfectly with 01:25:755 (6), or it'll be weird stack during gameplay fix
01:56:300 (2) - Inconsistent spacing fix
02:01:028 (4) - ^^
02:02:300 (6) - ^^
02:49:028 (5) - New combo and also, inconsistent spacing fix
02:49:391 (1) - Remove new combo ok
Insane
* Can you increase the distance spacing when it's slow? It's really hard to read with small spacing @_@
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks
00:23:937 (1) - Inconsistent spacing fix
01:30:482 (7) - Is this object following rhythm or beat? neither, removed
02:31:755 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay ok
Sorry for long mod
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuLeorda wrote:
Hallo
Kuro Easy
* Change the PreviewTime to "156292" in notepad Done.
00:43:755 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
00:48:119 (1) - Can you make 1st and 2nd slidertick are stick together? (Design not hitsound) Maybe done.
00:55:937 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
01:07:028 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it please No.
01:14:846 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted kiai XD
01:33:755 (1,2) - I think these stacks makes beginner player confusing Nah.
02:04:301 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted.
02:11:210 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
02:14:119 (2) - New combo No.
02:17:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing I get what you want but technically it isn't inconsistent. Btw fix'd.
02:19:210 (4) - ^ ^
02:39:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These distance spacing are below 0,8x. Please re-space this Done.
Sorry for long mod
Thank you very much AyeenAyeen wrote:
Easy:
seem good to me
Normal:
Not sure about others, but on:
00:47:202 (2,4) Seem a(1/8) bit late from the rythm It's fine I think, I check with 25% and it's right on point
01:42:475 (2,4) ^^
01:25:566 (5,6) A simple mistake I perhaps fix
Kite's Hard:
02:07:566 (1) The bounce on blue tick not properly drop on blue tick If you listen closely to the music you'll find out that it is a 1/6 note not an 1/4 one, so it's okay
Everything else should be fine
Insane:
01:41:202 (4,5,6,7,8) Move all clap on blue tick. Sound funny. sounds funny but strange X_X
That all from me, depend on you to give me kudos or not coz I mod/notice only minor things here. But yeah, here is my star~
And very much thanks for modding my map
Thank you very much Beuchi !!Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hello~ hey ~
~Normal~
00:11:575 (5) - I'd rather remove this note. It's a normal after all so it shouldn't have so many streams.. fix
00:17:030 (4) - Just to make sure, move the repeat point a bit away from the other slider? The hitburst slightly covers the arrow... I think it's okay >~< it only covers it a little little bit but it's not a big problem i think
00:51:030 (8) - Stack this note properly under (7) fix
~Insane~
00:29:030 (4) - Put a New Combo here if you're going to use the previous jump. fix
00:43:757 (6) - New Combo. okay
01:01:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Totally unintuitive spacing in the same combo. Either re-make the pattern or use New Combos to mark the spacing changes. Fixed the New Combo
01:51:030 (4,5) - Is it necessary to do this? Why not invert positions? (As in, make (4) the slider and (5) the circle) fix!
Nice map, though [Insane] still needs a bit of work on spacing and New Combo distribution.
Good luck~
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuBeuchi-chan wrote:
Hello~
~Kuro Easy~
00:11:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
00:48:121 (1) - I totally expected this to start at the previous white tick... Me too lol
02:25:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : 00:28:484 (1,2,3) - comfusing
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : *n
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : but not much, it's up to you
22:42 <Magicphoenix> : i actually like it ..
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : like i said, up to you
22:43 <Arusha_Shuna> : 00:48:848 (6,7) - how about stream of 5 circles?
22:43 <Magicphoenix> : to follow the drums?
22:43 <Arusha_Shuna> : uhuh
22:44 <Arusha_Shuna> : this is insane after all
22:44 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:07:030 (6,1) - swap new combo
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : if you want to follow sapcing that is
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : *spacing
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:09:393 (3) - new combo
22:46 <Magicphoenix> : 01:08:666 (1) - remove combo here okay then ?
22:46 <Arusha_Shuna> : sure
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:55:575 (7) - NC
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : *new combo
22:47 <Magicphoenix> : yeah ^^
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:56:302 (1,2) - swap new combo
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : wait no
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:56:302 (1,3) - swap NC
22:48 <Magicphoenix> : 01:54:848 (5) - shouldnt here be the NC _
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : "will you...", "WILL" starts on circle (7)
22:49 <Arusha_Shuna> : BUT if you want to follow spacing so be it
22:49 <Magicphoenix> : oohhh good job watson
22:49 <Magicphoenix> : followed lyrics
22:49 <Arusha_Shuna> : ._.
22:50 <Arusha_Shuna> : 02:27:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - align to the center of the map
22:51 <Magicphoenix> : hmm ...i think it's good the way it is
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : and oh, all the inheriting timing section is late for at least 11ms
22:53 <Magicphoenix> : woah what
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : no wait
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : 2-11ms late
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : maybe because you changed the BPM back then?
22:54 <Magicphoenix> : oh yup
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : i don't know hot to snap inherits
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : *how
22:54 <Magicphoenix> : i fixed
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : F6, select all sections
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : and then "Move offset by"
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : it was 15ms too late = =
22:55 <Arusha_Shuna> : k
22:55 <Arusha_Shuna> : then
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : tags
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : kuroneko-sherald is one word?
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : ah never mind
22:57 <Arusha_Shuna> : found out just now
22:57 <Magicphoenix> : ^^
23:02 <Arusha_Shuna> : other diff is fine i guess
Sorry, no changes.TorNis wrote:
[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe? The suggestion for (1) is right, but I'll not change it because I don't change the position of (2,3)
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)? I've tried to do some changes but I don't like it.
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.
~ Star for non-J vocal song
Fixed.kokoroanime wrote:
Hello.
[list]Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.
~Kuro Easy~
[*]00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!SPOILERATTACH[screenshot019.jpg]
Thank you very much ThePalThePal wrote:
Hello there!
Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.
General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs. Messed up there, fixed
[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?
[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939? no
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212? no
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General") fixed with previous suggestion
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757? nope
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575? no
[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod.
[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in! It does..
Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one!
Star~
ThePal wrote:
Hello there!
[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575? Sorry but I don't like it.
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuRoddie wrote:
Hi.
[Kuro Easy]
- For English's sake, call it Kuro's Easy. I know that it's wrong in English but there is a reason for it so I won't change.
- 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time. It starts off a little bit late. Fixed.
- 01:07:575-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:08:303. Done.
- 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time. Fixed.
- 01:14:484-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
- 01:39:030 (1)-Add a finish? Done.
- 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time. Fixed.
- 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
- 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time. Fixed.
- 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
- 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time. Fixed.
- 03:00:303-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 02:59:939. Done.
Thanks for mod OzzyOzrock!OzzyOzrock wrote:
[General]
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol Nope, fine like that
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good. It's necessary for the slow-downs, otherwise you won't notice one
At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two? Pardon me?
Anyways, star~.
<3 ~BounceBabe wrote:
Joa ^.^ Ich dacht mir mal ich mod die map auch :3 - So ziemlich nazi ... naja :3
btw... wenn du nochmal so ne map machst.. sag mir bescheid will ich ne hard machen q.q
Normal
00:38:484 (1,2,3) - Strg + R ^^ huh? nein sry
00:43:757 (6) - Clap am ende weg xD kay
00:49:575 (7) - New combo k
00:53:030 (4) - ^ ^
01:43:757 (1) - bissl verwirrend nach den double's nö ;P
01:48:302 (3) - New combo ok
02:16:666 (1) - Combo weg und beim slider setzen nope, der fängt da gerade nen neuen satz an^^
02:30:484 (1) - Combo weg beim nächsten rein eh? nope sry
02:37:757 (3) - neue combo ... ok
02:42:484 (1) - Neue combo? sonst hast du die doch auch nd gemacht. naja wenn du das dann wie bei den anderen "vorschlägen" auch machst is das dann nicht mehr notwendig wegzumachen
Insane
AR: 7 OD: 6 o.ô Nope, passt so wie es ist
Mach die weiter auseinander xD.. das kann man so doof spielen mit der AR und dann noch so eng beisammen
00:16:121 (1) - wtf new combo? o_O'
00:29:212 (2) - new combo hier und nich beim circle k
00:30:484 (1) - den kann man leicht übersehn passt
01:13:484 (5) - weiss nd so recht ob der passt deleted
(01:44:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - n J für Jessica *^*) =A=*
02:08:666 - Ab da wenigstens bissl weiter auseinander :s sorry hab das extra so eng gemacht
02:56:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Mach vil tripples anstatt n megastream würd besser zur musik passen imo Nope sry < <
Schön schön ^.^ - Sternchen <3
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuBounceBabe wrote:
Easy
00:48:121 (1) - setz den doch um 1/2 vor :s Done.
01:32:666 (4) - Mach vil n slider ohne reserve arrow No.
02:01:030 (4) - ein reserve arrow geht noch No.
02:19:939 (5) - new combo No.
02:56:666 - mach hier n circle und 02:57:030 - da evtl It's a nice idea, but I prefer to not change.