ignorethis wrote:

喂喂你敢不ctrl+c, ctrl+v不EZ跟NM....嘛嘛....
名字是不是要大写？歌手名字大写了，你说的名字是歌名？
offset +5ms？改掉的话别忘了resnap，调整绿线checked


<Tasteless>
AR-2 checked
00:23:797 (1,2) - 头尾对齐 checked
01:37:979 (1,2) - 同上 checked
00:48:525 (1) - 这里音量加大有些突然 checked
01:00:161 (1) - 第三个折返把clap换成whistle比较好，类似的比如01:01:615 (1) - 和 01:03:070 (1) - 也一起换掉 checked
重复的那些地方我也相继按照你的modding改了
<Lite>
AR-1 checked
00:28:888 (6) - clap checked
00:32:343 (2) - ^ checked
00:43:434 (5,6) - 总觉得这个有点怪怪的... checked
00:44:161 (7) - new combo checked
01:31:434 (6) - clap checked
01:34:888 (2) - ^ checked
01:43:070 (6) - ^ checked
01:57:616 (5,6) - 同上 checked
01:58:343 (7) - 同上 checked
同样，相同的地方我按照你的modding改了

<Sweety>
这个很明显应该叫做sweet...还是说你想捏他sweaty >_> 改成Sweet了
AR-1 checked
00:32:525 (3) - clap checked
00:55:615 (4) - 喂喂这个太扭曲了 我改成这样不知道算不算扭曲，等你的recheck
01:08:888 (4) - clap checked
02:53:979 (2) - ^ checked
02:53:979 (2) - 同上 checked
03:39:252 (3) - ^ checked

<[Angel_Beats]'s Sweety>
00:34:888 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这几个也是比较突然，音量减小一些 checked
00:48:343 (6) - 这加一个note，静音去掉 checked
01:51:070 (3) - 对齐 checked
02:02:525 (7) - 同上 checked
03:37:251 (5) - 比较突然 checked

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Kotobuki is the last name of the character, not the real person.

Saten ruiko wrote:

臥草 蛋疼腦都看過了 我只能騙gd了XD
[[Angel_Beats]'s Sweety]
00:46:348 (6) - 這0.5*太突然~ 前面也沒提示什麼的checked
01:31:439 (7,8,9) - 這三個 個人感覺別疊在同一點上 有點無趣!?checked
02:10:711 (1,2,3,4) - 這四個 感覺不舒服!? 02:08:893 (1,2,3,4) - 跟這個一樣的節奏怎麼樣!!?checked
02:25:984 (3) - 這理KIAI結束?checked
02:42:711 (1,1,1) - 這有點無聊 多做花樣!?很多人建议别玩花样，所以还是不改先
02:47:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這臥草的 節奏不錯 但是排的蛋疼 checked
03:16:529 (4,5,6,7,8) - 能排的好看點麼 個人建議 checked
03:17:439 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 這也過於重複 沒有什麼花樣!? 同上
我不是很喜歡三連打後 定點又一個NOTE
[Sweet]
00:59:615 (4) - 結束在00:59:984 感覺比較舒服这个的话，我来解释，因为这里我是的意思是相当于一个长连打，所以键盘然后接着鼠标，完全没什么不妥，所以先不改了
02:20:161 (4) - NewCombo checked
感覺這難度我MOD不出什麼來 有幾個遮我不是很喜歡 還有幾個來回也不是很喜歡你那个遮掩提醒了我了，我改了~谢谢XD
但是這難度的跳我還蠻喜歡的液！
[Lite]
00:45:620 (3) - 這太....感覺很無聊checked
01:59:802 (3) - ^checked
02:31:802 (1) 02:34:711 (1) 02:37:620 (1) 02:39:075 (2) - 這個休息又只點兩下 太....了让沙包们充分休息
後面各種複製 貼上阿
[Tasteless]
00:55:075 (1,2,3) - 這對EZ來說大丈夫麼?checked
02:28:893 (1,2,3,4) - 要碼就多做點 要碼就break 让沙包们充分休息
02:46:348 (1) - 哎呦 轉個圈又休息 人家等了那麼久 卻只有一個圈 让沙包们充分休息
各種複製 貼上 鏡面 我不吐槽了
音效不會MOD
這些我是從打的感覺上去MOD 嘛~~只是建議~~
nice map and star

sumisola wrote:

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Kotobuki is the last name of the character, not the real person.

so....you mean I need to put on the seiyuu's real name of mugi,but not the whole name of mugi?

xinhe wrote:

嘛～～～MOD水平比较渣～仅为建议～～自行参考嘛嘛....新河你就别谦虚了

[General]
感觉SKIN和BG不是很合适～～本身SKIN的HIT就很淡了～～BG再用白底～～感觉太亮了～一则看不清～二来眼睛不舒服我的这个skin，是为了好让别人刷HD，不容易遮住嘛^ ^

[Tasteless]
NICEXD

[Lite]
00:27:439 (3,4) - spacing checked
00:27:802 (4,5) - ^ checked
00:27:802 (4,5) - ^ checked
01:30:348 (4,5) - ^ checked
01:30:529 (5,6) - ^ checked
01:41:620 (3,4) - ^ checked
01:41:984 (4,5) - ^ checked
01:42:166 (5,6) - ^ checked

[Sweet]
01:45:257 - 这里感觉加点什么比较好～因为之前的部分一直是压歌词～这里突然没东西了 不能加，因为前面都是这节奏

KIAI部分可以多放一些FINISH～～感觉会比较好 说实话，新河能不能教教我放hitsound，我真的不知放哪里

[[Angel_Beats]'s Sweety] All checked
没有黄线

sound - 建议CLAP放在2，4拍,FINISH放在第一拍，如果原曲中有类似FINISH的地方也可以放
非KIAI部分建议音效声音小点，用4或5感觉不错
KIAI部分SOUND的音量可以再大一点

03:29:978 (3) - 拉到03:30:348
03:30:711 (5) - 拉到03:31:075

个人不是很喜欢这个难度是SPACING～其它的没什么了～～音效多改改～～～

CCAV-9 wrote:

额，知道昨天我才知道怎么给STAR

star

• Artist: how you know it's HTT? I even think about using "HO-KAGO TEA TIME II" ...
  
  Tags: Remove HTT sumisola Keyboard(Too general imo), add HO-KAGO II (If you don't use this as a artist)
  
  Offset: +15ms
  
  1st kiai ends at 01:13:984
  2nd kiai ends at 02:28:166
  3rd kiai starts at 02:53:620, ends at 03:40:166
  
  Volume: 80% for kiai
  60% or 70% for other parts?
  
  ...Too many copy&pastal parts...
  
  0.5 tick rate for Tasteless and Lite? 1 tick is a little ugly with low slider velocity..

• 00:55:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard compare to the whole mapset...use three 1/1 beat sliders instead?
  03:00:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  02:28:893 (1,2,3,4) - Use 0.75x BPM to map this part?
  02:46:348 (1) - If you don't map the part before or after this spinner, you'd better remove this.

• 01:11:802 (1) - End at 01:13:984?
  01:43:075 (6) - Add clap end if you want to stress this slider.
  01:45:075 (3,4) - Stacking (Disable grid snap and use 0.0x distance spacing)
  01:46:529 (2,3) - ^
  02:17:984 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
  02:20:166 (2) - Add new combo.
  02:31:802 (1,1,1,1) - Map this part?
  02:50:711 (1) - Use two 3/4 reversed sliders to replace this spinner?
  02:52:529 (1) - ....no comment...
  03:08:166 (1,1,1,1,2) - Same as previous kiai...

• 00:19:434 (6,7) - Stacking
  00:20:888 (3,4) - ^
  00:26:706 (5,6) - ^
  00:33:797 (2,3,4) - ^....etc.
  00:55:620 (4) - Clap end
  01:05:979 (4,5,1) - Spacing is a little confusing here...put 01:06:524 (5) between 01:05:979 (4,1) ?
  02:00:888 (9,11) - Move them further away from center..so that 01:59:797 (5,6) would not overlap these...
  02:17:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too noisy imo...try hwch? (h=hit w=whistle c=clap)
  02:17:979 (1,1) - Remove new combo?
  02:20:161 (1) - ^
  02:53:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...rearrange these?...
  03:05:979 (1) - Remove new combo
  03:06:706 (4) - New combo
  03:08:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - not fun to play...
  03:08:888 (1,1) - Remove new combo?
  03:26:343 (3) - Hard to read...move the end up?
  
  SPOILER

  

xinhe wrote:

嘛～BG和SKIN的问题～可以建议你换个BG～～两个都是亮色系的～看不清楚～～

liuchen9586 wrote:

挂比你好,挂比再见!

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Artist: how you know it's HTT? I even think about using "HO-KAGO TEA TIME II" ... So,I need to turn back into "Kotobuki Tsumugi" ?
  
  Tags: Remove HTT sumisola Keyboard(Too general imo), add HO-KAGO II (If you don't use this as a artist) questions above
  
  Offset: +15ms checked
  
  1st kiai ends at 01:13:984 checked
  2nd kiai ends at 02:28:166 checked
  3rd kiai starts at 02:53:620, ends at 03:40:166 checked
  
  Volume: 80% for kiai
  60% or 70% for other parts? checked,but too low?
  
  ...Too many copy&pastal parts... checked.And that's a hard work
  
  0.5 tick rate for Tasteless and Lite? 1 tick is a little ugly with low slider velocity..

[Tasteless]

• 00:55:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard compare to the whole mapset...use three 1/1 beat sliders instead? checked
  03:00:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ checked
  02:28:893 (1,2,3,4) - Use 0.75x BPM to map this part? checked
  02:46:348 (1) - If you don't map the part before or after this spinner, you'd better remove this.

checked

[Lite]

• 01:11:802 (1) - End at 01:13:984? checked
  01:43:075 (6) - Add clap end if you want to stress this slider. checked
  01:45:075 (3,4) - Stacking (Disable grid snap and use 0.0x distance spacing) checked
  01:46:529 (2,3) - ^ checked
  02:17:984 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo. checked
  02:20:166 (2) - Add new combo. checked
  02:31:802 (1,1,1,1) - Map this part? checked
  02:50:711 (1) - Use two 3/4 reversed sliders to replace this spinner? checked
  02:52:529 (1) - ....no comment... checked
  03:08:166 (1,1,1,1,2) - Same as previous kiai...

checked

[Sweet]

• 00:19:434 (6,7) - Stacking checked
  00:20:888 (3,4) - ^ checked
  00:26:706 (5,6) - ^ checked
  00:33:797 (2,3,4) - ^....etc. checked
  00:55:620 (4) - Clap end checked
  01:05:979 (4,5,1) - Spacing is a little confusing here...put 01:06:524 (5) between 01:05:979 (4,1) ? I'm not going to follow this because I think this arrangement will much more fit with the rhythw as the singer has gone up a sound stage here.
  02:00:888 (9,11) - Move them further away from center..so that 01:59:797 (5,6) would not overlap these... checked
  02:17:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too noisy imo...try hwch? (h=hit w=whistle c=clap) checked
  02:17:979 (1,1) - Remove new combo? checked
  02:20:161 (1) - ^ checked
  02:53:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...rearrange these?... I want to insist on doing this.
  03:05:979 (1) - Remove new combo checked
  03:06:706 (4) - New combo checked
  03:08:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - not fun to play... still thinking about how to rearrange it....
  03:08:888 (1,1) - Remove new combo? checked
  03:26:343 (3) - Hard to read...move the end up? checked
  
  SPOILER

  

._. ._. ._.

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Offset: 535 (-10 from current), don't forget to move the other timing points as well checked
The hitsound volume is a bit too low... heighten it a bit please. checked
Wow, you're obsessed with putting New Combos... lol. checked

[Lite]
00:25:999 (3) - not perfectly stacked checked
00:28:908 (6) - shorten by 1/2? checked
00:33:272 (3) - not perfectly stacked checked

[Sweet]
00:34:726 (3,4) - not perfectly stacked checked
00:59:635 (4,1) - stack this please :/ checked
01:54:544 (3) - this circle is a bit too overlapped. Can you please fix this combo in general so that there isn't much covering? checked
02:18:544 (3) - ^
03:02:363 (6) - New Combo please checked
03:03:090 (8) - can you please stack this under 6 perfectly... or better, put it somewhere else checked
03:11:817 (1) - really annoying overlap again checked

Snowy Dream wrote:

[General]
Tag里不加Disoy真的大丈夫だ?

Garven wrote:

Hrm

[Tasteless]
00:58:716 - Remove custom slider tick? Or use a second custom tick with the clap sound. checked
01:01:625 (1) - Remove new combo checked
01:04:535 (1) - ^ checked
01:05:989 (1) - New combo checked
02:11:444 (1) - No custom ticks on this one? checked
02:15:807 (1) - Remove new combo checked
02:18:716 (1) - ^checked
02:20:171 (2) - New combo checked
03:06:716 (1) - Remove new combo checked
03:09:625 (1) - ^ checked
03:11:080 (2,3) - Kind of strange spacing compared to the rest of the map checked
03:21:262 (1) - Remove new combo checked
03:23:444 (3) - New combo checked
03:24:171 (1) - Remove new combo checked
03:25:625 (2) - New combo checked
There were a lot of great spots for you to utilize the custom hit sounds for slider ticks in this difficulty. I suggest you look through and see what you can add to make the sounds more consistent from verse to verse. add up a few

[Disoy's normal] -> Disoy's Normal ALL checked
Offset is different from other difficulties. Line it up please. Don't forget to resnap notes and check slider ends.
Really don't like those soft whistles on slider bodies like at 00:12:181 (1) - and 00:17:999 (1) - especially when you take the effort to silence the sliderslide in the first place.
00:39:635 (4) - Sticking into HP bar
00:48:908 (1) - Feels too soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty
02:25:999 (1) - End this at 02:28:181 - ? If so, make the break start at 02:28:908 -
02:40:544 (1) - End this at 02:42:181 - ?
02:43:454 (1) - End this at 02:45:090 - ?
02:50:726 (1,2,3,4) - These are snapped wrong. Follow the same rhythm from Sweet Hard.

[Sweet Hard]
This plays more like an Insane than a Hard. -_-
00:29:080 (4,1) - Eeh, this is a bit much of a jump imo. Maybe reduce the distance? checked
01:14:716 - Extend the start of the break to here checked
02:28:898 - ^ checked
03:16:898 - Start kiai here checked
Fun difficulty, but it's mislabeled as a Hard instead of an Insane.

Garven wrote:

Aah, quit changing your backgrounds.

Though I guess you added a skin...

[General]
That cursor is really really bad looking. >_> checked
The scorebor-ki and scorebar-kidanger are sticking over the top of the screen. checked
Add a spinner approach circle checked
And since you'll be adding that, you may as well remove the extraneous .osb file. checked

[Tasteless]
I'm glad to hear the new slidertick whistles added, but they're not added consistently. checked
01:14:716 - Extend the start of the break to here? checked
02:28:898 - Extend the start of the break to here? checked
Looking good now.

[Disoy's Normal] All checked
01:14:716 - Extend the start of the break to here?
02:00:534 (1) - If you want this in the center, raise one grid
02:51:444 (1) - Remove new combo

[Sweet]
01:04:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think with the up -> down motions with the sliders before these helps create a flow that would make me suggest that you change the positions of the 2 and 3 for these triangles. checked
01:14:716 - Extend the start of the break to here? checked
02:28:898 - Extend the start of the break to here? checked

Just minor things left, really.

a519172361 wrote:

能合体吗？

roverchan wrote:

玩了下,tasteles]跟sweet都不错..
个人觉得lite可以参考一下以下的..
00:18:469 (2) - 往左一格?
00:58:890 (2) - 往左下一格?
01:01:890 (3) - 往左一格?
01:02:364 (6) - 往右一格?
01:06:153 (1) - 请让auto君转超过2000分
01:08:680 (1) - 同上
02:03:943 (6) - 向左一格?
02:04:417 (9,10,11) - 向右一格?
02:06:311 (5) - 向下两格?
02:06:469 (6,7) - 向下一格?
02:49:259 (3,4) - 向右一格?
02:53:522 (1) - 向左一格?

• Remove "htt" frm tags. Add "ho-kago hokago tea time" in the tags instead.
  Offset 544 (+9 from current offset)
  Nice skin, but i think that the hitbursts don't fit well with the other "drawing-styled" stuff like hitcircles and HP bar.

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:07:989 - 02:22:171 - 03:13:080 - add a beat here? You usually have a beat for this kind of pattern in the map, why not here too?

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Give the difficulty name some adjective about sweets like the other difficulties? :x
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty and especially Approach Rate are really low for this map. I suggest AR+2 and OD+1 (possibly HPdrain+1 too).
   00:38:353 (1,2,3,4) - this is confusing due to the really low approach rate. There are quite a lot of patterns like this. Anyway, if you increased the settings as i told you above all these patterns will be ok.
   02:13:625 (5) - the ending of this slider has a normal hitsound, is it intended?

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:50:898 (7,1) - kinda sudden and unnatural jump, flip 00:51:262 (1,2,3,4) horizzontally?
   01:28:171 (5) - 01:29:625 (3) - normal hitsound again, I'm asking because they don't seem intentional at all.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Remove "htt" frm tags. Add "ho-kago hokago tea time" in the tags instead. checked
  Offset 544 (+9 from current offset) checked
  Nice skin, but i think that the hitbursts don't fit well with the other "drawing-styled" stuff like hitcircles and HP bar.

- Tasteless:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   01:07:989 - 02:22:171 - 03:13:080 - add a beat here? You usually have a beat for this kind of pattern in the map, why not here too?

checked

- Disoy's Normal: All checked

1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
   Give the difficulty name some adjective about sweets like the other difficulties?
   
2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   Overall Difficulty and especially Approach Rate are really low for this map. I suggest AR+2 and OD+1 (possibly HPdrain+1 too).
   00:38:353 (1,2,3,4) - this is confusing due to the really low approach rate. There are quite a lot of patterns like this. Anyway, if you increased the settings as i told you above all these patterns will be ok.
   02:13:625 (5) - the ending of this slider has a normal hitsound, is it intended?

- Sweet:

1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
   00:50:898 (7,1) - kinda sudden and unnatural jump, flip 00:51:262 (1,2,3,4) horizzontally? I think what I change it would be fit
   01:28:171 (5) - 01:29:625 (3) - normal hitsound again, I'm asking because they don't seem intentional at all.

checked


Edit: feel free to ask me for a recheck after checking this modding.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Coolz, rebubblin' (ノ￣∇￣)ノ 彡

CDFA wrote:

I'm going to assume the song is intentionally uncapitalized. . .

Also, lol 2 pages of "star~"