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Collab
- You have 5 unsnapped notes, check AImod (ctrl+alt+A)
00:40:185 - You should have a note here, else it's weird to have nothing here while playing the map
That's all I can find ° w°
Nice map, catch these stars~
- You have 5 unsnapped notes, check AImod (ctrl+alt+A)
00:40:185 - You should have a note here, else it's weird to have nothing here while playing the map
That's all I can find ° w°
Nice map, catch these stars~
sorry for late mod :/
this is longer than my time limit rule, but i still modded cuz i like the song and collab was fun to play.
(shh..)
Collab
00:40:357(5) - very awkwardly placed imo, you should move this note 1/2 beat back. whether or not you implement the anti-spacing is up to you.
00:59:899(9,10,11,12) - possibl make this stack of four into two stacks of two?
01:21:328(x) - add note
01:57:328(x) - add note
01:57:671(x) - ^
02:36:585(2) - such an unexpected sv change. I would rather have a note on each 1/2 beat here (e.g. two notes and a slider, 4 four notes, 2 sliders, or whatever, etc.) instead of 1,2.
02:39:671(2) - ^
02:47:557(2) - this is actually fine imo since i read it perfectly fine lol. If you want to change idc.
02:57:328(3 and 7) - wut... i would follow the vocals, and also, i would really just make these 0.5x as you did with the other ones. they are the same shape and give the impression that they will be the same length even tho they aren't. then you can just adjust notes as u please.
03:12:328(5) - delete note, it just makes it sound weird imo. you can readjust combo 6 if you want.
03:41:042(1) - remove new combo
03:41:385(2) - new combo
04:22:357(5) - new combo
04:22:699(1) - remove combo
04:23:642(x,x) - make a stream by adding a note at 04:23:642 and 04:23:814?
Hard
01:06:928(x) - add note?
01:28:699(x) - new combo
01:28:871(x) - add note?
nice, not much else to say here. Very readable
Awesome beatmap!! :3
Star~~
this is longer than my time limit rule, but i still modded cuz i like the song and collab was fun to play.
(shh..)Collab
00:40:357(5) - very awkwardly placed imo, you should move this note 1/2 beat back. whether or not you implement the anti-spacing is up to you.
00:59:899(9,10,11,12) - possibl make this stack of four into two stacks of two?
01:21:328(x) - add note
01:57:328(x) - add note
01:57:671(x) - ^
02:36:585(2) - such an unexpected sv change. I would rather have a note on each 1/2 beat here (e.g. two notes and a slider, 4 four notes, 2 sliders, or whatever, etc.) instead of 1,2.
02:39:671(2) - ^
02:47:557(2) - this is actually fine imo since i read it perfectly fine lol. If you want to change idc.
02:57:328(3 and 7) - wut... i would follow the vocals, and also, i would really just make these 0.5x as you did with the other ones. they are the same shape and give the impression that they will be the same length even tho they aren't. then you can just adjust notes as u please.
03:12:328(5) - delete note, it just makes it sound weird imo. you can readjust combo 6 if you want.
03:41:042(1) - remove new combo
03:41:385(2) - new combo
04:22:357(5) - new combo
04:22:699(1) - remove combo
04:23:642(x,x) - make a stream by adding a note at 04:23:642 and 04:23:814?
Hard
01:06:928(x) - add note?
01:28:699(x) - new combo
01:28:871(x) - add note?
nice, not much else to say here. Very readable
Awesome beatmap!! :3
Star~~
Topic Starter
Fixed, thank you very much~KuraiPettan wrote:
Collab
- You have 5 unsnapped notes, check AImod (ctrl+alt+A)
00:40:185 - You should have a note here, else it's weird to have nothing here while playing the map
That's all I can find ° w°
Nice map, catch these stars~
And for kudo star *o* Thank you a lot! :>winber1 wrote:
sorry for late mod :/
this is longer than my time limit rule, but i still modded cuz i like the song and collab was fun to play.
Collab
00:40:357(5) - very awkwardly placed imo, you should move this note 1/2 beat back. whether or not you implement the anti-spacing is up to you.
00:59:899(9,10,11,12) - possibl make this stack of four into two stacks of two?
Fixed~
Hard
01:06:928(x) - add note? no
01:28:699(x) - new combo done
01:28:871(x) - add note? nope :c
nice, not much else to say here. Very readable
Awesome beatmap!! :3
Star~~
winber1 wrote:
Collab
01:57:328(x) - add note
01:57:671(x) - ^
I dont wanna change it. But I changed 1:57:842-slider and some hitsounds
Download: Alstroemeria Records - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Yo. Alstroemeria Records is the name of the label, not the artist, so you should probably change it to "Ayakura Mei" OR "Masayoshi Minoshima" OR "Masayoshi Minoshima feat. Ayakura Mei".
03:34:528 that fade to black looks stupid imo.
Reiji:
00:47:899 (3) - hey make it symmetrical pleeeease
Icebeam:
01:42:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - that pattern is just SO GOOD
Chika:
ok
Zlodeuka:
your part is realy overmapped.
I was a bit shocked by your attitude to the mapset. I understand that you dont give a shit about the map, but I bet Reiji and other collab members do. Just in case you change your mind, I'll try to explain what I mean by "overmapped".
Look, I realize that you were probably trying to make the map harder, but this is not a good way to collab. Rhythm > difficulty. Listen to the song carefully, I dont hear any notes you were "following" here.
EG:
02:42:242 (1) - what is this spinner doing here
02:44:899 (2,3,4,1) - why 1/4
02:36:414 (1,2) - why new combo, why slow down
I dont believe you dont hear the rhythm. 02:56:128 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is mapped at least READABLE.
Just wanted to say that you should probably pay more attention on how other parts are mapped, otherwise you might kill the whole collab just because you want your part to be special.
Louis Cyphre:
03:43:785 (7,1) - switch combos please
03:46:871 (5) - remove nc?
03:48:928 (5,1,2,3) - this is really hard to read
04:02:642 (1), 04:04:014 (1), 04:05:385 (1) etc.- no nc please :3
04:12:928 (3) - NC PLEASE!
Crack;
04:30:585 (1) - I really like the clap here but it sounds random. It would have saved the situation, if you've removed clap on 04:33:157 (2) here and added it at the beginning of the next slider, that will make it sound like a pattern.
04:41:557 (1) - random clap here
04:47:214 (1) - well, according to the following combo placement there should be a nc here.
Aleks719:
The music doesnt change at all and you suddenly change the sampleset.
D:
05:20:128 (1,1,1) - dont like ncs here. just personal.
05:31:099 (1,1) - ^
03:34:528 that fade to black looks stupid imo.
Reiji:
00:47:899 (3) - hey make it symmetrical pleeeease
Icebeam:
01:42:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - that pattern is just SO GOOD
Chika:
ok
Zlodeuka:
your part is realy overmapped.
I was a bit shocked by your attitude to the mapset. I understand that you dont give a shit about the map, but I bet Reiji and other collab members do. Just in case you change your mind, I'll try to explain what I mean by "overmapped".
Look, I realize that you were probably trying to make the map harder, but this is not a good way to collab. Rhythm > difficulty. Listen to the song carefully, I dont hear any notes you were "following" here.
EG:
02:42:242 (1) - what is this spinner doing here
02:44:899 (2,3,4,1) - why 1/4
02:36:414 (1,2) - why new combo, why slow down
I dont believe you dont hear the rhythm. 02:56:128 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is mapped at least READABLE.
Just wanted to say that you should probably pay more attention on how other parts are mapped, otherwise you might kill the whole collab just because you want your part to be special.
Louis Cyphre:
03:43:785 (7,1) - switch combos please
03:46:871 (5) - remove nc?
03:48:928 (5,1,2,3) - this is really hard to read
04:02:642 (1), 04:04:014 (1), 04:05:385 (1) etc.- no nc please :3
04:12:928 (3) - NC PLEASE!
Crack;
04:30:585 (1) - I really like the clap here but it sounds random. It would have saved the situation, if you've removed clap on 04:33:157 (2) here and added it at the beginning of the next slider, that will make it sound like a pattern.
04:41:557 (1) - random clap here
04:47:214 (1) - well, according to the following combo placement there should be a nc here.
Aleks719:
The music doesnt change at all and you suddenly change the sampleset.
D:
05:20:128 (1,1,1) - dont like ncs here. just personal.
05:31:099 (1,1) - ^
Topic Starter
Done~ Thank youLa Cataline wrote:
Yo. Alstroemeria Records is the name of the label, not the artist, so you should probably change it to "Ayakura Mei" OR "Masayoshi Minoshima" OR "Masayoshi Minoshima feat. Ayakura Mei".
Uhh, is it necessary? :c
Reiji:
00:47:899 (3) - hey make it symmetrical pleeeease
Thanks
04:41:557 (1) - random clap here - Removed
03:43:785 (7,1) - switch combos pleaseВот это
Ах, я же обещал промодить рррр.... чуть позже.
Edit : без изменений.La Cataline wrote:
Aleks719:
The music doesnt change at all and you suddenly change the sampleset моя часть была сделана раньше предыдущей и раньше последующей, притензии несправедливы
05:20:128 (1,1,1) - dont like ncs here. just personal. Релакс часть для поднятия лайфа для концовочки.
05:31:099 (1,1) - ^ ^
претензии?Aleks719 wrote:
моя часть была сделана раньше предыдущей и раньше последующей, притензии несправедливы
ох нет, мне нечего делать в этом треде.
:O
General:
- The lyrics in the SB have too much of free space that can be cropped. Please resize all the sprites so they're as small as possible.
[Collab]
02:24:928 (6) - Missing clap.
02:17:042 (1) - Delete new combo.
-> All the New Combos from this Ch1ka's (02:12:585-) part are pretty messed up. Please try to replace them to look nicer and more sensible.
02:34:185 - The volume here is suddenly lowered by 20%. It doesn't sounds that bad, but it's weird after a part when the volume was 70%. Decide for 1 value.
05:39:328 (2,3,4,5) - Just no, and you should know why.
Overdone of not needed new combos (again).
[Hard]
00:37:957 - Missing note.
00:40:699 - ^
00:43:442 - ^
Etc. it still happens, just fix all patterns like this because it doesn't sounds good and is confusing.
01:05:214 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change the whole pattern... the spacing change is weird + there's still a missed note.
02:26:471 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Just space it with normal spacing value, it will be better.
02:34:185 (3) - New combo.
02:45:157 - You see the flash here? It's unneeded because there's no object to hit in this place. Delete it from the SB and look for all flashes like this, because this one might not be the last.
04:56:814 (5) - New combo.
05:27:157 - Map this part/insert a break time.
05:38:128 - ^
Pretty good map. SB is good as well, but the engrish lyrics makes any sense at all o.o
star
- The lyrics in the SB have too much of free space that can be cropped. Please resize all the sprites so they're as small as possible.
[Collab]
02:24:928 (6) - Missing clap.
02:17:042 (1) - Delete new combo.
-> All the New Combos from this Ch1ka's (02:12:585-) part are pretty messed up. Please try to replace them to look nicer and more sensible.
02:34:185 - The volume here is suddenly lowered by 20%. It doesn't sounds that bad, but it's weird after a part when the volume was 70%. Decide for 1 value.
05:39:328 (2,3,4,5) - Just no, and you should know why.
Overdone of not needed new combos (again).
[Hard]
00:37:957 - Missing note.
00:40:699 - ^
00:43:442 - ^
Etc. it still happens, just fix all patterns like this because it doesn't sounds good and is confusing.
01:05:214 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change the whole pattern... the spacing change is weird + there's still a missed note.
02:26:471 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Just space it with normal spacing value, it will be better.
02:34:185 (3) - New combo.
02:45:157 - You see the flash here? It's unneeded because there's no object to hit in this place. Delete it from the SB and look for all flashes like this, because this one might not be the last.
04:56:814 (5) - New combo.
05:27:157 - Map this part/insert a break time.
05:38:128 - ^
Pretty good map. SB is good as well, but the engrish lyrics makes any sense at all o.o
star
Topic Starter
Thank you very much!fartownik wrote:
[Hard]
00:37:957 - Missing note. It follows music, not beats :<
00:40:699 - ^ ^
00:43:442 - ^ ^
Etc. it still happens, just fix all patterns like this because it doesn't sounds good and is confusing.
01:05:214 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change the whole pattern... the spacing change is weird + there's still a missed note. Jumps
02:26:471 (2,3,4) - Spacing. Just space it with normal spacing value, it will be better. Okay... Fixed :<
02:34:185 (3) - New combo. ok
02:45:157 - You see the flash here? It's unneeded because there's no object to hit in this place. Delete it from the SB and look for all flashes like this, because this one might not be the last. Added a note
04:56:814 (5) - New combo. ok
05:27:157 - Map this part/insert a break time. Fixed :3
05:38:128 - ^
Pretty good map. SB is good as well, but the engrish lyrics makes any sense at all o.o
star
Thanksfartownik wrote:
05:39:328 (2,3,4,5) - Just no, and you should know why. Okay, fixed
Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
HI
Here is my mod4mod of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700
All suggestions
[Hard]
00:44:299 - add a circle?
00:51:156 (4,5) - make them parallel?
02:24:414 (5,6) - 1 gird right
04:31:957 (2) - 1 gird down and 1 gird left
05:19:957 - add a circle,put 05:20:128 (5) to 05:20:299
05:22:699 - ^,put 05:22:871 (4) to 05:23:042
[Collab]
00:59:899 (9) - move to where 01:00:071 (10) is?
02:28:014 (1) - ctrl+1 and 1 gird right
02:28:528 (2) - ctrl+1 and 1 gird left
02:36:585 (2) - BPM×0.5 too suddenly
02:39:671 (2) - ^
Sooooooooooo good the map is
Oh, but it's too diffcult for me
Star~
Here is my mod4mod of http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27700
All suggestions
[Hard]
00:44:299 - add a circle?
00:51:156 (4,5) - make them parallel?
02:24:414 (5,6) - 1 gird right
04:31:957 (2) - 1 gird down and 1 gird left
05:19:957 - add a circle,put 05:20:128 (5) to 05:20:299
05:22:699 - ^,put 05:22:871 (4) to 05:23:042
[Collab]
00:59:899 (9) - move to where 01:00:071 (10) is?
02:28:014 (1) - ctrl+1 and 1 gird right
02:28:528 (2) - ctrl+1 and 1 gird left
02:36:585 (2) - BPM×0.5 too suddenly
02:39:671 (2) - ^
Sooooooooooo good the map is
Oh, but it's too diffcult for me
Star~
Topic Starter
wcx19911123, some fixed, thanks :3
Very nice~
Here this ,
it looks seem more clearly~
And it will be more comfortable <3
+1 more kds star~
Here this ,
it looks seem more clearly~
And it will be more comfortable <3
+1 more kds star~
Topic Starter
> Snowy Dream
ahh, it looks better~
Thank you <3
ahh, it looks better~
Thank you <3
Topic Starter
> Bagels, ratstar,
thank you
thank you
Привет, обновил хитсаунды немного. Перезалей пожалуйста ^^
Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Download: Ayakura Mei - Romantic Fall (Reiji-RJ) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
> kogumano-putaro
Thank you~
Updated
Thank you~
Updated
cut the unnecessary transparency like Crack.png and Ch1ka.png
Collab:
the hitsounds are a bit simple but whatever :/
just a bit suggestion that take a try by using the hitclap @ Wild Eyes.
and how about use black fading at all 1/2 BPM part like the section from 01:50:985 (1) - to 02:09:499 (1) - ?
03:53:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - confused spacing.
Hard:
General suggestions are same as above.
Collab:
the hitsounds are a bit simple but whatever :/
just a bit suggestion that take a try by using the hitclap @ Wild Eyes.
and how about use black fading at all 1/2 BPM part like the section from 01:50:985 (1) - to 02:09:499 (1) - ?
03:53:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - confused spacing.
Hard:
General suggestions are same as above.
GREATTTT <3
Topic Starter
Thank you for stars <3
Remove z.png because it is not used. (or add it somewhere)
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line
Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long.
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
======================
Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:Hard:
- [Collab] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:528, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:357.
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:521, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:271.
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:18:071, ends on 03:18:156.
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line
Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long.
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
======================
Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
Topic Starter
Thank you, blissfulyoshiblissfulyoshi wrote:
Remove z.png because it is not used. (or add it somewhere)
If you can, remove thumbs.db.
Make the kiai times consistent? (copied from AIBat)Inconsistency in Kiai Times:Fixed kiai and sb issues
- [Collab] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:528, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:357.
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:22:521, ends on 00:22:614.
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:34:185, ends on 02:34:271.
Kiai #4: Starts on 03:18:071, ends on 03:18:156.
Hard:
01:41:557 (5,6) - add a new combo for the new line of lyrics because your previous few combos only did 1 short line Done
Collab:
03:18:414 - Don't like how long this break is, and I don't see much justification for making the break this long. But it's collab and all parts are equal. So I want save this break :<
04:23:385 (3,1,2) - the 300 from 3 makes this area look a little crowded, I recommend flipping 04:23:899 (1) to 04:27:157 (2) horizontally to avoid this
04:32:471 (3) - placing notes under the middle of the slider does not look that great, so I advise you rearrage it
04:37:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might want to lower the stack leniency to make this area look neater
Crack fixed his part :3
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Decent mapset overall. Didn't notice too much, so call me back when you do the fixes, and I'll hopefully give you your first bubble.
Sorry missed a few things. (No need for kds)
Hard:
04:45:842 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 04:34:871 (1)
Collab:
02:26:814 (4,5) - clean up this slight overlap?
================
Just tell me when you finish, and I'll come back hopefully with a bubble.
Edit: Here is bubble #1
Hard:
04:45:842 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 04:34:871 (1)
Collab:
02:26:814 (4,5) - clean up this slight overlap?
================
Just tell me when you finish, and I'll come back hopefully with a bubble.
Edit: Here is bubble #1
Topic Starter
T-thank you, bliss! >w<
Shouldn't the composer's name be mentioned in the tags?
>Masayoshi Minoshima
>Masayoshi Minoshima
not necessary IMO. if allowed, it could be added without mapper's update.ouranhshc wrote:
Shouldn't the composer's name be mentioned in the tags?
>Masayoshi Minoshima
and this is the secound one.
Topic Starter
Woaaaah!
Thanks a lot, abalee
Thanks a lot, abalee