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Super Junior-M - Super Girl (Chinese Version)

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JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年5月13日 at 16:26:50

Artist: Super Junior-M
Title: Super Girl (Chinese Version)
Tags: sj sjm k-pop
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4600kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.88 stars, 143 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 459 notes)
  3. Normal (4.04 stars, 221 notes)
Download: Super Junior-M - Super Girl (Chinese Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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0th beatmap, graveyard for nearly 1 year.
Now returned.
Last edited by JauiPlaY , edited 36 times in total.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Revived!
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
thx a lot XD
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
star
The 08 team_Bourdon
710 posts
Joined February 2010
The 08 team_Bourdon
:D
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
taNa_Coppola
star
Shinki
141 posts
Joined May 2010
Shinki
star ww
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
我推~
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[General]
I'd like to hear more claps, not only during kai-time~ :3

[Hard]
01:27:545 (5) - Maybe use new combo here and delete it from 01:28:025?
01:58:265 (5) - New combo?
02:18:425 (1) - These sliders don't really fit the rhythm here in my opinion. Try something else?
02:59:705 (6,7) - Ahhh, I see why you did this, but this spacing just doesn't play or look good~ ;u; Maybe stack the (7) under (4,5,6) and then center them all?
03:07:385 (5) - Maybe new combo?

Nothing worth of mentioning found in other diffs, good job~ *star*
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
Easy
Hm, why you use claps on slidesticks only in kiai time?
Too little hitsounds. add more.
as example :
02:15:065 (1) - add clap
02:15:545 (2) - add clap at the end of slider
02:16:985 (2) - add clap
02:17:465 (3) - add clap at the end of slider
etc.

Normal
oh, hitsounds...
I add some of them at first 2 combos. I think it sounds better then nothing))
Recheck you 1/4 reverses. They are not always fit the music.
01:00:665 (6) - replace 1/2 early
01:10:265 (3) - 1 grid down
02:06:185 (7) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
02:06:905 (1) - 1 grid up
02:48:185 (5) - replace 1/2 early

Hard
I want to see more interesting hitsound(!) patterns. You can make it, really =Ъ
01:58:265 (5) - add nc
02:59:465 (4,5,6,7) - unintuitive anti-jump

That's all, star. Very nice map.

Lanttu is ninja D: ~50sec early than me.

Download: Super Junior-M - Super Girl (JauiPlaY) [Normal].osu
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
i have no suggestion for you

only one thing you must fix is :
设立一个视听的时间点
Timing>>set current position as preview point
三个难度都要设置在同一点上

no kds thanks

perfect ! go ahead!
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
Great use of hitsounds in these maps, and some very nice closely hugging sliders.

[General]
Might want a source and some tags.

[Easy]
00:56:825 (4,1,2) - 1-2 is slightly wider than 4-1. Moving (1) will mess up your symmetry with (3), so drop the end of slider (4) down one grid.
02:02:585 (2) - Up one grid.
02:19:385 (2) - Down one grid.
03:01:145 (2) - Down one grid.
03:04:985 (2) - Down and right one grid.

[Normal]
00:40:745 (1) - Finish?

[Hard]
01:25:625 (6) - From here on you've changed the spacing for streams (nice), but it starts halfway through a combo (confusing). You may want to shuffle the combos around a bit to show the change in pace.
01:52:985 (7) - One grid up.
01:58:265 (5,9) - New combos?

Star.
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
[General]
too few hitsounds, adding more will be more fun to play. I suggest adding whistles and some finishes :)
too long break periods, i suggest you should map there from the second half of each break time...

[Easy]
03:10:745 (1) - 1 grid left
looks fine~

[Normal]
good :)

[Hard]
HP Drain +1
Overall Difficulty +1
AR +1
Change Hard into Insane
nice diff :)

star ;p
Gomo Psivarh
584 posts
Joined December 2009
Gomo Psivarh
没发现什么问题 我太弱了 :(

我觉得你还缺个H... 那个H太I了...

BONUS 80000!
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[Hard]
这Insane啊
00:34:265 (7) - 我觉得用2连比较好 前移1/4?
01:09:305 (1,2,3,4) - 到3和4
01:58:745 (9) - new combo
02:59:945 (7) - 如果只是为了对称的话我劝你还是改掉比较
03:01:025 (1,2) - 改成1/4note+1/2slider比较好吧

[Normal]
00:54:905 (3,4,5) - 听上去有点奇怪
01:56:345 (3,4,5) - ^

没什么大问题 同样的部分用太多了 再加上电波 看上去比较无聊
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
all done, thx! :D

eveless wrote:

这Insane啊
我這種弱B都能pass的沒資格叫insane吧XD
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes
[Normal]:
  1. This difficulty needs AR -1.
[Hard]:
  1. This difficulty seems more like an insane, but that's alright. If you wish to make an insane later and leave this as hard, then reduce OD and AR by 1. Else just leave it as it is.
  2. 01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This looks wrong/too hard. Change them to a regular stream, they are too fast to singletap. Something like this. They follow the flow from the previous slider.
Sorry if i wasn't much of a help, your map seems quite alright to me, no errors that I could find.
Star.
Hijiri Tezuka
313 posts
Joined March 2010
Hijiri Tezuka
Hello there~ Not much to say about this mapset really, it's mapped pretty good. Just there's something off about Normal for me. Also, add some tags to get some people in here.
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
[Easy]
00:44:825 (3) - add a note . (突然少一个note会感觉怪怪的。)
00:48:665 (3) - ^
00:52:505 (4) - ^
01:25:146 (2) - slider中间的一个转折点往左移1格
01:46:265 (3) - add a note.
01:50:105 (3) - ^
01:53:945 (4) - ^

这些note当然不加也可以>.> 你觉得好听就行。

[Hard]
00:44:825 (8) - add a note.
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里偏难了>.> 试着使用0.8x的spacing。
01:46:265 (7) - add a note.
01:50:105 (7) - ^
01:53:945 (11) - ^
03:01:025 (1) - 可以再远点。。
03:04:865 (2) - ^

这里的加note感觉好听多了>.> 当然还是觉得好不好听随便你。
---------------------------------
normal没什么大问题。。
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贴吧里还说自己是新人mapper。。尽口胡。
明明这么神的。。
star~☆了
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Overall
00:57:785 - Add preview point
03:00:545 - remove timing point
03:00:665 - ^
03:15:905 - ^
03:16:025 - disable kiai
03:16:145 - ^


Easy/Normal/Hard
03:04:505 (1) - add finish?
03:12:185 (1) - ^

Nice map. Good Job.
Aqua
298 posts
Joined December 2008
Aqua
Hey!

Pretty nice map! Very fun to play, i enjoyed it! :)
Well, it seems fine for me. I couldn't find anything critical/etc

Easy:
03:12:185 (1) - Add Finish

Normal:
03:01:625 (3) - Repeat once more

I don't think this post deserves a Kudos :3

Anyway, star for you!


~ Aqua
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Kite
[General]
Add source / tags

[Normal]
00:55:265 (4) - 1/4 later?
01:00:665 (6) - Remove 1 reverse?
01:23:705 (6) - ^
01:56:705 (4) - 1/4 later?
02:48:185 (5) - Remove 1 reverse?

[Hard]
Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficulty -1
Couldn't notice anything wrong here~
Really awesome patterns and jumps here!

[Overall]
Mapset is balanced out and fun to play, good luck getting it ranked!
RukiaChan_old
41 posts
Joined December 2010
RukiaChan_old
star :D
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
wow

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:49:625 (4) - how?
01:58:745 (5) - new combo
02:12:665 (1) - stack
02:14:105 (4) - about x:237 y:98
02:47:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this part XDD

starr~
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
o.o ... JauiPlaY ~ nice ^^

[Easy]

02:14:585 (3) - new combo ~ 02:15:065 (1) - delete new combo

02:16:505 (1) - delete new combo ~ 02:16:985 (2) - new combo

Best BG I do not find...

I never gave kudosu star...But this mep it deserves~
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
SPOILER

lolcubes wrote:

01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This looks wrong/too hard.
well...i guess it's okay.

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

add some tags to get some people in here.

Kite wrote:

Add source / tags
i, i'm sorry but actually i do not know what thing should i add to.

Aqua wrote:

I don't think this post deserves a Kudos :3
oops, i'm sorry. since i've already given it to you, have it plz.

ZLOdeuka wrote:

I never gave kudosu star...But this mep it deserves~
thank you! so i get a first prize actually? that's amazing for me XD

all done. thanks a lot for your moddings! :)
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
00:57:785 and 01:59:225 - delete keai there and add only fountain on the note
00:57:785 - preview of the song is there

Easy
01:11:225 (2) - make it like this?
SPOILER

Normal
AR = 5
00:43:385 (2) - sliders with rythm like this sounds bad, if there normal rythm it will be sounds good

Hard
OD = 8
01:58:745 (5) - 2 grids down

Nice work, starr
Neko_Ray
181 posts
Joined July 2010
Neko_Ray
Normal
00:53:945 (1,2,3,4,5): Try to do this

its all~
xinhe
116 posts
Joined February 2010
xinhe
:( 实在写不出什么有用的MOD～于是只能给个STAR了～～
NICE MAP
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
go.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Here's my mod :D

[Easy]

00:43:385 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid left?
00:47:225 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid down?
01:21:305 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid right?
01:44:825 (2) - ^
01:48:665 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid up?

[Normal]

AR -1?

[Hard]

Fine.

Star~
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
General
Maybe you could set the preview point at 00:57:665 instead?

Easy
Great easy.

Normal
I'm really not too sure about the sliders like 00:43:385. They sound odd.

00:34:745 (1) - Why don't you flip this vertically so it would blanket the slider like in 00:36:665 (3,4)?
00:54:905 (3,4,5) - Plays very oddly. I would suggest changing it to something like 00:56:825 (3,4).
01:56:345 (3,4,5) - ^

Hard
03:01:025 (1) - IMO this should be start 1/4 back and end at the same time. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:04:865 (2) - ^
03:08:705 (2) - IMO move this 1/4 back. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:12:545 (2) - ^
wanhyrzh
376 posts
Joined December 2009
wanhyrzh
nice map
8-)
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
Hard

00:42:185(1) - delete note
00:57:305(7,8,9,10) - instead of these notes, i think it sounds better if it was just a 1/2 beat slider.
01:01:625(1,2,3,4) - i don't like the overlaps all that much, but it's fine
01:18:905(1,2,3,4,5) - accelerate spacing? (as in the spacing gets bigger as the pattern goes on)
01:44:345(2..etc) - start clap pattern here?

Normal

AR-1

other than that, nice.

Easy

02:14:585(3) - new combo? and remove the new combo on the next beat.

Awesome map, and awesome song.

Star Power~~~
slymaster
21 posts
Joined September 2009
slymaster
Take my mods as suggestions. I don't think I'm experienced enough to say anything definite yet.

General
Add hitsounds to all sections in all difficulties. The beginning sections and the section after the first break sound strangely empty without hitsounds.

Normal
00:42:425 - the section starting from this time, I'm not really feeling the triplet type thing that you have. It just doesnt seem to follow any part of the song for me.
01:43:865 - same as above ^

both hard and easy seem fine to me. ^^
nice map!
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
hi guys thank you for your modding! :)

NoHItter wrote:

SPOILER
General
Maybe you could set the preview point at 00:57:665 instead?i guess it's okay...

Normal
I'm really not too sure about the sliders like 00:43:385. They sound odd.^

Hard
03:01:025 (1) - IMO this should be start 1/4 back and end at the same time. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:04:865 (2) - ^
03:08:705 (2) - IMO move this 1/4 back. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:12:545 (2) - ^well i used some unique hitsound vocal here and i think it's fine...

winber1 wrote:

SPOILER
Awesome map, and awesome song.

Star Power~~~thx!
your help is essential.
again, thx a lot!
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