Timing
1st section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 2,919

2nd section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 65,831

timing seems fine to me with that,
still might not be perfect but it is better, still get a pro timer to recheck

fix your maps up with the timing then call me back to mod

bah you need to reply to mods dude xD

anyway new post so the mapper knows ive modded

kk timing fixed but on rechecking it, ive found another glitch in the song >_> add 2 more sections at

BPM: 185
OFFSET: 101,480

BPM: 185
OFFSET: 102,157

get a pro timer to recheck it though

Easy
00:08:108 (5) - new combo here since this is abit long for a easy combo
01:23:830 (1,2) - widen the spacing of these, this anti jump aint really good
01:41:020 (3) - having this totally silent aint really a good idea, maybe a whistle sound would go better

Normal
01:26:912 (1,2) - the repeat slider feels to go on too long, how about this timing



Hard
00:11:675 (4,5) - you need to move (5) abit more away from (4) to make this spacing consistent
01:03:891 (1,1,1) - make these all one combo
01:41:020 (4,5) - this really does not suit your current map style and also sounds out of time, remap this part with maybe this timing starting at 01:41:020


Reiji-RJ's Line
00:22:054 - add a note here and it makes the flow much better

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best of luck to ya o/

Thank you :3 Done.

Hello, sorry for taking such time to mod it ^^"

[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :>

[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.

[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly

[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly

Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hello, sorry for taking such time to mod it ^^"

[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :> - But I have 157kbps I did a Full.

[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.

[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly

[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly

Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~

All done :3

Yo ;D

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Easy]
00:53:189 (3) - 2 Grids left and 2 Grids down (looks better imo)
01:47:832 (2) - put this exactly under (1) with grid and distance snap off :3

[Normal]
00:23:675 (3) - Remove this and add spinner? :3
01:03:567 (3) - move under (2)
01:30:317 (4) - move exactly under (3)
01:45:238 (2) - move exactly under (1)

[Hard]
01:24:803 (1) - Remove this
01:47:670 (8) - move it like this ( http://puu.sh/IFv ) it's confusing otherwise :/

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
n1 :3


Nice map
Here's your star ;D

Thank you, done :3

Keksi's Mod:

Green:Request
Blue:Would be nice if you change
Red:Change it!

[Easy]
00:20:746- Kinda weird this (1)

[Normal]
Nothing

[Hard]
00:04:135- Change (6) and (7) to this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49155
00:06:973- ^

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
Nothing

star~

thank you, done :3

Hello~

General
- Hit sound is too small..

Easy
00:23:351 (4) - Eliminate Finish
01:26:263 (2) - ^

Normal
00:09:081 (3) - Whistle at the end
00:09:729 (4) - Whistle

Hard
00:12:973 (6) - Add Finish..
01:35:506 (7) - New combo

Line
Good!

Good map~

All done, thank you :3

[Easy]

00:23:027 (3,4) - спейсинг , лучше поставить 4 комбо под 3

01:44:751 (2) - убрать нк

[Normal]

00:02:918 (1) - финиш

00:05:513 (1) - ^

00:08:108 (1) - ^

00:10:702 (1) - ^

00:13:297 (1) - ^

00:23:675 (3) - с этого места лучше начать спинер

[Hard]

также финиши в начале ~

00:12:000 (5,6) - спейсинг

00:47:351 (2,3) - ^

01:24:966 (3) - новое комбо

01:43:940 (1) - помоему слишком короткий... лучше уж слайдер х2 >_>

[Reiji-RJ's Line]

я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~

00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер

01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера

Мне нравится S T A R ~

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Reiji-RJ's Line]

я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~

00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер

01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера

Спиннеры менять не стала, ибо мне нравится сильный бит на тех местах.
А вот спейсинг, действительно, лучше. Спасибо большое

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

все сделано, спасибо :3

Fixed some things

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Oh, how I hate japanese people trying to to sing in english....

By Mod Request:

General
Make sure all of the preview point times are the same in all of the difficulties.

[Normal]
00:36:973 (2,3,4) - 1 grid to the right
00:57:081 (4) - move the timing section behind this note

[Hard]
00:12:973 (6) - spacing
00:49:621 (2) - a catmull slider? Wasn't the option removed? Or this is just old...

Star and good luck....

Thank you, done :3

Ммм.. После пяти страниц особо ничего и не собирался найти.
Там в Reiji-RJ's Line и в Харде или Нромале по мелочи наци мод, но я думаю, что не стоит этого тут упоминать.
Просто оставлю звёздочку.

General
Your hard's picture is ugly.Because the right girl may be like a man.The gilr you can paint as a ghost but a man in Touhou .I am a Touhou fans,So I sugguest that you should change this picture.

Easy
01:47:832 (2)move to 01:47:913 It's very hard fou easy player,if you make the circle on that time.

Two small subjective problems.I can't find some objective problems.Sorry.

Thank you!

-Seems a very strange place to have an offset at 101,480 and doesn't fit with the song. Are you sure it is meant to be there
-On every difficulty except taiko offset is 65931, on taiko it is 65803, look into that more
-Your video quality seems pretty low at the moment, try and find a HQ one?

Easy:
-AR seems kind of harsh for the easiest difficulty, at least -1?
-Use tick rate 1 like the other difficulties?
00:10:702 (3,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
01:18:155 (3,2) - avoid overlaps if possible
01:47:913 (2) - move to red tick (but I would recommend you delete this and extend the slider to 01:47:832 to make it easier for beginners to read

Normal:
00:02:918 (1,2,3,4) - add some whistles
00:05:513 (1,3) - avoid overlap
01:12:479 (4,1,2) - ^
01:26:912 (1) - could prob be mapped more creatively

Hard:
00:38:918 (1,2) - separate slightly more if possible
00:56:918 (3,1) - ^
01:10:209 (7,1) - space out
01:43:940 (1) - increase volume on this? Seems too low atm

Taiko:
No major errors, looks good

Reji-RJ's Line:
-Could use more more hitsounds at places if you want to go through it
-Pretty mean hp drain, try -1?
00:39:243 (1) - slow down doesn't really fit
Kind of spinner overuse at the end there...

Could look cleaner but pretty solid maps overall
Deserves a star~

Thank you for mod!

Thank you, James2250 :3


Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Star :3

Я искал! Искал эту песню!
Звезда, естественно. А ещё я хочу сделать гост диффу. >w<

Спасибо :3 Если хочешь - делай

Если нет особых предпочтений в сложности, не против сделать Экстру или Фантазм?

Сноси белый цвет.
Прочитал весь топик, как я вижу с таймингом беда, вон тебе джеричо скинул 4 тайминг секшна, а тут только 2, . Я конечно не думаю что он прав, лучше спросить реальных профессионалов. Зекира, Думсдей, Либидос или Хеппи30, они мастера в этом деле. Доступность по возрастанию: Либидос, Думсдей, Хеппи30, Зекира. Карднфорс не так уж и про, как и джеричо.
Опция в таико должна выглядить вот так: http://puu.sh/17P6

[Taiko]

01:05:831 - сноси нафиг эту зелёную линию, киа мод и так на красной начинается

01:08:425 (1) - add finish
00:05:513 (1) - ^
00:08:108 (1) - ^
00:10:378 (4) - ^
00:12:000 (3) - ^
00:13:297 (2) - ^
00:12:973 (1) - ^
00:18:162 (3) - remove finish
00:18:486 (4) - add finish
00:23:675 (2) - ^
00:26:270 (1) - ^
00:28:540 (4) - ^
00:31:135 (1) - ^
00:44:432 (1) - ^
00:57:405 (1) - ^
00:57:891 (3) - ^
00:58:378 (1) - ^
01:04:378 (3) - ^
01:05:831 (1) - ^
Also some critical mistakes: http://puu.sh/17PX

[Easy]

00:20:756 (1) - сноси эти два финиша с этого слайдера
00:53:189 (3) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - здесь в конце убери
00:56:108 (2) - оба фишина к чёрту
01:00:000 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:425 (1) - сюда добавь финиш
01:16:209 (1) - ^ клап к чёрту
01:23:830 (1) - финиш
01:26:587 (3) - убери финиши
01:50:182 - эта зелёная линия вообще никакой роли не играет
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PS


У меня складывается впечатление будто ты не знаешь зачем или куда ставить финиш хитсаунд. Не соизволь за оскорбления, но я всё же объясню, небольшой туториал на будущее
00:44:432 (1) - К примеру убери ноту сосредоточься и послушаю музыку на заднем фоне, разве не слышно как звинит громкая нота,
Будто по золотому диску треснули (http://www.automation-drive.com/EX/05-15-06/kit_v01.jpg). Таких моментов море в этой песне
00:54:810 (1) - вот ещё один к примеру. Вот по такой логике и ставишь финиш, а не просто так, как кажется. Поэтому на других диффах писать не буду, сам попробуй.

[Normal]
Не зря оно фиксируется как хард. Довольно таки высокая скорость слайдеров да и апроач рейт тоже ничего так.
Всё таки переменую в хард и сделай нормал, мой совет для нормала: AR3-4, HP drain 3-4, Circle Size 1-2, OD 4, slider velocity 0.90~1.00, Distance Spacing 1.1x. И не так много нот.
01:24:966 (1) - убери новое комбо
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PV

[Hard]
00:23:675 (1) - эта часть хочет загнутости, почитай на досуге viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 , хорошая статья
00:53:351 (6) - ^
01:03:891 (1,2,3) - может добавить прыжки? Тока в меру.
01:15:560 (1) - новое комбо тут не нужно
01:23:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - за такие путаницы ругать будут, по спейсингу лучше сделать
01:44:101 (1) - начало слайдера вот здесь, да и зачем тут ускорялка.
01:48:155 (1) - удали финиш
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PP

[Reiji-RJ'd Line]
00:18:486 (1) - финиш
00:23:837 (1) - убери финиш
01:00:000 (1) - сюда финиш на начало
01:42:157 (1) - удали финиш
01:31:776 (2,3) - если это инсейн, а это инсейн. Почему бы не воспользоваться случаем и не вставить стрим?

Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PZ

У тебя на данный момент: E, H, I, I, (I). Ещё один инсейн будет лишним, не помешало бы нормального нормала.

Done
Спасибо :3

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Спасибо огромное, все вроде исправил. Мне ужасно надоела эта песня

[Easy]
01:23:830 (1) - make a slider (x:192 y:200) instead of a circle, an arrow at 01:24:236,.
01:25:128 (2) - ^(x:280 y:240),an arrow at 01:25:533.
01:26:263 (1) - delete

[Normal]
00:20:756 (1) - make 2 circles instead of slider.
01:12:479 (4) - some parts cover the next slider.
00:34:864 (4) - add a note.
00:37:459 (4) - ^

[Insane]
01:28:858 (1) - add an arrow.
01:30:641 (7) - add 2 arrows.
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Fine .
Star~☆

some fixed
thanks :3

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Thank you, done :3

Mod Queues:

Hey (:

Easy:
00:13:297 (1) - I would make the Sliders so: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62588 But it is up to you ^^
00:15:891 (1) - ^
00:18:486 (1) - ^
00:34:054 (1,2,3) - End the sliders 1/1, much better.
00:42:162 (2) - ^
00:42:973 (3) - begin the slider on 00:43:135 and end this 00:43:783
00:43:783 (4) - move to 00:44:108
01:06:966 (3) - begin 01:06:803; end 01:07:776
So I think the sound is better if you begin all Sliders 1/1 and end 1/1 , but it is up to you

Normal:
I thik its okay =)

Hard
01:13:290 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
I don't have more to say
A really nice map :3 you have a Star

Thank you for mod, fixed

Hi there!
Wow, there's a lot of mods before me, and I'm not sure what I find might help you at this point, but here goes:

I like some of the maps' notes placing, and I also like the song, despite being Engrish...
Also, I don't want Yukari to come get me for not doing so , so here's a star for you~
All the best with your maps!

Thank you, fixed some thing

god song

Oh god, the taiko diff's notes are after resnapping on the wrong place...... I replaced it by my own now.

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu

OnosakiHito, thank you :3