winber1 wrote:

00:22:810(3) - either end at 00:23:410

LOL. i was in the middle of a thought, and then i kinda didn't want to say, so i skipped it and was going to go back and write it in, but i forgot xD. i was just going to say you could end it on the white tick, or put it on the blue tick and make the next two notes on blue ticks as well.

(i always check these mod posts when i'm bored lol.)

MathiasXII wrote:

HI ! I received your request .

It's funny that you mention checking the offset, because seeing your message in another subject, I decided to check it even BEFORE you asked me :O ! (tum tum tum). I tried another later offset (2 565) that's more centered to the beat, but when I played, looking at the constant 21ms late, it got me back to the actual offset (2 544) to get 1ms late/early with a 15% mishit rate (which is the closest I can get considering my skills at Osu! ).

So I'm gonna say your offset is actually very precisely correct IMO . Even if maybe it doesn't sound quite the case with the timing tick (and with beat sounds maybe?), it FEELS being the correct offset in gameplay.

STARRRRRRR *

Haha wow really? That's a funny coincidence XD
Anyways that's a great explanation, probably explains why I play better with this offset even though it sounds off Thank you very much for checking!
Er ... not sure if I should give Kudosu in this case ... I didn't actually change anything so ... uh ... >_<

winber1 wrote:

LOL. i was in the middle of a thought, and then i kinda didn't want to say, so i skipped it and was going to go back and write it in, but i forgot xD. i was just going to say you could end it on the white tick, or put it on the blue tick and make the next two notes on blue ticks as well.

(i always check these mod posts when i'm bored lol.)

Ah I see. I was thinking that it didn't really make sense ... XD
No harm, I usually do as well, see if I pointed out useless things so I can try to improve ahahaha XD

onyl suggestions

~Cry~
01:06:744 : clap ? ooo delete and add whistle

~Smile~
01:06:744 (3) : clap no sound nice D: , test whistle

~Dream~
Very fine
try for "Slider Tick Rate" in 2
to make the score is more high


star for dedication
bye

EvianBubble wrote:

Er ... not sure if I should give Kudosu in this case ... I didn't actually change anything so ... uh ... >_<

DON'T DO IT OR MY NINJA BUNNY WILL STEAL ALL YOUR CARROTS !

Revengexsoyah wrote:

onyl suggestions

~Cry~
01:06:744 : clap ? ooo delete and add whistle Well I compromised, kept clap but I added whistle on the end

~Smile~
01:06:744 (3) : clap no sound nice D: , test whistle Same thing as above

~Dream~
Very fine
try for "Slider Tick Rate" in 2 Sorry I think 0.5 sounds better, I don't want to increase this just to increase score lol
to make the score is more high


star for dedication
bye

Thanks

MathiasXII wrote:

DON'T DO IT OR MY NINJA BUNNY WILL STEAL ALL YOUR CARROTS !

LOL OK then XD I want to keep my carrots! :3

General:
I think better to put 1 Slider Tick Rate everywhere,not 0,5

Cry:
Everything is ok here

Smile:
It is a bit harder than 'Cry' difficulty,but I think it is not enough. Better to increase your Slider Velocity here.

Dream:
00:26:844 - 1 grid right,1 grid up
well,better to increase your slider velocity here too,because it is the hardest difficulty.

Star!

Hey hey. Just a little suggestions ^_^

General
Change title to For You (TV Size) XD *wondering why anybody mentioned it before*

Cry
00:46:944 (4) - instead of this beat, make a slider that starts at 00:46:644 and finishes at 00:46:644. Sounds better imo

Smile
00:16:644 (x) - add a note here

Dream
01:09:594 (1) - this slider sounds a little off for me. start it at 01:09:444?

Nice map for a cute song, starr'd

Giorgos wrote:

General:
I think better to put 1 Slider Tick Rate everywhere,not 0,5 No, I think 0.5 fits better >_<

Cry:
Everything is ok here

Smile:
It is a bit harder than 'Cry' difficulty,but I think it is not enough. Better to increase your Slider Velocity here. Mmm really? I don't think it's too bad ... I'm going to leave this >_<

Dream:
00:26:844 - 1 grid right,1 grid up Moved up but not right
well,better to increase your slider velocity here too,because it is the hardest difficulty.

Star!

Thank you very much

Wiinter wrote:

Hey hey. Just a little suggestions ^_^

General
Change title to For You (TV Size) XD *wondering why anybody mentioned it before* D; Er ... I'll look up how to I guess? X_X Don't think it really matters though haha

Cry
00:46:944 (4) - instead of this beat, make a slider that starts at 00:46:644 and finishes at 00:46:644. Sounds better imo Err ... that slider would start and finish in the same spot? XD

Smile
00:16:644 (x) - add a note here OK

Dream
01:09:594 (1) - this slider sounds a little off for me. start it at 01:09:444? I think it sounds better starting where it is X_X

Nice map for a cute song, starr'd

Thanks for your mod ^_^

Wiinter wrote:

Hey hey. Just a little suggestions ^_^

Cry
00:46:944 (4) - instead of this beat, make a slider that starts at 00:46:644 and finishes at 00:46:644. Sounds better imo Err ... that slider would start and finish in the same spot? XD

OH damn, sorry >__<" I typed wrong. I'll correct it tomorrow when I get here cuz now I'm out of time ;w;

She sounds like she's got a southern accent (in english). This song makes me crack up.

you've got plenty of mods, so take everything I say as a suggestion. I'm going to be very critical, but this map is pretty good as is.

[cry]
00:09:144 (1) - do you need to map the pickup notes? Just start on beat 1 and extend the slider into (2)
00:13:044 (2,5) - I don't like these since they don't fit the song.
00:16:944 (3,4,5) - make it one big repeating slider
00:22:644 (2,5) - don't fit
00:26:544 (2,3,4) - repeating slider
01:25:044 (1) - do you have to map the lyrics? just start on beat 1 and shorten the slider

[smile]
I'm not feeling it, so I'm skipping it. See [dream]

[dream]
okay, these songs suck to map. You're either brave for trying to map this, or you didn't know it was gonna be this hard.
http://puu.sh/Z9v
Here's [dream] with some notes I moved around which sound closer (there's a few 8ths, but those can be 6ths too, and 6ths seem to fit better usually. The odd thing is that in music I usually play, it's rare to have a 6th, but fairly common to have an 8th). The problem is that it just plainly sounds weird to be hitting on those notes. The solution? Don't map them. Anything you were mapping the lyrics and it feels slightly off, map the drums instead, or the piano. The piano has some kickass parts, like at 00:16:944. Drumroll at 00:47:544, along with a driving (jumpy?) piano line.

I hate to see all your work go to waste, but go play hatsune miku - hato, and you'll clearly see a song that people like and obviously enjoy which is completely terrible in my eyes due to being mapped incorrectly. I wish you luck in how you want to proceed. Star because even though I don't like the current beatmap, I do like the song, and it's got potential.

Ouch I actually agree with ziin.

This song is very difficult to map even if timed correctly.
The vocal sometimes lands on 1/4, sometimes 1/6, and sometimes, after careful listening, nowhere.
Usually if you have to use 1/8 to map, something is not right.

I can't complete my mod on time because I myself am troubled with how the rhythm should be placed.
Yea, follow ziin's advice first.
It'll be better to follow the instrumental.

(No worry I'll pay attention to your progress.)

Starrrr

oh my first time to mod.

[Cry]
00:10:344 (x) - add a note?
00:29:244 (1) - this looks a bit strange to me.
00:34:044 (1,2) - don't stack?
01:20:244 (x) - add a note?

[Smile]
Oh. Perfect~

[Dream]
the stacks looks not very pretty though.
(trying to be picky)

+star.

oh the professionals are ahead.
i do agree what ziin and yongtw said.
try to make [Dream] more fit to play.

[Smile]
0:34:944 (3) - +1 Repeat ( just rotate the end for resolving spacing problem
00:35:544 (4) - Make it 1/2 shorter
00:36:744 (1) - Delete and
00:36:594 (x) - This is at 1/8, Create a 3/8 slider and add one repeat

[Dream]
00:32:994 (x) - Add Note
01:13:794 (x) - ^
01:14:094 (x) - ^



starred

yongtw123 wrote:

Ouch I actually agree with ziin.

you say that like it hurts to agree with me

ziin wrote:

yongtw123 wrote:

Ouch I actually agree with ziin.

you say that like it hurts to agree with me

I meant it to sound like "Ouch, that hit the spot (of what I want to say)" lol
Anyways let's wait and see what EvianBubble will say.

ziin wrote:

She sounds like she's got a southern accent (in english). This song makes me crack up.

you've got plenty of mods, so take everything I say as a suggestion. I'm going to be very critical, but this map is pretty good as is.

[cry]
00:09:144 (1) - do you need to map the pickup notes? Just start on beat 1 and extend the slider into (2) Sounds better to me IMO
00:13:044 (2,5) - I don't like these since they don't fit the song. I deleted (2)
00:16:944 (3,4,5) - make it one big repeating slider They feel like separate notes to me though :S
00:22:644 (2,5) - don't fit Deleted (2)
00:26:544 (2,3,4) - repeating slider Doesn't fit IMO
01:25:044 (1) - do you have to map the lyrics? just start on beat 1 and shorten the slider Yea, because I think it fits better >_<

[smile]
I'm not feeling it, so I'm skipping it. See [dream]

[dream]
okay, these songs suck to map. You're either brave for trying to map this, or you didn't know it was gonna be this hard.
http://puu.sh/Z9v
Here's [dream] with some notes I moved around which sound closer (there's a few 8ths, but those can be 6ths too, and 6ths seem to fit better usually. The odd thing is that in music I usually play, it's rare to have a 6th, but fairly common to have an 8th). The problem is that it just plainly sounds weird to be hitting on those notes. The solution? Don't map them. Anything you were mapping the lyrics and it feels slightly off, map the drums instead, or the piano. The piano has some kickass parts, like at 00:16:944. Drumroll at 00:47:544, along with a driving (jumpy?) piano line.

I hate to see all your work go to waste, but go play hatsune miku - hato, and you'll clearly see a song that people like and obviously enjoy which is completely terrible in my eyes due to being mapped incorrectly. I wish you luck in how you want to proceed. Star because even though I don't like the current beatmap, I do like the song, and it's got potential.

Thank you very much for your comments. I DID try mapping it to 1/6, but then decided against it because as you said, it just sounds kind of odd >_< I will take your suggestions and try to map to the drum / piano instead. I'll also have a look at the map you said, to see what you mean
Oh, and it's definitely the latter ... I thought it was going to be easier ahahaha XD

yongtw123 wrote:

Ouch I actually agree with ziin.

This song is very difficult to map even if timed correctly.
The vocal sometimes lands on 1/4, sometimes 1/6, and sometimes, after careful listening, nowhere.
Usually if you have to use 1/8 to map, something is not right.

I can't complete my mod on time because I myself am troubled with how the rhythm should be placed.
Yea, follow ziin's advice first.
It'll be better to follow the instrumental.

(No worry I'll pay attention to your progress.)

Thank you for your input as well. I will do that. Oh and sorry for a bit of a delay, I was out yesterday so I couldn't check my mods ahaha XD

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Starrrr

:O Thank you!

justnobody wrote:

oh my first time to mod.

[Cry]
00:10:344 (x) - add a note? Not here D;
00:29:244 (1) - this looks a bit strange to me. K, I tried to rearrange this
00:34:044 (1,2) - don't stack? Changed into a slider
01:20:244 (x) - add a note? I kind of want these gaps so no D;

[Smile]
Oh. Perfect~

[Dream]
the stacks looks not very pretty though.
(trying to be picky)

+star.

oh the professionals are ahead.
i do agree what ziin and yongtw said.
try to make [Dream] more fit to play.

OK I'm gonna work on that, thanks!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Smile]
0:34:944 (3) - +1 Repeat ( just rotate the end for resolving spacing problem I think it sounds better with only 3 repeats here
00:35:544 (4) - Make it 1/2 shorter
00:36:744 (1) - Delete and
00:36:594 (x) - This is at 1/8, Create a 3/8 slider and add one repeat I tried this but it sounds kind of awkward to me X_X So I'm going to keep what I used to have :S

[Dream]
00:32:994 (x) - Add Note OK
01:13:794 (x) - ^ I don't really think these two are needed
01:14:094 (x) - ^



starred

Thank you very much

actually, the discrepancy of some notes is very little to me... try to use 200 BPM ( it's like having a double rate and needed to use rate like 1/12 and 1/16... ) and more than half slider velocity ( imho tht's the difficult part ).
It was good if some notes could be snapped at 1/6 and some other at 1/8... but there are notes that some a very lil' bit early/late..
it should help you

NO KUDOSU for this

Cry:

01:04:344 (3) - move to the right and up one grid point

Smile:

00:46:644 (2) - not sure if you still want people to tell you if things end or start in 1/6th but this does.

Dream:

00:17:144 (4,5,6,7) - in 1/6th (again still dont know if you want people to tell you that.) if this was meant that way, these 4 notes sound bad then

Thats all i found.

Nice mapset overall. star.

Hi hi

Timing
The vocal inside this song are very tricky. There are some vocal are stick to the blue tick (1/4), BUT, there is some vocal are stick to the YELLOW TICK (1/8). I already check this timing with 0,25% playback rate. So yeah, you should map the 1/4 and 1/8 and make sure some object are stick with vocals by using 0,25% playback rate (lower-right). Also, your offset seems downbeat, offset should be 154 (I am not sure ._.)

Cry
00:21:744 (1) - I think would be nice, if approachcircle at 00:21:144 (4) are stick to the sliderlines at 00:21:744 (1). Like this one http://puu.sh/10mV
00:29:244 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider?
00:43:644 (1) - ^
01:00:144 (1,2,3) - You can make a nice pattern like this one http://puu.sh/10mT

Smile
00:15:744 (2) - Consider to make this? http://puu.sh/10n2
00:24:144 (1) - Move and make a slider like this? http://puu.sh/10nv
01:21:144 (1) - Remove whistle at slider trace (keep the whistle at head and tail)

Dream
00:17:144 (4,5,6,7) - This seems very tweaking, change something please

That's all

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

actually, the discrepancy of some notes is very little to me... try to use 200 BPM ( it's like having a double rate and needed to use rate like 1/12 and 1/16... ) and more than half slider velocity ( imho tht's the difficult part ).
It was good if some notes could be snapped at 1/6 and some other at 1/8... but there are notes that some a very lil' bit early/late..
it should help you

NO KUDOSU for this

Haha yes all right, I suppose I will have to snap some things in 1/6 after all right? ^_^"

Zelos wrote:

Cry:

01:04:344 (3) - move to the right and up one grid point Just moved one right because it'd be too close otherwise I think

Smile:

00:46:644 (2) - not sure if you still want people to tell you if things end or start in 1/6th but this does. I think this one is OK so I'm going to keep this

Dream:

00:17:144 (4,5,6,7) - in 1/6th (again still dont know if you want people to tell you that.) if this was meant that way, these 4 notes sound bad then Haha yea I was experimenting, I'll fix this

Thats all i found.

Nice mapset overall. star.

Thank you very much

Leorda wrote:

Hi hi

Timing
The vocal inside this song are very tricky. There are some vocal are stick to the blue tick (1/4), BUT, there is some vocal are stick to the YELLOW TICK (1/8). I already check this timing with 0,25% playback rate. So yeah, you should map the 1/4 and 1/8 and make sure some object are stick with vocals by using 0,25% playback rate (lower-right). Also, your offset seems downbeat, offset should be 154 (I am not sure ._.) I will be sure to go through the difficulties again. I am going to keep the offset for now though, since I'm not sure either

Cry
00:21:744 (1) - I think would be nice, if approachcircle at 00:21:144 (4) are stick to the sliderlines at 00:21:744 (1). Like this one http://puu.sh/10mV Ooh interesting idea, I tried to do that at least XD
00:29:244 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider? No
00:43:644 (1) - ^ K I did it here
01:00:144 (1,2,3) - You can make a nice pattern like this one http://puu.sh/10mT How did you make those so nicely?! XD I tried to

Smile
00:15:744 (2) - Consider to make this? http://puu.sh/10n2 Sorry I can't quite tell the difference >_<
00:24:144 (1) - Move and make a slider like this? http://puu.sh/10nv OK
01:21:144 (1) - Remove whistle at slider trace (keep the whistle at head and tail) Done

Dream
00:17:144 (4,5,6,7) - This seems very tweaking, change something please Currently experimenting XD

That's all

Thanks for your mod!

So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).

I mapped everything I could hear in the background (ie not the lyrics, except once during a stream). There is an 1/8th drum beat too.

So then, there are quite few options:
You can ignore me / say no (I won't be offended, I didn't put much effort into mapping the rhythm).
You (or someone else) can make it into a taiko difficulty.
You can use some of the rhythms in your "Dream" difficulty, or ANY of the difficulties for that matter.
You can edit it and make your own "insane".
I can make a guest difficulty with it. I'd probably call it "nightmare".

No credit is necessary unless I make the guest, you can treat this as your own, or give it away to someone else.

If you decide to use them in one of your difficulties, you can copy/paste from the .osu files (it won't overwrite any notes, just make sure you have access to your old beatmap first) so you can hear the rhythms along with what you have right now. If you have anything on a beat that doesn't exist in my map, it *probably* shouldn't be mapped, at least in my opinion. If the note is on the end of a slider, I don't think there's a problem, since you don't actually have to hit that note in time (except for taiko).

no kudos for this post.

Download: Rie Fu - For You (TV size) (EvianBubble) [blah].osu

ziin wrote:

So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).

I went on and elaborated based on ziin's diff.
This time I mapped closer to the vocal, using some 1/6 streams.
This diff should play out good as a taiko diff, but would require some ingenuity if converted to osu standard diff.

By the way, you can simplify either ziin's diff or this one and optimize the rhythm on the easier difficulties.
Don't have to follow, but anyways, as a reference.

(Of course, don't kudosu this.)

Download: Rie Fu - For You (TV size) (EvianBubble) [blehhhhhh].osu

[Cry]
Looks nice!

[Smile]
Also looks nice.

[Dream]
How about mapping the small 1/4 vocal parts, rather than staying with the beat? Feels better to me.

00:34:644 - Maybe add a note here?

00:37:344 (3,4) - Same as the first thing I said.

Rest is fine!

ziin wrote:

So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).

I mapped everything I could hear in the background (ie not the lyrics, except once during a stream). There is an 1/8th drum beat too.

So then, there are quite few options:
You can ignore me / say no (I won't be offended, I didn't put much effort into mapping the rhythm).
You (or someone else) can make it into a taiko difficulty.
You can use some of the rhythms in your "Dream" difficulty, or ANY of the difficulties for that matter.
You can edit it and make your own "insane".
I can make a guest difficulty with it. I'd probably call it "nightmare".

No credit is necessary unless I make the guest, you can treat this as your own, or give it away to someone else.

If you decide to use them in one of your difficulties, you can copy/paste from the .osu files (it won't overwrite any notes, just make sure you have access to your old beatmap first) so you can hear the rhythms along with what you have right now. If you have anything on a beat that doesn't exist in my map, it *probably* shouldn't be mapped, at least in my opinion. If the note is on the end of a slider, I don't think there's a problem, since you don't actually have to hit that note in time (except for taiko).

no kudos for this post.

Thanks! I'll have a look at this, I'll probably incorporate some rhythms into my other difficulties

yongtw123 wrote:

ziin wrote:

So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).

I went on and elaborated based on ziin's diff.
This time I mapped closer to the vocal, using some 1/6 streams.
This diff should play out good as a taiko diff, but would require some ingenuity if converted to osu standard diff.

By the way, you can simplify either ziin's diff or this one and optimize the rhythm on the easier difficulties.
Don't have to follow, but anyways, as a reference.

(Of course, don't kudosu this.)

Thank you as well, I will use both of your contributions to hopefully making my diffs make a bit more sense XD
I honestly have no idea how Taiko diffs work, if you want to include them it's fine by me, but I won't submit them unless you want me to

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Cry]
Looks nice!

[Smile]
Also looks nice.

[Dream]
How about mapping the small 1/4 vocal parts, rather than staying with the beat? Feels better to me. I think here I'm going to keep it

Example

[attachment=0:13721]screenshot046.jpg[/attachment:13721]

00:34:644 - Maybe add a note here? I made (2) a slider until here

00:37:344 (3,4) - Same as the first thing I said.

Rest is fine!

Thanks for your mod

tags : move ending and ed away

[Dream]
00:22:494 (2,3,4,5) - let all 1/4 later

[Smile]
00:46:644 (2) - you really want to 1/6? change to 1/4


maybe hitsound is a bit louder...and whistle is too much here

nothing else , catch my star

eveless wrote:

tags : move ending and ed away OK done

[Dream]
00:22:494 (2,3,4,5) - let all 1/4 later That sounds kind of off X_X

[Smile]
00:46:644 (2) - you really want to 1/6? change to 1/4 I made it into two notes and changed the timing


maybe hitsound is a bit louder...and whistle is too much here

nothing else , catch my star

Thank you for your mod

WHY ARE THERE NO SPINNERS
I can't find anything otherwise, really. I tried nazi-ing and everything

Charles445 wrote:

WHY ARE THERE NO SPINNERS
I can't find anything otherwise, really. I tried nazi-ing and everything

Er ... I don't like spinners? XD
Lol, well, thanks for looking anyways!

request modding

[Dream]
0.17.244(4) - try return slider.

nothing other

+star

[Smile]
00:47:544 (4) - Add a note

[Dream]
AR8?Maybe it's hard for me.But it doesn't matter.

00:22:494 (2,3,4,5,1) - oh,all on blue lines?
00:46:644 (7) - Consider adding an arrow.
01:26:694 - Add a spinner , end at 01:28:944
-----------------------------
OK,other things are fine.
Star~☆

frost-b-spec wrote:

request modding

[Dream]
0.17.244(4) - try return slider. You know what? I am just going to change this part because it sound so weird X_X

nothing other

+star

Thanks!

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Smile]
00:47:544 (4) - Add a note OK

[Dream]
AR8?Maybe it's hard for me.But it doesn't matter. Well it was 7 at first but someone told me to make it 8

00:22:494 (2,3,4,5,1) - oh,all on blue lines? K I extended the slider and moved them 1/4 later so now it's following more the piano
00:46:644 (7) - Consider adding an arrow. Done
01:26:694 - Add a spinner , end at 01:28:944 No, 'cus then I'd want to do it for all the diffs XD
-----------------------------
OK,other things are fine.
Star~☆

Thank you very much

heya~

Gah, this show freaks me out. What the hell is wrong with those kids? T_T

Dream
01:09:594 (1) - shorten by 1/4 and add a circle at 01:09:444 and 01:09:594
01:13:044 - add a note

Maybe add a spinner to the end?

Smile
Spacing is kinda inconsistent. You should check it, at least for this diff, twice. I dunno about this.

And add a spinner to the end, if you feel like it.

Cry
Spacing is inconsistent. Keeps going up from 0,9x down to 0,8x to 1,0x. That shouldn't be here ._.
Oh, and add a spinner to the end.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

heya~

Gah, this show freaks me out. What the hell is wrong with those kids? T_T

Dream
01:09:594 (1) - shorten by 1/4 and add a circle at 01:09:444 and 01:09:594 Well I'm going to assume you meant 01:10:194 for the second note, because that's what I did XD
01:13:044 - add a note K

Maybe add a spinner to the end?

Smile
Spacing is kinda inconsistent. You should check it, at least for this diff, twice. I dunno about this.

And add a spinner to the end, if you feel like it.

Cry
Spacing is inconsistent. Keeps going up from 0,9x down to 0,8x to 1,0x. That shouldn't be here ._. Well I fixed some stuff, but the only reason why is probably because I don't like distance snap, it's overlapping too much and looks way too cluttered X_X Besides, I think it's fairly obvious what spacing means what, so it should be all right
Oh, and add a spinner to the end.

No spinners Thanks~!

[Dream] Are you sure you want to use AR8? AR7 fits better in my opinion...

But other than that I really see no errors. This is most definitely Star worthy.

[Dream]
00:26:994 (6,7) - remove whislte on (6) , whistle on (7) (or no whistle)
01:01:494 (4,5) - (4) whislte, (5) no whistle?
01:01:944 (6,7,8,9,1) - don't fit the music well. Also remove clap on (6), clap on beginning of slider
01:03:894 (2) - delete
01:26:544 (4) - a bit loud at the end... whistle instead of finish?

[Smile]
no problem~

nice spacing, no big problems, star~

Sorry for being late~ Here I go...

[Cry]
00.12.544 (1) Make this symmetrical
00.53.844 (2) ^
01.01.344 (3) Copy/paste and flip (1) instead

[Smile]
00.10.644 (3) Doesn't exactly go together with the vocal 'for' in the back, it sounds something like 1/8 beat earlier...Whatever it is it's off-sync, isn't a timing problem, and isn't easily fixed without resorting to 1/8...Maybe remove this?
00.25.944 (2,3) Nazi: One grid down
00.50.544 (2) Make this symmetrical
00.51.744 (3) ^

[Dream]
00.10.644 (5) Same as Normal
00.20.544 (5) Suggestion: Copy/paste (3) and flip 180?
00.58.944 (3) Suggestion: Copy/paste (1) and flip 180+horizontal flip?

Star~

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Dream] Are you sure you want to use AR8? AR7 fits better in my opinion...

But other than that I really see no errors. This is most definitely Star worthy.

All right, I changed it Thanks!

wmfchris wrote:

[Dream]
00:26:994 (6,7) - remove whislte on (6) , whistle on (7) (or no whistle) Changed
01:01:494 (4,5) - (4) whislte, (5) no whistle? OK
01:01:944 (6,7,8,9,1) - don't fit the music well. Also remove clap on (6), clap on beginning of slider No
01:03:894 (2) - delete Done
01:26:544 (4) - a bit loud at the end... whistle instead of finish? This is fine

[Smile]
no problem~

nice spacing, no big problems, star~

Thank you very much

aquabluu wrote:

Sorry for being late~ Here I go...

[Cry]
00.12.544 (1) Make this symmetrical Fixed, I think
00.53.844 (2) ^
01.01.344 (3) Copy/paste and flip (1) instead Not really sure what you mean but I tried ... stuff, and it looked bad, so this will be staying

[Smile]
00.10.644 (3) Doesn't exactly go together with the vocal 'for' in the back, it sounds something like 1/8 beat earlier...Whatever it is it's off-sync, isn't a timing problem, and isn't easily fixed without resorting to 1/8...Maybe remove this? OK
00.25.944 (2,3) Nazi: One grid down Sure
00.50.544 (2) Make this symmetrical Well, I changed it at least
00.51.744 (3) ^

[Dream]
00.10.644 (5) Same as Normal All right
00.20.544 (5) Suggestion: Copy/paste (3) and flip 180? Did it the other way round
00.58.944 (3) Suggestion: Copy/paste (1) and flip 180+horizontal flip? I tried, but I didn't like it, so not changed

Star~

Thanks for the input