Yo. Alstroemeria Records is the name of the label, not the artist, so you should probably change it to "Ayakura Mei" OR "Masayoshi Minoshima" OR "Masayoshi Minoshima feat. Ayakura Mei".
03:34:528 that fade to black looks stupid imo.
Reiji:
00:47:899 (3) - hey make it symmetrical pleeeease
Icebeam:
01:42:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - that pattern is just SO GOOD
Chika:
ok
Zlodeuka:
your part is realy overmapped.
I was a bit shocked by your attitude to the mapset. I understand that you dont give a shit about the map, but I bet Reiji and other collab members do. Just in case you change your mind, I'll try to explain what I mean by "overmapped".
Look, I realize that you were probably trying to make the map harder, but this is not a good way to collab. Rhythm > difficulty. Listen to the song carefully, I dont hear any notes you were "following" here.
EG:
02:42:242 (1) - what is this spinner doing here
02:44:899 (2,3,4,1) - why 1/4
02:36:414 (1,2) - why new combo, why slow down
I dont believe you dont hear the rhythm. 02:56:128 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is mapped at least READABLE.
Just wanted to say that you should probably pay more attention on how other parts are mapped, otherwise you might kill the whole collab just because you want your part to be special.
Louis Cyphre:
03:43:785 (7,1) - switch combos please
03:46:871 (5) - remove nc?
03:48:928 (5,1,2,3) - this is really hard to read
04:02:642 (1), 04:04:014 (1), 04:05:385 (1) etc.- no nc please :3
04:12:928 (3) - NC PLEASE!
Crack;
04:30:585 (1) - I really like the clap here but it sounds random. It would have saved the situation, if you've removed clap on 04:33:157 (2) here and added it at the beginning of the next slider, that will make it sound like a pattern.
04:41:557 (1) - random clap here
04:47:214 (1) - well, according to the following combo placement there should be a nc here.
Aleks719:
The music doesnt change at all and you suddenly change the sampleset.
D:
05:20:128 (1,1,1) - dont like ncs here. just personal.
05:31:099 (1,1) - ^