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General
1) You should remove the 2nd red line
2) Remove "reimu" in tags, since this theme song is not Reimu's Theme

Easy
Some timing pattern may confuse for beginner player~

00:26:276 (1) - This spinner is little bit short
01:13:265 (1) - This slider are too short
01:23:644 (1) - ^
01:24:942 (2) - ^

Normal
Approach Rate +2?

00:58:870 (4) - Move 4 grid left?
01:03:897 (1) - I hate if this object is overlapped by previous slider
01:16:510 (2) - Unsnapped, please snap it
01:17:321 (4) - ^
01:18:780 (1) - ^
01:19:591 (4) - ^
01:21:375 (1) - ^
01:22:510 (4) - ^
01:23:645 (1) - ^

Hard
00:32:924 (6) - Move 2 grid down?
00:33:249 (7) - Move 1 grid right?
00:51:249 (5) - Move 2 grid down?
01:23:643 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - These hitsound makes my ears broken
01:39:049 (4,5) - Reverse them? (Ctrl+R)
01:46:833 (4,5) - ^

Reiji-RJ's Line
All spinner should turn on the new combo, because to prevent any spinner bug
01:03:897 (4) - Perhaps new combo here, to let everyone know there is jump pattern here?

Good job, star

Leorda wrote:

Reiji-RJ's Line
All spinner should turn on the new combo, because to prevent any spinner bug
01:03:897 (4) - Perhaps new combo here, to let everyone know there is jump pattern here?

Fixed~ Thankee :3

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Sorry for the delay

General
Some of your inherited timing sections (green) are not snapped, please snap them

Easy
01:18:778 - Can you do something else with this pattern? It's just the same thing repeated over and over ... add some variation!
New ending is WAY BETTER ;D Not much else I can say

Normal
00:02:925 - How about making each new combo a new timing section (green) and increasing the volume each time? :O
00:19:952 (1) - Move this up one grid?
01:46:384 - Can you move this combo somewhere to the bottom? It's covered up by the score burst on the previous combo and it just doesn't look very nice
Yea ... not much wrong here o_O

Hard
00:02:925 - Same volume thing as Normal? :O
00:54:816 - Increase volume for this section? I can barely hear the hitsounds >_<
Well I can't really say much since I can't actually pass this (sorry) but watching autoplay it looks like a couple of objects are covered by the score bursts of previous things. It's possible that I'm just too noob to watch for things like that (probably haha) so maybe just watch out for them

Reiji is too pro for me XD

Sorry, I have a feeling I'd mod better if I was more pro haha XD
Anyways the easier diffs feel way better to me, so good job

+1 star for you XD

Request Accepted
nothing major to point out
good
STAR!

Done :3 Thank you!

[General]:

1. timing is off and the bpm for the ending part is not correct, turn to someone good at this for help

[Reiji-RJ]:

1. 00:52:222 (1,2,3,4) - holy, sudden jump? even with a newcombo, it is not a good pattern imo
2. 01:41:033 (1,2,3,4) - clearly off, not a steady bpm here btw. you need a better timing

[Hard]:

1. oh, most notes are based on lyrics. not very fit the song though, this diff is fine

[Normal]:

1. 00:58:870 (4,1) - confusing space
2. too many notes like 01:08:924 (2,3,4) exist here, and quite out of music, watch out for the heavy beat (mostly they are on the while lines not the red ones)

[Easy]:

1. same issue with Normal

I cannot star a map without a proper timing, sorry

Colin Hou wrote:

[Reiji-RJ]:

1. 00:52:222 (1,2,3,4) - holy, sudden jump? even with a newcombo, it is not a good pattern imo
2. 01:41:033 (1,2,3,4) - clearly off, not a steady bpm here btw. you need a better timing

Done

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Sorry late mod @@

Overall:
Some diff's difficulty setup is messed up lol
Timing is subtly off. You'll need pro timing. The drumming is all manual not electronic so you can't count on them to time.

[Easy]
Although all objects are distance-snapped perfectly and have good rhythm, the entire beatmap is not intuitive to "read", if you know I mean. A newbie player with no previous knowledge of this song will find it hard to expect the right beats.

One way to solve this problem is to use a larger spacing. The current x0.7 may be too small.
Another way is to increase Approach Rate. So set AR to at least 4 to aid readability.
And also, try using more sliders during kiai section.

[Normal]
Hitsound volume is especially low in this diff.

[Hard]
Quite a few spacing infringements here and there (as far as I can see there's no jump in this diff), I won't list them out but try to fix them yourself if possible.
I recommend increasing circle size +1.

00:28:057 (8) - silence end of this slider?

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:30:158 (6) - down 1 grid?

[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Can't mod taiko...

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Find someone to thoroughly time this song, then all will be good.
Star!

Timing
1st section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 2,919

2nd section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 65,831

timing seems fine to me with that,
still might not be perfect but it is better, still get a pro timer to recheck

fix your maps up with the timing then call me back to mod

bah you need to reply to mods dude xD

anyway new post so the mapper knows ive modded

kk timing fixed but on rechecking it, ive found another glitch in the song >_> add 2 more sections at

BPM: 185
OFFSET: 101,480

BPM: 185
OFFSET: 102,157

get a pro timer to recheck it though

Easy
00:08:108 (5) - new combo here since this is abit long for a easy combo
01:23:830 (1,2) - widen the spacing of these, this anti jump aint really good
01:41:020 (3) - having this totally silent aint really a good idea, maybe a whistle sound would go better

Normal
01:26:912 (1,2) - the repeat slider feels to go on too long, how about this timing



Hard
00:11:675 (4,5) - you need to move (5) abit more away from (4) to make this spacing consistent
01:03:891 (1,1,1) - make these all one combo
01:41:020 (4,5) - this really does not suit your current map style and also sounds out of time, remap this part with maybe this timing starting at 01:41:020


Reiji-RJ's Line
00:22:054 - add a note here and it makes the flow much better

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best of luck to ya o/

Thank you :3 Done.

Hello, sorry for taking such time to mod it ^^"

[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :>

[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.

[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly

[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly

Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hello, sorry for taking such time to mod it ^^"

[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :> - But I have 157kbps I did a Full.

[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.

[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly

[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly

Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~

All done :3

Yo ;D

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Easy]
00:53:189 (3) - 2 Grids left and 2 Grids down (looks better imo)
01:47:832 (2) - put this exactly under (1) with grid and distance snap off :3

[Normal]
00:23:675 (3) - Remove this and add spinner? :3
01:03:567 (3) - move under (2)
01:30:317 (4) - move exactly under (3)
01:45:238 (2) - move exactly under (1)

[Hard]
01:24:803 (1) - Remove this
01:47:670 (8) - move it like this ( http://puu.sh/IFv ) it's confusing otherwise :/

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
n1 :3


Nice map
Here's your star ;D

Thank you, done :3

Keksi's Mod:

Green:Request
Blue:Would be nice if you change
Red:Change it!

[Easy]
00:20:746- Kinda weird this (1)

[Normal]
Nothing

[Hard]
00:04:135- Change (6) and (7) to this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49155
00:06:973- ^

[Reiji-RJ's Line]
Nothing

star~

thank you, done :3

Hello~

General
- Hit sound is too small..

Easy
00:23:351 (4) - Eliminate Finish
01:26:263 (2) - ^

Normal
00:09:081 (3) - Whistle at the end
00:09:729 (4) - Whistle

Hard
00:12:973 (6) - Add Finish..
01:35:506 (7) - New combo

Line
Good!

Good map~

All done, thank you :3

[Easy]

00:23:027 (3,4) - спейсинг , лучше поставить 4 комбо под 3

01:44:751 (2) - убрать нк

[Normal]

00:02:918 (1) - финиш

00:05:513 (1) - ^

00:08:108 (1) - ^

00:10:702 (1) - ^

00:13:297 (1) - ^

00:23:675 (3) - с этого места лучше начать спинер

[Hard]

также финиши в начале ~

00:12:000 (5,6) - спейсинг

00:47:351 (2,3) - ^

01:24:966 (3) - новое комбо

01:43:940 (1) - помоему слишком короткий... лучше уж слайдер х2 >_>

[Reiji-RJ's Line]

я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~

00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер

01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера

Мне нравится S T A R ~

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Reiji-RJ's Line]

я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~

00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер

01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера

Спиннеры менять не стала, ибо мне нравится сильный бит на тех местах.
А вот спейсинг, действительно, лучше. Спасибо большое

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

все сделано, спасибо :3

Fixed some things

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Oh, how I hate japanese people trying to to sing in english....

By Mod Request:

General
Make sure all of the preview point times are the same in all of the difficulties.

[Normal]
00:36:973 (2,3,4) - 1 grid to the right
00:57:081 (4) - move the timing section behind this note

[Hard]
00:12:973 (6) - spacing
00:49:621 (2) - a catmull slider? Wasn't the option removed? Or this is just old...

Star and good luck....

Thank you, done :3

Ммм.. После пяти страниц особо ничего и не собирался найти.
Там в Reiji-RJ's Line и в Харде или Нромале по мелочи наци мод, но я думаю, что не стоит этого тут упоминать.
Просто оставлю звёздочку.

General
Your hard's picture is ugly.Because the right girl may be like a man.The gilr you can paint as a ghost but a man in Touhou .I am a Touhou fans,So I sugguest that you should change this picture.

Easy
01:47:832 (2)move to 01:47:913 It's very hard fou easy player,if you make the circle on that time.

Two small subjective problems.I can't find some objective problems.Sorry.

Thank you!

-Seems a very strange place to have an offset at 101,480 and doesn't fit with the song. Are you sure it is meant to be there
-On every difficulty except taiko offset is 65931, on taiko it is 65803, look into that more
-Your video quality seems pretty low at the moment, try and find a HQ one?

Easy:
-AR seems kind of harsh for the easiest difficulty, at least -1?
-Use tick rate 1 like the other difficulties?
00:10:702 (3,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
01:18:155 (3,2) - avoid overlaps if possible
01:47:913 (2) - move to red tick (but I would recommend you delete this and extend the slider to 01:47:832 to make it easier for beginners to read

Normal:
00:02:918 (1,2,3,4) - add some whistles
00:05:513 (1,3) - avoid overlap
01:12:479 (4,1,2) - ^
01:26:912 (1) - could prob be mapped more creatively

Hard:
00:38:918 (1,2) - separate slightly more if possible
00:56:918 (3,1) - ^
01:10:209 (7,1) - space out
01:43:940 (1) - increase volume on this? Seems too low atm

Taiko:
No major errors, looks good

Reji-RJ's Line:
-Could use more more hitsounds at places if you want to go through it
-Pretty mean hp drain, try -1?
00:39:243 (1) - slow down doesn't really fit
Kind of spinner overuse at the end there...

Could look cleaner but pretty solid maps overall
Deserves a star~

Thank you for mod!

Thank you, James2250 :3


Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Star :3

Я искал! Искал эту песню!
Звезда, естественно. А ещё я хочу сделать гост диффу. >w<

Спасибо :3 Если хочешь - делай

Если нет особых предпочтений в сложности, не против сделать Экстру или Фантазм?

Сноси белый цвет.
Прочитал весь топик, как я вижу с таймингом беда, вон тебе джеричо скинул 4 тайминг секшна, а тут только 2, . Я конечно не думаю что он прав, лучше спросить реальных профессионалов. Зекира, Думсдей, Либидос или Хеппи30, они мастера в этом деле. Доступность по возрастанию: Либидос, Думсдей, Хеппи30, Зекира. Карднфорс не так уж и про, как и джеричо.
Опция в таико должна выглядить вот так: http://puu.sh/17P6

[Taiko]

01:05:831 - сноси нафиг эту зелёную линию, киа мод и так на красной начинается

01:08:425 (1) - add finish
00:05:513 (1) - ^
00:08:108 (1) - ^
00:10:378 (4) - ^
00:12:000 (3) - ^
00:13:297 (2) - ^
00:12:973 (1) - ^
00:18:162 (3) - remove finish
00:18:486 (4) - add finish
00:23:675 (2) - ^
00:26:270 (1) - ^
00:28:540 (4) - ^
00:31:135 (1) - ^
00:44:432 (1) - ^
00:57:405 (1) - ^
00:57:891 (3) - ^
00:58:378 (1) - ^
01:04:378 (3) - ^
01:05:831 (1) - ^
Also some critical mistakes: http://puu.sh/17PX

[Easy]

00:20:756 (1) - сноси эти два финиша с этого слайдера
00:53:189 (3) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - здесь в конце убери
00:56:108 (2) - оба фишина к чёрту
01:00:000 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:425 (1) - сюда добавь финиш
01:16:209 (1) - ^ клап к чёрту
01:23:830 (1) - финиш
01:26:587 (3) - убери финиши
01:50:182 - эта зелёная линия вообще никакой роли не играет
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PS


У меня складывается впечатление будто ты не знаешь зачем или куда ставить финиш хитсаунд. Не соизволь за оскорбления, но я всё же объясню, небольшой туториал на будущее
00:44:432 (1) - К примеру убери ноту сосредоточься и послушаю музыку на заднем фоне, разве не слышно как звинит громкая нота,
Будто по золотому диску треснули (http://www.automation-drive.com/EX/05-15-06/kit_v01.jpg). Таких моментов море в этой песне
00:54:810 (1) - вот ещё один к примеру. Вот по такой логике и ставишь финиш, а не просто так, как кажется. Поэтому на других диффах писать не буду, сам попробуй.

[Normal]
Не зря оно фиксируется как хард. Довольно таки высокая скорость слайдеров да и апроач рейт тоже ничего так.
Всё таки переменую в хард и сделай нормал, мой совет для нормала: AR3-4, HP drain 3-4, Circle Size 1-2, OD 4, slider velocity 0.90~1.00, Distance Spacing 1.1x. И не так много нот.
01:24:966 (1) - убери новое комбо
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PV

[Hard]
00:23:675 (1) - эта часть хочет загнутости, почитай на досуге viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 , хорошая статья
00:53:351 (6) - ^
01:03:891 (1,2,3) - может добавить прыжки? Тока в меру.
01:15:560 (1) - новое комбо тут не нужно
01:23:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - за такие путаницы ругать будут, по спейсингу лучше сделать
01:44:101 (1) - начало слайдера вот здесь, да и зачем тут ускорялка.
01:48:155 (1) - удали финиш
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PP

[Reiji-RJ'd Line]
00:18:486 (1) - финиш
00:23:837 (1) - убери финиш
01:00:000 (1) - сюда финиш на начало
01:42:157 (1) - удали финиш
01:31:776 (2,3) - если это инсейн, а это инсейн. Почему бы не воспользоваться случаем и не вставить стрим?

Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PZ

У тебя на данный момент: E, H, I, I, (I). Ещё один инсейн будет лишним, не помешало бы нормального нормала.

Done
Спасибо :3

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu

Спасибо огромное, все вроде исправил. Мне ужасно надоела эта песня

[Easy]
01:23:830 (1) - make a slider (x:192 y:200) instead of a circle, an arrow at 01:24:236,.
01:25:128 (2) - ^(x:280 y:240),an arrow at 01:25:533.
01:26:263 (1) - delete

[Normal]
00:20:756 (1) - make 2 circles instead of slider.
01:12:479 (4) - some parts cover the next slider.
00:34:864 (4) - add a note.
00:37:459 (4) - ^

[Insane]
01:28:858 (1) - add an arrow.
01:30:641 (7) - add 2 arrows.
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Fine .
Star~☆

some fixed
thanks :3

Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu