[general]
your sliders aren't perfect. This is not something you need to fix, but if you do, it's polish, and proves you want to make the best possible beatmap you can. Use grid 1 for the sliders' nodes if it won't work on grid 2. Your spacing is also off at times: like at 02:00:635 (2) - on white
http://puu.sh/WIs This is not important either, but it's something to do if you feel like it.
[storyboard]
I applaud you for figuring out the storyboard without editing the osb, but right now it's really jumbled. Your scales are all to different sizes, and it's confusing for me to look at, but right at the start of the song, you hit 5.0 SB load, which might be rankable, but certainly there's something you can do to fix it, right? Disabling countdown should do it, but I think if you clean up blur.png and some of the other things, you'll fix it all:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0
those 2 lines do virtually nothing except add 1.0 to the SB load. How can you tell the difference between 0 and 0.0064 opacity?
If you round all those decimals to the nearest tenths place or so, I think you'll find the SB looks the same, the osb is easier to read, and you can notice stuff that you don't need (ie the lines above would be fading from 0 to 0, so you can just delete them).
[white]
03:27:166 - timing section here sounds bad, just delete, the spinner gets louder naturally.
03:28:798 - ^
[gray]
03:39:207 - felt weird, see below
03:39:615 (4,5,6) - perhaps its just me, but I hate offbeat sliders. It fits, but I missed it the first try, since I didn't know what you were mapping. I think if you move this later, like the very last section: 03:51:656 (1) people like me wouldn't miss it, since you'll be used to the rhythm.
[black]
4 minute song and 1 break at 3 minutes in. I would vote down for that once it's ranked.
01:17:642 (3) - should probably be on the blue tick
01:25:738 (5) - I miss this every time, so I would like a .75 slider or something instead, but w/e.
both of those repeat when the song repeats
