She sounds like she's got a southern accent (in english). This song makes me crack up.
you've got plenty of mods, so take everything I say as a suggestion. I'm going to be very critical, but this map is pretty good as is.
[cry]
00:09:144 (1) - do you need to map the pickup notes? Just start on beat 1 and extend the slider into (2)
00:13:044 (2,5) - I don't like these since they don't fit the song.
00:16:944 (3,4,5) - make it one big repeating slider
00:22:644 (2,5) - don't fit
00:26:544 (2,3,4) - repeating slider
01:25:044 (1) - do you have to map the lyrics? just start on beat 1 and shorten the slider
[smile]
I'm not feeling it, so I'm skipping it. See [dream]
[dream]
okay, these songs suck to map. You're either brave for trying to map this, or you didn't know it was gonna be this hard.
http://puu.sh/Z9vHere's [dream] with some notes I moved around which sound closer (there's a few 8ths, but those can be 6ths too, and 6ths seem to fit better usually. The odd thing is that in music I usually play, it's rare to have a 6th, but fairly common to have an 8th). The problem is that it just plainly sounds weird to be hitting on those notes. The solution?
Don't map them. Anything you were mapping the lyrics and it feels slightly off, map the drums instead, or the piano. The piano has some kickass parts, like at
00:16:944. Drumroll at 00:47:544, along with a driving (jumpy?) piano line.
I hate to see all your work go to waste, but go play hatsune miku - hato, and you'll clearly see a song that people like and obviously enjoy which is completely terrible in my eyes due to being mapped incorrectly. I wish you luck in how you want to proceed. Star because even though I don't like the current beatmap, I do like the song, and it's got potential.