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because last night I get pissed......
time to go back to 1000 x 800 for SAKURA BIG.png, yay!
Please make it until you finish
Bubble pleaseeeeeee
How come a noob like me can even pass this insane map
General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit.
- The White and Black diff is missing 'brikel' in its tags.
- The combo colours in brikel's diff has different combo colours. Please check the .oosu files and make them identical.
- That custom normal clap is pretty loud. I suggest you make it a bit quieter.
White:
00:51:248 (3) - One grid left?
02:22:676 (1) - New Combo, to stay consistent.
02:34:105 (5) - One grid up? So it's stacked with the previous (1).
03:43:085 (4) - One grid right?
Brikel's Gray:
00:37:370 (4) - New combo?
00:56:962 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it in the timeline like this
that sounds better IMO
01:17:370 (2) - Extend this by one 1/4 tick.
01:26:349 (6) - New combo?
01:30:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Where are the new combos? I suggest on at (6), (14) and (19).
02:22:880 (3) - One 1/4 tick later and extend by one 1/4 tick.
Black:
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - Very confusing. the distance between (2), (3) and (3), (4) is the same but the time distance between (2), (3) is shorter than (3), (4). Please respace that.
02:10:840 (2,3,4) - Confusing again.
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit.
- The White and Black diff is missing 'brikel' in its tags.
- The combo colours in brikel's diff has different combo colours. Please check the .oosu files and make them identical.
- That custom normal clap is pretty loud. I suggest you make it a bit quieter.
White:
00:51:248 (3) - One grid left?
02:22:676 (1) - New Combo, to stay consistent.
02:34:105 (5) - One grid up? So it's stacked with the previous (1).
03:43:085 (4) - One grid right?
Brikel's Gray:
00:37:370 (4) - New combo?
00:56:962 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it in the timeline like this
that sounds better IMO
01:17:370 (2) - Extend this by one 1/4 tick.
01:26:349 (6) - New combo?
01:30:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Where are the new combos? I suggest on at (6), (14) and (19).
02:22:880 (3) - One 1/4 tick later and extend by one 1/4 tick.
Black:
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - Very confusing. the distance between (2), (3) and (3), (4) is the same but the time distance between (2), (3) is shorter than (3), (4). Please respace that.
02:10:840 (2,3,4) - Confusing again.
Topic Starter
*sigh*Rukarioman wrote:
General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit. No, is there any issue about SB dimensions in ranking guideline? If there it no, why you point it out? I saw the map is over 800 x 600 >.>
- The White and Black diff is missing 'brikel' in its tags. Added
- The combo colours in brikel's diff has different combo colours. Please check the .oosu files and make them identical. Added
- That custom normal clap is pretty loud. I suggest you make it a bit quieter. Lower the volume.......
White:
00:51:248 (3) - One grid left? Ok
02:22:676 (1) - New Combo, to stay consistent. Ok
02:34:105 (5) - One grid up? So it's stacked with the previous (1). No
03:43:085 (4) - One grid right? No
Brikel's Gray:
00:37:370 (4) - New combo? Ok
00:56:962 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make it in the timeline like this No
that sounds better IMO
01:17:370 (2) - Extend this by one 1/4 tick.Ok
01:26:349 (6) - New combo? Ok
01:30:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Where are the new combos? I suggest on at (6), (14) and (19). Ok
02:22:880 (3) - One 1/4 tick later and extend by one 1/4 tick. Ok
Black:
00:52:472 (2,3,4) - Very confusing. the distance between (2), (3) and (3), (4) is the same but the time distance between (2), (3) is shorter than (3), (4). Please respace that. Ok
02:10:840 (2,3,4) - Confusing again. Ok
Er... hum, there IS a maximum size for storyboard elemets and that size is 800x600. Resize said picture and full submit. If you refuse to fix an unrankable thing we are allowed to nuke the map, are you aware of this ?Leorda wrote:
Rukarioman wrote:
General:
- "SAKURA BIG.png" is 1000x800 big. Maximum would be 800 x 600. Please resize this and full submit. No, is there any issue about SB dimensions in ranking guideline? If there it no, why you point it out? I saw the map is over 800 x 600 >.>
sonanoka
Topic Starter
Oh dear, sorry about that, I resize it. Please don't nuke itOdaril wrote:
Er... hum, there IS a maximum size for storyboard elemets and that size is 800x600. Resize said picture and full submit. If you refuse to fix an unrankable thing we are allowed to nuke the map, are you aware of this ?
because last night I get pissed......lolno
18:09 <ppy> : Jarby: i'd allow 1 extra 1024x image
18:09 <ppy> : on top of the map's background
18:09 <ppy> : any more would just scream for abuse
18:09 <ppy> : Jarby: i'd allow 1 extra 1024x image
18:09 <ppy> : on top of the map's background
18:09 <ppy> : any more would just scream for abuse
Topic Starter
17:21 <Jarby> : We're allowed to use bigger images than 800 x 600 in storyboards!Jarby wrote:
lolno
18:09 <ppy> : Jarby: i'd allow 1 extra 1024x image
18:09 <ppy> : on top of the map's background
18:09 <ppy> : any more would just scream for abuse
time to go back to 1000 x 800 for SAKURA BIG.png, yay!
Just star.I can find nothing,really.
By the way,thanks for your long mod.That's very helpful.
By the way,thanks for your long mod.That's very helpful.
Topic Starter
that's ok for can't find anything, but thx for starringJoshua Lost wrote:
Just star.I can find nothing,really.
By the way,thanks for your long mod.That's very helpful.
Storyboard at 03:01:044 seems slightly early compared to the notes? Might just be me
Don't really like 20 second+ break but it has sb so ok..
White:
00:56:962 (1,4) - align?
02:00:636 (2,3,4) - slight spacing error
03:33:697 (3) - random whistle by itself?
Brikel's Gray:
02:22:676 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:574 (6,1,2,3,4) - looks strange with stacking at the moment, try raising stacking leniency and trying in test
Black:
00:53:085 (4,1) - space further apart
02:08:798 (1,2) - spacing?
Nicely done~
Star'ed
Don't really like 20 second+ break but it has sb so ok..
White:
00:56:962 (1,4) - align?
02:00:636 (2,3,4) - slight spacing error
03:33:697 (3) - random whistle by itself?
Brikel's Gray:
02:22:676 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:574 (6,1,2,3,4) - looks strange with stacking at the moment, try raising stacking leniency and trying in test
Black:
00:53:085 (4,1) - space further apart
02:08:798 (1,2) - spacing?
Nicely done~
Star'ed
Topic Starter
thx, bubble pleaseeeeeeJames2250 wrote:
Storyboard at 03:01:044 seems slightly early compared to the notes? Might just be me Yes
Don't really like 20 second+ break but it has sb so ok..
White:
00:56:962 (1,4) - align? OK
02:00:636 (2,3,4) - slight spacing error OK
03:33:697 (3) - random whistle by itself? Nope, I add it because there is some sound effect
Brikel's Gray:
02:22:676 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:574 (6,1,2,3,4) - looks strange with stacking at the moment, try raising stacking leniency and trying in test
Black:
00:53:085 (4,1) - space further apart OK
02:08:798 (1,2) - spacing? OK
Nicely done~
Star'ed
0.0
Hey...Can you wait my Taiko diff?
If not...I'll stop.
anyway..star first
Hey...Can you wait my Taiko diff?
If not...I'll stop.
anyway..star first
Topic Starter
Ok, i'll waitkanpakyin wrote:
0.0
Hey...Can you wait my Taiko diff?
If not...I'll stop.
anyway..star first
Please make it until you finish
Hi
White:
Although, it has a few spacing errors, but its a minor issue. 
Good luck getting this ranked~
Star~
White:
- 01:09:615 (5)-Move one grid down?
- 01:12:880 (4)-Move one grid right?
- 01:14:921 (1)-Fix the spacing on this?
- 02:00:635 (2)-Fix the spacing on this. Its best to have this go one grid up.
- 02:03:084 (1)-Fix the spacing on this.
- 02:34:921 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
- 02:43:084 (4)-Fix the spacing on this. Move one grid left
- 03:49:207 (1)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider?
- 00:27:574 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
- 00:36:145 (2)-Add a clap.
- 00:52:064 (5, 6)-On slider 5, Add finishes on both the beginning and the end. On slider 6, Add a finish on the end.
- 01:00:431 (2)-Add a clap on the end of that slider.
- 01:01:860 (6)-Put a new combo here?
- 01:03:492 (1)-Add a clap on the end of that slider?
- 01:05:125 (1)-Remove that finish. In my opinion, I don't think it sounds right putting a finish there...
- 01:06:758 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
- 01:18:186 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 01:05:125.
- 01:19:819 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
- 01:32:472 (5)-Add a finish?
- 01:32:880 (1)-^
- 01:37:166 (9)-Put a new combo?
- 01:41:860 (5, 7)-On slider 5, Add a finish on the end. And on 7, Add a finish.
- 02:09:207 (7)-Put a new combo here?
- 02:10:431 (4 , 5, 6)-Add finishes on the beginning of those sliders.
- 02:12:064 (1)-Add a finish.
- 02:22:676 (2, 3)-Add some finishes please.
- 02:23:492 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 01:05:125.
- 02:25:125 (1)-Add a finish.
- 02:29:411 (7)-Put a new combo here?
- 02:37:778 (4)-Add a finish.
- 02:38:186 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
- 03:05:941-Add a timing point (Green line) and set it to Soft for the Sample Set. I think it would be better like that.
- 03:28:798 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 01:05:125.
- 03:32:064 (1)-Add a finish.
- 03:36:554 (2)-Add a clap.
- 03:43:084 (1)-Add a clap on the beginning of that slider?
- 03:44:717 (5)-Add a finish.
- 03:45:125 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
- 03:49:615 (2)-Add a clap.
- 03:54:921 (8)-Put a new combo here??
- 01:31:043 (2)-Add a finish on the end of that slider?
- 02:29:615 (2, 3)-Hm.. Try and stack these more neatly on the end of that previous slider.
Although, it has a few spacing errors, but its a minor issue. Good luck getting this ranked~
Star~
Topic Starter
Fixed some mods, thx Roddie~
2 fix
[attachment=0:49ceb]ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Brikel's Gray].osu[/attachment:49ceb]
[attachment=0:49ceb]ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Brikel's Gray].osu[/attachment:49ceb]
Sorry for long delay >A<
Here is my Taiko diff and mod
=============================
Blue=Suggestion only
Red=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in Bold.You must fix this
[General]
Consider use sliderslide.wav
White
00:35:329(4)-Uneven spacing try to close the grid
01:12:472(3)-1 grid left
02:00:635(2~6)1 grid right..
02:13:696(2)-Feel weird of this rhythm
02:28:39(1~4)-uneven spacing
02:43:084(4)-Don't like this slider too munch..However it is Fine :/
[Brikel's Gray]
00:32:472(1)-Remove New combo
00:54:921(x)add a note here?or add 1 reverse at (2)
01:11:043(4)-Don't like this slider too much..But it is OK
01:13:228(1.2)Slider(1) end of 01:14:105 and Delete(2)
01:38:594(4)-1 grid right
02:48:798(9)-Weird rhythm
03:55:737(3)-^
[Black]
01:09:207(x)-add a note here
01:29:615(1.2)-Don't like this slider too much.But it is OK
02:02:268(x)-add a note here
02:03:288(6)-Make players confused
02:45:329(3)-make it more beautiful
Star opps..already star
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Kanpakyin's Taik-Oni].osu
Here is my Taiko diff and mod
=============================
Blue=Suggestion only
Red=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in Bold.You must fix this
[General]
Consider use sliderslide.wav
White
00:35:329(4)-Uneven spacing try to close the grid
01:12:472(3)-1 grid left
02:00:635(2~6)1 grid right..
02:13:696(2)-Feel weird of this rhythm
02:28:39(1~4)-uneven spacing
02:43:084(4)-Don't like this slider too munch..However it is Fine :/
[Brikel's Gray]
00:32:472(1)-Remove New combo
00:54:921(x)add a note here?or add 1 reverse at (2)
01:11:043(4)-Don't like this slider too much..But it is OK
01:13:228(1.2)Slider(1) end of 01:14:105 and Delete(2)
01:38:594(4)-1 grid right
02:48:798(9)-Weird rhythm
03:55:737(3)-^
[Black]
01:09:207(x)-add a note here
01:29:615(1.2)-Don't like this slider too much.But it is OK
02:02:268(x)-add a note here
02:03:288(6)-Make players confused
02:45:329(3)-make it more beautiful
Star opps..already star
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Kanpakyin's Taik-Oni].osu
fix 3
[attachment=0:3809d]ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Brikel's Gray].osu[/attachment:3809d]
Sorry leorda ;_;
I don't see the new post lol
[attachment=0:3809d]ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Brikel's Gray].osu[/attachment:3809d]
Sorry leorda ;_;
I don't see the new post lol
Mod request via queue
Mod for every diff except Taiko.
[General]
-> Switch SB at line 94 and line 77's timing? (The second SAKURA BIG.png with the first Sakura.png in the notepad)
[White]
01:00:228 (1,2,3,4,1) - Like this maybe?
01:23:901 (1) - Flip vertical and place it back where it was before (you might want to make the curve better though)
01:25:534 (3) - Try one grid right to beautify the map
01:29:615 (1) - Because this note is placed horizontally beside the previous note, I prefer a slider wave here.
02:07:166 (1,2,1,2,3) - You can always create something like this xD
02:47:983 (8) - Make it more symmetrical?
[Brikel's Gray]
00:28:798 (4) - 2 grids left maybe?
01:26:962 (3) - One grid down?
01:41:860 (5) - Curve this a bit?
[Black]
00:33:289 (3) - Add whistle at start?
00:54:513 (5) - Make it more symmetrical, or encircling (3)?
01:14:921 (1) - Make these sliders' spacing accelerated? Seems fun xD
01:53:289 (3) - Curve it a bit?
02:02:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing to read... I got 3x 50 here, just mashing my zx button because I can't see where's the note to hit.
02:29:615 (2) - Don't stack to (1) and (3), looks ugly in play mode. Place it somewhere else?
02:47:983 (1) - Ugly curve, maybe change it into something like this?
Place it in the center, use those x-axis and y-axis grids to guide you, and place it where it used to be. (Slider wave also works well here)
Nice map, star!
Mod for every diff except Taiko.
[General]
-> Switch SB at line 94 and line 77's timing? (The second SAKURA BIG.png with the first Sakura.png in the notepad)
[White]
01:00:228 (1,2,3,4,1) - Like this maybe?
01:23:901 (1) - Flip vertical and place it back where it was before (you might want to make the curve better though)
01:25:534 (3) - Try one grid right to beautify the map
01:29:615 (1) - Because this note is placed horizontally beside the previous note, I prefer a slider wave here.
02:07:166 (1,2,1,2,3) - You can always create something like this xD
02:47:983 (8) - Make it more symmetrical?
[Brikel's Gray]
00:28:798 (4) - 2 grids left maybe?
01:26:962 (3) - One grid down?
01:41:860 (5) - Curve this a bit?
[Black]
00:33:289 (3) - Add whistle at start?
00:54:513 (5) - Make it more symmetrical, or encircling (3)?
01:14:921 (1) - Make these sliders' spacing accelerated? Seems fun xD
01:53:289 (3) - Curve it a bit?
02:02:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing to read... I got 3x 50 here, just mashing my zx button because I can't see where's the note to hit.
02:29:615 (2) - Don't stack to (1) and (3), looks ugly in play mode. Place it somewhere else?
02:47:983 (1) - Ugly curve, maybe change it into something like this?
Place it in the center, use those x-axis and y-axis grids to guide you, and place it where it used to be. (Slider wave also works well here)
Nice map, star!
fix 4
[attachment=0:26fc6]ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Brikel's Gray].osu[/attachment:26fc6]
[attachment=0:26fc6]ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Brikel's Gray].osu[/attachment:26fc6]
Storyboard
03:05:941 - 3:28:798 - The lyrics don't look good in this part. I suggest re-timing it so that only 2 lines of lyrics are visible at top and bottom. If you want all 4 lines visible then you should make it so that the 2nd and 4th lines are horizontally written like in traditional Japanese.
White
02:54:512 (1,1,1) - The feathers explode too soon in this part. 2,3,4 are fine I guess because the notes are stacked. Re-adjust the timing?
Brikel's Gray
02:22:982 (3) - add Finish at the beginning of the slider too
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The timing in this difficulty is better than Black but it's still off to me. The feathers explode too soon. Re-adjust the timing?
Black
00:58:391 (6) - I think it's better if this is stacked with (5)
01:17:370 (2,3,4) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
01:17:370 (2)
01:17:642 (3)
01:17:914 (4)
01:45:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit?
02:22:677 (1,2,3) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
02:22:677 (1)
02:22:948 (2)
02:23:220 (3)
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The SB part in this section is mis-timed I think. The feathers explode too soon. Maybe re-adjust the timing?
03:05:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit? The drum rolls in the long sliders in this section are too loud.
03:19:819 (3) - nazi mod: 1 grid down
STAR ★
03:05:941 - 3:28:798 - The lyrics don't look good in this part. I suggest re-timing it so that only 2 lines of lyrics are visible at top and bottom. If you want all 4 lines visible then you should make it so that the 2nd and 4th lines are horizontally written like in traditional Japanese.
White
02:54:512 (1,1,1) - The feathers explode too soon in this part. 2,3,4 are fine I guess because the notes are stacked. Re-adjust the timing?
Brikel's Gray
02:22:982 (3) - add Finish at the beginning of the slider too
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The timing in this difficulty is better than Black but it's still off to me. The feathers explode too soon. Re-adjust the timing?
Black
00:58:391 (6) - I think it's better if this is stacked with (5)
01:17:370 (2,3,4) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
01:17:370 (2)
01:17:642 (3)
01:17:914 (4)
01:45:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit?
02:22:677 (1,2,3) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
02:22:677 (1)
02:22:948 (2)
02:23:220 (3)
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The SB part in this section is mis-timed I think. The feathers explode too soon. Maybe re-adjust the timing?
03:05:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit? The drum rolls in the long sliders in this section are too loud.
03:19:819 (3) - nazi mod: 1 grid down
STAR ★
Topic Starter
few are fix, thxtwistedice wrote:
Storyboard
03:05:941 - 3:28:798 - The lyrics don't look good in this part. I suggest re-timing it so that only 2 lines of lyrics are visible at top and bottom. If you want all 4 lines visible then you should make it so that the 2nd and 4th lines are horizontally written like in traditional Japanese.
White
02:54:512 (1,1,1) - The feathers explode too soon in this part. 2,3,4 are fine I guess because the notes are stacked. Re-adjust the timing?
Brikel's Gray
02:22:982 (3) - add Finish at the beginning of the slider too
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The timing in this difficulty is better than Black but it's still off to me. The feathers explode too soon. Re-adjust the timing?
Black
00:58:391 (6) - I think it's better if this is stacked with (5)
01:17:370 (2,3,4) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
01:17:370 (2)
01:17:642 (3)
01:17:914 (4)
01:45:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit?
02:22:677 (1,2,3) - this part is in 1/3 so change the beat snap divisor and adjust to these times:
02:22:677 (1)
02:22:948 (2)
02:23:220 (3)
02:54:513 (1,1,1,2,3,4) - The SB part in this section is mis-timed I think. The feathers explode too soon. Maybe re-adjust the timing?
03:05:940 - The volume is at max in this timing section. Lower the volume a bit? The drum rolls in the long sliders in this section are too loud.
03:19:819 (3) - nazi mod: 1 grid down
STAR ★
[general]
your sliders aren't perfect. This is not something you need to fix, but if you do, it's polish, and proves you want to make the best possible beatmap you can. Use grid 1 for the sliders' nodes if it won't work on grid 2. Your spacing is also off at times: like at 02:00:635 (2) - on white http://puu.sh/WIs This is not important either, but it's something to do if you feel like it.
[storyboard]
I applaud you for figuring out the storyboard without editing the osb, but right now it's really jumbled. Your scales are all to different sizes, and it's confusing for me to look at, but right at the start of the song, you hit 5.0 SB load, which might be rankable, but certainly there's something you can do to fix it, right? Disabling countdown should do it, but I think if you clean up blur.png and some of the other things, you'll fix it all:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0
those 2 lines do virtually nothing except add 1.0 to the SB load. How can you tell the difference between 0 and 0.0064 opacity?
If you round all those decimals to the nearest tenths place or so, I think you'll find the SB looks the same, the osb is easier to read, and you can notice stuff that you don't need (ie the lines above would be fading from 0 to 0, so you can just delete them).
[white]
03:27:166 - timing section here sounds bad, just delete, the spinner gets louder naturally.
03:28:798 - ^
[gray]
03:39:207 - felt weird, see below
03:39:615 (4,5,6) - perhaps its just me, but I hate offbeat sliders. It fits, but I missed it the first try, since I didn't know what you were mapping. I think if you move this later, like the very last section: 03:51:656 (1) people like me wouldn't miss it, since you'll be used to the rhythm.
[black]
4 minute song and 1 break at 3 minutes in. I would vote down for that once it's ranked.
01:17:642 (3) - should probably be on the blue tick
01:25:738 (5) - I miss this every time, so I would like a .75 slider or something instead, but w/e.
both of those repeat when the song repeats
your sliders aren't perfect. This is not something you need to fix, but if you do, it's polish, and proves you want to make the best possible beatmap you can. Use grid 1 for the sliders' nodes if it won't work on grid 2. Your spacing is also off at times: like at 02:00:635 (2) - on white http://puu.sh/WIs This is not important either, but it's something to do if you feel like it.
[storyboard]
I applaud you for figuring out the storyboard without editing the osb, but right now it's really jumbled. Your scales are all to different sizes, and it's confusing for me to look at, but right at the start of the song, you hit 5.0 SB load, which might be rankable, but certainly there's something you can do to fix it, right? Disabling countdown should do it, but I think if you clean up blur.png and some of the other things, you'll fix it all:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0
those 2 lines do virtually nothing except add 1.0 to the SB load. How can you tell the difference between 0 and 0.0064 opacity?
If you round all those decimals to the nearest tenths place or so, I think you'll find the SB looks the same, the osb is easier to read, and you can notice stuff that you don't need (ie the lines above would be fading from 0 to 0, so you can just delete them).
[white]
03:27:166 - timing section here sounds bad, just delete, the spinner gets louder naturally.
03:28:798 - ^
[gray]
03:39:207 - felt weird, see below
03:39:615 (4,5,6) - perhaps its just me, but I hate offbeat sliders. It fits, but I missed it the first try, since I didn't know what you were mapping. I think if you move this later, like the very last section: 03:51:656 (1) people like me wouldn't miss it, since you'll be used to the rhythm.
[black]
4 minute song and 1 break at 3 minutes in. I would vote down for that once it's ranked.
01:17:642 (3) - should probably be on the blue tick
01:25:738 (5) - I miss this every time, so I would like a .75 slider or something instead, but w/e.
both of those repeat when the song repeats
[White]
01.14.105 (2) Make this symmetrical
01.26.349 (1,2) ^
02.03.900 (2,3) ^
02.40.227 (5) ^
02.47.982 (8) Move the second waypoint two grids to the right
03.35.329 (1,2) Woah, what's with the W-shaped points? They don't affect the slider in play mode, but these look untidy in the editor. Other modders might want you to clean these up.
[Brikel's Gray]
01.36.145 (8,1) Suggestion- One grid left
01.38.186 (3,4) Suggestion- One grid left, after arranging the one above.
[Black]
00.32.472 (1) Move second waypoint one grid down
00.44.309 (2) Symmetry
00.47.574 (2) ^
00.59.411 (3,4) Why not make the distance between (2) and (3) the same as between (1) and (2)?
01.10.839 (3) Symmetry
02.42.676 (6,7,8,9,10) Suggestion- Make this the same distance from (4,5) as with (2,3) and (4,5)
02.45.329 (3) Symmetry
02.47.982 (1) ^
03.45.533 (2) Copy (1) and flip 180 degrees
Other than the minor slider issues, the map is generally fine, quite creative, and I love your storyboard effects
Star.
01.14.105 (2) Make this symmetrical
01.26.349 (1,2) ^
02.03.900 (2,3) ^
02.40.227 (5) ^
02.47.982 (8) Move the second waypoint two grids to the right
03.35.329 (1,2) Woah, what's with the W-shaped points? They don't affect the slider in play mode, but these look untidy in the editor. Other modders might want you to clean these up.
[Brikel's Gray]
01.36.145 (8,1) Suggestion- One grid left
01.38.186 (3,4) Suggestion- One grid left, after arranging the one above.
[Black]
00.32.472 (1) Move second waypoint one grid down
00.44.309 (2) Symmetry
00.47.574 (2) ^
00.59.411 (3,4) Why not make the distance between (2) and (3) the same as between (1) and (2)?
01.10.839 (3) Symmetry
02.42.676 (6,7,8,9,10) Suggestion- Make this the same distance from (4,5) as with (2,3) and (4,5)
02.45.329 (3) Symmetry
02.47.982 (1) ^
03.45.533 (2) Copy (1) and flip 180 degrees
Other than the minor slider issues, the map is generally fine, quite creative, and I love your storyboard effects
Star.
Topic Starter
Some fixed, thx Aquabluu and Kevincela
Heya
Just a random mod~
Don't forget that everything are just suggestions
[General]
Add "kanpakyin" in the tags for Brikel's Gray <= Everything are just suggestion, but NOT this xD
[Black]
02:06:758 (4) - What about adding a circle with a clap here ? (it should be at the same place than (1), between the two sliders)
[White]
01:17:369 (1) - No new combo
02:22:676 (1) - ^
03:05:941 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier or you'll get a Normal-Hit (Well, I've got a Normal-Hit instead of a Soft-Hit, I dunno if I'm the only one with that problem...)
03:32:064 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier (same problem :/)
03:58:186 - ^
[Brikel's Gray]
00:42:880 (4) - Delete that circle
00:43:084 (4) - Move that slider 1/2 earlier and extend 1/2
(You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59850 )
00:50:431 (7) - This finish sounds a bit weird here
01:03:492 (1) - Add a Clap at the end of this slider
Good job !
~Starz'd !
Just a random mod~
Don't forget that everything are just suggestions
[General]
Add "kanpakyin" in the tags for Brikel's Gray <= Everything are just suggestion, but NOT this xD
[Black]
02:06:758 (4) - What about adding a circle with a clap here ? (it should be at the same place than (1), between the two sliders)
[White]
01:17:369 (1) - No new combo
02:22:676 (1) - ^
03:05:941 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier or you'll get a Normal-Hit (Well, I've got a Normal-Hit instead of a Soft-Hit, I dunno if I'm the only one with that problem...)
03:32:064 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier (same problem :/)
03:58:186 - ^
[Brikel's Gray]
00:42:880 (4) - Delete that circle
00:43:084 (4) - Move that slider 1/2 earlier and extend 1/2
(You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59850 )
00:50:431 (7) - This finish sounds a bit weird here
01:03:492 (1) - Add a Clap at the end of this slider
Good job !
~Starz'd !
Topic Starter
Thank youFight69 wrote:
Heya
Just a random mod~
Don't forget that everything are just suggestions
[General]
Add "kanpakyin" in the tags for Brikel's Gray <= Everything are just suggestion, but NOT this xD Opss, I forgot
[Black]
02:06:758 (4) - What about adding a circle with a clap here ? (it should be at the same place than (1), between the two sliders) OK
[White]
01:17:369 (1) - No new combo Removed
02:22:676 (1) - ^ Removed
03:05:941 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier or you'll get a Normal-Hit (Well, I've got a Normal-Hit instead of a Soft-Hit, I dunno if I'm the only one with that problem...) Changed
03:32:064 - Move that inherited timing section 20 ms earlier (same problem :/) Changed
03:58:186 - ^ Changed
[Brikel's Gray]
00:42:880 (4) - Delete that circle deleted
00:43:084 (4) - Move that slider 1/2 earlier and extend 1/2 Changed
(You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59850 )
00:50:431 (7) - This finish sounds a bit weird here No, since it's place on heavybeat (high white line)
01:03:492 (1) - Add a Clap at the end of this slider Added
Good job !
~Starz'd !
Here's crybaby's modding ;_;
[White]
:3
[Brikel's Gray]
:3
[Black]
01:25:126 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down?
01:25:330 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right?
03:37:370 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 2 grid down to make symmetric with (1)?
[Kanpa's Cadetaiko]
01:39:003 (115) - don?
02:54:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Delete SB sprites related with these notes
Okay, not much to suggest orz
Good luck :3
[White]
:3
[Brikel's Gray]
:3
[Black]
01:25:126 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down?
01:25:330 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right?
03:37:370 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 2 grid down to make symmetric with (1)?
[Kanpa's Cadetaiko]
01:39:003 (115) - don?
02:54:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Delete SB sprites related with these notes
Okay, not much to suggest orz
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
give me bubble :3arien666 wrote:
Here's crybaby's modding ;_;
[White]
:3 baka
[Brikel's Gray]
:3 baka
[Black]
01:25:126 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid down? OK
01:25:330 (4) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid right? OK
03:37:370 (3) - [Nazi] How about move 2 grid down to make symmetric with (1)? OK
[Kanpa's Cadetaiko]
01:39:003 (115) - don? OK
02:54:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Delete SB sprites related with these notes OK
Okay, not much to suggest orz
Good luck :3
Before bubble..
I consistent something..
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Kanpa's Cadetaiko].osu
I consistent something..
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Kuro (Leorda) [Kanpa's Cadetaiko].osu
Topic Starter
updated.....kanpakyin wrote:
Before bubble..
I consistent something..
Bubble pleaseeeeeee
Here I go! (Warning! I'm a noob when it comes to modding Insanes so... keep that in mind.)
White
01:36:145 (1,2) – You might want to place a clap on the ends of these sliders
02:03:084 (1) – You might want to place a clap here to match with 01:59:818 (1)
03:39:819 (x) - You might want to place a beat here. You might also want to put a beat at 03:41:451, 03:45:533, 03:47:166, 03:47:166, 03:48:798, and 03:52:064. The reason I’m suggesting all of these beats is that I really liked how you made the previous kiai time feel more involved than the rest of the song. You kept things moving and it felt really awesome.
Brikel’s Gray
02:18:186 (7) – This is a toughie. This note is REALLY low. Not off the screen low, but low enough that I think it might be a problem.
02:31:656 (1) – This slider looks kind of silly as is. You could go in grid size 4 and point it at (2) or you could shift every past this beat left one space(in grid 3).
03:04:309 (1) – You might want to start this spinner at 03:03:900 instead.
Black
00:32:472 (1,2,3,4) – Awesome Pattern! ^_^
01:16:146 (5,1) – It’s the return of the low flying notes!
01:17:370 (2,3,4) – LOL, they’re stuck in the ceiling. (Also, I’d suggest not breaking your spacing here, since the entire map up to this point has been spaced properly.)
01:24:717 (1,2,3,4,5) – Notice how I’m fine with this, while I complained about that.^
02:34:105 (3) –Another low flier.
02:45:330 (3) – This slider is kind of… odd.
02:47:983 (1) – This slider isn’t quite perfect. Notice that the end point is one space lower than the starting point.
03:04:309 (1) – Like with Brikel’s Gray, you might want to start this spinner at 03:03:900 instead.
03:48:391 (1,2) – It’s kind of strange how you use the same two sliders twice.
White
01:36:145 (1,2) – You might want to place a clap on the ends of these sliders
02:03:084 (1) – You might want to place a clap here to match with 01:59:818 (1)
03:39:819 (x) - You might want to place a beat here. You might also want to put a beat at 03:41:451, 03:45:533, 03:47:166, 03:47:166, 03:48:798, and 03:52:064. The reason I’m suggesting all of these beats is that I really liked how you made the previous kiai time feel more involved than the rest of the song. You kept things moving and it felt really awesome.
Brikel’s Gray
02:18:186 (7) – This is a toughie. This note is REALLY low. Not off the screen low, but low enough that I think it might be a problem.
02:31:656 (1) – This slider looks kind of silly as is. You could go in grid size 4 and point it at (2) or you could shift every past this beat left one space(in grid 3).
03:04:309 (1) – You might want to start this spinner at 03:03:900 instead.
Black
00:32:472 (1,2,3,4) – Awesome Pattern! ^_^
01:16:146 (5,1) – It’s the return of the low flying notes!
01:17:370 (2,3,4) – LOL, they’re stuck in the ceiling. (Also, I’d suggest not breaking your spacing here, since the entire map up to this point has been spaced properly.)
01:24:717 (1,2,3,4,5) – Notice how I’m fine with this, while I complained about that.^
02:34:105 (3) –Another low flier.
02:45:330 (3) – This slider is kind of… odd.
02:47:983 (1) – This slider isn’t quite perfect. Notice that the end point is one space lower than the starting point.
03:04:309 (1) – Like with Brikel’s Gray, you might want to start this spinner at 03:03:900 instead.
03:48:391 (1,2) – It’s kind of strange how you use the same two sliders twice.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding~
[General]
0,4M-3M-12M doesnt look like a nice diff/score spread to me.
[Storyboard]
SAKURA.png has unnecessary transparencies, look http://puu.sh/15DP
MINI SNOW.png also has unnecessary transparencies on top and left.
[Black]
I see that your slider art is improve so i'll help you a lil bit.
01:10:840 (3) - If you mod the 2nd slider point a bit more down and to the left and the last waypoint a few grids down, you'll end up covering the outside of the previous slider more perfectly like this http://puu.sh/15Eb disable grid snap if you want it to be perfect, it's still good enough so i dont mind if you dont change.
01:25:738 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern would look better in a diamond shape but that's me.
03:25:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont mind the streams, but cant really tell the jumps, sorry, maybe remove the last note of each 1/2 stream so it's more readable?.
03:37:983 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
[Brikel's Gray]
03:27:370 - This break is way too long.
[Overall]
I really like how you're improving your slider art and your mapping, good job, you can call me back for a recheck.
0,4M-3M-12M doesnt look like a nice diff/score spread to me.
[Storyboard]
SAKURA.png has unnecessary transparencies, look http://puu.sh/15DP
MINI SNOW.png also has unnecessary transparencies on top and left.
[Black]
I see that your slider art is improve so i'll help you a lil bit.
01:10:840 (3) - If you mod the 2nd slider point a bit more down and to the left and the last waypoint a few grids down, you'll end up covering the outside of the previous slider more perfectly like this http://puu.sh/15Eb disable grid snap if you want it to be perfect, it's still good enough so i dont mind if you dont change.
01:25:738 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern would look better in a diamond shape but that's me.
03:25:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont mind the streams, but cant really tell the jumps, sorry, maybe remove the last note of each 1/2 stream so it's more readable?.
03:37:983 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
[Brikel's Gray]
03:27:370 - This break is way too long.
[Overall]
I really like how you're improving your slider art and your mapping, good job, you can call me back for a recheck.
Topic Starter
Sakura Hana wrote:
[General]
0,4M-3M-12M doesnt look like a nice diff/score spread to me. And that's why I feel frustrating to make a Normal or Hard diff....
[Storyboard]
SAKURA.png has unnecessary transparencies, look http://puu.sh/15DP Oh shit, I forgot to remove this, since it's unused
MINI SNOW.png also has unnecessary transparencies on top and left. Okie
[Black] All fixed! except 03:01:044 (1,2,3,4)
I see that your slider art is improve so i'll help you a lil bit.
01:10:840 (3) - If you mod the 2nd slider point a bit more down and to the left and the last waypoint a few grids down, you'll end up covering the outside of the previous slider more perfectly like this http://puu.sh/15Eb disable grid snap if you want it to be perfect, it's still good enough so i dont mind if you dont change.
01:25:738 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
03:01:044 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern would look better in a diamond shape but that's me.
03:25:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Dont mind the streams, but cant really tell the jumps, sorry, maybe remove the last note of each 1/2 stream so it's more readable?.
03:37:983 (5) - New combo to hint different timing.
[Brikel's Gray]
03:27:370 - This break is way too long. Fill with spinner
[Overall]
I really like how you're improving your slider art and your mapping, good job, you can call me back for a recheck. All hail my old mapping style......
I star - Saku modded - ???
Have a cookie :3
/me runs ;_;
Have a cookie :3
/me runs ;_;
Topic Starter
thx for your cookie, I eat and it's sweet!arien666 wrote:
I star - Saku modded - ???
Have a cookie :3
/me runs ;_;
Hai old bubble~
~General~
Storyboard:
- Check your .osb and delete these 2 lines inside BLUR, they're making the load go up to 3,27x when nothing is happening in the background:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0
~White~
02:25:533 (1) - Knowing this is the easiest difficulty, I'd personally remove this note to leave some recovery time to the newbies that'll play this. You did it on the other choruses so I don't think you'll mind to do it xP
~Brikel's Gray~
02:20:227 (4,7) - Stack them properly?
~Black~
02:22:948 (2) - Snap to 1/4
02:29:615 (2,3) - This stack looks weird in play mode ;~; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85408
Great map overall
*star*
~General~
Storyboard:
- Check your .osb and delete these 2 lines inside BLUR, they're making the load go up to 3,27x when nothing is happening in the background:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0
~White~
02:25:533 (1) - Knowing this is the easiest difficulty, I'd personally remove this note to leave some recovery time to the newbies that'll play this. You did it on the other choruses so I don't think you'll mind to do it xP
~Brikel's Gray~
02:20:227 (4,7) - Stack them properly?
~Black~
02:22:948 (2) - Snap to 1/4
02:29:615 (2,3) - This stack looks weird in play mode ;~; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85408
Great map overall
*star*
Topic Starter
Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hai old bubble~
~General~
Storyboard:
- Check your .osb and delete these 2 lines inside BLUR, they're making the load go up to 3,27x when nothing is happening in the background:
F,0,15738,19411,0,0.006400004
F,0,19411,53493,0.006400004,0
~White~
02:25:533 (1) - Knowing this is the easiest difficulty, I'd personally remove this note to leave some recovery time to the newbies that'll play this. You did it on the other choruses so I don't think you'll mind to do it xP
~Brikel's Gray~
02:20:227 (4,7) - Stack them properly? NO
~Black~
02:22:948 (2) - Snap to 1/4
02:29:615 (2,3) - This stack looks weird in play mode ;~; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/85408
Great map overall
*star*
Everything is fine after the changes and, since I think these fixes are pretty minor, let's give this a happy ending~
RANKED!!
RANKED!!
Topic Starter
yay
good job , abg leo
Topic Starter
you're so late..... thxHeatKai wrote:
good job , abg leo
I remember this thread change to black in the pending thread because no one posted thus become easier to spotted
and it's finally ranked
congratz~ (biarpun telat xD)
and it's finally ranked
congratz~ (biarpun telat xD)
Topic Starter
thanksSallad4ever wrote:
I remember this thread change to black in the pending thread because no one posted thus become easier to spotted
and it's finally ranked
congratz~ (biarpun telat xD)
Taiko oni 9~10*ac17407 wrote:
taiko map sucks
Topic Starter
what? you should play the taiko map until you can FC'ed... Learn to pratice taiko map before complaining thisac17407 wrote:
taiko map sucks
Yesyes.Leorda wrote:
what? you should play the taiko map until you can FC'ed... Learn to pratice taiko map before complaining thisac17407 wrote:
taiko map sucks
How come a noob like me can even pass this insane map
Topic Starter
because you always practiceac17407 wrote:
Yesyes.
How come a noob like me can even pass this insane map