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YURIA - SCRAMBLE!

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Shiro
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Shiro
Normal:
This diff isn't much beginner-friendly... many rhythms are hard, some patterns are hard too... I suggest you map a Easy diff.
02:53:227 (1,1,1) - Kick sliders with so many repeats are confusing for new players: how could they know they'd have to hold ? You should change them unless you map a Easy.
03:04:112 - isn't this timing section useless ?

Hard:
02:41:911 - isn't this timing section useless ?
03:04:112 - isn't this timing section useless ?

Insane:
max score is really high
00:24:941 (8) - I couldn't really see this note in the corner of the screen
01:42:598 (3) - couldn't see this one either
04:05:398 (3) - couldn't see it - the approach circle is hidden by the yellow circle for the slider

sorry for the very late mod :/
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo
SPOILER

Odaril wrote:

[Normal]
This diff isn't much beginner-friendly... many rhythms are hard, some patterns are hard too... I suggest you map a Easy diff. three diffs concluding 3:50 play time in each is enough, really x_x
02:53:227 (1,1,1) - Kick sliders with so many repeats are confusing for new players: how could they know they'd have to hold ? You should change them unless you map a Easy. rearranged
03:04:112 - isn't this timing section useless? oh, yeah, it is. :p deleted

[Hard]
02:41:911 - isn't this timing section useless? deleted
03:04:112 - isn't this timing section useless? ^

[Insane]
max score is really high well, there aren't many maps with an Insane diff consisting of 3:50 play time that haven't got really high score. =P
00:24:941 (8) - I couldn't really see this note in the corner of the screen no one hadn't any problems with it, huh o_o
01:42:598 (3) - couldn't see this one either yeah, and you could see it at 1:47:912...this pattern is based on the same thing o_o
04:05:398 (3) - couldn't see it - the approach circle is hidden by the yellow circle for the slider ^

sorry for the very late mod :/ no problem, thanks for it

:):):):):):):)
dNextGen
4,688 posts
Joined May 2010
dNextGen
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Here I come!

[General]
If I don't get it wrong, you should have a difficulty of 2,35 or lower rate, so reduce a bit the rate of Normal.

[Normal]
Open the osu! and , in [Editor], modify this line: DistanceSpacing: 0.65. After the change, save the .osu and exit from the diff without saving on the editor. After this enter the diff and check all the map's spacing.

For the rest, it is okay for me.
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
sorry I'll mod tomorrow

because I should go to bed

and tomorrow is my school fastival ^^

sorry ;;

[BIG NOTE Yhea]
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
sup

lots of overlap issues, it may just be the default osu hitburst or the colors+kiai, but here is what I kept getting confused on...

Insane:
00:12:427 (5) - Really hard to see this with that damn hitburst....
00:14:998 (5) - ^
00:24:770 (7,8) - ^
00:29:741 (4) - ^
00:31:455 (4) - ^
00:32:655 (8) - ^
00:34:027 (3) - ^
00:35:912 (8) - ^
00:36:941 (4) - ^
01:04:198 (3) - ^
01:04:712 (5) - ^

and imma stop there before that all that this mod is composed of.. anywya it might just be me but I can hardly see those notes that are overlapping others... either delete the hitburst or most them so they arent stacking i suggest

02:46:027 (2) - hard to depict this apart from the stream, move it down a bit so its not touching 1?
I dont like the stream spacing but i guess it fits lol...
TouhouNerd
TouhouNerd
star ~
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

lots of overlap issues, it may just be the default osu hitburst or the colors+kiai, but here is what I kept getting confused on...
[...]
anywya it might just be me but I can hardly see those notes that are overlapping others... either delete the hitburst or most them so they arent stacking i suggest
well, i've increased the stack leniency, putted custom hitbursts that might make those circles visible and those are similiar to template ones, moved notes where possible...i've no idea what to fix for now =w= time will tell, bah
Zlew
423 posts
Joined June 2010
Zlew
"Byle do ranka" jak to mówią... ...bo mówią.

Masz stara.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,958 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Your BG isn't 4:3,better resize it to 800 x 600.

[Normal]
00:05:912 (1) - Finish.
00:41:569 (1) - ^
00:55:284 (1) - ^
01:06:255 (1) - ^
01:52:884 (1) - ^
02:06:598 (1) - ^
02:17:570 (1) - ^
03:20:655 (1) - ^
03:31:627 (1) - ^
03:42:598 (1) - ^
03:53:570 (1) - ^
These finish suggestion will do for others diffs as well.

[Hard]
03:56:655 - This finish doesn't fit well,remove.

[Insane]
Fine to me.

Nothing technically wrong.
Nice,balanced mapset.
Good luck to you.
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo
SPOILER

IceBeam wrote:

Your BG isn't 4:3,better resize it to 800x600. 960/720 = 4/3, so i don't see any problems ;)

[Normal]
00:05:912 (1) - Finish.
[...]

These finish suggestion will do for others diffs as well. oh, that was a cool idea :) thanks!

[Hard]
03:56:655 - This finish doesn't fit well,remove. oh, it got in somehow. thanks for noticing

[Insane]
Fine to me. =w=

Nothing technically wrong. Nice,balanced mapset. Good luck to you. thanks for your modding :)

dksslqj wrote:

i'm late mod your map, really sorry no problem, few people i've met on #modReqs via mod4mod weren't even modding my map after i've did theirs =w=

[Insane]
03:02:655 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - When I play this style, this jump really confused me rhombus of death yay!
and I find some copy and paste, but it's fine >:(
some patterns make me fun cool :3
and I really recommend change cricle cize 3 3 is too hard, 2 fits perfectly for me

[Hard]
02:03:855 (1) - hummm;;;;;; oh, right, too long distance
02:03:855 (1) - http://puu.sh/mWs fixed
02:48:427 (2) - 2 grid up fixed
some stream seems to hard it's [Hard], after all. :>

[Normal]
01:29:741 (4,5,6) - that's too bad idea
02:41:055 (4,5,6) - ▲
04:17:055 (4,5,6) - ▲ you mean that there's no hitsound at all? i think they'll pass on few seconds, derp :P

thanks for modding!

+26 derp
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Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Nakagawa-Kanon
sorry

i'm late mod your map

really sorry


[Insane]

03:02:655 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - When I play this style, this jump really confused me


and I find some copy and paste
but it's fine

some patterns make me fun

and I really recommed
change cricle cize 3

[I mean this : http://puu.sh/mWn]

[Hard]

02:03:855 (1) - hummm;;;;;;
02:03:855 (1) - http://puu.sh/mWs
02:48:427 (2) - 2 grid up

some stream seems to hard

[Normal]
01:29:741 (4,5,6) - that's too bad idea
02:41:055 (4,5,6) - ▲
04:17:055 (4,5,6) - ▲



I DON'T LIKE NAZI MODDING YAY
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Well, just a few suggestions, ignore if you don't agree~

[normal]
02:57:341 (1) - out of the screen
03:04:198 (5) - new combo?

[hard]
01:05:741 (8) - new combo?
03:04:198 (5) - ^

[insane]
nothing i could find

great map, good luck
LesTrucsRoses
271 posts
Joined July 2010
LesTrucsRoses
hard
SPOILER
01:16:541 (2,3) - Combine these two beats into a slider. It's just weird having a beat on a blue tick.
02:40:884 (1) - Make this spinner end at 02:41:741. it would let players get ready for 02:42:084 (1).

Good.

Insane
SPOILER
00:40:369 (1,2,3,4) - too hard of a jump.
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - too hard of a jump.
01:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are hard jumps, but they're acceptable. You're cutting it close here.
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - too hard of a jump.

nice map!
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo
SPOILER

roflninja wrote:

[Normal]
02:57:341 (1) - out of the screen oh god, why didn't i notice that earlier...fixed :)
03:04:198 (5) - new combo? yup

[Hard]
01:05:741 (8) - new combo? nah, not on that one. :)
03:04:198 (5) - ^ yup

[Insane]
nothing i could find :3


great map, good luck thanks, good luck with yours too :)

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Hard]
01:16:541 (2,3) - Combine these two beats into a slider. It's just weird having a beat on a blue tick. ...why?
02:40:884 (1) - Make this spinner end at 02:41:741. it would let players get ready for 02:42:084 (1). they can always stop spinning earlier and aim on it :p also, that was putted like that on purpose

[Insane]
00:40:369 (1,2,3,4) - too hard of a jump. huh? they're not that hard o_o
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - too hard of a jump. ^
01:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^


nice map! thanks! and sorry, but i haven't found your suggestions useful at all. :P

...
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NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+10

[Normal]
00:18:427 (4,5,6) - no silenced notes. as a suggestion: change them to 70~80 volume at soft hitsound sample, and add hitsounds like "normal-whistle-whistle-normal at this part. hope i described it clearly.
00:55:284 (1) - all things in this kiai is a reversed slider+ 3 circles... *8, orz. try more patterns maybe? current one is good but just make me tired...and this happends in every kiai..
01:46:027 (2) - last tick - 4 grid up, 3rd tick - 2 grid down, the slider would be better.
02:41:055 (4,5,6) - same as 00:18
04:17:055 (4,5,6) - ^

[Hard]
OD+1?
00:49:112 (5,1) - spacing?
01:05:827 (9) - remove?
01:59:741 (4,5,1) - spacing?
02:27:684 - add a note?
02:40:884 (1,1) - ...the spinner is not long and notes come just 1/2 after that?
02:46:027 (4) - remove finish at the beginning

[Insane]
02:45:684 (1) - repeat once more?
02:52:541 (4) - suggest just use a 1/1 slider here to make the beat pace slower before the stream.

nice. (less copy&pastes will make it better though...)
CapnDavid
141 posts
Joined March 2010
CapnDavid
Good luck. :)
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
Here we go, modding time!

[:General:] For some reason, when I first accessed the map, the wrong Distance Spacings were on default. Please set your Distance Spacing to what you used on the difficulty and save so that not other modders get confused. :)
Another thing, for some reason, Insane has a bigger circle size than Hard. Unless you did this on purpose, please fix.

[:Normal:] 01:17:398 (1) - You might want to end this spinner at 01:19:627 to follow with the song. You might also want to do the same thing to 02:28:712 (1) and end it at 02:31:027.
01:29:741 (4,5,6) - Please don't silence these. Make them quiet like 00:18:427 (4,5,6). Keeping these silent would really confuse new players.

[:Hard:] 00:47:055 (1,2,3,4) - Could you adjust this so that the transition to notes (2,3,4) is a little smoother?
01:17:398 (1) - You might want to end this spinner at 01:19:627 to follow with the song. You might also want to do the same thing to 02:28:712 (1) and end it at 02:31:027.
02:11:570 (8) - You might want to consider placing a clap here. If you decide to, you might also want to place claps on 02:17:055 (8), 02:22:541 (8), 03:47:570 (8), 03:53:055 (8), and 03:58:541 (8).
02:43:455 (2) - You should adjust this slider so that it stacks on the end of 02:44:141 (4). You might also want to adjust 03:27:855 (4) to fit on 03:28:884 (1).


[:Insane:] I'm not a pro player or mapper so I do not usually mod Insanes. I have only one comment on this difficulty... Why does this have bigger circles than Hard? :P

The beatmap's a ton of fun, the song's a ton of fun... Starred!!! Merry Christmas!
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol
S_Star~ :P
Gcode
315 posts
Joined August 2010
Gcode
stah
Ohrami
685 posts
Joined March 2010
Ohrami
STAR <3
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Insane]

  1. 01:16:712 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Out of place stream. There's almost no stuff like this before, and then suddenly the player gets 7-noted stream.
  2. 02:40:541 (5,6) - Reverse selection?
  3. 02:42:084 - 03:04:198 - The entire part actually makes no sense :P You should remap it (at least the stream part, it's the worst).
  4. 03:42:084 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same thing with stream.
  5. 04:16:541 (5,6) - Reverse selection?
[Hard]

  1. 02:42:084 - 03:04:198 - Looks better than in the Insane, but still poor mapped too. I know this part is not easy to map, but you'll have to find the way :p
  2. 04:04:027 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - The same thing with stream, but in Hard now.
[Normal]
  1. Fine.
The hitsounds seems fine, mixing a soft-type clap with normal hitsounds sounds very cool in this case.
I miss some hitfinishes in Insane, some patterns might have been ended by them.
Also you should work on the slider prettiness and symmetry. For ex. 01:56:998 (4) - slider like this should be naturally started and ended with symmetry, but it's not.
And - for the future - try not to map songs that are over 4 minutes long and not aiming for approval.

All from me. Starred.
Numbers 596108
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2011
773 posts
Joined November 2009
Numbers 596108
lol
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
SHUFFLE! <33
good map~ :)
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
hey there ^^

Normal
00:34:712 (2) - ok, shoot me for being so nazi x_x' but well.. maybe change a little the position of this slider to fit 00:33:341 (1). I mean something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47925
00:38:484 (4) - start new combo here instead of 00:38:827 (1) ?

Hard
01:06:084 (11) - start new combo here instead of 01:06:255 (1)
01:34:712 (x) - add a note here
01:44:655 (1) - extend this slider to the white tick? (01:45:341)
02:44:141 (4) - nazi spacing again, gomen >_< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/47930
03:27:855 (4) - same thing as above x_x (i mean this http://puu.sh/HzI)
03:31:455 (11) - start new combo here and remove it on 03:31:627 (1)
04:01:798 (1) - add one more repeat to this slider

Insane
00:07:455 (7) - new combo
00:12:941 (7) - ^
01:05:741 (9) - ^
03:03:855 (5,6) - instead of making this up, make them down (lol, sorry for the bad way to explain x_x' here's what i mean http://puu.sh/HzW)

Please remember these are only suggestions. ^^ Have a star
kamyuhiko
1 post
Joined November 2010
kamyuhiko
fun map :D
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
Rechecking as requested

Hard
00:25:455 (2) - start new combo here instead of 00:25:112 (1). follows the rhythm better imo
02:58:712 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - overused claps >_<

Insane
00:41:227 (5) - start new combo here instead of 00:41:569 (1)
01:52:541 (5) - ^ but about 01:52:884 (1)

It's all ^_^
Daru
osu!painter
866 posts
Joined August 2008
Daru
Mod4Mod

General
Really nothing much to say in terms of errors.
These are just suggestions.


[Easy]
00:22:370 (1) - Reduce slider by 1/1 and add a 1/2 kick slider starting at 00:23:227 (X).
01:15:341 (2,3,4) - Arrange in a straight line. A bit hard to read considering the AR and intended difficulty.
02:26:655 (2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
01:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align these pairs in a symmetrical pattern.
02:27:341 (1) - Remove combo
02:27:855 (2) - Add combo
02:39:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align pairs in symmetrical pattern.

[Insane]
Circle size a bit big?
01:14:141 (5) - Very slightly misaligned from previous slider end.
02:25:455 (5) - ^
02:59:398 (3) - Off-screen
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Mod4Mod

Nice!!

[Insane]
All Suggestions to make it even nicer ( for me at-least ) feel free to ignore all if you feel it involves to much effort.

00:24:427 (5) - Stack on 00:24:770 (7) - Plays nicer for me.
00:46:027 (7) - Delete and repeat 00:45:341 (6) - one more. :>
00:51:169 (4) - End the slider here 00:52:369.
01:05:570 (1) - New combo to make it read easier.
01:15:512 (x) - Hit-circle with clap (makes more sense and follows music)
01:56:998 (7) - repeat 1 more time and delete (8) - then respace.

02:02:484 (4) - same as 00:46:027 (7) suggestion
02:45:255 - Mew Hit-circle (no hitsounds)
02:45:427 - New Hit-circle (no hitsounds)
02:45:770 - New Hit-circle (no hitsounds)

02:46:198 (12) - delete and repeat 02:45:855 (11) - + make it a new combo. Then remap :>

03:03:855 (6,7) - let them face the other way ( See spoilerbox)

SPOILER

03:30:941 (1) - New Combo to make it easier to read.

03:41:912 (3) - Move this one out to the right, to make it easier to read =)
04:05:398 (3) - Also hard to read, but fine I guess

[Hard]

00:16:884 (1,2) (3,4) (5,6) - Make a them more jumpy. IT is a hard :> and it fits the music well IMO
01:28:198 (1,2)(3,4) (5,6) - ^ same as above

02:45:512 (3) - replace with two hit-circles as it is, kinda harder then insane.

and that's it for this diff

Great Job! ;>
Kurosanyan
2,642 posts
Joined November 2009
Kurosanyan
[General]
  1. Background should be 800x600 but it looks okay like it is so don't know if you need to change.
[Normal]
  1. Hp drain +1? It's very low :|
  2. Approach rate +1? (not sure for this one but it fit better imo)
  3. 00:29:055 (2) - Maybe move it a little so it doesn't touch the other slider?
  4. 00:33:341 (1) - Move it a little so it's not under the circle?
  5. 01:17:227 (6) - Not really ok for a normal imo, remove and make the spinner start here?
  6. 01:47:398 (3) - Uuuh too close, you should move it like this: http://puu.sh/Zob
  7. 02:28:541 (6) - Not really ok for a normal imo, remove and make the spinner start here?
[Hard]
  1. Approach rate +1?
  2. 02:46:284 (7,8) - Fix the spacing?
  3. 01:14:141 (5) - This stack is really annoying since the others are 1/2 and this one 1/1 :< And it's hard to see because of the kiai
  4. 02:25:455 (5) - And again ;_;
  5. 02:27:684 - Add a circle? :?
  6. 02:41:055 (1,1) - Uh. Quick spinner and right after a looping slider... At least move the slider away from the centre please.
  7. 02:44:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ok, so you're following the claps and the guitar at the same time, not good at all imo :(
    You should remove (4) and (7) to follow the claps or add circles at 02:45:255 - 02:45:427 - 02:46:112 - to follow guitar.
  8. 03:03:512 (7,8,9) - A little weird imo but seems ok I guess.
  9. There's again those 1/1 stacks under sliders but it seems more or less okay here so do as you want.
[Insane]
  1. Approach rate is really too low, make it +1 please.
  2. 02:42:084 (1) - Try to move it from the centre? :< Would be cool like this: http://puu.sh/ZoZ
  3. 02:44:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same thing again about the weird timing. But I found that it would be ok with a stack instead of this slider 02:45:855 (8) - like this:http://puu.sh/Zp8
  4. 02:54:255 (10,11,12,10,11,12) - Why no sliders here? Well maybe I just suck at streams.
  5. 03:01:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Wut, mostly the same spacing for 2 different rhythm? It doesn't fit at all imo.
  6. 03:16:541 (1) - Hmm I think you shouldn't silence this spinner, maybe not too loud but still :(
That's all! Really a great map! <3 Shuffle (also I hate little circles so your map is great for me :P ) Starrr~
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo
hmm, i think it's the time to post my comments on every mod after remapping D:

SPOILER

Wiinter wrote:

[Hard]
00:25:455 (2) - start new combo here instead of 00:25:112 (1). follows the rhythm better imo fixed
02:58:712 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - overused claps >_< fixed

[Insane]
00:41:227 (5) - start new combo here instead of 00:41:569 (1) nah, i like it the way it is now
01:52:541 (5) - ^ but about 01:52:884 (1) ^

Daru wrote:

[Normal]
00:22:370 (1) - Reduce slider by 1/1 and add a 1/2 kick slider starting at 00:23:227 (X). alright, fixed. :)
01:15:341 (2,3,4) - Arrange in a straight line. A bit hard to read considering the AR and intended difficulty. no, i like it the way it is now
02:26:655 (2,3,4) - ^ ^

[Hard]
01:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align these pairs in a symmetrical pattern. nah, it's ok. :)
02:27:341 (1) - Remove combo nope
02:27:855 (2) - Add combo ^
02:39:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align pairs in symmetrical pattern. nah, it's ok. :)

[Insane]
Circle size a bit big? no, it's ok
01:14:141 (5) - Very slightly misaligned from previous slider end. fixed
02:25:455 (5) - ^^
02:59:398 (3) - Off-screen fixed, i suppose...?

Xeno32 wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:427 (5) - Stack on 00:24:770 (7) - Plays nicer for me. fixed
00:46:027 (7) - Delete and repeat 00:45:341 (6) - one more. :> fixed, cool idea :D
00:51:169 (4) - End the slider here 00:52:369. nah, definetely not
01:05:570 (1) - New combo to make it read easier. ?.?
01:15:512 (x) - Hit-circle with clap (makes more sense and follows music) it doesn't follow the rest of the map tho
01:56:998 (7) - repeat 1 more time and delete (8) - then respace. yup
02:02:484 (4) - same as 00:46:027 (7) suggestion yup
02:45:255 - Mew Hit-circle (no hitsounds) Mew is a pokemon, also skipping
02:45:427 - New Hit-circle (no hitsounds) ^
02:45:770 - New Hit-circle (no hitsounds) ^
02:46:198 (12) - delete and repeat 02:45:855 (11) - + make it a new combo. Then remap :> ^
03:03:855 (6,7) - let them face the other way ( See spoilerbox) ^
03:30:941 (1) - New Combo to make it easier to read. ^
03:41:912 (3) - Move this one out to the right, to make it easier to read =) yup
04:05:398 (3) - Also hard to read, but fine I guess if you hadn't mentioned 4:10:884 (3), than you shouldn't mention this one aswell. :P

[Hard]
00:16:884 (1,2) (3,4) (5,6) - Make a them more jumpy. IT is a hard :> and it fits the music well IMO nah. c:
01:28:198 (1,2)(3,4) (5,6) - ^ same as above ^ same as above
02:45:512 (3) - replace with two hit-circles as it is, kinda harder then insane. yeah, i thought about it too.

footix31 wrote:

[General]
  1. Background should be 800x600 but it looks okay like it is so don't know if you need to change. it's ok since it's ratio is 4:3
[Normal]
  1. Hp drain +1? It's very low :| if you say so ?.?
  2. Approach rate +1? (not sure for this one but it fit better imo) nah, it's ok
  3. 00:29:055 (2) - Maybe move it a little so it doesn't touch the other slider? nah, it's ok
  4. 00:33:341 (1) - Move it a little so it's not under the circle? ...it's completely visible ._.
  5. 01:17:227 (6) - Not really ok for a normal imo, remove and make the spinner start here? found another solution, and fixed. :)
  6. 01:47:398 (3) - Uuuh too close, you should move it like this fixed, though it might bite with distance spacing a little bit from now ;x
  7. 02:28:541 (6) - Not really ok for a normal imo, remove and make the spinner start here? found another solution, and fixed. :)
[Hard]
  1. Approach rate +1? alright
  2. 02:27:684 - Add a circle? :? why the hell everyone's telling me that... >.> delete (2,3,4,5,6), you'll understand why i didn't added a circle at this point :)
  3. 02:41:055 (1,1) - Uh. Quick spinner and right after a looping slider... At least move the slider away from the centre please. ?.?
  4. 02:44:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ok, so you're following the claps and the guitar at the same time, not good at all imo :( You should remove (4) and (7) to follow the claps or add circles at 02:45:255 - 02:45:427 - 02:46:112 - to follow guitar. ermm, actually i like it the way it is now, and i don't really like to change it. ;)
  5. 02:46:284 (7,8) - Fix the spacing? fixed the spacing
  6. 03:03:512 (7,8,9) - A little weird imo but seems ok I guess. it's ok for me aswell
  7. There's again those 1/1 stacks under sliders but it seems more or less okay here so do as you want. i like'em
  8. 01:14:141 (5) - This stack is really annoying since the others are 1/2 and this one 1/1 :< And it's hard to see because of the kiai ^
  9. 02:25:455 (5) - And again ;_; ^


[Insane]
  1. Approach rate is really too low, make it +1 please. yeah, definetely +1, how couldn't i notice that before o.o
  2. 02:42:084 (1) - Try to move it from the centre? :< yeah, i've thought about this too :)
  3. 02:44:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same thing again about the weird timing. But I found that it would be ok with a stack instead of this slider 02:45:855 (8) tried it, and i think i'll stay with this slider
  4. 02:54:255 (10,11,12,10,11,12) - Why no sliders here? Well maybe I just suck at streams. you do :3 i like it the way it is, really ;)
  5. 03:01:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Wut, mostly the same spacing for 2 different rhythm? It doesn't fit at all imo. uhm...i'll stay with it for now, when someone else will complain about it, i'll try to rearrange it
  6. 03:16:541 (1) - Hmm I think you shouldn't silence this spinner, maybe not too loud but still :( nope, it's ok since most of the instruments were silenced at this moment too

...whew. thank you so much, guys (and girls :3)
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
Sorry for my late x_x

[Insane]
00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) - Dont you think this is not a normal rhombus? i think they're crook :< Also i think 1 must to New Combo
00:26:141 (x) - add a note here since there is a strong accent
00:37:112 (x) - ^
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - Same with 00:04:712 (1,2,3,4)
01:15:512 (x) - add a note :<
01:42:941 (x) - ^
01:48:255 (4) - i find another way to fix the problem that you havent add note in Strong accent when you follow the drum... move it to 01:48:427
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - Same with before x_x
02:05:398 (4,5,6,7) - ^
02:17:398 (10) - move it forward or add note in 02:17:227
02:26:827 (6) - ^
02:27:341 (1) - add a repeat
02:44:827 (7) - add a note to transit
02:57:341 (14) - new combo
02:59:398 (3) - add clap in last
03:00:598 (6) - add clap in begin
03:19:455 (4,5,6,7) - Same with before
03:40:884 (x) - add a note or another way
03:53:227 (x) - ^
04:05:227 (2,3,4,5) - ugly...

[Hard]
00:23:227 (2) - looks crowded with 1
00:25:112 (7) - New combo
00:25:455 (1) - cancel new combo
00:44:312 (1) - too close
01:00:427 (x) - add a note

[Normal]
00:11:055 (3) - add note :<

nice song o.o/
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo
SPOILER

eveless wrote:

Sorry for my late x_x no problem (:

[Insane]
00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) - Dont you think this is not a normal rhombus? i think they're crook :< Also i think 1 must to New Combo this wasn't supposed to be a rhombus ._.
00:26:141 (x) - add a note here since there is a strong accent i was following vocals at this point
00:37:112 (x) - ^ ^
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - Same with 00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) same
01:15:512 (x) - add a note :< doesn't really fit
01:42:941 (x) - ^ vocals
01:48:255 (4) - i find another way to fix the problem that you havent add note in Strong accent when you follow the drum... move it to 01:48:427 uh, but what about vocals in that case? ._.
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - Same with before x_x yeah, same before.
02:05:398 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:17:398 (10) - move it forward or add note in 02:17:227 yeah, in this case it does fit
02:26:827 (6) - yeah, in this case it doesn't. :<
02:27:341 (1) - add a repeat NO.
02:44:827 (7) - add a note to transit it doesn't follow the guitar
02:57:341 (14) - new combo yup
02:59:398 (3) - add clap in last yup
03:00:598 (6) - add clap in begin yup
03:19:455 (4,5,6,7) - Same with before same with before
03:40:884 (x) - add a note or another way i like it the way it is
03:53:227 (x) - ^ ^
04:05:227 (2,3,4,5) - ugly... fixed

[Hard]
00:23:227 (2) - looks crowded with 1 not really
00:25:112 (7) - New combo yup
00:25:455 (1) - cancel new combo yup
00:44:312 (1) - too close fixed
01:00:427 (x) - add a note isn't following vocals

[Normal]
00:11:055 (3) - add note :< i like it the way it is

nice song o.o/ thanks for modding >w</

u.u
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless

rEdo wrote:

SPOILER

eveless wrote:

Sorry for my late x_x no problem (:

[Insane]
00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) - Dont you think this is not a normal rhombus? i think they're crook :< Also i think 1 must to New Combo this wasn't supposed to be a rhombus ._.
00:26:141 (x) - add a note here since there is a strong accent i was following vocals at this point
00:37:112 (x) - ^ ^
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - Same with 00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) same
01:15:512 (x) - add a note :< doesn't really fit
01:42:941 (x) - ^ vocals
01:48:255 (4) - i find another way to fix the problem that you havent add note in Strong accent when you follow the drum... move it to 01:48:427 uh, but what about vocals in that case? ._.
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - Same with before x_x yeah, same before.
02:05:398 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:17:398 (10) - move it forward or add note in 02:17:227 yeah, in this case it does fit
02:26:827 (6) - yeah, in this case it doesn't. :<
02:27:341 (1) - add a repeat NO.
02:44:827 (7) - add a note to transit it doesn't follow the guitar
02:57:341 (14) - new combo yup
02:59:398 (3) - add clap in last yup
03:00:598 (6) - add clap in begin yup
03:19:455 (4,5,6,7) - Same with before same with before
03:40:884 (x) - add a note or another way i like it the way it is
03:53:227 (x) - ^ ^
04:05:227 (2,3,4,5) - ugly... fixed

[Hard]
00:23:227 (2) - looks crowded with 1 not really
00:25:112 (7) - New combo yup
00:25:455 (1) - cancel new combo yup
00:44:312 (1) - too close fixed
01:00:427 (x) - add a note isn't following vocals

[Normal]
00:11:055 (3) - add note :< i like it the way it is

nice song o.o/ thanks for modding >w</

u.u
if it is really follow the vocals , plz let it more clearly , you're follow the drum clearly and suddenly you changed to follow vocals , maybe you must do more hitsounds in it :<
x_x...i cant expect it very well because my poor english , but i have done what you do in my past :3
Good luck
CXu
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3,560 posts
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CXu
[Normal]
Nothing wrong here :?
You could consider mapping this to the end, though it's fine as it is too.
Also, the notes are so close :o Well, it's Normal, so it's probably fine.

[Hard]
00:32:141 (5) - I would put the clap on 00:31:798 (4) instead, but that's just me
01:00:255 (8) - You could try putting finish on every instance like this in the chorus...
02:42:084 (1) - This is pretty close to the spinner. I guess it's fine since it's a Hard, but still.
03:18:426 (2) - I got 50, yay. Nothing wrong though :P
03:42:255 (4) - Not sure about this, maybe shorten by 1 repeat?
04:04:198 (7) - ^

[Insane]
00:23:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You could try putting whistle on every red tick here? then finish on the slider 00:25:112 (1). If you decide to do this, you can do it on every instance of that :p
I guess the same as in hard when it comes to that finish in chorus
02:42:084 (1) - <3
03:02:827 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try make a difference in spacing for this. Confusing with the same distance between the notes as the previous combo ><
04:05:398 (3,4) - You could try swap these. You'll get a jump from (4)-(5), but I think that kinda works, and didn't feel like it was a place to go backwards again xD
04:10:884 (3,4) - ^


Nothing really. Was able to read every map without problems =w= Star~~
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo
alright, this is stupid to put those modposts in spoilerbox, so i'll skip on it from now c:


eveless wrote:

if it is really follow the vocals , plz let it more clearly , you're follow the drum clearly and suddenly you changed to follow vocals , maybe you must do more hitsounds in it :<
x_x...i cant expect it very well because my poor english , but i have done what you do in my past :3
Good luck
alright, i'll remember that :) thanks for modding, once again <3



CXu wrote:

[Normal]
Nothing wrong here :? YAI!
You could consider mapping this to the end, though it's fine as it is too. nah, it'll be just tiring for beginners to play such a long song u.u
Also, the notes are so close :o Well, it's Normal, so it's probably fine. it's Normal, so it's probably fine. :p

[Hard]
00:32:141 (5) - I would put the clap on 00:31:798 (4) instead, but that's just me yeah, it definitely sounds better (:
01:00:255 (8) - You could try putting finish on every instance like this in the chorus... i tried...didn't liked it at all :<
02:42:084 (1) - This is pretty close to the spinner. I guess it's fine since it's a Hard, but still. this one needs some hard moments too :p
03:18:426 (2) - I got 50, yay. Nothing wrong though :P you got 50, yay
03:42:255 (4) - Not sure about this, maybe shorten by 1 repeat? it follows the drums c:
04:04:198 (7) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:23:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You could try putting whistle on every red tick here? then finish on the slider 00:25:112 (1). If you decide to do this, you can do it on every instance of that :p wow, that was pretty cool idea to put some whistles there :D did that on (3) and (7) though
I guess the same as in hard when it comes to that finish in chorus nu :<
02:42:084 (1) - <3 if you try this on hardrock, it look like...uhm, the other side of love :3
03:02:827 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try make a difference in spacing for this. Confusing with the same distance between the notes as the previous combo >< decreased by 0.1x, hope it will work
04:05:398 (3,4) - You could try swap these. You'll get a jump from (4)-(5), but I think that kinda works, and didn't feel like it was a place to go backwards again xD nah, i like it the way it is now
04:10:884 (3,4) - ^ ^

Nothing really. Was able to read every map without problems =w= Star~~ yay :3 thanks~
bah, i feel like playing Shuffle! again :3
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Random mod~

Let's go !

[Insane]

00:09:855 (4) - Delete clap (a clap on this red tick sounds very weird :/)
00:10:370 (X) - Add a circle with a clap
00:10:541 (6) - Add a clap
02:26:998 (6) - Delete clap

Useless mod is useless

Great job :
~Starz'd !
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo

Fight69 wrote:

[Insane]

00:09:855 (4) - Delete clap (a clap on this red tick sounds very weird :/) yeah, fixed
00:10:370 (X) - Add a circle with a clap nooo
00:10:541 (6) - Add a clap NOOO
02:26:998 (6) - Delete clap i like it
hm, thank you :3
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
I did a quick look over this, and the only thing I don't like is the song. No offense, but the vocals aren't very impressive, and the tune kinda makes me sleepy. Then again, this could be a decent song to play when you wanna chillax after a tough song, or just in general. Or if you're ready for bed. >_>

Gonna bubble this, but as I've mentioned before, I'm not a hardcore modder, so feel free to pop this if anything wrong is found. I encourage people to list any problems they've found, or even just anything they don't like, be it about the song or the map, or even what the song is based on. By all means, chat it up. ^^

So yeah, in conclusion: Bubbled.
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

I did a quick look over this, and the only thing I don't like is the song. No offense, but the vocals aren't very impressive, and the tune kinda makes me sleepy. Then again, this could be a decent song to play when you wanna chillax after a tough song, or just in general. Or if you're ready for bed. >_>

Gonna bubble this, but as I've mentioned before, I'm not a hardcore modder, so feel free to pop this if anything wrong is found. I encourage people to list any problems they've found, or even just anything they don't like, be it about the song or the map, or even what the song is based on. By all means, chat it up. ^^

So yeah, in conclusion: Bubbled.
well, i didn't want to make a no-one-knows-how-hard map, so that's why i've chosen this song, it has to be relaxing ^^ oh, and thank you <3 though...something is missing, i think. have someone popped it already? :)

@edit: changed the description a little bit
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Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
So yeah, in conclusion: Bubbled.
Yeah she forgot to bubble.
Kola
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Joined December 2010
Kola
Gwiazdka :3
Niko
360 posts
Joined October 2009
Niko
(｀･ω･´)
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Sorry about that, coulda sworn I clicked the bubble icon. >_>;;

But yeah, if anyone has problems with the map etc. just say so, my bubbles are highly poppable. ^^;
Mastodonio
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Joined October 2009
Mastodonio
Well,I don't think that this is a big mistake,but offset here is 3178,I think...
And one more thing..too high HP Drain on Insane diff..I think this would be better to put there 6. And in my opinion Circle Size between Large and Normal looks better on Insane diff.

Star.
galvenize
919 posts
Joined June 2010
galvenize
7 Months, holy poot.

Don't know how you managed to wait that long haha.
James2250
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Joined July 2008
James2250

Giorgos wrote:

Well,I don't think that this is a big mistake,but offset here is 3178,I think...
And one more thing..too high HP Drain on Insane diff..I think this would be better to put there 6. And in my opinion Circle Size between Large and Normal looks better on Insane diff.
I pretty much agree with this. The offset does seem to work better at 3,176 - 3,178 (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections) I also really don't like the idea of Insane having the largest circle size with such a high score as it just makes it too easy for players to fc it (which I mentioned a long time ago) If you are going to change the circle size do at least -1 HP Drain on Insane too

You don't "have" to change the circle size but I would strongly consider it
rEdo
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Topic Starter
rEdo

James2250 wrote:

Giorgos wrote:

Well,I don't think that this is a big mistake,but offset here is 3178,I think...
And one more thing..too high HP Drain on Insane diff..I think this would be better to put there 6. And in my opinion Circle Size between Large and Normal looks better on Insane diff.
I pretty much agree with this. The offset does seem to work better at 3,176 - 3,178 (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections) I also really don't like the idea of Insane having the largest circle size with such a high score as it just makes it too easy for players to fc it (which I mentioned a long time ago) If you are going to change the circle size do at least -1 HP Drain on Insane too

You don't "have" to change the circle size but I would strongly consider it
yeah, this offset is way much better, thanks Giorgos :) i've been considering this too, but at first i've waited for someone to say something about it too
though, i want to keep circle size as it is now, it definitely plays better. despite the maximum score, with smaller circles the whole map seems to be too extensive, imo
also, drain is ok too i suppose

updated.
James2250
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James2250
It looks like the final kiai time on Insane isn't snapped correctly, end it at 04:04:548 like the other difficulty. (Don't kudosu)
Call me back for rebubble

Ok looks like the timing is all fixed as well as the other minor things, you can keep the large circle size on Insane if you really want to but just be aware some people might not like it :P

Rebubbled~
loli_milk
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loli_milk
:)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
[Insane]

03:02:834 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:03:005 (2) - And add new combo here for make the change of spacing readable.

Fix and I can rank this ^^

I don't like the big circles on Insane, though.
galvenize
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Joined June 2010
galvenize
Gogogogo :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
It's the time finally! Congratulations ^_^

Ranked~
rEdo
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Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
rEdo

osuplayer111 wrote:

It's the time finally! Congratulations ^_^

Ranked~
OH, FINALLY
thank you very much, guys :D
Galkan
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Galkan
Took a long enough! :)
Ayeen_old
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Ayeen_old
Congratz on rank :)

Uhm, now im wondering how long would my map will be ranked >.< Especially i am a beeginner in mapping.
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