Garven wrote:

As per your request: oh, thanks :) let's take a look at it...

[General]
Please find a background image that has an aspect ratio of 4:3. Right now it's around 4:3.17 or so. :P me + paint = win, resized the current bg
00:55:112 - I find this to be a better preview point. previous one is better i think, will ask about it few people soon

[Normal]
00:16:884 (1,2,3) - Space these further apart please. mhm.
01:17:270 (1) - Start this on the red tick. It feels to start artificially soon this close to the note. yup
00:18:427 (1) - This spinner feels really short for a difficulty like this. I'd map through it. remapped
01:19:627 - I'm not seeing much of a musical justification for a fountain here. me too <grins> well, deleted.
01:28:198 (1,2,3) - Space these further apart please just like before
01:29:741 (1) - This spinner feels really short for a difficulty like this. I'd map through it. ^
02:28:583 (1) - Start this on the red tick. It feels to start artificially soon this close to the note. ^
02:31:284 - I'm not seeing much of a musical justification for a fountain here. fixed
02:34:027 (1) - ^ fixed.
02:41:055 (1) - I think you know what I'm going to say here. FIXED!
03:04:198 - Argh, more fountains. :')
04:10:070 (1) - Start this on the red tick. It feels to start artificially soon this close to the note. yeah
04:17:055 (1) - Yeah, map to the synth. Short spinners on the easiest diff are kinda bleh remapped

[Hard]
01:16:541 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This plays kind of awkwardly due to the vocals going against that rhythm. fixed
01:17:398 (1) - Start this on the red tick. It feels to start artificially soon this close to the note. ^
01:19:627 - I think you messed up your fountain here, though I still don't like seeing one at this spot. :P ^
I'm not going to comment on the fountains anymore. -_- i lol'd at that point, to be honest :D
02:27:855 (2,3,4,5,6) - This plays kind of awkwardly due to the vocals going against that rhythm. nah, going with vocals all the time would be boring
02:28:627 (1) - Start this on the red tick. It feels to start artificially soon this close to the note. fixed

[Insane]
15 unsnapped notes! OH SNAP!
That HP drain is killer to me. Ah well. this is insane difficulty anyway, if BAT would complain about it, i'll decrease it, otherwise i'm leaving it like that
There are a bunch of the spinners that should be moved to the red ticks like the other diffs. yeah, fixed
Otherwise seems fine. fountains...are gone u.u

Nothing too bad about the map except for the overuse of kiai. >> :'(

thanks for moddin'

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey. hello

[Normal]
04:10:112 (1) - spinner not on tick...Move to the blue tick (04:10:112)...And end it at the same spot...It probably was on a 1/6 tick...But better on 1/4 that's right, fixed

[Hard]
00:52:712 (3) - move this 3 grids left, and 2 down (so its in-line with the 1) nah, it's actually formed to make a equilateral triangle with (1) and (2), so i'm leaving it in the way it actually is.
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - ^ align this with the 2 i'll pass on that
00:54:941 (8) - ^ align with the 1&3 ^
02:59:665 (3) - move forward 1 tick...so its on the white tick i was going with the guitar at that point, so no. :)

[Insane]
Circle Size: +1 or 2 actual circle size is ok

~STAR thanks :)

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
0:12:427 (5) up 1 grid fixed
0:24:255 (4) up 1 grid no.
0:40:370 (1,2,3,4) (1,3) should parallel to (2,4)? (4) down 1 grid fixed
0:54:084 (5,6,7,8) ^ same problem fixed
1:05:827 (9,10,11) uneven spacing, (10) right 1 grid, (11) right+down 1 grid? fixed
1:58:027 (7) down 1 grid fixed
2:05:912 (7,8) down 1 grid? nope, unless of that i've moved (4) down by 1 grid
2:28:198 (4,5) spacing eh? it's ok in the way it is
3:00:084 (6) down 1 grid unless of that, (4) down

[Hard]
0:23:227 (2,3) spacing too small? ermmm...no.
0:39:855 (4,5) spacing fixed
before I look through the whole map, imo it needs a slight resnap? Spacing multiple varies from 0.75x ~ 0.85x, which the range can be improved. jesus christ...i've did it like over 9000 times now. i have NO IDEA why people are still complaining about it -_-" anyway, did it once again.

star~ thanks, and thanks for your mod too

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Use the same combo colors on all your difficulties, right now Insane's colors are different from the rest. i thought they were the same actually, but yeah, i've been wrong u.u
The kiai fountains at the end feel anti-climatic why? :(
You have unsnapped timing sections, specially important for kiai sections. that was because i've been searching for a correct offset, and when i finally got i was too lazy to resnap them D:
03:42:598 - Add another kiai fountain here and restart kiai, would look better imo. yeah, i've been considering that too

[Insane]
00:24:084 (3,4) - Ninja spacing error. (too far) yeah, that's true, fixed
00:42:941 (4) - For some reason the hitbursts are blinding me from this slider. nah, everyone who was testing this map for me hadn't any problem with that
00:50:827 (3,4) - Ninja spacing error. (too far) fixed, though at this situation imo it doesnt really make any difference
02:27:855 (2,3,4,5,6) - For a better flow, form a semi circle pattern with theese notes.
Note: Not many things to say but, the flow is broken too many times for tricks that it makes it less fun to play for me =/ that was actually the point of this map, it was subjected to be tricky ;)

[Hard]
00:49:798 (1,2) - Try to make theese curves more like arcs? those were like that on purpose
02:01:112 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:44:141 (5) - Make the distance between control points longer and also make the lines look symmetric to form a less sharp corner on the inside of the curve. yup
03:31:112 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Due to the distance this double triplet is hard to read. did my best to make them at least little bit more readable u.u

[Normal]
00:40:027 (3,4) - Spacing too far. hi KuraiPettan, i threw your naziness away~

Pretty solid map, i would like you to get more mods on it tho Good Luck!~ few more and it might be ready i guess :) thanks!

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[General]
all timing sections which change sound must be 1/4 beat before the note to be changed fixed
[Insane]
00:14:827 (4,5) - switch these around, the underlap is unbearable i dont think that's making any difference, but well...fixed.
01:35:227 (2,3,4,5,6) - i have no problem with this, but some other people may... keep an eye on it and change it if you are asked to by someone else if you want i thought it might be confusing too, but every player i asked to play hadn't any problems with it...anyway i'm okay with rearranging it if someone complains
[Hard]
good :3
[Normal]
good :3

starring :) thanks!

Hyguys wrote:

Sorry, i modded wrong map D: D:
here is the mod as you request

[Normal]
This diff's to hard to be a normal , change name to Normal+ it's not that hard...just take a look at other normals, they are even harder
[Hard]
00:09:855 (4) Remove clap on start and put on end uhm, no. that doesn't sound better imo
00:13:455 (6) ^ it's actually like that o.o
00:25:970 (4) Add clap oh, this one, right
03:22:198 (3) ^ it's already added
[Insane]
make qual: image NO.
00:15:855 (8) Strange slider ...not really

That's it. orz
Star thanks, and sorry, but i haven't found your suggestions useful o_o

Odaril wrote:

[Normal]
This diff isn't much beginner-friendly... many rhythms are hard, some patterns are hard too... I suggest you map a Easy diff. three diffs concluding 3:50 play time in each is enough, really x_x
02:53:227 (1,1,1) - Kick sliders with so many repeats are confusing for new players: how could they know they'd have to hold ? You should change them unless you map a Easy. rearranged
03:04:112 - isn't this timing section useless? oh, yeah, it is. :p deleted

[Hard]
02:41:911 - isn't this timing section useless? deleted
03:04:112 - isn't this timing section useless? ^

[Insane]
max score is really high well, there aren't many maps with an Insane diff consisting of 3:50 play time that haven't got really high score. =P
00:24:941 (8) - I couldn't really see this note in the corner of the screen no one hadn't any problems with it, huh o_o
01:42:598 (3) - couldn't see this one either yeah, and you could see it at 1:47:912...this pattern is based on the same thing o_o
04:05:398 (3) - couldn't see it - the approach circle is hidden by the yellow circle for the slider ^

sorry for the very late mod :/ no problem, thanks for it

IceBeam wrote:

Your BG isn't 4:3,better resize it to 800x600. 960/720 = 4/3, so i don't see any problems ;)

[Normal]
00:05:912 (1) - Finish.
[...]

These finish suggestion will do for others diffs as well. oh, that was a cool idea :) thanks!

[Hard]
03:56:655 - This finish doesn't fit well,remove. oh, it got in somehow. thanks for noticing

[Insane]
Fine to me. =w=

Nothing technically wrong. Nice,balanced mapset. Good luck to you. thanks for your modding :)

dksslqj wrote:

i'm late mod your map, really sorry no problem, few people i've met on #modReqs via mod4mod weren't even modding my map after i've did theirs =w=

[Insane]
03:02:655 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - When I play this style, this jump really confused me rhombus of death yay!
and I find some copy and paste, but it's fine >:(
some patterns make me fun cool :3
and I really recommend change cricle cize 3 3 is too hard, 2 fits perfectly for me

[Hard]
02:03:855 (1) - hummm;;;;;; oh, right, too long distance
02:03:855 (1) - http://puu.sh/mWs fixed
02:48:427 (2) - 2 grid up fixed
some stream seems to hard it's [Hard], after all. :>

[Normal]
01:29:741 (4,5,6) - that's too bad idea
02:41:055 (4,5,6) - ▲
04:17:055 (4,5,6) - ▲ you mean that there's no hitsound at all? i think they'll pass on few seconds, derp :P

thanks for modding!

roflninja wrote:

[Normal]
02:57:341 (1) - out of the screen oh god, why didn't i notice that earlier...fixed :)
03:04:198 (5) - new combo? yup

[Hard]
01:05:741 (8) - new combo? nah, not on that one. :)
03:04:198 (5) - ^ yup

[Insane]
nothing i could find :3


great map, good luck thanks, good luck with yours too :)

LesTrucsRose wrote:

[Hard]
01:16:541 (2,3) - Combine these two beats into a slider. It's just weird having a beat on a blue tick. ...why?
02:40:884 (1) - Make this spinner end at 02:41:741. it would let players get ready for 02:42:084 (1). they can always stop spinning earlier and aim on it :p also, that was putted like that on purpose

[Insane]
00:40:369 (1,2,3,4) - too hard of a jump. huh? they're not that hard o_o
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - too hard of a jump. ^
01:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^


nice map! thanks! and sorry, but i haven't found your suggestions useful at all. :P

Wiinter wrote:

[Hard]
00:25:455 (2) - start new combo here instead of 00:25:112 (1). follows the rhythm better imo fixed
02:58:712 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - overused claps >_< fixed

[Insane]
00:41:227 (5) - start new combo here instead of 00:41:569 (1) nah, i like it the way it is now
01:52:541 (5) - ^ but about 01:52:884 (1) ^

Daru wrote:

[Normal]
00:22:370 (1) - Reduce slider by 1/1 and add a 1/2 kick slider starting at 00:23:227 (X). alright, fixed. :)
01:15:341 (2,3,4) - Arrange in a straight line. A bit hard to read considering the AR and intended difficulty. no, i like it the way it is now
02:26:655 (2,3,4) - ^ ^

[Hard]
01:28:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align these pairs in a symmetrical pattern. nah, it's ok. :)
02:27:341 (1) - Remove combo nope
02:27:855 (2) - Add combo ^
02:39:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align pairs in symmetrical pattern. nah, it's ok. :)

[Insane]
Circle size a bit big? no, it's ok
01:14:141 (5) - Very slightly misaligned from previous slider end. fixed
02:25:455 (5) - ^^
02:59:398 (3) - Off-screen fixed, i suppose...?

Xeno32 wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:427 (5) - Stack on 00:24:770 (7) - Plays nicer for me. fixed
00:46:027 (7) - Delete and repeat 00:45:341 (6) - one more. :> fixed, cool idea :D
00:51:169 (4) - End the slider here 00:52:369. nah, definetely not
01:05:570 (1) - New combo to make it read easier. ?.?
01:15:512 (x) - Hit-circle with clap (makes more sense and follows music) it doesn't follow the rest of the map tho
01:56:998 (7) - repeat 1 more time and delete (8) - then respace. yup
02:02:484 (4) - same as 00:46:027 (7) suggestion yup
02:45:255 - Mew Hit-circle (no hitsounds) Mew is a pokemon, also skipping
02:45:427 - New Hit-circle (no hitsounds) ^
02:45:770 - New Hit-circle (no hitsounds) ^
02:46:198 (12) - delete and repeat 02:45:855 (11) - + make it a new combo. Then remap :> ^
03:03:855 (6,7) - let them face the other way ( See spoilerbox) ^
03:30:941 (1) - New Combo to make it easier to read. ^
03:41:912 (3) - Move this one out to the right, to make it easier to read =) yup
04:05:398 (3) - Also hard to read, but fine I guess if you hadn't mentioned 4:10:884 (3), than you shouldn't mention this one aswell. :P

[Hard]
00:16:884 (1,2) (3,4) (5,6) - Make a them more jumpy. IT is a hard :> and it fits the music well IMO nah. c:
01:28:198 (1,2)(3,4) (5,6) - ^ same as above ^ same as above
02:45:512 (3) - replace with two hit-circles as it is, kinda harder then insane. yeah, i thought about it too.

footix31 wrote:

[General]

1. Background should be 800x600 but it looks okay like it is so don't know if you need to change. it's ok since it's ratio is 4:3

[Normal]

1. Hp drain +1? It's very low :| if you say so ?.?
2. Approach rate +1? (not sure for this one but it fit better imo) nah, it's ok
3. 00:29:055 (2) - Maybe move it a little so it doesn't touch the other slider? nah, it's ok
4. 00:33:341 (1) - Move it a little so it's not under the circle? ...it's completely visible ._.
5. 01:17:227 (6) - Not really ok for a normal imo, remove and make the spinner start here? found another solution, and fixed. :)
6. 01:47:398 (3) - Uuuh too close, you should move it like this fixed, though it might bite with distance spacing a little bit from now ;x
7. 02:28:541 (6) - Not really ok for a normal imo, remove and make the spinner start here? found another solution, and fixed. :)

[Hard]

1. Approach rate +1? alright
2. 02:27:684 - Add a circle? :? why the hell everyone's telling me that... >.> delete (2,3,4,5,6), you'll understand why i didn't added a circle at this point :)
3. 02:41:055 (1,1) - Uh. Quick spinner and right after a looping slider... At least move the slider away from the centre please. ?.?
4. 02:44:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ok, so you're following the claps and the guitar at the same time, not good at all imo :( You should remove (4) and (7) to follow the claps or add circles at 02:45:255 - 02:45:427 - 02:46:112 - to follow guitar. ermm, actually i like it the way it is now, and i don't really like to change it. ;)
5. 02:46:284 (7,8) - Fix the spacing? fixed the spacing
6. 03:03:512 (7,8,9) - A little weird imo but seems ok I guess. it's ok for me aswell
7. There's again those 1/1 stacks under sliders but it seems more or less okay here so do as you want. i like'em
8. 01:14:141 (5) - This stack is really annoying since the others are 1/2 and this one 1/1 :< And it's hard to see because of the kiai ^
9. 02:25:455 (5) - And again ;_; ^

[Insane]

1. Approach rate is really too low, make it +1 please. yeah, definetely +1, how couldn't i notice that before o.o
2. 02:42:084 (1) - Try to move it from the centre? :< yeah, i've thought about this too :)
3. 02:44:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same thing again about the weird timing. But I found that it would be ok with a stack instead of this slider 02:45:855 (8) tried it, and i think i'll stay with this slider
4. 02:54:255 (10,11,12,10,11,12) - Why no sliders here? Well maybe I just suck at streams. you do :3 i like it the way it is, really ;)
5. 03:01:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Wut, mostly the same spacing for 2 different rhythm? It doesn't fit at all imo. uhm...i'll stay with it for now, when someone else will complain about it, i'll try to rearrange it
6. 03:16:541 (1) - Hmm I think you shouldn't silence this spinner, maybe not too loud but still :( nope, it's ok since most of the instruments were silenced at this moment too

eveless wrote:

Sorry for my late x_x no problem (:

[Insane]
00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) - Dont you think this is not a normal rhombus? i think they're crook :< Also i think 1 must to New Combo this wasn't supposed to be a rhombus ._.
00:26:141 (x) - add a note here since there is a strong accent i was following vocals at this point
00:37:112 (x) - ^ ^
00:54:084 (4,5,6,7) - Same with 00:04:712 (1,2,3,4) same
01:15:512 (x) - add a note :< doesn't really fit
01:42:941 (x) - ^ vocals
01:48:255 (4) - i find another way to fix the problem that you havent add note in Strong accent when you follow the drum... move it to 01:48:427 uh, but what about vocals in that case? ._.
01:51:684 (1,2,3,4) - Same with before x_x yeah, same before.
02:05:398 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
02:17:398 (10) - move it forward or add note in 02:17:227 yeah, in this case it does fit
02:26:827 (6) - yeah, in this case it doesn't. :<
02:27:341 (1) - add a repeat NO.
02:44:827 (7) - add a note to transit it doesn't follow the guitar
02:57:341 (14) - new combo yup
02:59:398 (3) - add clap in last yup
03:00:598 (6) - add clap in begin yup
03:19:455 (4,5,6,7) - Same with before same with before
03:40:884 (x) - add a note or another way i like it the way it is
03:53:227 (x) - ^ ^
04:05:227 (2,3,4,5) - ugly... fixed

[Hard]
00:23:227 (2) - looks crowded with 1 not really
00:25:112 (7) - New combo yup
00:25:455 (1) - cancel new combo yup
00:44:312 (1) - too close fixed
01:00:427 (x) - add a note isn't following vocals

[Normal]
00:11:055 (3) - add note :< i like it the way it is

nice song o.o/ thanks for modding >w</