[Skin]
The sectionpass.mp3 is really quiet and is hard to hear in VM's diff - especially compared to the sectionfail.mp3.
[Storyboard]
Think you can get this so that it doesn't flash the background, then to black when you start the map? It's a little jarring to start, and kind of looks bad considering the great SB work later into the map. You can do this by loading the BG in the SB, then setting the fade controls from there.
seui/titl.png have that fade burst that gets cut off rather square and it's very easy to notice against a black background. Can you try and round these off a bit?
01:46:418 - The fade to black here feels really sudden in the Collab diff. Can you try and make it smoother?
03:17:594 - ^
[MoNky's Beat]
03:56:221 (2) - Could set the end of this as the soft hit set so that you don't get that little "pop" sound that the Normal set does at low volumes.
04:36:614 (1) - Use this
208,100,276614,6,0,B|104:136|104:312|256:400|408:312|408:136|304:100,2,570,2|0|0
For this:
[Collab]
Reduce stack leniency by 2? There's some stuff that is stacking that really shouldn't, like 01:03:084 (3,5) -
Arusha Shuna:
01:00:731 (6) - All these whistles on the sliders intended? They sound awful to me. :<
01:02:496 (2,3,1,2) - ^
01:25:045 (5,6) - The hit sounding feels so empty here.
01:33:869 (1,2,3) - Use this:
128,288,93869,6,0,B|80:168|168:80,1,200,2|0
384,288,94457,2,0,B|432:168|344:80,1,200,2|0
208,268,95045,2,2,B|112:200|256:-44|400:200|304:268,1,400
For this:
Sallad4ever:
02:27:790 (2) - Scraping the HP bar a tad
02:38:574 (8,9,10) - <3
Nivalis:
03:54:065 (1) - This curve could look better
03:55:633 (5) - This sounds off because the vocalist cuts off a little early. 1/8 short fits really well and it won't impact game play.
04:15:829 (1,2,3,4) - Having these set up as 3-hit sliders feels so unintuitive. 4-hit would be much better, imo
04:40:535 (3) - Maybe lower the volume on the body of the slider? The slider ticks stick out during this part of the music.
04:39:751 (1,2,3) - Also :3