Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Black

00:29:615 (1) - maybe remove newcombo from it? these 6 notes should be together(I'm not going to point out others) Fixed
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - it's a careless arrangement I think(4 jumps out of this part) :< you can use some pattern for them Fixed
01:03:085 (2) - one more note and end it on a white line? No
01:20:228 (2,3,4) - they hear bad because the first note of them is too loud. maybe you can remove 01:20:330 (3) and add a note on 01:20:125 (between 1 and 2)(I'm not going to point out others /.) Fixed
01:25:738 (5) - new combo (I'd prefer if you use this kind a rhythm here because you increase the distance between 1,2,3. xD. it's just my personal opinion)No

SPOILER

01:31:044 (2) - I think it would be better if long slider is ended on a white line (like 02:28:391 (1,2,3)) Fixed
01:37:574 (2) - ^ No! That is heart pattern DDD:
02:02:268 - I think this halt is too long, some notes should be added here, and it feels not good that the coming notes are started with a stream (for instance add notes on 02:02:064 and 02:02:268) No
02:05:533 - I prefer more notes here :> Fixed
02:08:798 - ^ Fixed
02:03:289 (1,2,1) - reduce new combo Fixed
02:10:432 (1) - remove new combo No
02:10:840 (2) - new combo No
02:11:452 (4) - new combo No
02:22:677 (1,2,3) - make a prettier arrangement for them Fixed
03:30:431 - add a note here(I don't like the shape of this stream :<)No
03:37:983 (5) - new combo No


White

01:20:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this kind of rhythm seems too stiff at the beginning of kiai time. players should make more clicks here Fixed
02:26:758 (4) - I heard a whistle here. consider more whistle? :> Fixed
03:28:798 - the volume is turned up too suddenly That is the part of the song you idiot!


star

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit. No, is there any issue about SB dimensions in ranking guideline? If there it no, why you point it out? I saw the map is over 800 x 600 >.>
- The White and Black diff is missing 'brikel' in its tags. Added
- The combo colours in brikel's diff has different combo colours. Please check the .oosu files and make them identical. Added
- That custom normal clap is pretty loud. I suggest you make it a bit quieter. Lower the volume.......

White:
00:51:248 (3) - One grid left? Ok
02:22:676 (1) - New Combo, to stay consistent. Ok
02:34:105 (5) - One grid up? So it's stacked with the previous (1). No
03:43:085 (4) - One grid right? No

Brikel's Gray:
00:37:370 (4) - New combo? Ok
00:56:962 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it in the timeline like this No

that sounds better IMO
01:17:370 (2) - Extend this by one 1/4 tick.Ok
01:26:349 (6) - New combo? Ok
01:30:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Where are the new combos? I suggest on at (6), (14) and (19). Ok
02:22:880 (3) - One 1/4 tick later and extend by one 1/4 tick. Ok

Black:
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - Very confusing. the distance between (2), (3) and (3), (4) is the same but the time distance between (2), (3) is shorter than (3), (4). Please respace that. Ok
02:10:840 (2,3,4) - Confusing again. Ok

Leorda wrote:

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit. No, is there any issue about SB dimensions in ranking guideline? If there it no, why you point it out? I saw the map is over 800 x 600 >.>

Odaril wrote:

Er... hum, there IS a maximum size for storyboard elemets and that size is 800x600. Resize said picture and full submit. If you refuse to fix an unrankable thing we are allowed to nuke the map, are you aware of this ?

Jarby wrote:

lolno

18:09 <ppy> : Jarby: i'd allow 1 extra 1024x image
18:09 <ppy> : on top of the map's background
18:09 <ppy> : any more would just scream for abuse

Joshua Lost wrote:

Just star.I can find nothing,really.

By the way,thanks for your long mod.That's very helpful.

James2250 wrote:

Storyboard at 03:01:044 seems slightly early compared to the notes? Might just be me Yes
Don't really like 20 second+ break but it has sb so ok..

White:
00:56:962 (1,4) - align? OK
02:00:636 (2,3,4) - slight spacing error OK
03:33:697 (3) - random whistle by itself? Nope, I add it because there is some sound effect

Brikel's Gray:
02:22:676 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:574 (6,1,2,3,4) - looks strange with stacking at the moment, try raising stacking leniency and trying in test

Black:
00:53:085 (4,1) - space further apart OK
02:08:798 (1,2) - spacing? OK

Nicely done~
Star'ed

kanpakyin wrote:

0.0

Hey...Can you wait my Taiko diff?
If not...I'll stop.
anyway..star first

1. 01:09:615 (5)-Move one grid down?
2. 01:12:880 (4)-Move one grid right?
3. 01:14:921 (1)-Fix the spacing on this?
4. 02:00:635 (2)-Fix the spacing on this. Its best to have this go one grid up.
5. 02:03:084 (1)-Fix the spacing on this.
6. 02:34:921 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
7. 02:43:084 (4)-Fix the spacing on this. Move one grid left
8. 03:49:207 (1)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider?

1. 00:27:574 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
2. 00:36:145 (2)-Add a clap.
3. 00:52:064 (5, 6)-On slider 5, Add finishes on both the beginning and the end. On slider 6, Add a finish on the end.
4. 01:00:431 (2)-Add a clap on the end of that slider.
5. 01:01:860 (6)-Put a new combo here?
6. 01:03:492 (1)-Add a clap on the end of that slider?
7. 01:05:125 (1)-Remove that finish. In my opinion, I don't think it sounds right putting a finish there...
8. 01:06:758 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
9. 01:18:186 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 01:05:125.
10. 01:19:819 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
11. 01:32:472 (5)-Add a finish?
12. 01:32:880 (1)-^
13. 01:37:166 (9)-Put a new combo?
14. 01:41:860 (5, 7)-On slider 5, Add a finish on the end. And on 7, Add a finish.
15. 02:09:207 (7)-Put a new combo here?
16. 02:10:431 (4 , 5, 6)-Add finishes on the beginning of those sliders.
17. 02:12:064 (1)-Add a finish.
18. 02:22:676 (2, 3)-Add some finishes please.
19. 02:23:492 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 01:05:125.
20. 02:25:125 (1)-Add a finish.
21. 02:29:411 (7)-Put a new combo here?
22. 02:37:778 (4)-Add a finish.
23. 02:38:186 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
24. 03:05:941-Add a timing point (Green line) and set it to Soft for the Sample Set. I think it would be better like that.
25. 03:28:798 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 01:05:125.
26. 03:32:064 (1)-Add a finish.
27. 03:36:554 (2)-Add a clap.
28. 03:43:084 (1)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider?
29. 03:44:717 (5)-Add a finish.
30. 03:45:125 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
31. 03:49:615 (2)-Add a clap.
32. 03:54:921 (8)-Put a new combo here??

1. 01:31:043 (2)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
2. 02:29:615 (2, 3)-Hm.. Try and stack these more neatly on the end of that previous slider.

twistedice wrote:

Storyboard

03:05:941 - 3:28:798 - The lyrics don't look good in this part. I suggest re-timing it so that only 2 lines of lyrics are visible at top and bottom. If you want all 4 lines visible then you should make it so that the 2nd and 4th lines are horizontally written like in traditional Japanese.

White

02:54:512 (1,1,1) - The feathers explode too soon in this part. 2,3,4 are fine I guess because the notes are stacked. Re-adjust the timing?

Brikel's Gray

02:22:982 (3) - add Finish at the beginning of the slider too
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The timing in this difficulty is better than Black but it's still off to me. The feathers explode too soon. Re-adjust the timing?

Black

00:58:391 (6) - I think it's better if this is stacked with (5)
01:17:370 (2,3,4) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
01:17:370 (2)
01:17:642 (3)
01:17:914 (4)
01:45:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit?
02:22:677 (1,2,3) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
02:22:677 (1)
02:22:948 (2)
02:23:220 (3)
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The SB part in this section is mis-timed I think. The feathers explode too soon. Maybe re-adjust the timing?
03:05:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit? The drum rolls in the long sliders in this section are too loud.
03:19:819 (3) - nazi mod: 1 grid down

STAR ★

Fight69 wrote:

Heya

Just a random mod~
Don't forget that everything are just suggestions

[General]

Add "kanpakyin" in the tags for Brikel's Gray <= Everything are just suggestion, but NOT this xD Opss, I forgot


[Black]

02:06:758 (4) - What about adding a circle with a clap here ? (it should be at the same place than (1), between the two sliders) OK

[White]

01:17:369 (1) - No new combo Removed
02:22:676 (1) - ^ Removed
03:05:941 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier or you'll get a Normal-Hit (Well, I've got a Normal-Hit instead of a Soft-Hit, I dunno if I'm the only one with that problem...) Changed
03:32:064 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier (same problem :/) Changed
03:58:186 - ^ Changed

[Brikel's Gray]

00:42:880 (4) - Delete that circle deleted
00:43:084 (4) - Move that slider 1/2 earlier and extend 1/2 Changed
(You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59850 )
00:50:431 (7) - This finish sounds a bit weird here No, since it's place on heavybeat (high white line)
01:03:492 (1) - Add a Clap at the end of this slider Added

Good job !
~Starz'd !

arien666 wrote:

Here's crybaby's modding ;_;

[White]
:3 baka

[Brikel's Gray]
:3 baka

[Black]
01:25:126 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down? OK
01:25:330 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right? OK
03:37:370 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 2 grid down to make symmetric with (1)? OK

[Kanpa's Cadetaiko]
01:39:003 (115) - don? OK
02:54:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Delete SB sprites related with these notes OK



Okay, not much to suggest orz
Good luck :3

kanpakyin wrote:

Before bubble..
I consistent something..

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
0,4M-3M-12M doesnt look like a nice diff/score spread to me. And that's why I feel frustrating to make a Normal or Hard diff....

[Storyboard]
SAKURA.png has unnecessary transparencies, look http://puu.sh/15DP Oh shit, I forgot to remove this, since it's unused
MINI SNOW.png also has unnecessary transparencies on top and left. Okie

[Black] All fixed! except 03:01:044 (1,2,3,4)
I see that your slider art is improve so i'll help you a lil bit.
01:10:840 (3) - If you mod the 2nd slider point a bit more down and to the left and the last waypoint a few grids down, you'll end up covering the outside of the previous slider more perfectly like this http://puu.sh/15Eb disable grid snap if you want it to be perfect, it's still good enough so i dont mind if you dont change.
01:25:738 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern would look better in a diamond shape but that's me.
03:25:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont mind the streams, but cant really tell the jumps, sorry, maybe remove the last note of each 1/2 stream so it's more readable?.
03:37:983 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.

[Brikel's Gray]
03:27:370 - This break is way too long. Fill with spinner

[Overall]
I really like how you're improving your slider art and your mapping, good job, you can call me back for a recheck. All hail my old mapping style......

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ Scorebar-bg and scorebar-colour, also add or not score-ki etc if you want ~ ALSO NO KDS PLEASE

SPOILER

[attachment=1:cc8a6]scorebar-bg.png[/attachment:cc8a6]
[attachment=0:cc8a6]scorebar-colour-0.png[/attachment:cc8a6]

arien666 wrote:

I star - Saku modded - ???

Have a cookie :3
/me runs ;_;

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hai old bubble~

~General~
Storyboard:
- Check your .osb and delete these 2 lines inside BLUR, they're making the load go up to 3,27x when nothing is happening in the background:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0

~White~
02:25:533 (1) - Knowing this is the easiest difficulty, I'd personally remove this note to leave some recovery time to the newbies that'll play this. You did it on the other choruses so I don't think you'll mind to do it xP

~Brikel's Gray~
02:20:227 (4,7) - Stack them properly? NO

~Black~
02:22:948 (2) - Snap to 1/4
02:29:615 (2,3) - This stack looks weird in play mode ;~; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85408

Great map overall
*star*

HeatKai wrote:

good job , abg leo

Sallad4ever wrote:

I remember this thread change to black in the pending thread because no one posted thus become easier to spotted
and it's finally ranked
congratz~ (biarpun telat xD)

ac17407 wrote:

taiko map sucks

ac17407 wrote:

taiko map sucks

Leorda wrote:

ac17407 wrote:

taiko map sucks

what? you should play the taiko map until you can FC'ed... Learn to pratice taiko map before complaining this

ac17407 wrote:

Yesyes.
How come a noob like me can even pass this insane map