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As per request from mod queue~
[General]
- I have notice you've used extra slider points for your sliders, even if they're short, like in Insane 02:34:119 (3) for example below. Hold down shift to temporary disable grid snap to obtain optimum slider adjustment?(With less slider point too)
Actually no need to adjust them for your map since they looked fine, but for futher reference. XD(And my example doesn't look that good..)
[Kuro Easy]
- Nice and easy.
[Normal]
- 00:17:028 (4) - There's some extra white slider point that's messing up this slider, remove them and adjust.
- 00:25:937 (3,4) - Merge these two into a repeating 1/2 slider like 00:13:755 (3)?
- 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 01:42:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try something like this?
- 01:34:482 (2) - Pretty sure this is a 1/2 slider, but the slider point's quite long, and a 1/1 beat slider is possible here too. Just to confirm.
- 02:18:482 (4) - I would prefer another curve slider here, but up to you.
[Kite's Hard]
- Only one thing, slider tick 0.5x? 1x sounds fine to me.
[Insane]
- 00:04:301 (2,3,4) - Pattern doesn't seem to fit the overall flow of this part. Just go curvy stream like others?
- 01:15:755 (1) - Pure linear slider better here?
- 01:17:028 (4) - Might as well consider a linear slider for this too?
- 01:43:573 (1,2,3) - Consider a triangle formation here?
Overall nice difficulty spread, and fun to play, and it's english song! Ah haha.
Feel free not to use my suggestion if you think they're not suitable.
[General]
- I have notice you've used extra slider points for your sliders, even if they're short, like in Insane 02:34:119 (3) for example below. Hold down shift to temporary disable grid snap to obtain optimum slider adjustment?(With less slider point too)
Actually no need to adjust them for your map since they looked fine, but for futher reference. XD(And my example doesn't look that good..)
[Kuro Easy]
- Nice and easy.
[Normal]
- 00:17:028 (4) - There's some extra white slider point that's messing up this slider, remove them and adjust.
- 00:25:937 (3,4) - Merge these two into a repeating 1/2 slider like 00:13:755 (3)?
- 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 01:42:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try something like this?
- 01:34:482 (2) - Pretty sure this is a 1/2 slider, but the slider point's quite long, and a 1/1 beat slider is possible here too. Just to confirm.
- 02:18:482 (4) - I would prefer another curve slider here, but up to you.
[Kite's Hard]
- Only one thing, slider tick 0.5x? 1x sounds fine to me.
[Insane]
- 00:04:301 (2,3,4) - Pattern doesn't seem to fit the overall flow of this part. Just go curvy stream like others?
- 01:15:755 (1) - Pure linear slider better here?
- 01:17:028 (4) - Might as well consider a linear slider for this too?
- 01:43:573 (1,2,3) - Consider a triangle formation here?
Overall nice difficulty spread, and fun to play, and it's english song! Ah haha.
Feel free not to use my suggestion if you think they're not suitable.
Topic Starter
Thank you very much Soul-less >w<Soul-less wrote:
As per request from mod queue~
[General]
- I have notice you've used extra slider points for your sliders, even if they're short, like in Insane 02:34:119 (3) for example below. Hold down shift to temporary disable grid snap to obtain optimum slider adjustment?(With less slider point too) I know what you mean but I think there is almost no difference...
Actually no need to adjust them for your map since they looked fine, but for futher reference. XD(And my example doesn't look that good..)
[Kuro Easy]
- Nice and easy.
[Normal]
- 00:17:028 (4) - There's some extra white slider point that's messing up this slider, remove them and adjust. nope
- 00:25:937 (3,4) - Merge these two into a repeating 1/2 slider like 00:13:755 (3)? no sry
- 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 01:42:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try something like this? changed it with help of your screenshot but didn't exactly made it that way
- 01:34:482 (2) - Pretty sure this is a 1/2 slider, but the slider point's quite long, and a 1/1 beat slider is possible here too. Just to confirm.I want the 1/2 slider there
- 02:18:482 (4) - I would prefer another curve slider here, but up to you. nop
[Kite's Hard]
- Only one thing, slider tick 0.5x? 1x sounds fine to me.
[Insane]
- 00:04:301 (2,3,4) - Pattern doesn't seem to fit the overall flow of this part. Just go curvy stream like others? I think it does fit..I'll consider it
- 01:15:755 (1) - Pure linear slider better here? no
- 01:17:028 (4) - Might as well consider a linear slider for this too? no sry :<
- 01:43:573 (1,2,3) - Consider a triangle formation here? n
Overall nice difficulty spread, and fun to play, and it's english song! Ah haha.
Feel free not to use my suggestion if you think they're not suitable.
General
Hate the song.
Offset to 664. Even if you need to put the SV changing section on the same line as the offset.
Easy
Nothing much.
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Schizo slider much?
Hard
Fine.
Insane
Don't need tick2.
Hate the song.
Offset to 664. Even if you need to put the SV changing section on the same line as the offset.
Easy
Nothing much.
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Schizo slider much?
Hard
Fine.
Insane
Don't need tick2.
Topic Starter
Thank you very much ShiirnShiirn wrote:
General
Hate the song. Ooo~ooh not good _:<
Offset to 664. Even if you need to put the SV changing section on the same line as the offset. fix
Easy
Nothing much.
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Schizo slider much? no :<
Hard
Fine.
Insane
Don't need tick2. It does need tick 2^^
Hallo
General
* Make sure you resnap all the timing sections. Especially for kiai
* I think it's good if you make a lyric SB beside chorus only
Kuro Easy
* Change the PreviewTime to "156292" in notepad
00:43:755 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
00:48:119 (1) - Can you make 1st and 2nd slidertick are stick together? (Design not hitsound)
00:55:937 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
01:07:028 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it please
01:14:846 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense
01:33:755 (1,2) - I think these stacks makes beginner player confusing
02:04:301 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense
02:11:210 (1) - Remove new combo
02:14:119 (2) - New combo
02:17:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
02:19:210 (4) - ^
02:39:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These distance spacing are below 0,8x. Please re-space this
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Ugly slider
00:18:846 (2) - I really don't like overlapped by 00:17:028 (4)
00:25:028 (2) - I think place slider here makes my flow are broken. Perhaps like this? http://puu.sh/1oYQ
00:49:573 (7) - Inconsistent spacing
00:58:119 (1) - ^
01:04:664 (1) - ^
01:05:755 (3,4,5) - I think this timing pattern might too hard for average player
01:25:937 (1) - Not stack perfectly with 01:25:755 (6), or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
01:56:300 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
02:01:028 (4) - ^
02:02:300 (6) - ^
02:49:028 (5) - New combo and also, inconsistent spacing
02:49:391 (1) - Remove new combo
Kite's Hard
* Approach Rate -1? If you keep the Approach Rate 8, it's really too fast for slowdown
* In 01:04:664 ~ END, The spacing was 1,1x But at 00:00:000 ~ 01:04:664 are 1,0x Please make sure the spacing are consistent
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks
00:13:937 (3) - Inconsistent spacing?
00:14:301 (4) - ^
00:26:119 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
00:30:664 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
00:31:210 (4) - ^
00:40:846 (6) - New combo?
00:49:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
01:42:301 (1) - ^ (maybe?)
01:47:573 (3) - ^ (use distance spacing of 0,3x to fix this)
01:57:028 (1) - ^
02:29:755 (3) - ^
02:56:482 (4) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi)
Insane
* Can you increase the distance spacing when it's slow? It's really hard to read with small spacing @_@
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks
00:23:937 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
01:30:482 (7) - Is this object following rhythm or beat?
02:31:755 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
Sorry for long mod
General
* Make sure you resnap all the timing sections. Especially for kiai
* I think it's good if you make a lyric SB beside chorus only
Kuro Easy
* Change the PreviewTime to "156292" in notepad
00:43:755 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
00:48:119 (1) - Can you make 1st and 2nd slidertick are stick together? (Design not hitsound)
00:55:937 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
01:07:028 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it please
01:14:846 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense
01:33:755 (1,2) - I think these stacks makes beginner player confusing
02:04:301 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense
02:11:210 (1) - Remove new combo
02:14:119 (2) - New combo
02:17:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
02:19:210 (4) - ^
02:39:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These distance spacing are below 0,8x. Please re-space this
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Ugly slider
00:18:846 (2) - I really don't like overlapped by 00:17:028 (4)
00:25:028 (2) - I think place slider here makes my flow are broken. Perhaps like this? http://puu.sh/1oYQ
00:49:573 (7) - Inconsistent spacing
00:58:119 (1) - ^
01:04:664 (1) - ^
01:05:755 (3,4,5) - I think this timing pattern might too hard for average player
01:25:937 (1) - Not stack perfectly with 01:25:755 (6), or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
01:56:300 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
02:01:028 (4) - ^
02:02:300 (6) - ^
02:49:028 (5) - New combo and also, inconsistent spacing
02:49:391 (1) - Remove new combo
Kite's Hard
* Approach Rate -1? If you keep the Approach Rate 8, it's really too fast for slowdown
* In 01:04:664 ~ END, The spacing was 1,1x But at 00:00:000 ~ 01:04:664 are 1,0x Please make sure the spacing are consistent
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks
00:13:937 (3) - Inconsistent spacing?
00:14:301 (4) - ^
00:26:119 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
00:30:664 (3) - Inconsistent spacing
00:31:210 (4) - ^
00:40:846 (6) - New combo?
00:49:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
01:42:301 (1) - ^ (maybe?)
01:47:573 (3) - ^ (use distance spacing of 0,3x to fix this)
01:57:028 (1) - ^
02:29:755 (3) - ^
02:56:482 (4) - Move 1 grid down (Nazi)
Insane
* Can you increase the distance spacing when it's slow? It's really hard to read with small spacing @_@
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks
00:23:937 (1) - Inconsistent spacing
01:30:482 (7) - Is this object following rhythm or beat?
02:31:755 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay
Sorry for long mod
Topic Starter
Thank you very much Leorda !!Leorda wrote:
Hallo Halo
General
* Make sure you resnap all the timing sections. Especially for kiai fix
* I think it's good if you make a lyric SB beside chorus only I think lyric on chorus is good enough
Normal
00:17:028 (4) - Ugly slider ...
00:18:846 (2) - I really don't like overlapped by 00:17:028 (4) fix'd with 00:17:028
00:25:028 (2) - I think place slider here makes my flow are broken. Perhaps like this? http://puu.sh/1oYQ no sry > <
00:49:573 (7) - Inconsistent spacing fix
00:58:119 (1) - ^^
01:04:664 (1) - ^^
01:05:755 (3,4,5) - I think this timing pattern might too hard for average player It's ok IMO
01:25:937 (1) - Not stack perfectly with 01:25:755 (6), or it'll be weird stack during gameplay fix
01:56:300 (2) - Inconsistent spacing fix
02:01:028 (4) - ^^
02:02:300 (6) - ^^
02:49:028 (5) - New combo and also, inconsistent spacing fix
02:49:391 (1) - Remove new combo ok
Insane
* Can you increase the distance spacing when it's slow? It's really hard to read with small spacing @_@
* No breaks? You could be tired if you play this diff without breaks
00:23:937 (1) - Inconsistent spacing fix
01:30:482 (7) - Is this object following rhythm or beat? neither, removed
02:31:755 (3) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay ok
Sorry for long mod
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuLeorda wrote:
Hallo
Kuro Easy
* Change the PreviewTime to "156292" in notepad Done.
00:43:755 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
00:48:119 (1) - Can you make 1st and 2nd slidertick are stick together? (Design not hitsound) Maybe done.
00:55:937 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
01:07:028 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it please No.
01:14:846 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted kiai XD
01:33:755 (1,2) - I think these stacks makes beginner player confusing Nah.
02:04:301 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted.
02:11:210 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
02:14:119 (2) - New combo No.
02:17:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing I get what you want but technically it isn't inconsistent. Btw fix'd.
02:19:210 (4) - ^ ^
02:39:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These distance spacing are below 0,8x. Please re-space this Done.
Sorry for long mod
Thanks for the mod Leorda, I fixed everything.
Easy:
seem good to me
Normal:
Not sure about others, but on:
00:47:202 (2,4) Seem a(1/8) bit late from the rythm
01:42:475 (2,4) ^
01:25:566 (5,6) A simple mistake I perhaps
Kite's Hard:
02:07:566 (1) The bounce on blue tick not properly drop on blue tick
Everything else should be fine
Insane:
01:41:202 (4,5,6,7,8) Move all clap on blue tick. Sound funny.
That all from me, depend on you to give me kudos or not coz I mod/notice only minor things here. But yeah, here is my star~
And very much thanks for modding my map
seem good to me
Normal:
Not sure about others, but on:
00:47:202 (2,4) Seem a(1/8) bit late from the rythm
01:42:475 (2,4) ^
01:25:566 (5,6) A simple mistake I perhaps
Kite's Hard:
02:07:566 (1) The bounce on blue tick not properly drop on blue tick
Everything else should be fine
Insane:
01:41:202 (4,5,6,7,8) Move all clap on blue tick. Sound funny.
That all from me, depend on you to give me kudos or not coz I mod/notice only minor things here. But yeah, here is my star~
And very much thanks for modding my map
Topic Starter
Thank you very much AyeenAyeen wrote:
Easy:
seem good to me
Normal:
Not sure about others, but on:
00:47:202 (2,4) Seem a(1/8) bit late from the rythm It's fine I think, I check with 25% and it's right on point
01:42:475 (2,4) ^^
01:25:566 (5,6) A simple mistake I perhaps fix
Kite's Hard:
02:07:566 (1) The bounce on blue tick not properly drop on blue tick If you listen closely to the music you'll find out that it is a 1/6 note not an 1/4 one, so it's okay
Everything else should be fine
Insane:
01:41:202 (4,5,6,7,8) Move all clap on blue tick. Sound funny. sounds funny but strange X_X
That all from me, depend on you to give me kudos or not coz I mod/notice only minor things here. But yeah, here is my star~
And very much thanks for modding my map
Hello~
Storyboard mod.
~Thoughts and Suggestions~
- I'd really like to see a bit more of work on the storyboard, right now I only see the same exact animation on every chorus. Not that it's bad, but imo some kind of variations don't hurt~
- Why not adding the lyrics again at 02:24:666 - 02:35:939?
- About the lines 9 and 10, I think that just having the fade out at the end works much better than fade+scale, since it will look like a whole sentence instead of 2 parts.
~Issues and Adjustments~
Nothing!
General mod.
~Kuro Easy~
00:11:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point.
00:48:121 (1) - I totally expected this to start at the previous white tick...
02:25:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point.
~Normal~
00:11:575 (5) - I'd rather remove this note. It's a normal after all so it shouldn't have so many streams..
00:17:030 (4) - Just to make sure, move the repeat point a bit away from the other slider? The hitburst slightly covers the arrow...
00:51:030 (8) - Stack this note properly under (7)
~Kite's Hard~
No problems here!
~Insane~
00:29:030 (4) - Put a New Combo here if you're going to use the previous jump.
00:43:757 (6) - New Combo.
01:01:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Totally unintuitive spacing in the same combo. Either re-make the pattern or use New Combos to mark the spacing changes.
01:51:030 (4,5) - Is it necessary to do this?
Why not invert positions? (As in, make (4) the slider and (5) the circle)
Nice map, though [Insane] still needs a bit of work on spacing and New Combo distribution.
Good luck~
Storyboard mod.
~Thoughts and Suggestions~
- I'd really like to see a bit more of work on the storyboard, right now I only see the same exact animation on every chorus. Not that it's bad, but imo some kind of variations don't hurt~
- Why not adding the lyrics again at 02:24:666 - 02:35:939?
- About the lines 9 and 10, I think that just having the fade out at the end works much better than fade+scale, since it will look like a whole sentence instead of 2 parts.
~Issues and Adjustments~
Nothing!
General mod.
~Kuro Easy~
00:11:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point.
00:48:121 (1) - I totally expected this to start at the previous white tick...
02:25:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point.
~Normal~
00:11:575 (5) - I'd rather remove this note. It's a normal after all so it shouldn't have so many streams..
00:17:030 (4) - Just to make sure, move the repeat point a bit away from the other slider? The hitburst slightly covers the arrow...
00:51:030 (8) - Stack this note properly under (7)
~Kite's Hard~
No problems here!
~Insane~
00:29:030 (4) - Put a New Combo here if you're going to use the previous jump.
00:43:757 (6) - New Combo.
01:01:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Totally unintuitive spacing in the same combo. Either re-make the pattern or use New Combos to mark the spacing changes.
01:51:030 (4,5) - Is it necessary to do this?
Why not invert positions? (As in, make (4) the slider and (5) the circle)Nice map, though [Insane] still needs a bit of work on spacing and New Combo distribution.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Thank you very much Beuchi !!Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hello~
~Normal~
00:11:575 (5) - I'd rather remove this note. It's a normal after all so it shouldn't have so many streams.. fix
00:17:030 (4) - Just to make sure, move the repeat point a bit away from the other slider? The hitburst slightly covers the arrow... I think it's okay >~< it only covers it a little little bit but it's not a big problem i think
00:51:030 (8) - Stack this note properly under (7) fix
~Insane~
00:29:030 (4) - Put a New Combo here if you're going to use the previous jump. fix
00:43:757 (6) - New Combo. okay
01:01:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Totally unintuitive spacing in the same combo. Either re-make the pattern or use New Combos to mark the spacing changes. Fixed the New Combo
01:51:030 (4,5) - Is it necessary to do this?
Nice map, though [Insane] still needs a bit of work on spacing and New Combo distribution.
Good luck~
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuBeuchi-chan wrote:
Hello~
~Kuro Easy~
00:11:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
00:48:121 (1) - I totally expected this to start at the previous white tick... Me too lol
02:25:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
Revived
[General]
- Red color combo is not so pleasant when these mostly on top of the screen. BG + Red Combo notes on top = Bad for eyes
- 01:11:575 & 02:56:303 - kinda weird fountain(not so "epic" moment imo) but it's ok
[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe?
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)?
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.
I can't find anything wrong in [Normal] and [Hard], they are well made at this point.
~ Star for non-J vocal song
- Red color combo is not so pleasant when these mostly on top of the screen. BG + Red Combo notes on top = Bad for eyes
- 01:11:575 & 02:56:303 - kinda weird fountain(not so "epic" moment imo) but it's ok
[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe?
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)?
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.
I can't find anything wrong in [Normal] and [Hard], they are well made at this point.
~ Star for non-J vocal song
IRC mod
SPOILER
star~22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : 00:28:484 (1,2,3) - comfusing
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : *n
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : but not much, it's up to you
22:42 <Magicphoenix> : i actually like it ..
22:42 <Arusha_Shuna> : like i said, up to you
22:43 <Arusha_Shuna> : 00:48:848 (6,7) - how about stream of 5 circles?
22:43 <Magicphoenix> : to follow the drums?
22:43 <Arusha_Shuna> : uhuh
22:44 <Arusha_Shuna> : this is insane after all
22:44 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:07:030 (6,1) - swap new combo
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : if you want to follow sapcing that is
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : *spacing
22:45 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:09:393 (3) - new combo
22:46 <Magicphoenix> : 01:08:666 (1) - remove combo here okay then ?
22:46 <Arusha_Shuna> : sure
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:55:575 (7) - NC
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : *new combo
22:47 <Magicphoenix> : yeah ^^
22:47 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:56:302 (1,2) - swap new combo
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : wait no
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : 01:56:302 (1,3) - swap NC
22:48 <Magicphoenix> : 01:54:848 (5) - shouldnt here be the NC _
22:48 <Arusha_Shuna> : "will you...", "WILL" starts on circle (7)
22:49 <Arusha_Shuna> : BUT if you want to follow spacing so be it
22:49 <Magicphoenix> : oohhh good job watson
22:49 <Magicphoenix> : followed lyrics
22:49 <Arusha_Shuna> : ._.
22:50 <Arusha_Shuna> : 02:27:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - align to the center of the map
22:51 <Magicphoenix> : hmm ...i think it's good the way it is
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : and oh, all the inheriting timing section is late for at least 11ms
22:53 <Magicphoenix> : woah what
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : no wait
22:53 <Arusha_Shuna> : 2-11ms late
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : maybe because you changed the BPM back then?
22:54 <Magicphoenix> : oh yup
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : i don't know hot to snap inherits
22:54 <Arusha_Shuna> : *how
22:54 <Magicphoenix> : i fixed
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : F6, select all sections
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : and then "Move offset by"
22:55 <Magicphoenix> : it was 15ms too late = =
22:55 <Arusha_Shuna> : k
22:55 <Arusha_Shuna> : then
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : tags
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : kuroneko-sherald is one word?
22:56 <Arusha_Shuna> : ah never mind
22:57 <Arusha_Shuna> : found out just now
22:57 <Magicphoenix> : ^^
23:02 <Arusha_Shuna> : other diff is fine i guess
Sorry, no changes.TorNis wrote:
[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe? The suggestion for (1) is right, but I'll not change it because I don't change the position of (2,3)
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)? I've tried to do some changes but I don't like it.
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.
~ Star for non-J vocal song
Hello.
Thank you and good luck.
- Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.
~Kuro Easy~
- 00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!
~Normal~ - I have nothing to say...
~Kite's Hard~ - I have nothing to say...
Thank you and good luck.
Fixed.kokoroanime wrote:
Hello.
[list]Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.
~Kuro Easy~
[*]00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!SPOILERATTACH[screenshot019.jpg]
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osu
Hello there!
Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.
General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs.
[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?
[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939?
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212?
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General")
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757?
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575?
[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod.
[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in!
Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one!
Star~
Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.
General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs.
[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?
[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939?
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212?
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General")
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757?
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575?
[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod.
[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in!
Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one!
Star~
Topic Starter
Thank you very much ThePalThePal wrote:
Hello there!
Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.
General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs. Messed up there, fixed
[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?
[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939? no
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212? no
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General") fixed with previous suggestion
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757? nope
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575? no
[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod.
[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in! It does..
Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one!
Star~
ThePal wrote:
Hello there!
[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575? Sorry but I don't like it.
Hi~
My suggestions
[Hard]
00:10:666 : remove clap add fin
00:11:212 : ^
01:40:484 : fin
no kd for this
My suggestions
[Hard]
00:10:666 : remove clap add fin
00:11:212 : ^
01:40:484 : fin
no kd for this
Hi.
And that's it. Good luck!
Star!
General
- Remove the letterbox. That black bar on top covering part of the name of that band isn't that great to see. :/
- Remove the countdown.
Kuro Easy
- For English's sake, call it Kuro's Easy.
- 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time. It starts off a little bit late.
- 01:07:575-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:08:303.
- 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
- 01:14:484-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 01:39:030 (1)-Add a finish?
- 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time.
- 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
- 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time.
- 03:00:303-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 02:59:939.
Normal
- 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time.
- 01:07:575-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
- 01:18:666-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time.
- 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
- 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time.
- 03:00:303-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
Kite's Hard
- 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time.
- 01:07:030-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 01:12:848 (6)-Put a new combo here?
- 01:13:393 (1)-Remove new combo.
- 01:15:757 (1)-^
- 01:16:121 (8)-Put a new combo here.
- 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
- 02:02:303 (1)-Here's a suggestion. Use the distance snap to space this slider out more to the right. Like this. It might just work out well.
- 02:02:848-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time.
- 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
- 03:00:303-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
Insane
- 00:11:757 (7)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
- 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time.
- 01:07:575-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time.
- 01:18:666-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 34d kiai time.
- 02:02:848-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time.
- 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
- 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time.
- 03:00:303-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends.
And that's it. Good luck!
Star!
Download: Mayday Parade - Anywhere But Here (Magicphoenix) [Kuro Easy].osuRoddie wrote:
Hi.
[Kuro Easy]
- For English's sake, call it Kuro's Easy.
- 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time. It starts off a little bit late.
- 01:07:575-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:08:303. Done.
- 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time. Fixed.
- 01:14:484-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
- 01:39:030 (1)-Add a finish? Done.
- 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time. Fixed.
- 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
- 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time. Fixed.
- 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
- 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time. Fixed.
- 03:00:303-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 02:59:939. Done.
revived
[General]
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol
[Easy]
- Difficulty settings are pretty high for an easy. I'd recommend lowering some a bit.
This is fine. I didn't like where some sliders started though. But eh.
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Hard]
Kite <3
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good.
At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two?
Anyways, star~.
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol
[Easy]
- Difficulty settings are pretty high for an easy. I'd recommend lowering some a bit.
This is fine. I didn't like where some sliders started though. But eh.
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Hard]
Kite <3
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good.
At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two?
Anyways, star~.
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod OzzyOzrock!OzzyOzrock wrote:
[General]
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol Nope, fine like that
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good. It's necessary for the slow-downs, otherwise you won't notice one
At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two? Pardon me?
Anyways, star~.
GUH, I meant spinners, not sliders.. lol
Why's this in WIP
/me runs
/me runs
Topic Starter
Lol you're right
Topic Starter
COME ON SOME MAT MOD THIS ! !
Star of DOOOOM
Magic Magic Magic
star :3
Topic Starter
ooops
Joa ^.^ Ich dacht mir mal ich mod die map auch :3 - So ziemlich nazi ... naja :3
btw... wenn du nochmal so ne map machst.. sag mir bescheid will ich ne hard machen q.q
Easy
00:48:121 (1) - setz den doch um 1/2 vor :s
01:32:666 (4) - Mach vil n slider ohne reserve arrow
02:01:030 (4) - ein reserve arrow geht noch
02:19:939 (5) - new combo
02:56:666 - mach hier n circle und 02:57:030 - da evtl
Normal
00:38:484 (1,2,3) - Strg + R ^^
00:43:757 (6) - Clap am ende weg xD
00:49:575 (7) - New combo
00:53:030 (4) - ^
01:43:757 (1) - bissl verwirrend nach den double's
01:48:302 (3) - New combo
02:16:666 (1) - Combo weg und beim slider setzen
02:30:484 (1) - Combo weg beim nächsten rein
02:37:757 (3) - neue combo ...
02:42:484 (1) - Neue combo? sonst hast du die doch auch nd gemacht. naja wenn du das dann wie bei den anderen "vorschlägen" auch machst is das dann nicht mehr notwendig wegzumachen
Hard
Sieht n bissl zusammengezwengt aus ^^' in meiner ansicht... am anfang zumindest
Schau nochmal die hitsounds durch hin und wieder fehlen n paar
02:56:848 (5) - - Hier new combo.. nächste weg
03:01:212 (1) - Combo weg :<
Insane
AR: 7 OD: 6 o.ô
Mach die weiter auseinander xD.. das kann man so doof spielen mit der AR und dann noch so eng beisammen
00:16:121 (1) - wtf new combo?
00:29:212 (2) - new combo hier und nich beim circle
00:30:484 (1) - den kann man leicht übersehn
01:13:484 (5) - weiss nd so recht ob der passt
(01:44:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - n J für Jessica *^*)
02:08:666 - Ab da wenigstens bissl weiter auseinander :s
02:56:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Mach vil tripples anstatt n megastream würd besser zur musik passen imo
Schön schön ^.^ - Sternchen <3
btw... wenn du nochmal so ne map machst.. sag mir bescheid will ich ne hard machen q.q
Easy
00:48:121 (1) - setz den doch um 1/2 vor :s
01:32:666 (4) - Mach vil n slider ohne reserve arrow
02:01:030 (4) - ein reserve arrow geht noch
02:19:939 (5) - new combo
02:56:666 - mach hier n circle und 02:57:030 - da evtl
Normal
00:38:484 (1,2,3) - Strg + R ^^
00:43:757 (6) - Clap am ende weg xD
00:49:575 (7) - New combo
00:53:030 (4) - ^
01:43:757 (1) - bissl verwirrend nach den double's
01:48:302 (3) - New combo
02:16:666 (1) - Combo weg und beim slider setzen
02:30:484 (1) - Combo weg beim nächsten rein
02:37:757 (3) - neue combo ...
02:42:484 (1) - Neue combo? sonst hast du die doch auch nd gemacht. naja wenn du das dann wie bei den anderen "vorschlägen" auch machst is das dann nicht mehr notwendig wegzumachen
Hard
Sieht n bissl zusammengezwengt aus ^^' in meiner ansicht... am anfang zumindest
Schau nochmal die hitsounds durch hin und wieder fehlen n paar
02:56:848 (5) - - Hier new combo.. nächste weg
03:01:212 (1) - Combo weg :<
Insane
AR: 7 OD: 6 o.ô
Mach die weiter auseinander xD.. das kann man so doof spielen mit der AR und dann noch so eng beisammen
00:16:121 (1) - wtf new combo?
00:29:212 (2) - new combo hier und nich beim circle
00:30:484 (1) - den kann man leicht übersehn
01:13:484 (5) - weiss nd so recht ob der passt
(01:44:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - n J für Jessica *^*)
02:08:666 - Ab da wenigstens bissl weiter auseinander :s
02:56:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Mach vil tripples anstatt n megastream würd besser zur musik passen imo
Schön schön ^.^ - Sternchen <3