1. Hard (4.81 stars, 447 notes)
2. Jumping (4.97 stars, 565 notes)
3. Normal (2.63 stars, 208 notes)

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI
All suggestions

[Normal]
00:40:452 (1,2) - use custom hitsound on sliders like this two can make the claps coherent,but whistle is also good
02:08:214 (1) - ^
02:52:990 (1) - ^
ok , changed

[Hard]
Fine

[Jumping]
Also fine...orz

Good map that I can't find anything
Just star

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.

[General]
Isn't your custom hitsounds normal-hitclap.wav & normal-hitfinish.wav exactly the same thing from the template skin...? If so you should remove them since they don't do anything...

[Normal]
You are using Normal:C1 in this diff where the default Normal is used in other diffs... Also Normal:C1 sounds just the same as the default Normal to me as stated in [General]..... ok removed

[Jumping]
Nice natural-feeling jumps~
00:54:781 (1) - what about stacking this under 00:54:109 (6) ..? (maybe also hide the end under 00:54:333 (7,8)) It makes the 4 sliders look better imo.. If you do so please also remake 00:55:229 (2) to fix symmetry. changed
00:58:139 (10) - add whistle at beginning ok
01:36:647 (5) - move to 01:36:758 and stack on 01:36:870 (6) ? nah
02:25:900 (10) - add whistle at beginning ok

[Hard]
..maybe also AR8? no
00:11:572 (1,2,3,4) - I think the way those are arranged in [Jumping] is actually easier than this... Spread it along the X-axis?hmm, no
01:07:318 (1) - x 197 y 216 ok
01:36:647 (5) - move to 01:36:758 and stack on 01:36:870 (6) ? nah
others fine for me

Really nice mapset~ /me stars

Kecco wrote:

Ohayo~ >w<

•Offset•
Offset - 4ms :3 fixed

•Jumping•
00:43:139 (5) - New combo?
02:10:900 (5) - ^
02:41:796 (7) - ^
all no , sorry

Impressive, but I didn't find anything wrong to report D;

Well done

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

ie~!
[Jumping]
02:21:195 (3) - スタックのせいでズレているのが少しだけ気になった。まぁこのままでもおkだとは思う。
実は私も気になっていて言われたら何とかしようって思ってました
Thanks~

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Woah. The Vocals sound like a squeaking door. But it still sounds better than many other Vocaloid songs...
I know...
Erm... I guess someone would kill me for that statement. lol

Hard
00:31:157 (3,4) - stacking error maybe fixed
00:32:948 - add a note? I really feel like hitting a triplet here.ok
00:57:463 (3,4) - hmmm... try to re-arrange them.nah
01:58:919 (3,4) - stacking error maybe fixed
02:02:389 (4) - hmmm... move it a lil' bit to the right.fixed
02:31:941 (2) - ^fixed

Normal
0.80x as base spacing?
C'mon, make it more interesting. Increase it to 1.0x and re-space the map. I think this is fine so I wanna keep
Nice map.

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Hi~banvi

Normal

fine

00 42 575 - N:C2ok
01 38 210 - x368 y336ok
01 38 657 - x288 y320 ok
01 39 105 - x256 y248ok
02 18 956 - finish?nah
02 40 448 - finish?nah

Hard

fine~

Jumping

fine~

imo

02 27 799 - delnah
02 29 590 - ^nah

Good Luck,star

no kdsI want to give kds ;_;

Nivalis wrote:

Hi banvi, finally I have time and motivation to mod a map again~

[Normal]
-> Approach Rate +1? This Normal is quite fast in my opinion ok
00:47:613 (1,2,3,4) - Shape them in an arc? Seems better to meok
02:07:314 (4,1) - Spacing seems too close? idk... Maybe because the previously (3) and (4) are spaced quite furtherhmm,but this is okay i think
02:40:448 (6) - Move inherit section 1/4 earlieroh , this is needless section , removed

[Hard]
00:22:090 (6,7,8) - Just a suggestion, you might try moving these three two grids up though.hmm , no I wanna keep straight
02:17:165 (1,2,3,4) - Create a fan pattern by moving (4) up a bit?ok

[Jumping]
00:52:762 (5,1) - Swap new combo?nah
02:21:643 (1,3) - Not perfectly stacked with 02:21:195 (3) on purpose , cuz this stacks looking very bad. And if decrease stack lenientry , other stacks part may be hard to read.
Beautiful map o.oThanks XD
Star!!

Muffin Turtle wrote:

Fun map However, sometimes it felt like you were switching in between matching the notes with the vocal and matching the notes with the piano in the background... Anyways, I'll give you a star ^^ Oh, one more thing, which is mostly me being picky - match the note colors with the background picture. Put the color wheel (color square?) right next to the picture and get the colors to closely match. The visual appeal of a map is important. If there's a video for the song, put that in too.

Krisom wrote:

Hello there banvi-bro!

General-
· Try offset 1040 ok
· Both Jumping's and Hard's sliders felt liveless, and I don't know if you'll agree but I think they'd sound 100% better with tickrate 2. oh, sure
· If you add an Easy you could make Normal a tad harder, and make the spread nicer overall <3. (Just sayin') I tried. but I can't increase rate more ;_;
· Can I suggest you to use these colors? the ones you have are too bright for the background imo. ok

Colors

Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 248,49,14
Combo3 : 242,214,49
Combo4 : 164,82,0

Jumping-
01:24:090 (4) - Add a whistle to the slider's body, fit's perfectly. yes >w<
01:38:419 (4) - ^ yes >w<
DAMN BANVI, THIS MAP IS AWESOME. And I tend to suck at jumps! Really, if I could hug you I would!
/me hug you

Hard-
01:24:100 (4) - Add a whistle to the slider's body, fit's perfectly. yes >w<
01:38:429 (4) - ^ ^
02:51:861 (4) - ^ ^
03:06:190 (4) - ^ ^
<3

Normal-
00:49:404 (5,1) - Spacing omg. because of my mistake , I removed one silder repeat. fixed
Not much to poke at here.
S-So good ;_;! Keep up the good work and let me know when you want me to recheck!I will ask.