I meant it to sound like "Ouch, that hit the spot (of what I want to say)" lolziin wrote:
you say that like it hurts to agree with meyongtw123 wrote:
Ouch I actually agree with ziin.
Anyways let's wait and see what EvianBubble will say.
I meant it to sound like "Ouch, that hit the spot (of what I want to say)" lolziin wrote:
you say that like it hurts to agree with meyongtw123 wrote:
Ouch I actually agree with ziin.
Thank you very much for your comments. I DID try mapping it to 1/6, but then decided against it because as you said, it just sounds kind of odd >_< I will take your suggestions and try to map to the drum / piano instead. I'll also have a look at the map you said, to see what you meanziin wrote:
She sounds like she's got a southern accent (in english). This song makes me crack up.
you've got plenty of mods, so take everything I say as a suggestion. I'm going to be very critical, but this map is pretty good as is.
[cry]
00:09:144 (1) - do you need to map the pickup notes? Just start on beat 1 and extend the slider into (2) Sounds better to me IMO
00:13:044 (2,5) - I don't like these since they don't fit the song. I deleted (2)
00:16:944 (3,4,5) - make it one big repeating slider They feel like separate notes to me though :S
00:22:644 (2,5) - don't fit Deleted (2)
00:26:544 (2,3,4) - repeating slider Doesn't fit IMO
01:25:044 (1) - do you have to map the lyrics? just start on beat 1 and shorten the slider Yea, because I think it fits better >_<
[smile]
I'm not feeling it, so I'm skipping it. See [dream]
[dream]
okay, these songs suck to map. You're either brave for trying to map this, or you didn't know it was gonna be this hard.
http://puu.sh/Z9v
Here's [dream] with some notes I moved around which sound closer (there's a few 8ths, but those can be 6ths too, and 6ths seem to fit better usually. The odd thing is that in music I usually play, it's rare to have a 6th, but fairly common to have an 8th). The problem is that it just plainly sounds weird to be hitting on those notes. The solution? Don't map them. Anything you were mapping the lyrics and it feels slightly off, map the drums instead, or the piano. The piano has some kickass parts, like at 00:16:944. Drumroll at 00:47:544, along with a driving (jumpy?) piano line.
I hate to see all your work go to waste, but go play hatsune miku - hato, and you'll clearly see a song that people like and obviously enjoy which is completely terrible in my eyes due to being mapped incorrectly. I wish you luck in how you want to proceed. Star because even though I don't like the current beatmap, I do like the song, and it's got potential.
Thank you for your input as well. I will do that. Oh and sorry for a bit of a delay, I was out yesterday so I couldn't check my mods ahaha XDyongtw123 wrote:
Ouch I actually agree with ziin.
This song is very difficult to map even if timed correctly.
The vocal sometimes lands on 1/4, sometimes 1/6, and sometimes, after careful listening, nowhere.
Usually if you have to use 1/8 to map, something is not right.
I can't complete my mod on time because I myself am troubled with how the rhythm should be placed.
Yea, follow ziin's advice first.
It'll be better to follow the instrumental.
(No worry I'll pay attention to your progress.)
:O Thank you!TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:
Starrrr
OK I'm gonna work on that, thanks!justnobody wrote:
oh my first time to mod.
[Cry]
00:10:344 (x) - add a note? Not here D;
00:29:244 (1) - this looks a bit strange to me. K, I tried to rearrange this
00:34:044 (1,2) - don't stack? Changed into a slider
01:20:244 (x) - add a note? I kind of want these gaps so no D;
[Smile]
Oh. Perfect~
[Dream]
the stacks looks not very pretty though.
(trying to be picky)
+star.
oh the professionals are ahead.
i do agree what ziin and yongtw said.
try to make [Dream] more fit to play.
Thank you very muchHakuNoKaemi wrote:
[Smile]
0:34:944 (3) - +1 Repeat ( just rotate the end for resolving spacing problem I think it sounds better with only 3 repeats here
00:35:544 (4) - Make it 1/2 shorter
00:36:744 (1) - Delete and
00:36:594 (x) - This is at 1/8, Create a 3/8 slider and add one repeat I tried this but it sounds kind of awkward to me X_X So I'm going to keep what I used to have :S
[Dream]
00:32:994 (x) - Add Note OK
01:13:794 (x) - ^ I don't really think these two are needed
01:14:094 (x) - ^
starred
Haha yes all right, I suppose I will have to snap some things in 1/6 after all right? ^_^"HakuNoKaemi wrote:
actually, the discrepancy of some notes is very little to me... try to use 200 BPM ( it's like having a double rate and needed to use rate like 1/12 and 1/16... ) and more than half slider velocity ( imho tht's the difficult part ).
It was good if some notes could be snapped at 1/6 and some other at 1/8... but there are notes that some a very lil' bit early/late..
it should help you
NO KUDOSU for this
Thank you very muchZelos wrote:
Cry:
01:04:344 (3) - move to the right and up one grid point Just moved one right because it'd be too close otherwise I think
Smile:
00:46:644 (2) - not sure if you still want people to tell you if things end or start in 1/6th but this does. I think this one is OK so I'm going to keep this
Dream:
00:17:144 (4,5,6,7) - in 1/6th (again still dont know if you want people to tell you that.) if this was meant that way, these 4 notes sound bad then Haha yea I was experimenting, I'll fix this
Thats all i found.
Nice mapset overall. star.
Thanks for your mod!Leorda wrote:
Hi hi
Timing
The vocal inside this song are very tricky. There are some vocal are stick to the blue tick (1/4), BUT, there is some vocal are stick to the YELLOW TICK (1/8). I already check this timing with 0,25% playback rate. So yeah, you should map the 1/4 and 1/8 and make sure some object are stick with vocals by using 0,25% playback rate (lower-right). Also, your offset seems downbeat, offset should be 154 (I am not sure ._.) I will be sure to go through the difficulties again. I am going to keep the offset for now though, since I'm not sure either
Cry
00:21:744 (1) - I think would be nice, if approachcircle at 00:21:144 (4) are stick to the sliderlines at 00:21:744 (1). Like this one http://puu.sh/10mV Ooh interesting idea, I tried to do that at least XD
00:29:244 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider? No
00:43:644 (1) - ^ K I did it here
01:00:144 (1,2,3) - You can make a nice pattern like this one http://puu.sh/10mT How did you make those so nicely?! XD I tried to
Smile
00:15:744 (2) - Consider to make this? http://puu.sh/10n2 Sorry I can't quite tell the difference >_<
00:24:144 (1) - Move and make a slider like this? http://puu.sh/10nv OK
01:21:144 (1) - Remove whistle at slider trace (keep the whistle at head and tail) Done
Dream
00:17:144 (4,5,6,7) - This seems very tweaking, change something please Currently experimenting XD
That's all
I went on and elaborated based on ziin's diff.ziin wrote:
So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).
Thanks! I'll have a look at this, I'll probably incorporate some rhythms into my other difficultiesziin wrote:
So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).
I mapped everything I could hear in the background (ie not the lyrics, except once during a stream). There is an 1/8th drum beat too.
So then, there are quite few options:
You can ignore me / say no (I won't be offended, I didn't put much effort into mapping the rhythm).
You (or someone else) can make it into a taiko difficulty.
You can use some of the rhythms in your "Dream" difficulty, or ANY of the difficulties for that matter.
You can edit it and make your own "insane".
I can make a guest difficulty with it. I'd probably call it "nightmare".
No credit is necessary unless I make the guest, you can treat this as your own, or give it away to someone else.
If you decide to use them in one of your difficulties, you can copy/paste from the .osu files (it won't overwrite any notes, just make sure you have access to your old beatmap first) so you can hear the rhythms along with what you have right now. If you have anything on a beat that doesn't exist in my map, it *probably* shouldn't be mapped, at least in my opinion. If the note is on the end of a slider, I don't think there's a problem, since you don't actually have to hit that note in time (except for taiko).
no kudos for this post.
Thank you as well, I will use both of your contributions to hopefully making my diffs make a bit more sense XDyongtw123 wrote:
I went on and elaborated based on ziin's diff.ziin wrote:
So then, I went through an made a "taiko" difficulty without hitsounds (so it's not a real taiko difficulty).
This time I mapped closer to the vocal, using some 1/6 streams.
This diff should play out good as a taiko diff, but would require some ingenuity if converted to osu standard diff.
By the way, you can simplify either ziin's diff or this one and optimize the rhythm on the easier difficulties.
Don't have to follow, but anyways, as a reference.
(Of course, don't kudosu this.)
Thanks for your modOzzyOzrock wrote:
[Cry]
Looks nice!
[Smile]
Also looks nice.
[Dream]
How about mapping the small 1/4 vocal parts, rather than staying with the beat? Feels better to me. I think here I'm going to keep itExample[attachment=0:13721]screenshot046.jpg[/attachment:13721]
00:34:644 - Maybe add a note here? I made (2) a slider until here
00:37:344 (3,4) - Same as the first thing I said.
Rest is fine!
Thank you for your modeveless wrote:
tags : move ending and ed away OK done
[Dream]
00:22:494 (2,3,4,5) - let all 1/4 later That sounds kind of off X_X
[Smile]
00:46:644 (2) - you really want to 1/6? change to 1/4 I made it into two notes and changed the timing
maybe hitsound is a bit louder...and whistle is too much here
nothing else , catch my star
Er ... I don't like spinners? XDCharles445 wrote:
WHY ARE THERE NO SPINNERS
I can't find anything otherwise, really. I tried nazi-ing and everything
Thanks!frost-b-spec wrote:
request modding
[Dream]
0.17.244(4) - try return slider. You know what? I am just going to change this part because it sound so weird X_X
nothing other
+star
Thank you very muchSnowy Dream wrote:
[Smile]
00:47:544 (4) - Add a note OK
[Dream]
AR8?Maybe it's hard for me.But it doesn't matter. Well it was 7 at first but someone told me to make it 8
00:22:494 (2,3,4,5,1) - oh,all on blue lines? K I extended the slider and moved them 1/4 later so now it's following more the piano
00:46:644 (7) - Consider adding an arrow. Done
01:26:694 - Add a spinner , end at 01:28:944 No, 'cus then I'd want to do it for all the diffs XD
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OK,other things are fine.
Star~☆
No spinners Thanks~!Tenshi-nyan wrote:
heya~
Gah, this show freaks me out. What the hell is wrong with those kids? T_T
Dream
01:09:594 (1) - shorten by 1/4 and add a circle at 01:09:444 and 01:09:594 Well I'm going to assume you meant 01:10:194 for the second note, because that's what I did XD
01:13:044 - add a note K
Maybe add a spinner to the end?
Smile
Spacing is kinda inconsistent. You should check it, at least for this diff, twice. I dunno about this.
And add a spinner to the end, if you feel like it.
Cry
Spacing is inconsistent. Keeps going up from 0,9x down to 0,8x to 1,0x. That shouldn't be here ._. Well I fixed some stuff, but the only reason why is probably because I don't like distance snap, it's overlapping too much and looks way too cluttered X_X Besides, I think it's fairly obvious what spacing means what, so it should be all right
Oh, and add a spinner to the end.
All right, I changed it Thanks!SapphireGhost wrote:
[Dream] Are you sure you want to use AR8? AR7 fits better in my opinion...
But other than that I really see no errors. This is most definitely Star worthy.
Thank you very muchwmfchris wrote:
[Dream]
00:26:994 (6,7) - remove whislte on (6) , whistle on (7) (or no whistle) Changed
01:01:494 (4,5) - (4) whislte, (5) no whistle? OK
01:01:944 (6,7,8,9,1) - don't fit the music well. Also remove clap on (6), clap on beginning of slider No
01:03:894 (2) - delete Done
01:26:544 (4) - a bit loud at the end... whistle instead of finish? This is fine
[Smile]
no problem~
nice spacing, no big problems, star~
Thanks for the inputaquabluu wrote:
Sorry for being late~ Here I go...
[Cry]
00.12.544 (1) Make this symmetrical Fixed, I think
00.53.844 (2) ^
01.01.344 (3) Copy/paste and flip (1) instead Not really sure what you mean but I tried ... stuff, and it looked bad, so this will be staying
[Smile]
00.10.644 (3) Doesn't exactly go together with the vocal 'for' in the back, it sounds something like 1/8 beat earlier...Whatever it is it's off-sync, isn't a timing problem, and isn't easily fixed without resorting to 1/8...Maybe remove this? OK
00.25.944 (2,3) Nazi: One grid down Sure
00.50.544 (2) Make this symmetrical Well, I changed it at least
00.51.744 (3) ^
[Dream]
00.10.644 (5) Same as Normal All right
00.20.544 (5) Suggestion: Copy/paste (3) and flip 180? Did it the other way round
00.58.944 (3) Suggestion: Copy/paste (1) and flip 180+horizontal flip? I tried, but I didn't like it, so not changed
Star~
Thanks for the extra mod! Are you sure you don't want a kudosu? ;Olovhin456 wrote:
Hi again !! >w< I just felt like modding this again, I don't know, also no kds please, I have already modded this and there's no need to give me kds ~
Cry;
- All the timing sections should have the same volume, maybe except for the kiai, also please make the volume 55% or 60% (I'll with 55% or even 50%) This goes for all diffs, I assume you have the same settings as this diff ~ Well I don't think that all the timing sections should have the same volume, but I will make them softer
- 00:13:344 (2,3) >> I think is better if you make (2,3) into a slider Sounds good
- 00:23:544 (3,4) >> I think is better to make (3) into a slider that ends at the red tick, also make (4) a slider that ends at the next white tick I like the gap here but I made (3) the slider instead
- 00:28:644 (6,7) >> Easier to hit if made into a slider, also sounds better No, I like these better as separate notes
- 00:37:644 (3,4) >> Flows better if made into a slider
- 00:41:844 (2,3) >> ^
- 00:55:644 >> Make a slider here and end where (2) is, obviously delete (2) This doesn't sound bad, but I like it the way it is
- 00:56:844 (4,5) >> Make into a slider, flows better I think the opposite actually >_<"
Smile;
- 00:16:944 >> Doesn't sound good, extend by 1 tick, delete 5. Also there is something that you can do, an extra, after you do that take out 1 repetition of (4) and put a note in the space, sounds better Well I'm just following the piano pattern here, I agree what you suggested sounds good but it's the same pattern as in Cry, so I want to do something different
- 00:37:644 (3,4) >> Make into a slider ~ Sorry, these feel like separate notes to me >_<
- 00:46:644 (2,3) >> ^
- 01:10:944 >> Delete a repeat and put a note instead (where the repeat ended) OK
Dream;
- 00:31:644 >> Make a slider instead, that ends at the blue tick Mm, I don't think these really fit
- 00:32:844 >> ^ I'm not totally sure here ~
- 00:36:744 >> ^ I'm sure here ~
- 00:42:144 >> ^
- 00:42:894 >> Add a note ? I made (4) a shorter repeating slider here
- 00:45:294 >> Make a slider instead ? That ends at the red tick ~ Don't really like this
- 01:01:194 >> Make a slider instead, ends at blue tick OK
- 01:01:944 >> This note and the next, mix them into a slider No, I want this kind of mini stream ish thing
- 01:04:644 >> Maybe make a slider that ends at the blue tick then add a repetition OR you could just add a note at the blue tick Done
- 01:25:044 >> I think you should just extend the slider to where (3) is, sounds better I want (3) to be its own note
* Good luck !! >w<
I'm sure ~ Good luck with your map >w< By the way now I'm curious about the anime xDEvianBubble wrote:
Thanks for the extra mod! Are you sure you don't want a kudosu? ;O
Haha, well you could always start watching it? XDlovhin456 wrote:
I'm sure ~ Good luck with your map >w< By the way now I'm curious about the anime xD
Thanks! Wow, fast modKillerRind wrote:
Green = Design
Blue = Suggestion
Red = Change This!
[Cry]
01:01:344 (3) - Move 1 Grid up This is fine
[Smile]
01:23:544 (4) - Move 1 Grid up OK
[Dream]
00:40:944 (1) - Move first sliderpoint 1 grid up Done
01:01:944 (5) - New Combo Nah, I don't think that warrants a new combo
01:01:944 (5) - Remove New Combo
01:04:344 (2) - If ^ New Combo
01:06:444 (8) - New Combo Actually on second though, I'm going to keep this for consistency
01:07:344 (1) - If ^ Remove New Combo
01:25:044 (2) - Move first sliderpoint 1 Grid up Done
Nice Map
Have a Star~
Thanksval0108 wrote:
All Suggestion :3
[General]
offset 2,552 (?) I am not sure about this either, so I am just going to keep what I have so it doesn't mess up lol ^_^"
[Cry]
00:09:144 (1) - start here?00:09:744 Nah, I like where it starts and the pause after
[Smile]
fine
[Dream]
00:29:844 (2,3,4,5) - how? I didn't do this exact thing but I did do something like this, nice suggestion!00:36:744 (1,2,3,4) - how? No00:59:844 add note? Nah
01:01:794 ^
01:04:944 (5) - new combo? OK
nice map~
Thank you very muchlolcubes wrote:
Hey, here's my mod. Green stuff can be ignored completely, they are merely a design opinion.
[General]:[Cry]:
- The video file looks weird to me. I cannot open it in any player properly (it works in osu though). However, the video file has sound. Since you're using your mp3 for the map you should remove the sound from the video. Also, it is using 1280x720 resolution with h264 codec. This will put an insane load on weaker machines. I suggest you re-encode this to 800x600 at most (black bars on top and bottom), will also reduce the file size while the quality won't be affected much. All right. Unfortunately I don't know much about encoding and such, but I'll try to find some video help
- Mp3 quality seems a bit low, have you tried to find a better raw/sub for the song and rip it from there? Well my computer says it's 192kbps which is the max, unless it's wrong, so I don't think I'll need to change this
[Smile]:
- Why not use the biggest circles for this diff? Most easy diffs use that. Doesn't look that bad though. I personally don't like the biggest circles, because they are TOO big IMO and look very cluttered >_<
[Dream]:
- -
Couldn't really find any wrong stuff apart from the video file. I strongly suggest to do the change on the Dream diff, because that long slider doesn't fit the difficulty profile.
- 01:02:544 (1) - End this slider at 01:03:144 and add 3 circles on the red, blue and white tick. After that add a circle on the red tick as well, so the combo doesn't look empty. Also, add clap at the end of the slider. It could look something like this, 2-3-4-5 is a mirror of 6-7-8-1. Used most of this suggestion but I put (5) on the blue tick
- 01:04:944 (9) - New combo. I put the new combo at (5) as suggested above
Hope this helped and good luck. :3
Sorry for uber late reply, but TBH I don't really remember where I got the video, I might have just cut the file after I watched it? XD Audio sounds fine to me, so ... whatever lol XDlolcubes wrote:
If you get me the source, I can make the video file for you.
As for mp3, while it's 192kbps it's a really bad rip. Just saying, it's not like it's the end of the world. :p
XD Thanks!LuPiiTa wrote:
:D
Thank you very much!HakuNoKaemi wrote:
Kudosu Star
Thank youKite wrote:
Sorry for the delay
[Timing]
+9 on offset Like I said, I am not sure about timing but I think this is OK so I will keep it
[Cry]
01:21:144 (1) - Is this supposed to have slidingwhistle? It sounds a bit rough Yes it was intentional, but I removed it
[Dream]
01:03:894 (5) - 1/4 later and space away a bit? Nah I tried that, I think it sounds better here
01:07:344 (1) - This sounds better for me if placed 1/4 earlier and extended by 1/4 Well yea the vocals are a bit odd, but I think it sounds all right here
01:13:344 (3,4,5) - This sounds better for if placed 1/4 earlier on start of vocal; add beat 01:13:644 ? Meh, no thanks
01:14:694 - Add beat? OK
01:15:294 - ^
01:15:594 - ^
[Overall]
Mapset is good and diffspread too, song is also nice.
Good job