a519172361 wrote:

能合体吗？

roverchan wrote:

玩了下,tasteles]跟sweet都不错..
个人觉得lite可以参考一下以下的..
00:18:469 (2) - 往左一格?
00:58:890 (2) - 往左下一格?
01:01:890 (3) - 往左一格?
01:02:364 (6) - 往右一格?
01:06:153 (1) - 请让auto君转超过2000分
01:08:680 (1) - 同上
02:03:943 (6) - 向左一格?
02:04:417 (9,10,11) - 向右一格?
02:06:311 (5) - 向下两格?
02:06:469 (6,7) - 向下一格?
02:49:259 (3,4) - 向右一格?
02:53:522 (1) - 向左一格?

• Remove "htt" frm tags. Add "ho-kago hokago tea time" in the tags instead.
  Offset 544 (+9 from current offset)
  Nice skin, but i think that the hitbursts don't fit well with the other "drawing-styled" stuff like hitcircles and HP bar.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:07:989 - 02:22:171 - 03:13:080 - add a beat here? You usually have a beat for this kind of pattern in the map, why not here too?

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Give the difficulty name some adjective about sweets like the other difficulties? :x
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty and especially Approach Rate are really low for this map. I suggest AR+2 and OD+1 (possibly HPdrain+1 too).
   00:38:353 (1,2,3,4) - this is confusing due to the really low approach rate. There are quite a lot of patterns like this. Anyway, if you increased the settings as i told you above all these patterns will be ok.
   02:13:625 (5) - the ending of this slider has a normal hitsound, is it intended?

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:50:898 (7,1) - kinda sudden and unnatural jump, flip 00:51:262 (1,2,3,4) horizzontally?
   01:28:171 (5) - 01:29:625 (3) - normal hitsound again, I'm asking because they don't seem intentional at all.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Remove "htt" frm tags. Add "ho-kago hokago tea time" in the tags instead. checked
  Offset 544 (+9 from current offset) checked
  Nice skin, but i think that the hitbursts don't fit well with the other "drawing-styled" stuff like hitcircles and HP bar.

- Tasteless:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:07:989 - 02:22:171 - 03:13:080 - add a beat here? You usually have a beat for this kind of pattern in the map, why not here too?

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- Disoy's Normal: All checked

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Give the difficulty name some adjective about sweets like the other difficulties?
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty and especially Approach Rate are really low for this map. I suggest AR+2 and OD+1 (possibly HPdrain+1 too).
   00:38:353 (1,2,3,4) - this is confusing due to the really low approach rate. There are quite a lot of patterns like this. Anyway, if you increased the settings as i told you above all these patterns will be ok.
   02:13:625 (5) - the ending of this slider has a normal hitsound, is it intended?

- Sweet:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:50:898 (7,1) - kinda sudden and unnatural jump, flip 00:51:262 (1,2,3,4) horizzontally? I think what I change it would be fit
   01:28:171 (5) - 01:29:625 (3) - normal hitsound again, I'm asking because they don't seem intentional at all.

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Edit: feel free to ask me for a recheck after checking this modding.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Coolz, rebubblin' (ノ￣∇￣)ノ 彡

CDFA wrote:

I'm going to assume the song is intentionally uncapitalized. . .

Also, lol 2 pages of "star~"