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Sakura Hana wrote:
[General]
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit i knew about that, i've been waiting for someone to mod, than i'd delete it :p
Do not... and i repeat... DO NOT STORYBOARD HITSOUNDS EVER!!! oh, ok :) i've been thinking are they ok or not, and now i know ^^
00:05:901 - I dont recommend you use this Kiai, also you dont need an uninherited timing section for Kiai fixed
[Hard]
try to shorten it so you have less max score i've mentioned to map the whole song on that difficulty, so i'm not gonna shorten it ;)
Also the map feels very repetitive, plus you keep repeating the same patterns over, and over, and over again it's because the song is repetitive too, i couldn't came up with another placement :p
00:15:844 (8) - Random slow slider? fixed
00:16:528 Why do i hear a clap here? couse of storyboarded hitsounds, deleted them
00:40:356 (6) - New combo yup
00:56:299 (2,3) - I'm not going to nazi your slider shapes since they are decent and your a new mapper, however overlaps like theese are a nono, shape the slider in a form so that the circle doesnt touch it okay, i'll keep that in mind
01:17:256 (1) - Shorten until 01:19:442? done, but 'til 1:19:613
02:27:842 (2,3,4,5,6) - Although i appreciate the fact that you want to do something different to avoid repetitiveness i rather you use different patterns on the chorus and keep the stream here. nah, i'll leave it in the way it actually is, the stream wouldn't follow with the song after all
02:34:013 (1) - Random circle? remove! i've put it in like that on purpose, leaving :p
02:57:328 (12) - Random slow slider? this is unintuitive. plus doesnt seem to fit the song well fixed
03:50:814 (1,2) - Swap new combo as well nah, combos are ok in way they actually are
[Normal]
00:22:358 (1) - Remove New combo ; 00:23:729 (3) - New Combo etc. combo's are ok imo
00:25:101 (1) - Could be split into 2 circles oh, that's right :p fixed
02:02:473 (3) - Looks kind of ugly, reshape it by moving the control points a bit for a smoother curve? fixed a little bit
[Easy]
This diff is too short thought so... expanded 'til 2:31
thanks for your mod :3
thanks for stars, too >w<