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Toyama Nao - Love Call

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Nymph
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Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月12日 at 4:06:27

Artist: Toyama Nao
Title: Love Call
Source: Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai
Tags: Nakagawa Kanon The World God Only Knows Starring Birth chungskale
BPM: 143
Filesize: 7938kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chung's Easy (0.57 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Loving Call~ (4.32 stars, 323 notes)
  3. Sweet Call~ (2.82 stars, 233 notes)
Download: Toyama Nao - Love Call
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Nymph_'s 2nd map~
"Love call" by Nakagawa Kanon - (Toyama Nao).
Song from the "Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai"---"the world god only knows".
Sweet call is normal diff, and loving call is hard~and thanks for chung's easy~
All things ready now~please enjoy~
Last edited by Nymph , edited 54 times in total.
Sawatari Makoto
7 posts
Joined January 2011
Sawatari Makoto
肉包大爱。只要给某肉包。某什么都做
a6557182aa
2 posts
Joined November 2010
a6557182aa
加油 8-)
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
超好听的呀～加油～！
Megaparadox
98 posts
Joined December 2010
Megaparadox
:oops:
Mei_coN
372 posts
Joined March 2009
Mei_coN
冲着这ID我决定star一记~~~ ;)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Nymph
nearly finish~
maybe time to ask for some mod I think~
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Hi from V.B.R's studio

[SB]
数值不精确

[sweet call~]
00:42:519 (x) - add spinner,end at 00:44:617
01:53:009 (x) - add spinner,end at 01:54:687
02:02:869 (4) - move to 02:03:079
03:20:072 (4) - move to 03:20:281

[loving call~]
00:27:624 (6) - move to 00:27:834
02:02:869 (4) - move to 02:03:079
03:20:072 (4) - move to 03:20:281

排版有点死板 star~
Nymph
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Nymph

Beren wrote:

Hi from V.B.R's studio

[SB]
数值不精确 timing不知道准确不准确..等timing确定了再改

[sweet call~]
00:42:519 (x) - add spinner,end at 00:44:617 还是更喜欢空着..
01:53:009 (x) - add spinner,end at 01:54:687 也感觉空着舒服..可能我比较懒吗..
02:02:869 (4) - move to 02:03:079 感觉两个都行呢..先不改了
03:20:072 (4) - move to 03:20:281 这也是

[loving call~]
00:27:624 (6) - move to 00:27:834 感觉我的排法更舒服
02:02:869 (4) - move to 02:03:079 这两个同上一个难度
03:20:072 (4) - move to 03:20:281

排版有点死板 star~ 没办法呢...作图新手 我会慢慢学的
谢谢MOD~
Bessy
145 posts
Joined September 2009
Bessy
追加mod :)
i like this song.

[sweet call~]

去掉slider上的tick声
00:29:093(3) - finish
00:42:309(6,X) - 6去掉whistle，在X那加个note然后finish
01:02:659(3) - finish
01:05:596(6) - 感觉用slider更好
01:16:086(1) - finish ,not whistle
01:20:701(1) - kiai 从这里开始。
01:22:799(5) - finish
01:36:226(X) - 加note，finish，new combo，后面去掉new combo
01:39:582(7) - 会不会太短了？和歌声配合比较好
01:42:939(1) - finish
01:53:009(X) - 加note，finish。另外kiai结束?
02:03:079(X) - 加note，finish
02:29:932(3) - finish
02:43:358(1) - finish
02:47:974(1) - kiai 从这里开始。
02:50:072(5) - finish
02:56:785(x) - 加note，finish
03:03:498(x) - 加note，finish，new combo，后面去掉new combo
03:10:212(1) - finish
03:20:281(x) - 加note，finish，去掉前面10的whistle


[loving call~]

00:17:135(5,6) - stack
00:24:058(4,5) - stack
00:28:883(9,10) - stack,and 10用finish而不是whitle?
01:02:659(9) - finish ,not whistle
01:08:953(5,6) - stack
01:20:701(1) - kiai 从这里开始。
01:22:799(1) - finish
01:29:512(3) - finish ,not whistle
01:36:226(11) - ^
01:41:260(10) - ^
01:53:009(X) - 加note并finish。另外，感觉kiai在这里就可以结束了?
02:03:079(x) - 加note并finish。去掉前面4的finish。
02:36:226(5,6) - stack
02:47:974(1) - kiai 从这里开始。
02:50:072(1) - finish
02:56:785(3) - finish ,not whistle
03:03:498(11) - ^
03:10:212(3) - ^
03:20:281(X) - 加note并finish。
Nymph
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Topic Starter
Nymph

Gabriela Robin wrote:

追加mod :)
i like this song.

[sweet call~]

去掉slider上的tick声 觉得tick声挺好听的..
00:29:093(3) - finish finish有点长?加了个whistle
00:42:309(6,X) - 6去掉whistle，在X那加个note然后finish good idea
01:02:659(3) - finish 也加了whistle
01:05:596(6) - 感觉用slider更好 不用似乎也可以?没灵感
01:16:086(1) - finish ,not whistle fixed
01:20:701(1) - kiai 从这里开始。这里晚了点吧 转盘完喷星星比较好看..
01:22:799(5) - finish fixed
01:36:226(X) - 加note，finish，new combo，后面去掉new combo fixed
01:39:582(7) - 会不会太短了？和歌声配合比较好 还行 听起来很顺
01:42:939(1) - finish fixed
01:53:009(X) - 加note，finish。另外kiai结束? fixed kial后面结束不行吗
02:03:079(X) - 加note，finish fixed
02:29:932(3) - finish whistle好了
02:43:358(1) - finish 同上
02:47:974(1) - kiai 从这里开始。还是先保留意见
02:50:072(5) - finish fixed
02:56:785(x) - 加note，finish fixed
03:03:498(x) - 加note，finish，new combo，后面去掉new combo fixed
03:10:212(1) - finish fixed
03:20:281(x) - 加note，finish，去掉前面10的whistle fixed


[loving call~]

00:17:135(5,6) - stack fixed
00:24:058(4,5) - stack fixed
00:28:883(9,10) - stack,and 10用finish而不是whitle? fixed
01:02:659(9) - finish ,not whistle whistle更好吧
01:08:953(5,6) - stack fixed
01:20:701(1) - kiai 从这里开始。先保留
01:22:799(1) - finish fixed
01:29:512(3) - finish ,not whistle fixed
01:36:226(11) - ^ fixed
01:41:260(10) - ^ fixed
01:53:009(X) - 加note并finish。另外，感觉kiai在这里就可以结束了? fixed
02:03:079(x) - 加note并finish。去掉前面4的finish。fixed
02:36:226(5,6) - stack fixed
02:47:974(1) - kiai 从这里开始。保留先
02:50:072(1) - finish fixed
02:56:785(3) - finish ,not whistle fixed
03:03:498(11) - ^ fixed
03:10:212(3) - ^ fixed
03:20:281(X) - 加note并finish。fixed
谢谢MOD~
_Kiva
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_Kiva
支持~ NYMPH加油/
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
好歌..0w0
Fight~~
KingKrishna
285 posts
Joined October 2010
KingKrishna
SWEET CALL

-00:17:775 (5,6) distance snap? suggestion
-00:28:673 (1-3) distance snap? same
-01:00:561 (7-b3) distance snap? suggestion


Loving Call
-00:16:086(3) distance snap?

-00:20:161(4) distance snap?

-00:22:792 (3) distance snap?

-01:03:918 (2,3) distance snap?

as u can see a lot of distance snapping

but ? means suggestions so u dont have
to do it!
Nymph
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Topic Starter
Nymph

mebins wrote:

SWEET CALL

-00:17:775 (5,6) distance snap? suggestion seems alrgiht no need to fix
-00:28:673 (1-3) distance snap? same same
-01:00:561 (7-b3) distance snap? suggestion same


Loving Call
-00:16:086(3) distance snap? same

-00:20:161(4) distance snap?same

-00:22:792 (3) distance snap?same

-01:03:918 (2,3) distance snap?same

as u can see a lot of distance snapping

but ? means suggestions so u dont have
to do it!
I think those distance snapping is just ok , no need to change.

anyway, thanks modding~
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
thx reqs~

[sweet call]
3.20.281(10) - spacing

combo
0.41.680(4)
0.58.673(4)
1.15.037(6)
1.41.890(9)
1.52.170(7)
2.42.309(6)
3.09.163(9)
3.19.233(7)

[loving call]
combo
1.22.379(5)
1.22.799(1) - remove
1.25.946(9)
2.49.652(5)
2.50.072(1) - remove
2.53.219(9)

+star~
Nymph
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Nymph

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[sweet call]
3.20.281(10) - spacing

combo
0.41.680(4)
0.58.673(4)
1.15.037(6)
1.41.890(9)
1.52.170(7)
2.42.309(6)
3.09.163(9)
3.19.233(7)

[loving call]
combo
1.22.379(5)
1.22.799(1) - remove
1.25.946(9)
2.49.652(5)
2.50.072(1) - remove
2.53.219(9)

+star~

fixed~ thanks for modding
nicktoons
174 posts
Joined June 2010
nicktoons
like it. (little bit slow but still like it)
General
I can't see any big mistakes in those map's. So my mod is just one big suggestion. You may listen to it or not. It's up to you.
maybe you should make circles larger?
01:22:799 - why don't strat kiai time from there? (suggestion)
sweet call (easy?)
00:42:519 - delete
02:03:079 (4) - ^
02:35:386 (3) - delete spinner, add circle
02:56:785 (4) - delete
02:58:463 (8) - ^
03:02:240 (8) - ^
03:20:281 (4) - ^
01:22:799 - why don't strat kiai time from there? (suggestion)
loving call (it must be hard? )
00:27:624 (6) - delete
00:26:995 (5) - delete reverse
00:27:414 (6) - add combo
00:27:834 (7) - add combo
(think that that sounds better(again only suggestion))
00:31:191 (4) - delete reverse, end spinner at 00:31:610 -
and repeat that at all same point's
01:53:219 - 01:55:736 - don't think that that kind of emptyness is ok.
oh and ofcourse star =)
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there~
Sorry for the long wait, I was not feeling well these past couple of days.
So, I had a go with your maps, and here's what I can say:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[sweet call~]
For some of the parts with long and sustained vocals (like 1:05:596 and 1:25:946), maybe it's better if you change the circles to sliders or extend the existing sliders so that they follow the singer's voice to the end, coz I assume that the map is following the singer.

2:03:079 [4] - Maybe change this into a spinner instead, ending at 2:06:435.
2:42:309 [1] - I suggest you remove this one, and place a circle at 2:42:519 instead, to go with the 'I' in 'I love you'.
2:58:463 [8] - Maybe distance this away from the end of slider [7], to follow the pattern at 2:56:785?
3:02:449 [9] - Distance spacing issue with [8].

[loving call~]
I like this one.
2:03:079 [5] - Same case as [4] in sweet call~.
3:00:142 [3] - Maybe a whistle or a finish here....
3:00:981 [5] - .... and here....
3:01:820 [7] - ... and here?
3:10:421 [4] - Maybe remove this one?

Love the song and the SB, so one star for you~
All the best for your maps! :)

P/S: Oh, and congrats for getting Odoriko ranked! :D
Night_Side
158 posts
Joined May 2010
Night_Side
star :)
Ayeen_old
316 posts
Joined October 2010
Ayeen_old
Hi:

Finally got the time for your map :)

Easy ( Sweet Call):
You should check AImod. There is 2 spacing issues detected by AImod, very obvious on 01:59:513 between (4) and (5)
SPOILER

Everything else should be fine then.

Hard:
Seem good to me

Skinning Element:
Hitcircle is too transparent. Make it more visible.
Why did you put sliderfollowcircle-0 if there is only 1 slider follow circles.
Though I dont really like the small sized hitbursrt (300,100, etc) it is still rankable I think
Go make custom comboburst if you decided to make minor skin element. Pipi doesnt fit in this map anyway.
Holoaz
358 posts
Joined November 2009
Holoaz
=~=d
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
总体上来说不错的图 作为新人来说 水准相当高了
我就给以下几点大方向上的作图建议吧 懒得nazi了 你可以参考一下看看以后怎么作图 当然我说的不一定对 你就看看能不能用吧
1.复制粘贴过多 这有很强烈的偷懒感 让人感觉你对于自己的图并不是很认真
2.音效可以再丰富一点 有些地方可以用clap或者是绿线换成Normal的hitnormal
3.一首慢歌如果音量处理的好会很不错 比如开头部分这里很适合利用音量线突出歌声的此起彼伏
4.slider过于横来竖去且短小,适当的长slider也可以增加一些色彩 让人觉得不是那么无趣.而且在我看来 直slider并且适合比较硬的歌曲，像这种柔和的歌曲,多用一些弯曲的slider也能符合歌曲的意境
5.适当的slider变速也是点精之笔,比如开头部分几乎只有人声，而后面音乐逐渐进入.像这样的部分可以通过slider变速以及节奏的密集和音效等来显现
6.如上面所说 节奏可以多变一点.这图几乎一个套路走完了全程
7.同样间距也是一样

比如像这里
01:55:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
这边是从高到低 从急到缓的 从大到小的一个体现 处理的方法多种多样 比如
1.通过sv 1.0-0.8-0.6
2.通过间距 1和2之间1.0 3-4之间0.8 5-6之间0.6 23 45之间不变
3.音量 1开头低结尾高 2低 3开头比2略高 3结尾比3开头再略高一点点 4低 5开头低结尾略高 也就是总体走从高到低的音量变化再根据音高和缓急处理音量线


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statementreply
Pro Tester
307 posts
Joined June 2009
statementreply
Offset: 2251 (+11ms)

Skin:
approachcircle.png里面的圆圈尺寸偏小，可能会影响读图。

SB:
日文歌词建议使用日文字体。
歌词有很多处错误，请仔细检查。
SPOILER
何もみえない
暗闇のなかで
見つけたんだ　小さな光を

私は歩いてく
もう迷わない
まっすぐに届け

何も聞こえない
喧騒のなかで
見つけたんだ　小さな声を

私は歌う
メロディが空へ一杯に
広がれ

心は　あなたに続いてる
いますぐ会いたい
感じたい　ぬくもりを
世界が満たされる　光で
どこにいても　感じるよ　声を

わたしの
らぶこーる

あなたに

涙があふれる
孤独な心に
見つけたんだ　小さな愛を

私は想う
歌声が　どこまでも響く
I love you

たとえ　つまずいて　疲れ切っても
地図のない道に
ゴールは見えなくても
進むよ　目の前を見つめて

たどりつくよ
あなたの
ところへ

（没map的部分略）

2011-05-12 EDIT: 修正歌词里一处错误
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