star

star

star ww

我推~

[General]
I'd like to hear more claps, not only during kai-time~ :3

[Hard]
01:27:545 (5) - Maybe use new combo here and delete it from 01:28:025?
01:58:265 (5) - New combo?
02:18:425 (1) - These sliders don't really fit the rhythm here in my opinion. Try something else?
02:59:705 (6,7) - Ahhh, I see why you did this, but this spacing just doesn't play or look good~ ;u; Maybe stack the (7) under (4,5,6) and then center them all?
03:07:385 (5) - Maybe new combo?

Nothing worth of mentioning found in other diffs, good job~ *star*

Easy
Hm, why you use claps on slidesticks only in kiai time?
Too little hitsounds. add more.
as example :
02:15:065 (1) - add clap
02:15:545 (2) - add clap at the end of slider
02:16:985 (2) - add clap
02:17:465 (3) - add clap at the end of slider
etc.

Normal
oh, hitsounds...
I add some of them at first 2 combos. I think it sounds better then nothing))
Recheck you 1/4 reverses. They are not always fit the music.
01:00:665 (6) - replace 1/2 early
01:10:265 (3) - 1 grid down
02:06:185 (7) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
02:06:905 (1) - 1 grid up
02:48:185 (5) - replace 1/2 early

Hard
I want to see more interesting hitsound(!) patterns. You can make it, really =Ъ
01:58:265 (5) - add nc
02:59:465 (4,5,6,7) - unintuitive anti-jump

That's all, star. Very nice map.

Lanttu is ninja D: ~50sec early than me.

Download: Super Junior-M - Super Girl (JauiPlaY) [Normal].osu

i have no suggestion for you

only one thing you must fix is :
设立一个视听的时间点
Timing>>set current position as preview point
三个难度都要设置在同一点上

no kds thanks

perfect ! go ahead!

Great use of hitsounds in these maps, and some very nice closely hugging sliders.

[General]
Might want a source and some tags.

[Easy]
00:56:825 (4,1,2) - 1-2 is slightly wider than 4-1. Moving (1) will mess up your symmetry with (3), so drop the end of slider (4) down one grid.
02:02:585 (2) - Up one grid.
02:19:385 (2) - Down one grid.
03:01:145 (2) - Down one grid.
03:04:985 (2) - Down and right one grid.

[Normal]
00:40:745 (1) - Finish?

[Hard]
01:25:625 (6) - From here on you've changed the spacing for streams (nice), but it starts halfway through a combo (confusing). You may want to shuffle the combos around a bit to show the change in pace.
01:52:985 (7) - One grid up.
01:58:265 (5,9) - New combos?

Star.

[General]
too few hitsounds, adding more will be more fun to play. I suggest adding whistles and some finishes
too long break periods, i suggest you should map there from the second half of each break time...

[Easy]
03:10:745 (1) - 1 grid left
looks fine~

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
HP Drain +1
Overall Difficulty +1
AR +1
Change Hard into Insane
nice diff

star ;p

没发现什么问题 我太弱了

我觉得你还缺个H... 那个H太I了...

BONUS 80000!

[Hard]
这Insane啊
00:34:265 (7) - 我觉得用2连比较好 前移1/4?
01:09:305 (1,2,3,4) - 到3和4
01:58:745 (9) - new combo
02:59:945 (7) - 如果只是为了对称的话我劝你还是改掉比较
03:01:025 (1,2) - 改成1/4note+1/2slider比较好吧

[Normal]
00:54:905 (3,4,5) - 听上去有点奇怪
01:56:345 (3,4,5) - ^

没什么大问题 同样的部分用太多了 再加上电波 看上去比较无聊

all done, thx!

eveless wrote:

这Insane啊

我這種弱B都能pass的沒資格叫insane吧XD

[Normal]:

1. This difficulty needs AR -1.

[Hard]:

1. This difficulty seems more like an insane, but that's alright. If you wish to make an insane later and leave this as hard, then reduce OD and AR by 1. Else just leave it as it is.
2. 01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This looks wrong/too hard. Change them to a regular stream, they are too fast to singletap. Something like this. They follow the flow from the previous slider.

Sorry if i wasn't much of a help, your map seems quite alright to me, no errors that I could find.
Star.

Hello there~ Not much to say about this mapset really, it's mapped pretty good. Just there's something off about Normal for me. Also, add some tags to get some people in here.

[Easy]
00:44:825 (3) - add a note . (突然少一个note会感觉怪怪的。)
00:48:665 (3) - ^
00:52:505 (4) - ^
01:25:146 (2) - slider中间的一个转折点往左移1格
01:46:265 (3) - add a note.
01:50:105 (3) - ^
01:53:945 (4) - ^

这些note当然不加也可以>.> 你觉得好听就行。

[Hard]
00:44:825 (8) - add a note.
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里偏难了>.> 试着使用0.8x的spacing。
01:46:265 (7) - add a note.
01:50:105 (7) - ^
01:53:945 (11) - ^
03:01:025 (1) - 可以再远点。。
03:04:865 (2) - ^

这里的加note感觉好听多了>.> 当然还是觉得好不好听随便你。
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normal没什么大问题。。
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贴吧里还说自己是新人mapper。。尽口胡。
明明这么神的。。
star~☆了

Overall
00:57:785 - Add preview point
03:00:545 - remove timing point
03:00:665 - ^
03:15:905 - ^
03:16:025 - disable kiai
03:16:145 - ^


Easy/Normal/Hard
03:04:505 (1) - add finish?
03:12:185 (1) - ^

Nice map. Good Job.

Hey!

Pretty nice map! Very fun to play, i enjoyed it!
Well, it seems fine for me. I couldn't find anything critical/etc

Easy:
03:12:185 (1) - Add Finish

Normal:
03:01:625 (3) - Repeat once more

I don't think this post deserves a Kudos :3

Anyway, star for you!


~ Aqua

[General]
Add source / tags

[Normal]
00:55:265 (4) - 1/4 later?
01:00:665 (6) - Remove 1 reverse?
01:23:705 (6) - ^
01:56:705 (4) - 1/4 later?
02:48:185 (5) - Remove 1 reverse?

[Hard]
Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficulty -1
Couldn't notice anything wrong here~
Really awesome patterns and jumps here!

[Overall]
Mapset is balanced out and fun to play, good luck getting it ranked!

star

wow

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
00:49:625 (4) - how?01:58:745 (5) - new combo
02:12:665 (1) - stack 02:14:105 (4) - about x:237 y:98
02:47:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I like this part XDD

starr~

o.o ... JauiPlaY ~ nice ^^

[Easy]

02:14:585 (3) - new combo ~ 02:15:065 (1) - delete new combo

02:16:505 (1) - delete new combo ~ 02:16:985 (2) - new combo

Best BG I do not find...

I never gave kudosu star...But this mep it deserves~

all done. thanks a lot for your moddings!

Hi

General
00:57:785 and 01:59:225 - delete keai there and add only fountain on the note
00:57:785 - preview of the song is there

Easy
01:11:225 (2) - make it like this?

Normal
AR = 5
00:43:385 (2) - sliders with rythm like this sounds bad, if there normal rythm it will be sounds good

Hard
OD = 8
01:58:745 (5) - 2 grids down

Nice work, starr

Normal
00:53:945 (1,2,3,4,5): Try to do this

its all~

实在写不出什么有用的MOD～于是只能给个STAR了～～
NICE MAP

go.

Here's my mod

[Easy]

00:43:385 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid left?
00:47:225 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid down?
01:21:305 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid right?
01:44:825 (2) - ^
01:48:665 (2) - Put the central waypoint 1 grid up?

[Normal]

AR -1?

[Hard]

Fine.

Star~

General
Maybe you could set the preview point at 00:57:665 instead?

Easy
Great easy.

Normal
I'm really not too sure about the sliders like 00:43:385. They sound odd.

00:34:745 (1) - Why don't you flip this vertically so it would blanket the slider like in 00:36:665 (3,4)?
00:54:905 (3,4,5) - Plays very oddly. I would suggest changing it to something like 00:56:825 (3,4).
01:56:345 (3,4,5) - ^

Hard
03:01:025 (1) - IMO this should be start 1/4 back and end at the same time. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:04:865 (2) - ^
03:08:705 (2) - IMO move this 1/4 back. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:12:545 (2) - ^

nice map

Hard

00:42:185(1) - delete note
00:57:305(7,8,9,10) - instead of these notes, i think it sounds better if it was just a 1/2 beat slider.
01:01:625(1,2,3,4) - i don't like the overlaps all that much, but it's fine
01:18:905(1,2,3,4,5) - accelerate spacing? (as in the spacing gets bigger as the pattern goes on)
01:44:345(2..etc) - start clap pattern here?

Normal

AR-1

other than that, nice.

Easy

02:14:585(3) - new combo? and remove the new combo on the next beat.

Awesome map, and awesome song.

Star Power~~~

Take my mods as suggestions. I don't think I'm experienced enough to say anything definite yet.

General
Add hitsounds to all sections in all difficulties. The beginning sections and the section after the first break sound strangely empty without hitsounds.

Normal
00:42:425 - the section starting from this time, I'm not really feeling the triplet type thing that you have. It just doesnt seem to follow any part of the song for me.
01:43:865 - same as above ^

both hard and easy seem fine to me. ^^
nice map!

hi guys thank you for your modding!

NoHItter wrote:

SPOILER

General
Maybe you could set the preview point at 00:57:665 instead?i guess it's okay...

Normal
I'm really not too sure about the sliders like 00:43:385. They sound odd.^

Hard
03:01:025 (1) - IMO this should be start 1/4 back and end at the same time. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:04:865 (2) - ^
03:08:705 (2) - IMO move this 1/4 back. It kind of throws off the rhythm.
03:12:545 (2) - ^well i used some unique hitsound vocal here and i think it's fine...

winber1 wrote:

SPOILER

Awesome map, and awesome song.

Star Power~~~thx!

your help is essential.
again, thx a lot!

ok first off you have completely killed this mp3 by over amplifying it ;_;


you need to find another mp3 what aint amplified like this because atm it distorts like mad and feels very bad on the ears :/

set the preview point to 00:57:785 on your maps, the current preview point is extremely bad

Easy
wow why soooo little hitsounds at the start of this map :/ feels soo empty, it needs some hitsounds here


Normal

same comment as Easy over the hitsounding, needs some at the start

01:25:625 (3,4) - the pattern of these 2 sliders give it an look of 1/2 while its really 1/1 , i found this was really not nice when playing, i advise to redo these so it makes the timing of the notes abit more clear
02:09:065 - add a note here to follow your pattern, the vocals, and to increase the flow at this part
02:47:225 (4,5) - how this does not follow the lyric even though the next time it does feels rather bad, a timing like this would play epicly


Hard
same comment as the other diff's over the hitsounds :/

00:42:185 (1) - by removing this note it makes it play and follow the music much better
01:18:425 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i found this slider pattern felt too spread out thus making it more annoying than fun to play, either make them closer or give it a different shape i advise
01:58:625 (4,5) - the jump in this stream is really really bad, you need to give all the notes in the stream the same spacing tbh, this played the worst out of all the things in the maps :/

03:01:025 (1) - ok the timing pattern here dont really suit the song, add a note at 03:00:905 and you will notice how much better that suits the song, and do that for all the times you use this same timing pattern, it may seem like a big change, but please just try it and you will notice how much better it flows

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tbh i really enjoyed these maps, and they are getting pretty much perfect, the main thing what lets them down is the lack of hitsounds at the start and the waay over amplified mp3, anyway the maps was fun, good job and for now you get my star

My mod queues (;

Easy:
00:27:545 (2) - 1 grid down (?)
00:58:265 (2) - 2 grid down (?)
01:01:625 (1,2) - 1 grid up
But its actual okay

Normal:00:54:425 (2) - 2 grid left (when you change this, then change spacing too )
00:55:265 (4) - move to 55:385
01:18:665 (x) - add a note, then is sound better
01:56:705 (4) - move to 01:56:825

Hard:
Nice
00:42:185 (1) - delete this note
01.16:505 (1) - spacing
01:20:825 (1) - delete new combo
01:27:545 (1) - respact at spacing, please
01:44:825 (3) - spacing (?)
01:48:665 (3) - ^

Ok. I like this
I love the Song too :3 Star

jericho2442 wrote:

SPOILER

ok first off you have completely killed this mp3 by over amplifying it ;_;

you need to find another mp3 what aint amplified like this because atm it distorts like mad and feels very bad on the ears :/actually i don't know what it is XD but, well, used new mp3.

set the preview point to 00:57:785 on your maps, the current preview point is extremely badokay...

Easy
wow why soooo little hitsounds at the start of this map :/ feels soo empty, it needs some hitsounds hereadded.


Normal

same comment as Easy over the hitsounding, needs some at the startadded

01:25:625 (3,4) - the pattern of these 2 sliders give it an look of 1/2 while its really 1/1 , i found this was really not nice when playing, i advise to redo these so it makes the timing of the notes abit more cleardone.
02:09:065 - add a note here to follow your pattern, the vocals, and to increase the flow at this part ^
02:47:225 (4,5) - how this does not follow the lyric even though the next time it does feels rather bad, a timing like this would play epicly^

Hard
same comment as the other diff's over the hitsounds :/added.

00:42:185 (1) - by removing this note it makes it play and follow the music much betterokay...
01:18:425 (3) - new combo here to follow your pattern^
01:27:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i found this slider pattern felt too spread out thus making it more annoying than fun to play, either make them closer or give it a different shape i advise^
01:58:625 (4,5) - the jump in this stream is really really bad, you need to give all the notes in the stream the same spacing tbh, this played the worst out of all the things in the maps :/^

03:01:025 (1) - ok the timing pattern here dont really suit the song, add a note at 03:00:905 and you will notice how much better that suits the song, and do that for all the times you use this same timing pattern, it may seem like a big change, but please just try it and you will notice how much better it flowswell that's the only thing i'm afraid i couldn't agree with you x_x i tried to add the note and i found that makes these parts too noisy. it makes me feel really bad.

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tbh i really enjoyed these maps, and they are getting pretty much perfect, the main thing what lets them down is the lack of hitsounds at the start and the waay over amplified mp3, anyway the maps was fun, good job and for now you get my star thank you.

also to Dark_Ai, thx a lot!

不太喜歡這類歌...
下次不要找我mod這種歌...

[General]
Where the Source and tag?
加個靜音slider

[Easy]
00:11:665(x)-不要偷懶,在這裏開始map.
00:27:025(1)~00:42:385(3)-都沒hitsound?
00:52:465(x)-加音.
01:22:705(4)-醜了..
01:28:945(x)-Break不適當.在人聲不分不適合break也會讓人覺得不爽.
01:46:225(x)-加音然後clap.
01:53:905(x)-^同上.
02:04:945(2)-很難看...真的.
02:15:025(1)-從這裏開始沒clap?
03:02:545(1)-不好讀對新手..
03:08:785(2.3.4)-誤導!!這種排版不適合在Easy.
03:14:065(1)-不放在(3)-的下面會更好讀.

[Normal]
AR-1!!
00:11:665(x)-不要偷懶,在這裏開始map.
00:27:025(1)~00:42:385(3)-都沒hitsound
00:28:945(4)-New combo..
00:36:625(3)-和(1)-對稱.
00:43:345(2)-很奇怪的節奏.折返不要踏在藍線上.
00:45:265(5)-^ (之後的幾個不列出來了)
00:54:865(3.4.5.1)-誤導.令人覺得混亂.在新手diff (E/N)不要做這種排版.
01:28:225(x)-加音.
01:28:945(x)-Break不適當.在人聲不分不適合break也會讓人覺得不爽.
01:54:385(4.1)-交換new combo.
01:56:305(3.4.5)-新手很難抓拍子.所以會打偏.在N不要出現這些不工整的拍子..
02:16:465(4)-這樣放不好看..
02:43:105(x)漏了clap?
03:15:265,03:15:745(6)-試試在這兩條紅線上加clap.效果不錯..

[Hard]
00:11:665(x)-不要偷懶,在這裏開始map.
00:28:945(4)-這slider重新拉下.兩邊不平衡.
00:32:785(1.2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9)-感覺在這裏放開spacing不好.打起來怪怪.
00:34:825(2)-珊掉?其實我覺得triplet在紅線上放會好聽一點.
00:36:745(2)-^ 同上.
00:39:265(2.3.4)-這聽起來就比較舒服...
00:56:785(3)-不好讀.
01:02:065(2)-在(2)-的尾部未重疊(1)-
01:03:025(4)-^
01:05:905(2)-這個(2)-不好看.
01:19:105(2.4.5)-(2.4)-想左/右移2格(LV3)然後(5)-刪掉.
01:25:585(6.7.8)-為了和之前協調.請縮短間距.
01:28:945(x)-Break不適當.在人聲不分不適合break也會讓人覺得不爽.
02:07:945(2)-極度不和諧.刪.
02:08:185(x)-然後在這裏加音.
02:43:105(x)漏了clap?
02:59:665(6)-New combo?
03:04:705)x)-加音.然後後面的slider換成notes.

恩mod完...
想說什麼呢?= =
恩- -你的風格不是工整形 :O
所以我可能會有很多nazi..
恩.莫怪

[Easy]
- None

[Normal]
- 1:13:345 - Insert Break Time

[Hard]
- 1:13:345 - Break time again

Nothing much is wrong, well mapped. Don't have to give kudos since I didn't add much >:
Star~

以下mod全为建议 可以参考或者忽略
[General]
TAG和source都不用加么
[Hard]
01:58:825 lol 不是一串的stream么
OD-1
Slider tick rate 2 lol 不会觉得很难受么 而且没意义。
[Normal]
Slider tick rate 2 lol 不会觉得很难受么 而且没意义。 X2
[Easy]
那个。。。。。custom override1有东西么 那你跟用N不是一样么lol


That's all.(说实话不是我喜欢的歌的类型lol
Star

okay fixed some.
拉你們來mod不喜歡的歌實在對不起
下次如果不喜歡的話直接告訴我就可以了,我不介意的
anyway, thx a lot!