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hiromi - LOVE HEART (Short Ver.)

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Hinacle
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年4月4日 at 20:31:21

Artist: hiromi
Title: LOVE HEART (Short Ver.)
Source: relations sister sister
Tags: Aenna Cyborg
BPM: 172
Filesize: 10466kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aenna (4.92 stars, 282 notes)
  2. Easy (2.62 stars, 106 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 315 notes)
  4. Normal (4.34 stars, 145 notes)
Download: hiromi - LOVE HEART (Short Ver.)
Download: hiromi - LOVE HEART (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Beatmap.
PC Game 『relations sister×sister.』

Mapset:
[Easy]-Done.
[Normal]-Done.
[Aenna=Hard]-Done (Mapped by Aenna)
[Insane]-Done.
fumis
ganba!
Suimya
2nd star :D
kokorotin
ok!!
KanaRin
ganbareee
phoon
nice
murasa433
nice!
Aenna
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Aenna wrote:

~
Thank you ゲスト 8-)
S o r d a
go go 8-)
PEPOTTI
nice map~
Topic Starter
Hinacle

PEPOTTI wrote:

nice map~
Thank you test play!!

>fumis,-S e k a i-,kokorotin,KanaRin,phoon,murasa433,Aenna,S o r d a,PEPOTTI

Thank you for star~!!
KSHR
modding

Overall
- Tags : AennaCyborg を追加 <全dif>
- kiai time end=01:16:141 <Aennaさんdifは変更なし>


Easy
00:42:653 (T) - 緑線を00:42:566に移動
00:44:048 (T) - 緑線を00:43:961に移動
00:45:444 (T) - 緑線を00:45:356に移動
00:46:839 (T) - 緑線を00:46:752に移動
01:01:141 (3) - add clap
01:16:141 (1) - add clap at end ?
01:17:537 (1) - ^


Normal
OD : +1

00:53:729 (T)
00:11:955 (T) - 緑線を00:11:868に移動
00:12:653 (T) - 緑線を00:12:566に移動
00:13:351 (1) - 緑線を00:13:351に移動
00:14:833 (T) - 音量70%は大きく感じるので、60%でOKだと思います
00:42:653 (T) - 緑線を 00:42:566に移動
01:05:327 (x) - remove finish, add clap
01:08:118 (x) - ^


Aenna
HP,OD : +1 ?


Insane
00:04:979 (1,2) - 1grid right
00:28:351 (11) - 1grid left
00:31:490 (13) - add finish (Costum hitsound 2)
00:43:351 (4) - 1grid right
00:49:891 (4) - 前のサークルとのスぺーシングが若干狭いような...
01:05:327 (4) - add clap ?
01:08:118 (5) - add finish at beginning ?
01:13:176 (7) - 1grid right
01:21:723 (1) - remove finish at begining


star!! :)
yamossan
good!!!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

KSHR wrote:

modding

Overall
- Tags : AennaCyborg を追加 <全dif>
- kiai time end=01:16:141 <Aennaさんdifは変更なし>


Easy
00:42:653 (T) - 緑線を00:42:566に移動
00:44:048 (T) - 緑線を00:43:961に移動
00:45:444 (T) - 緑線を00:45:356に移動
00:46:839 (T) - 緑線を00:46:752に移動
01:01:141 (3) - add clap
01:16:141 (1) - add clap at end ?
01:17:537 (1) - ^


Normal
OD : +1

00:53:729 (T)
00:11:955 (T) - 緑線を00:11:868に移動
00:12:653 (T) - 緑線を00:12:566に移動
00:13:351 (1) - 緑線を00:13:351に移動
00:14:833 (T) - 音量70%は大きく感じるので、60%でOKだと思います
00:42:653 (T) - 緑線を 00:42:566に移動
01:05:327 (x) - remove finish, add clap
01:08:118 (x) - ^


Aenna
HP,OD : +1 ?


Insane
00:04:979 (1,2) - 1grid right
00:28:351 (11) - 1grid left
00:31:490 (13) - add finish (Costum hitsound 2)
00:43:351 (4) - 1grid right
00:49:891 (4) - 前のサークルとのスぺーシングが若干狭いような...
01:05:327 (4) - add clap ?
01:08:118 (5) - add finish at beginning ?
01:13:176 (7) - 1grid right
01:21:723 (1) - remove finish at begining


star!! :)
Thank you for star,mod~!!

>yamossan

Thank you for star~!!
swish
;) :oops:
Miu_old
star~!!
So_Ra
good!
PeaChick
fight ~ >A<
DeadAlready
>w< cute song~

SPOILER
[General]
- Add more lead-in? hmmm I feel maybe 2 second is better xD
- Slider ticks seems all silenced... hmm I think you just want to increase the max score but also don't want the tick voice lol
but this maybe can't be ranked D: so please choose one:
1. Use some clap hitsound for tick custom hitsound to let some tick as a clap voice.
2. Decrease the slider tick rate to 0.5 and delete the non-sound file.
3. Just delete the non-sound file but tick voice will be appear :
Hmmm and btw I like 2. more (because I think your easy and normal's score is also enough for tick 0.5 xD)

[Easy]
00:42:566 - & 00:43:961 - & 00:45:356 - & 00:46:752 - Please delete these green lines, seems it's same with before one.xD

[Normal]
00:12:566 - & 00:13:263 - ^

[Insane]
00:36:984 - ...^


Orz /me runs
Really nice map so I only can find these problem D:
star >w</
and really thanks for find me to mod ></
ganbattene- >~</
Topic Starter
Hinacle

quintitem wrote:

>w< cute song~

SPOILER
[General]
- Add more lead-in? hmmm I feel maybe 2 second is better xD
- Slider ticks seems all silenced... hmm I think you just want to increase the max score but also don't want the tick voice lol
but this maybe can't be ranked D: so please choose one:
1. Use some clap hitsound for tick custom hitsound to let some tick as a clap voice.
2. Decrease the slider tick rate to 0.5 and delete the non-sound file.
3. Just delete the non-sound file but tick voice will be appear :
Hmmm and btw I like 2. more (because I think your easy and normal's score is also enough for tick 0.5 xD)

[Easy]
00:42:566 - & 00:43:961 - & 00:45:356 - & 00:46:752 - Please delete these green lines, seems it's same with before one.xD

[Normal]
00:12:566 - & 00:13:263 - ^

[Insane]
00:36:984 - ...^

>swish Miu So_Ra ChickeN

Thank you for star~!!
Orz /me runs
Really nice map so I only can find these problem D:
star >w</
and really thanks for find me to mod ></
ganbattene- >~</

Thank you for star,mod~!!

>swish Miu So_Ra ChickeN

Thank you for star~!!
Suzully
go :arrow: go :arrow:
Reiji-RJ
Hi >w<

[Easy]

01:01:141 (3) - I think that finish doesn't fit it
01:00:793 (2) - maybe finish?

Nothing wrong here :)

[Normal]

All fine~

[Aenna]

All seems fine

01:25:560 (1,2) - (nazi) (2) one grid up or (1) one grid down

[Insane]

Nothing wrong!

Sorry-sorry couldn't find anything wrong ><
Don't deserve kudosu ; - ;

Perfect map, good luck!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hi >w<

[Easy]

01:01:141 (3) - I think that finish doesn't fit it
01:00:793 (2) - maybe finish?

Nothing wrong here :)

[Normal]

All fine~

[Aenna]


All seems fine

01:25:560 (1,2) - (nazi) (2) one grid up or (1) one grid down

[Insane]

Nothing wrong!

Sorry-sorry couldn't find anything wrong ><
Don't deserve kudosu ; - ;

Perfect map, good luck!
Thank you for star,mod~!!

Suzully,Thank you for star~
DarkRingSystem
8-)

= =b
Topic Starter
Hinacle

DarkRingSystem wrote:

8-)
= =b
Thank you test play and star~!!
Thite
nicemap~ :oops:
Holoaz
=~=d
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Holoaz wrote:

=~=d
Thank you for star,mod~!!

>Thite

Thank you for star~!!
KanaRin
>a<
Some suggestion here.

[Easy]

00:42:653 (1) - Finish in the first of the slider.
00:45:444 (1) - ^
00:48:234 (1) - finish

[Normal]
00:25:211 (1) - Remove Newcombo
00:25:909 (1) - ^

[Aenna Sama]
00:46:403 (4) - Add a note (?)
Nice.

[Insane]

00:30:095 (1) - New combo?


Good Job www
I can't see any big problem=w=
Fight!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

KanaRin wrote:

>a<
Some suggestion here.

[Easy]

00:42:653 (1) - Finish in the first of the slider.
00:45:444 (1) - ^
00:48:234 (1) - finsh

[Normal]
00:25:211 (1) - Remove Newcombo
00:25:909 (1) - ^

[Aenna Sama]
00:46:403 (4) - Add a note (?)
Nice.

[Insane]

00:30:095 (1) - New combo?


Good Job www
I can't see anything big problem=w=
Fight!
Thank you mod~!!
azuraer
nice map!

star-^-^
Topic Starter
Hinacle

azuraer wrote:

nice map!

star-^-^
Thank you test play,and star~!!
LuPiiTa
Hi~

General
Nice work!

Easy
Fine!

Normal
00:12:653 (1) - Maybe remove new combo?

Aenna
Fine!

Insane
Fine!

Dont give me kudos, i didnt find anything xD
star for you~
Topic Starter
Hinacle

LuPiiTa wrote:

Hi~

General
Nice work!

Easy
Fine!

Normal
00:12:653 (1) - Maybe remove new combo?

Aenna
Fine!

Insane
Fine!

Dont give me kudos, i didnt find anything xD
star for you~
Thank you for star,mod~!!
Suzully
modです~ ;)
SPOILER
General
Slider Tick Rateは特に理由がなければ1のままの方が良さそうです。
General guidelinesに「 Do not resort to dropping the slider tick rate to reduce score. 」という記述があり、この譜面には当てはまりませんが、一応デフォルトの1のままの方が安心だと思います。

quin姫のmodを見てませんでした :? sorry

Easy

  • もう少し折り返しスライダーを減らして、曲線スライダーのパターンを増やしても良いかなと思います。
  1. 00:23:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - あまり単発を続けずに、(2,3)をスライダーに変えるなどのパターンの方が易しいと思います。
  2. 00:48:234 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:52:420 (1,2) - Normalに同じく。
  4. 00:59:397 (1) - 終端にclap?
  5. 01:01:141 (3) - ^
Normal
  1. 00:52:420 (1,2) - やや難しいパターンのように思います。しかし、特別修正する必要はないと思います。
  2. 01:04:979 (1) - ^ 往復を1回減らして、1つサークルを加えるなどのパターンの方が戸惑いにくいと思います。
  3. 01:07:769 (1) - ^
Aenna
  • fine
    ただ、InsaneのHPとODが8と高めなのでこちらもあと1ずつ上げても良いかなと思います。
Insane
  1. 00:09:513 (1,2,3) - この部分を、Grid Level4にして整えてみてはどうでしょうか。↓のような感じで。
  2. 00:25:909 (1) - 前の(1-7)の楕円と形がズレているので整えてみてはどうでしょう。Ctrl+Shift+Rで-10度くらい傾けると良さそうに思います。
  3. 00:26:432 (2,3,4) - ^00:09:513 (1,2,3) こちらはGrid Level3でも整えられそう・・・?
  4. 00:27:304 (1) - new combo?
  5. 00:30:793 (3) - ボーカルとリズムを合わせるなら↓のような感じにしてみてはどうでしょう。
  6. 00:39:862 (1) - 少し(6)と詰まっているように感じるので、1か2grid下に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。
  7. 00:51:025 (1) - 連打の形とズレているので1grid右へ移動させた方が違和感がないと思います。これに合わせて(2-4)も同様に?
  8. 00:54:688 (8) - 少し詰まっている感じがするので、1grid右&上へ。
  9. 00:56:955 (5) - 1grid右へ?
  10. 00:58:699 (5,6,7) - 1gird上へ。
  11. 01:05:676 (7,8,9) - (1,4)とスペーシングを揃えてみては。
  12. 01:07:944 (3) - Grid Level4で1grid下げるとなめらかに見えそうです。
音ではなく、ほとんどgridやパターンに関することになってしまって申し訳ないです :?
素晴らしい譜面、そして曲でした!
Go :arrow: Go :arrow: Ranked :!:
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Suzully wrote:

modです~ ;)
SPOILER
General
Slider Tick Rateは特に理由がなければ1のままの方が良さそうです。
General guidelinesに「 Do not resort to dropping the slider tick rate to reduce score. 」という記述があり、この譜面には当てはまりませんが、一応デフォルトの1のままの方が安心だと思います。

quin姫のmodを見てませんでした :? sorry

Easy

  • もう少し折り返しスライダーを減らして、曲線スライダーのパターンを増やしても良いかなと思います。
  1. 00:23:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - あまり単発を続けずに、(2,3)をスライダーに変えるなどのパターンの方が易しいと思います。
  2. 00:48:234 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:52:420 (1,2) - Normalに同じく。
  4. 00:59:397 (1) - 終端にclap?
  5. 01:01:141 (3) - ^
Normal
  1. 00:52:420 (1,2) - やや難しいパターンのように思います。しかし、特別修正する必要はないと思います。
  2. 01:04:979 (1) - ^ 往復を1回減らして、1つサークルを加えるなどのパターンの方が戸惑いにくいと思います。
  3. 01:07:769 (1) - ^
Aenna
  • fine
    ただ、InsaneのHPとODが8と高めなのでこちらもあと1ずつ上げても良いかなと思います。
Insane
  1. 00:09:513 (1,2,3) - この部分を、Grid Level4にして整えてみてはどうでしょうか。↓のような感じで。
  2. 00:25:909 (1) - 前の(1-7)の楕円と形がズレているので整えてみてはどうでしょう。Ctrl+Shift+Rで-10度くらい傾けると良さそうに思います。
  3. 00:26:432 (2,3,4) - ^00:09:513 (1,2,3) こちらはGrid Level3でも整えられそう・・・?
  4. 00:27:304 (1) - new combo?
  5. 00:30:793 (3) - ボーカルとリズムを合わせるなら↓のような感じにしてみてはどうでしょう。
  6. 00:39:862 (1) - 少し(6)と詰まっているように感じるので、1か2grid下に移動させてみてはどうでしょう。
  7. 00:51:025 (1) - 連打の形とズレているので1grid右へ移動させた方が違和感がないと思います。これに合わせて(2-4)も同様に?
  8. 00:54:688 (8) - 少し詰まっている感じがするので、1grid右&上へ。
  9. 00:56:955 (5) - 1grid右へ?
  10. 00:58:699 (5,6,7) - 1gird上へ。
  11. 01:05:676 (7,8,9) - (1,4)とスペーシングを揃えてみては。
  12. 01:07:944 (3) - Grid Level4で1grid下げるとなめらかに見えそうです。
音ではなく、ほとんどgridやパターンに関することになってしまって申し訳ないです :?
素晴らしい譜面、そして曲でした!
Go :arrow: Go :arrow: Ranked :!:
Thank you for star,mod~!!
:)
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