Leorda wrote:

Hallo

Kuro Easy
* Change the PreviewTime to "156292" in notepad Done.

00:43:755 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
00:48:119 (1) - Can you make 1st and 2nd slidertick are stick together? (Design not hitsound) Maybe done.
00:55:937 (2) - Inconsistent spacing Fixed.
01:07:028 (1) - This spinner are too short, extend it please No.
01:14:846 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted kiai XD
01:33:755 (1,2) - I think these stacks makes beginner player confusing Nah.
02:04:301 (B) - Break time during kiai time are make no sense Deleted.
02:11:210 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
02:14:119 (2) - New combo No.
02:17:028 (2) - Inconsistent spacing I get what you want but technically it isn't inconsistent. Btw fix'd.
02:19:210 (4) - ^ ^
02:39:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These distance spacing are below 0,8x. Please re-space this Done.

Sorry for long mod

Ayeen wrote:

Easy:
seem good to me

Normal:
Not sure about others, but on:
00:47:202 (2,4) Seem a(1/8) bit late from the rythm It's fine I think, I check with 25% and it's right on point
01:42:475 (2,4) ^^
01:25:566 (5,6) A simple mistake I perhaps fix


Kite's Hard:
02:07:566 (1) The bounce on blue tick not properly drop on blue tick If you listen closely to the music you'll find out that it is a 1/6 note not an 1/4 one, so it's okay

Everything else should be fine

Insane:
01:41:202 (4,5,6,7,8) Move all clap on blue tick. Sound funny. sounds funny but strange X_X

That all from me, depend on you to give me kudos or not coz I mod/notice only minor things here. But yeah, here is my star~

And very much thanks for modding my map

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello~ hey ~

~Normal~
00:11:575 (5) - I'd rather remove this note. It's a normal after all so it shouldn't have so many streams.. fix
00:17:030 (4) - Just to make sure, move the repeat point a bit away from the other slider? The hitburst slightly covers the arrow... I think it's okay >~< it only covers it a little little bit but it's not a big problem i think
00:51:030 (8) - Stack this note properly under (7) fix


~Insane~
00:29:030 (4) - Put a New Combo here if you're going to use the previous jump. fix
00:43:757 (6) - New Combo. okay
01:01:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Totally unintuitive spacing in the same combo. Either re-make the pattern or use New Combos to mark the spacing changes. Fixed the New Combo
01:51:030 (4,5) - Is it necessary to do this? Why not invert positions? (As in, make (4) the slider and (5) the circle) fix!

Nice map, though [Insane] still needs a bit of work on spacing and New Combo distribution.
Good luck~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello~

~Kuro Easy~
00:11:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.
00:48:121 (1) - I totally expected this to start at the previous white tick... Me too lol
02:25:757 (Brk) - Move the break to this point. Done.

TorNis wrote:

[Easy]
(All below comments are about "vocal sliders")
Start feels missplaced.
00:02:303 (2,3,1) - Move (2,3) 1 tick to the left, move (1) 2 ticks to the left and increase (1) for 2 tick maybe? The suggestion for (1) is right, but I'll not change it because I don't change the position of (2,3)
00:41:939 (1,2) - Isn't (1) should be 2 ticks more and (2) the same lenght as (1)? I've tried to do some changes but I don't like it.
01:25:575 (1,2) - again something off with "vocal sliders", maybe you don't follow vocals, but it's weird then.
Chorus is nicely done.

~ Star for non-J vocal song

• Blue: You must fix this.
  Red: You better fix it!
  Orange: Screenshot ahead.
  Black: Just suggestions though.
  
  ~Kuro Easy~

1. 00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   ~Normal~
   
2. I have nothing to say...
   
   ~Kite's Hard~
   
3. I have nothing to say...

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello.

[list]Blue: You must fix this.
Red: You better fix it!
Orange: Screenshot ahead.
Black: Just suggestions though.

~Kuro Easy~
[*]00:30:303 (1): Look how straight I did, check the difference carefully!!!

SPOILER

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ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

General:
Found out that you have the resnap everything, You should properly do that with all diffs. Messed up there, fixed

[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575?

[Normal]
Very nicely made indeed! Here's some things:
01:07:030 (5) End slider at 01:07:939? no
02:02:303 (6) End slider at 02:03:212? no
02:08:304 (1) Timing offset needs to be 02:08:303 to let the slider go at 0.5! (Remember to use "Use Corrent Time" button.(or look at "General") fixed with previous suggestion
02:51:939 (spin) Start spin at 02:51:757? nope
02:57:757 (spin) Start spin at 02:57:575? no

[Kite's Hard]
Everything seems to be in order if you do the "general" mod.

[Insane]
Pretty nice, but I'm not really to judge Insane maps, since I'm not that good yet. ;P
01:24:757 (6) I know this is Insane, but this won't fit in! It does..

Great beatmap! I will be looking forward to this one!
Star~

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

[Kuro Easy]
Great map! Only found one thing!
02:01:030 (4) A little too hard for the novice. End at 02:01:212 without return, then put circle at 02:01:575? Sorry but I don't like it.

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

[Kuro Easy]

1. For English's sake, call it Kuro's Easy. I know that it's wrong in English but there is a reason for it so I won't change.
2. 00:52:666-Fix the timing on 1st kiai time. It starts off a little bit late. Fixed.
3. 01:07:575-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:08:303. Done.
4. 01:11:575-Fix the timing on the 2nd kiai time. Fixed.
5. 01:14:484-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
6. 01:39:030 (1)-Add a finish? Done.
7. 01:47:939-Fix the timing on the 3rd kiai time. Fixed.
8. 02:03:939-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
9. 02:37:393-Fix the timing on the 4th kiai time. Fixed.
10. 02:54:121-Fix the timing where the kiai time ends. Fixed.
11. 02:56:303-Fix the timing on the 5th kiai time. Fixed.
12. 03:00:303-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 02:59:939. Done.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
02:24:666 - Why not add the lyrics in the SB here too? Maybe in a different font or... something... lolol Nope, fine like that
[Normal]
Good as well.
[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds bad here, but I guess it's for difficulty? Otherwise rate 1 is good. It's necessary for the slow-downs, otherwise you won't notice one

At the end, you have 3 sliders. The last one is fine, but how about mapping through the other two? Pardon me?

Anyways, star~.

BounceBabe wrote:

Joa ^.^ Ich dacht mir mal ich mod die map auch :3 - So ziemlich nazi ... naja :3
btw... wenn du nochmal so ne map machst.. sag mir bescheid will ich ne hard machen q.q

Normal

00:38:484 (1,2,3) - Strg + R ^^ huh? nein sry
00:43:757 (6) - Clap am ende weg xD kay
00:49:575 (7) - New combo k
00:53:030 (4) - ^ ^
01:43:757 (1) - bissl verwirrend nach den double's nö ;P
01:48:302 (3) - New combo ok
02:16:666 (1) - Combo weg und beim slider setzen nope, der fängt da gerade nen neuen satz an^^
02:30:484 (1) - Combo weg beim nächsten rein eh? nope sry
02:37:757 (3) - neue combo ... ok
02:42:484 (1) - Neue combo? sonst hast du die doch auch nd gemacht. naja wenn du das dann wie bei den anderen "vorschlägen" auch machst is das dann nicht mehr notwendig wegzumachen


Insane

AR: 7 OD: 6 o.ô Nope, passt so wie es ist
Mach die weiter auseinander xD.. das kann man so doof spielen mit der AR und dann noch so eng beisammen

00:16:121 (1) - wtf new combo? o_O'
00:29:212 (2) - new combo hier und nich beim circle k
00:30:484 (1) - den kann man leicht übersehn passt
01:13:484 (5) - weiss nd so recht ob der passt deleted
(01:44:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - n J für Jessica *^*) =A=*
02:08:666 - Ab da wenigstens bissl weiter auseinander :s sorry hab das extra so eng gemacht
02:56:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Mach vil tripples anstatt n megastream würd besser zur musik passen imo Nope sry < <

Schön schön ^.^ - Sternchen <3

BounceBabe wrote:

Easy

00:48:121 (1) - setz den doch um 1/2 vor :s Done.
01:32:666 (4) - Mach vil n slider ohne reserve arrow No.
02:01:030 (4) - ein reserve arrow geht noch No.
02:19:939 (5) - new combo No.
02:56:666 - mach hier n circle und 02:57:030 - da evtl It's a nice idea, but I prefer to not change.

rEdo wrote:

Mayday Parade!

[Normal]
0:47:030 (1,2) - move them a bit higher, so the spacing's more consistent? the spacing is consistent enough for me?
1:25:575 (5,1) - swap NCs ok
2:49:030 (5,1) - ^ nope
2:51:939 (1) - extend it to the big white tick, hmm? no

[Insane]
0:00:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - totally inconsistent, move some of the first notes higher. What do you mean by inconsistent? I will keep it for now
0:04:303 (2,3,4,5) - move them a bit further, like this? and then move (6) somewhere else, too nope
1:51:575 (6) - i'd make a copy of 1:52:666 (1), move it a bit higher and use it instead of this. no sry
2:05:575 (8,1) - swap NCs ok
2:14:121 (7,1) - ^ no, that whole combo follows "thoughts of her disappear"

1. Please disable the countdown in all diff please!
2. Try offset:679?It sounds better for me.Please re-snap all note after change,btw,please check my mod before you consider this.

1. 01:30:848 (1) - Consider you had not put a break at 00:33:757 - ,so I think you shouldn't add a break at 01:28:666 -!Just going to consistent it.
2. 02:22:666 (x) - I have already asked some MAT,some of them said that 0% volume is unrankable...I'm not sure about it but I can't see a big different either 0% or 5%.
3. 02:54:303 (x) - For better gameplay,I would like to remove this break if I were you!This break is really unnecessary!No need to adding break there when the last part has heavier HP rape.

1. 00:52:666 (x) - I would suggest you add a beat here because it's a accent point and it's the starting point of Kiai time!
2. 00:54:484 (1,2) - Since you almost did symmetrical in this map,so it would be really weird if you don't do a symmetrical here.I would suggest you add a beat at 00:55:575 - and make (2)- symmetrical with (1)-
3. 02:01:030 (4) - A short slider more then 3 reverse might make confused to newbie,however you didn't place any note at 02:01:030 (4) - or 02:01:939 - so I just leave this to you T_T

1. 03:05:939 (x) - Since you set this to soft hitsound however it shows a normal hitsound because you didn't snap this green line properly.Oh,don't forget to change it to 5%.

1. 00:44:666 (x) - For better flow,I would like to remove this break if I were you!This break is really unnecessary!Also you didn't add a break at 00:33:757 - so I think you shouldn't placed a break here.
2. 01:03:939 (6) - After first play of it,I think this stack a little bit weird.I suggest you unstack this.My own opinion only,you don't need to follow it if you disagree.
3. 02:01:030 (4) - Remove both clap(the beginning of the slider and the ending of slider),it doesn't fit the music.
4. 02:36:303 (x) - Probably keep continued using soft-hitsound here?Because the bass didn't start from here.
5. 02:40:302 (4) - oh...for consistent the combo setting with previous combo,please add a new combo here.
6. 02:49:030 (5,1) - Swap new combo please because I think stack on a new combo note is really ugly.Well,change or not are depends on you.

1. HP:+1~2?

1. Please use tick rate 1 instead of 0.5,Since tick rate 0.5 is not allowed recently.
2. Please re-snap the Starting and ending point of Kiai.
3. 02:39:212 (1) - For better gameplay,would you remove this 1/2 jump? o.o Since this is the only 1/2 jump in this map!
4. Please pay attention about the 0% volume timeline!

1. 00:51:575 (1,2,3) - I suggest you use a soft hitsound here instead of normal hitsound because this part is not that "strong"
2. 01:46:848 (1,2,3) - ^Same!
3. 01:57:030 (1,2,3,4) - Probably for me only,but I can see you use this pattern many times in this map.I wouldn't suggest you did this because it is really boring for player.You can think that a player play this map and what they feel if they see this pattern many times.

1. Please pay attention about the 0% volume timeline!

1. 00:49:575 (9) - The slider doesn't fit the music very well,I suggest you use a note instead of this slider then add spinner at 00:49:757 - .
2. 01:09:393 (1,2,3) - The spacing of this jump are inconsistent.You better to fix this but it's not a big problem.
3. 01:54:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should make a jump here because you made a jump at 01:49:212 (1,2,3) - .
4. 02:22:848 (9) - This slider doesn't fit the music!!!!Especially the reverse: 02:23:393 - .I think a spinner would more appropriate then this slider.
5. Be honest,some of the jump are really awkward,you should double check the anti-jump.

Hellzero wrote:

Hi my noob mod from The Challenge Queue ;w;

General
Color combos and background little merge. Make them brighter? I made the black one brighter but I've made the rest brighter 5 times already, and it really does not influence playing the map all too much
I think normal hitsounds little loud. Reduce ~10% ? ok
Also

SPOILER

can you to smooth volume? I wanted to silence the slider end though


Insane
00:29:939 (2) - move to 00:29:757 (sound and played more better imo) ok
01:31:939 (4) - this clap sound bad (maybe remove this clap and add 01:32:302 (7) - here) okay
02:09:393 (3,4,5) - so slow part and triplet notes lettle confused. Replaced by slider? Nope
02:28:302 (3,4) - 1 grid left You must mean right instead of left or? Makes more sense and does fit


Normal
00:51:030 (2) - not sure that new players can to read it. Maybe don't stack it with slider? It's [Normal] and not [Easy] , it's fine IMO

That's all. Good luck!

kanpakyin wrote:

Mod this for The Challenge Queue

[General]

1. Please disable the countdown in all diff please! There is no countdown xD
2. Try offset:679?It sounds better for me.Please re-snap all note after change,btw,please check my mod before you consider this. Sorry, I will keep my current offset

[Normal]
issue/unrankable stuff!
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. 03:05:939 (x) - Since you set this to soft hitsound however it shows a normal hitsound because you didn't snap this green line properly.Oh,don't forget to change it to 5%. The green lines are snapped right on time lol , fixed the volume issue

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:44:666 (x) - For better flow,I would like to remove this break if I were you!This break is really unnecessary!Also you didn't add a break at 00:33:757 - so I think you shouldn't placed a break here. ok
2. 01:03:939 (6) - After first play of it,I think this stack a little bit weird.I suggest you unstack this.My own opinion only,you don't need to follow it if you disagree. In which way is it weird? I'll keep it for now
3. 02:01:030 (4) - Remove both clap(the beginning of the slider and the ending of slider),it doesn't fit the music. ok
4. 02:36:303 (x) - Probably keep continued using soft-hitsound here?Because the bass didn't start from here. I mainly follow the vocal when I map, so I've started the Normal-hitsound when he starts raising his voice
5. 02:40:302 (4) - oh...for consistent the combo setting with previous combo,please add a new combo here. started NC one combo later to follow vocal
6. 02:49:030 (5,1) - Swap new combo please because I think stack on a new combo note is really ugly.Well,change or not are depends on you. Nope sorry, new sentence starts on (1) so I will keep NC

[Insane]
issue/unrankable stuff!
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)

1. Please pay attention about the 0% volume timeline! fixed

Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)

1. 00:49:575 (9) - The slider doesn't fit the music very well,I suggest you use a note instead of this slider then add spinner at 00:49:757 - . okay
2. 01:09:393 (1,2,3) - The spacing of this jump are inconsistent.You better to fix this but it's not a big problem. fix
3. 01:54:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should make a jump here because you made a jump at 01:49:212 (1,2,3) - . It's slightly unreasonable but ok, a little jump
4. 02:22:848 (9) - This slider doesn't fit the music!!!!Especially the reverse: 02:23:393 - .I think a spinner would more appropriate then this slider. ok
5. Be honest,some of the jump are really awkward,you should double check the anti-jump. I can't find any anti-jumps ? lol

That's it!good luck.