Done! Спасибо :3IceBeam wrote:
[Reiji-RJ]
00:47:843 (6) - Подальше бы их,слизком близко.
00:52:303 (2) - Убери,совсем тут не звучит триплет.
Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu
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Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu
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General
1) You should remove the 2nd red line
2) Remove "reimu" in tags, since this theme song is not Reimu's Theme
Easy
Some timing pattern may confuse for beginner player~
00:26:276 (1) - This spinner is little bit short
01:13:265 (1) - This slider are too short
01:23:644 (1) - ^
01:24:942 (2) - ^
Normal
Approach Rate +2?
00:58:870 (4) - Move 4 grid left?
01:03:897 (1) - I hate if this object is overlapped by previous slider
01:16:510 (2) - Unsnapped, please snap it
01:17:321 (4) - ^
01:18:780 (1) - ^
01:19:591 (4) - ^
01:21:375 (1) - ^
01:22:510 (4) - ^
01:23:645 (1) - ^
Hard
00:32:924 (6) - Move 2 grid down?
00:33:249 (7) - Move 1 grid right?
00:51:249 (5) - Move 2 grid down?
01:23:643 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - These hitsound makes my ears broken
01:39:049 (4,5) - Reverse them? (Ctrl+R)
01:46:833 (4,5) - ^
Reiji-RJ's Line
All spinner should turn on the new combo, because to prevent any spinner bug
01:03:897 (4) - Perhaps new combo here, to let everyone know there is jump pattern here?
Good job, star
General
1) You should remove the 2nd red line
2) Remove "reimu" in tags, since this theme song is not Reimu's Theme
Easy
Some timing pattern may confuse for beginner player~
00:26:276 (1) - This spinner is little bit short
01:13:265 (1) - This slider are too short
01:23:644 (1) - ^
01:24:942 (2) - ^
Normal
Approach Rate +2?
00:58:870 (4) - Move 4 grid left?
01:03:897 (1) - I hate if this object is overlapped by previous slider
01:16:510 (2) - Unsnapped, please snap it
01:17:321 (4) - ^
01:18:780 (1) - ^
01:19:591 (4) - ^
01:21:375 (1) - ^
01:22:510 (4) - ^
01:23:645 (1) - ^
Hard
00:32:924 (6) - Move 2 grid down?
00:33:249 (7) - Move 1 grid right?
00:51:249 (5) - Move 2 grid down?
01:23:643 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - These hitsound makes my ears broken
01:39:049 (4,5) - Reverse them? (Ctrl+R)
01:46:833 (4,5) - ^
Reiji-RJ's Line
All spinner should turn on the new combo, because to prevent any spinner bug
01:03:897 (4) - Perhaps new combo here, to let everyone know there is jump pattern here?
Good job, star
Fixed~ Thankee :3Leorda wrote:
Reiji-RJ's Line
All spinner should turn on the new combo, because to prevent any spinner bug
01:03:897 (4) - Perhaps new combo here, to let everyone know there is jump pattern here?
Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu
Sorry for the delay 
General
Some of your inherited timing sections (green) are not snapped, please snap them
Easy
01:18:778 - Can you do something else with this pattern? It's just the same thing repeated over and over ... add some variation!
New ending is WAY BETTER ;D Not much else I can say
Normal
00:02:925 - How about making each new combo a new timing section (green) and increasing the volume each time? :O
00:19:952 (1) - Move this up one grid?
01:46:384 - Can you move this combo somewhere to the bottom? It's covered up by the score burst on the previous combo and it just doesn't look very nice
Yea ... not much wrong here o_O
Hard
00:02:925 - Same volume thing as Normal? :O
00:54:816 - Increase volume for this section? I can barely hear the hitsounds >_<
Well I can't really say much since I can't actually pass this (sorry) but watching autoplay it looks like a couple of objects are covered by the score bursts of previous things. It's possible that I'm just too noob to watch for things like that (probably haha) so maybe just watch out for them
Reiji is too pro for me XD
Sorry, I have a feeling I'd mod better if I was more pro haha XD
Anyways the easier diffs feel way better to me, so good job
+1 star for you XD
General
Some of your inherited timing sections (green) are not snapped, please snap them
Easy
01:18:778 - Can you do something else with this pattern? It's just the same thing repeated over and over ... add some variation!
New ending is WAY BETTER ;D Not much else I can say
Normal
00:02:925 - How about making each new combo a new timing section (green) and increasing the volume each time? :O
00:19:952 (1) - Move this up one grid?
01:46:384 - Can you move this combo somewhere to the bottom? It's covered up by the score burst on the previous combo and it just doesn't look very nice
Yea ... not much wrong here o_O
Hard
00:02:925 - Same volume thing as Normal? :O
00:54:816 - Increase volume for this section? I can barely hear the hitsounds >_<
Well I can't really say much since I can't actually pass this (sorry) but watching autoplay it looks like a couple of objects are covered by the score bursts of previous things. It's possible that I'm just too noob to watch for things like that (probably haha) so maybe just watch out for them
Reiji is too pro for me XD
Sorry, I have a feeling I'd mod better if I was more pro haha XD
Anyways the easier diffs feel way better to me, so good job
+1 star for you XD
Request Accepted
nothing major to point out
STAR!
nothing major to point out
General
delete .osb file and full submit
the timing seems a little off at the end? i dunno
Hard
01:39:860 (2) - 1 grid right
General
01:47:843 (4) - 1 grid right
gooddelete .osb file and full submit
the timing seems a little off at the end? i dunno
Hard
01:39:860 (2) - 1 grid right
General
01:47:843 (4) - 1 grid right
STAR!
Topic Starter
SPOILER
EvianBubble wrote:
Sorry for the delay
General
Some of your inherited timing sections (green) are not snapped, please snap them
Easy
01:18:778 - Can you do something else with this pattern? It's just the same thing repeated over and over ... add some variation!
New ending is WAY BETTER ;D Not much else I can say
Normal
00:02:925 - How about making each new combo a new timing section (green) and increasing the volume each time? :O
00:19:952 (1) - Move this up one grid?
01:46:384 - Can you move this combo somewhere to the bottom? It's covered up by the score burst on the previous combo and it just doesn't look very nice
Yea ... not much wrong here o_O
Hard
00:02:925 - Same volume thing as Normal? :O
00:54:816 - Increase volume for this section? I can barely hear the hitsounds >_<
Well I can't really say much since I can't actually pass this (sorry) but watching autoplay it looks like a couple of objects are covered by the score bursts of previous things. It's possible that I'm just too noob to watch for things like that (probably haha) so maybe just watch out for them
Reiji is too pro for me XD
Sorry, I have a feeling I'd mod better if I was more pro haha XD
Anyways the easier diffs feel way better to me, so good job
+1 star for you XD
Arusha Shuna wrote:
Request Accepted
nothing major to point outGeneralgood
delete .osb file and full submit
the timing seems a little off at the end? i dunno
Hard
01:39:860 (2) - 1 grid right
General
01:47:843 (4) - 1 grid right
STAR!
Done :3 Thank you!
[General]:
- timing is off and the bpm for the ending part is not correct, turn to someone good at this for help
- 00:52:222 (1,2,3,4) - holy, sudden jump? even with a newcombo, it is not a good pattern imo
- 01:41:033 (1,2,3,4) - clearly off, not a steady bpm here btw. you need a better timing
- oh, most notes are based on lyrics. not very fit the song though, this diff is fine
- 00:58:870 (4,1) - confusing space
- too many notes like 01:08:924 (2,3,4) exist here, and quite out of music, watch out for the heavy beat (mostly they are on the while lines not the red ones)
- same issue with Normal
DoneColin Hou wrote:
[Reiji-RJ]:
- 00:52:222 (1,2,3,4) - holy, sudden jump? even with a newcombo, it is not a good pattern imo
- 01:41:033 (1,2,3,4) - clearly off, not a steady bpm here btw. you need a better timing
Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu
Sorry late mod @@
Overall:
Some diff's difficulty setup is messed up lol
[Easy]
Although all objects are distance-snapped perfectly and have good rhythm, the entire beatmap is not intuitive to "read", if you know I mean. A newbie player with no previous knowledge of this song will find it hard to expect the right beats.
One way to solve this problem is to use a larger spacing. The current x0.7 may be too small.
Another way is to increase Approach Rate. So set AR to at least 4 to aid readability.
And also, try using more sliders during kiai section.
[Normal]
Hitsound volume is especially low in this diff.
[Hard]
Quite a few spacing infringements here and there (as far as I can see there's no jump in this diff), I won't list them out but try to fix them yourself if possible.
I recommend increasing circle size +1.
00:28:057 (8) - silence end of this slider?
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:30:158 (6) - down 1 grid?
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Can't mod taiko...
=====
Find someone to thoroughly time this song, then all will be good.
Star!
Overall:
Some diff's difficulty setup is messed up lol
SPOILER
Timing is subtly off. You'll need pro timing. The drumming is all manual not electronic so you can't count on them to time.For [Easy], set DR 2 or 3, AR to at least 4, OD to 3.
For [Normal], set DR to 4 or above, AR to 5, OD to 4 or 5.
For [Hard], set DR to 6 or 7.
For [Normal], set DR to 4 or above, AR to 5, OD to 4 or 5.
For [Hard], set DR to 6 or 7.
[Easy]
Although all objects are distance-snapped perfectly and have good rhythm, the entire beatmap is not intuitive to "read", if you know I mean. A newbie player with no previous knowledge of this song will find it hard to expect the right beats.
One way to solve this problem is to use a larger spacing. The current x0.7 may be too small.
Another way is to increase Approach Rate. So set AR to at least 4 to aid readability.
And also, try using more sliders during kiai section.
[Normal]
Hitsound volume is especially low in this diff.
[Hard]
Quite a few spacing infringements here and there (as far as I can see there's no jump in this diff), I won't list them out but try to fix them yourself if possible.
I recommend increasing circle size +1.
00:28:057 (8) - silence end of this slider?
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:30:158 (6) - down 1 grid?
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Can't mod taiko...
=====
Find someone to thoroughly time this song, then all will be good.
Star!
Timing
1st section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 2,919
2nd section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 65,831
timing seems fine to me with that,
still might not be perfect but it is better, still get a pro timer to recheck
fix your maps up with the timing then call me back to mod
1st section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 2,919
2nd section
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 65,831
timing seems fine to me with that,
still might not be perfect but it is better, still get a pro timer to recheck
fix your maps up with the timing then call me back to mod
bah you need to reply to mods dude xD
anyway new post so the mapper knows ive modded
kk timing fixed but on rechecking it, ive found another glitch in the song >_> add 2 more sections at
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 101,480
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 102,157
get a pro timer to recheck it though
Easy
00:08:108 (5) - new combo here since this is abit long for a easy combo
01:23:830 (1,2) - widen the spacing of these, this anti jump aint really good
01:41:020 (3) - having this totally silent aint really a good idea, maybe a whistle sound would go better
Normal
01:26:912 (1,2) - the repeat slider feels to go on too long, how about this timing
Hard
00:11:675 (4,5) - you need to move (5) abit more away from (4) to make this spacing consistent
01:03:891 (1,1,1) - make these all one combo
01:41:020 (4,5) - this really does not suit your current map style and also sounds out of time, remap this part with maybe this timing starting at 01:41:020
Reiji-RJ's Line
00:22:054 - add a note here and it makes the flow much better
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best of luck to ya o/
anyway new post so the mapper knows ive modded
kk timing fixed but on rechecking it, ive found another glitch in the song >_> add 2 more sections at
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 101,480
BPM: 185
OFFSET: 102,157
get a pro timer to recheck it though
Easy
00:08:108 (5) - new combo here since this is abit long for a easy combo
01:23:830 (1,2) - widen the spacing of these, this anti jump aint really good
01:41:020 (3) - having this totally silent aint really a good idea, maybe a whistle sound would go better
Normal
01:26:912 (1,2) - the repeat slider feels to go on too long, how about this timing
Hard
00:11:675 (4,5) - you need to move (5) abit more away from (4) to make this spacing consistent
01:03:891 (1,1,1) - make these all one combo
01:41:020 (4,5) - this really does not suit your current map style and also sounds out of time, remap this part with maybe this timing starting at 01:41:020
Reiji-RJ's Line
00:22:054 - add a note here and it makes the flow much better
--------------
best of luck to ya o/
Hello, sorry for taking such time to mod it ^^"
[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :>
[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.
[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly
[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly
Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~
[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :>
[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.
[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly
[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly
Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~
Topic Starter
All done :3KuraiPettan wrote:
Hello, sorry for taking such time to mod it ^^"
[General]
Mp3 is 320kbps, It must be 192kbps maximum. Reencode it, if you can't, send me a forum PM or catch me in-game and I'll do it for you :> - But I have 157kbpsI did a Full.
[Easy]
This diff is fine, but the spacing is very low D: You should use 1.0x or 0.9x and not 0.7x because all the note are too close to each others and it's very confusing, even more for newbs :/ It's not an obligation, but it will be much better.
[Normal]
Like easy, 0.9x or 1.0 will be better
AR +2 or at least +1 will make it more readable.
01:42:155 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:44:749 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:236 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:45:560 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:371 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:46:695 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:47:344 (4) - Not snapped correctly
01:48:155 (1) - Not snapped correctly
[Hard]
01:01:642 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:157 (3) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:643 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:02:967 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:03:940 (1) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:427 (2) - Not snapped correctly
01:04:913 (3) - Not snapped correctly
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
01:05:189 (4) - New combo :3
01:24:966 (2) - Flip it horizontaly
Yay, nicely done ^__^
Here is your star~
Yo ;D
Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz
[Easy]
00:53:189 (3) - 2 Grids left and 2 Grids down (looks better imo)
01:47:832 (2) - put this exactly under (1) with grid and distance snap off :3
[Normal]
00:23:675 (3) - Remove this and add spinner? :3
01:03:567 (3) - move under (2)
01:30:317 (4) - move exactly under (3)
01:45:238 (2) - move exactly under (1)
[Hard]
01:24:803 (1) - Remove this
01:47:670 (8) - move it like this ( http://puu.sh/IFv ) it's confusing otherwise :/
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
n1 :3
Nice map
Here's your star ;D
Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz
[Easy]
00:53:189 (3) - 2 Grids left and 2 Grids down (looks better imo)
01:47:832 (2) - put this exactly under (1) with grid and distance snap off :3
[Normal]
00:23:675 (3) - Remove this and add spinner? :3
01:03:567 (3) - move under (2)
01:30:317 (4) - move exactly under (3)
01:45:238 (2) - move exactly under (1)
[Hard]
01:24:803 (1) - Remove this
01:47:670 (8) - move it like this ( http://puu.sh/IFv ) it's confusing otherwise :/
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
n1 :3
Nice map
Here's your star ;D
Keksi's Mod:
Green:Request
Blue:Would be nice if you change
Red:Change it!
[Easy]
00:20:746- Kinda weird this (1)
[Normal]
Nothing
[Hard]
00:04:135- Change (6) and (7) to this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49155
00:06:973- ^
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
Nothing
star~
Green:Request
Blue:Would be nice if you change
Red:Change it!
[Easy]
00:20:746- Kinda weird this (1)
[Normal]
Nothing
[Hard]
00:04:135- Change (6) and (7) to this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/49155
00:06:973- ^
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
Nothing
star~
Hello~
General
- Hit sound is too small..
Easy
00:23:351 (4) - Eliminate Finish
01:26:263 (2) - ^
Normal
00:09:081 (3) - Whistle at the end
00:09:729 (4) - Whistle
Hard
00:12:973 (6) - Add Finish..
01:35:506 (7) - New combo
Line
Good!
Good map~
General
- Hit sound is too small..
Easy
00:23:351 (4) - Eliminate Finish
01:26:263 (2) - ^
Normal
00:09:081 (3) - Whistle at the end
00:09:729 (4) - Whistle
Hard
00:12:973 (6) - Add Finish..
01:35:506 (7) - New combo
Line
Good!
Good map~
[Easy]
00:23:027 (3,4) - спейсинг , лучше поставить 4 комбо под 3
01:44:751 (2) - убрать нк
[Normal]
00:02:918 (1) - финиш
00:05:513 (1) - ^
00:08:108 (1) - ^
00:10:702 (1) - ^
00:13:297 (1) - ^
00:23:675 (3) - с этого места лучше начать спинер
[Hard]
также финиши в начале ~
00:12:000 (5,6) - спейсинг
00:47:351 (2,3) - ^
01:24:966 (3) - новое комбо
01:43:940 (1) - помоему слишком короткий... лучше уж слайдер х2 >_>
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~
00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер
01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера
Мне нравится S T A R ~
00:23:027 (3,4) - спейсинг , лучше поставить 4 комбо под 3
01:44:751 (2) - убрать нк
[Normal]
00:02:918 (1) - финиш
00:05:513 (1) - ^
00:08:108 (1) - ^
00:10:702 (1) - ^
00:13:297 (1) - ^
00:23:675 (3) - с этого места лучше начать спинер
[Hard]
также финиши в начале ~
00:12:000 (5,6) - спейсинг
00:47:351 (2,3) - ^
01:24:966 (3) - новое комбо
01:43:940 (1) - помоему слишком короткий... лучше уж слайдер х2 >_>
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~
00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер
01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера
Мне нравится S T A R ~
ZLOdeuka wrote:
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
я бы переспейсила на 1,2x ~ гораздо лучше выглядит ~_~
00:23:675 (7) - с этого места начать спинер
01:26:587 (5) - начало спинера
Спиннеры менять не стала, ибо мне нравится сильный бит на тех местах.
А вот спейсинг, действительно, лучше. Спасибо большое
Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Reiji-RJ's Line].osu
Oh, how I hate japanese people trying to to sing in english....
By Mod Request:
General
Make sure all of the preview point times are the same in all of the difficulties.
[Normal]
00:36:973 (2,3,4) - 1 grid to the right
00:57:081 (4) - move the timing section behind this note
[Hard]
00:12:973 (6) - spacing
00:49:621 (2) - a catmull slider? Wasn't the option removed? Or this is just old...
Star and good luck....
By Mod Request:
General
Make sure all of the preview point times are the same in all of the difficulties.
[Normal]
00:36:973 (2,3,4) - 1 grid to the right
00:57:081 (4) - move the timing section behind this note
[Hard]
00:12:973 (6) - spacing
00:49:621 (2) - a catmull slider? Wasn't the option removed? Or this is just old...
Star and good luck....
Ммм.. После пяти страниц особо ничего и не собирался найти.
Там в Reiji-RJ's Line и в Харде или Нромале по мелочи наци мод, но я думаю, что не стоит этого тут упоминать.
Просто оставлю звёздочку.
Там в Reiji-RJ's Line и в Харде или Нромале по мелочи наци мод, но я думаю, что не стоит этого тут упоминать.
Просто оставлю звёздочку.
Topic Starter
Спасибо :3 Ну все же первая карта, мне она не очень нравится. Но надо довести до конца.senaya wrote:
Ммм.. После пяти страниц особо ничего и не собирался найти.
Там в Reiji-RJ's Line и в Харде или Нромале по мелочи наци мод, но я думаю, что не стоит этого тут упоминать.
Просто оставлю звёздочку.
General
Your hard's picture is ugly.Because the right girl may be like a man.The gilr you can paint as a ghost but a man in Touhou .I am a Touhou fans,So I sugguest that you should change this picture.
Easy
01:47:832 (2)move to 01:47:913 It's very hard fou easy player,if you make the circle on that time.
Two small subjective problems.I can't find some objective problems.Sorry.
Your hard's picture is ugly.Because the right girl may be like a man.The gilr you can paint as a ghost but a man in Touhou
.I am a Touhou fans,So I sugguest that you should change this picture.Easy
01:47:832 (2)move to 01:47:913 It's very hard fou easy player,if you make the circle on that time.
Two small subjective problems.I can't find some objective problems.Sorry.
-Seems a very strange place to have an offset at 101,480 and doesn't fit with the song. Are you sure it is meant to be there
-On every difficulty except taiko offset is 65931, on taiko it is 65803, look into that more
-Your video quality seems pretty low at the moment, try and find a HQ one?
Easy:
-AR seems kind of harsh for the easiest difficulty, at least -1?
-Use tick rate 1 like the other difficulties?
00:10:702 (3,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
01:18:155 (3,2) - avoid overlaps if possible
01:47:913 (2) - move to red tick (but I would recommend you delete this and extend the slider to 01:47:832 to make it easier for beginners to read
Normal:
00:02:918 (1,2,3,4) - add some whistles
00:05:513 (1,3) - avoid overlap
01:12:479 (4,1,2) - ^
01:26:912 (1) - could prob be mapped more creatively
Hard:
00:38:918 (1,2) - separate slightly more if possible
00:56:918 (3,1) - ^
01:10:209 (7,1) - space out
01:43:940 (1) - increase volume on this? Seems too low atm
Taiko:
No major errors, looks good
Reji-RJ's Line:
-Could use more more hitsounds at places if you want to go through it
-Pretty mean hp drain, try -1?
00:39:243 (1) - slow down doesn't really fit
Kind of spinner overuse at the end there...
Could look cleaner but pretty solid maps overall
Deserves a star~
-On every difficulty except taiko offset is 65931, on taiko it is 65803, look into that more
-Your video quality seems pretty low at the moment, try and find a HQ one?
Easy:
-AR seems kind of harsh for the easiest difficulty, at least -1?
-Use tick rate 1 like the other difficulties?
00:10:702 (3,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
01:18:155 (3,2) - avoid overlaps if possible
01:47:913 (2) - move to red tick (but I would recommend you delete this and extend the slider to 01:47:832 to make it easier for beginners to read
Normal:
00:02:918 (1,2,3,4) - add some whistles
00:05:513 (1,3) - avoid overlap
01:12:479 (4,1,2) - ^
01:26:912 (1) - could prob be mapped more creatively
Hard:
00:38:918 (1,2) - separate slightly more if possible
00:56:918 (3,1) - ^
01:10:209 (7,1) - space out
01:43:940 (1) - increase volume on this? Seems too low atm
Taiko:
No major errors, looks good
Reji-RJ's Line:
-Could use more more hitsounds at places if you want to go through it
-Pretty mean hp drain, try -1?
00:39:243 (1) - slow down doesn't really fit
Kind of spinner overuse at the end there...
Could look cleaner but pretty solid maps overall
Deserves a star~
Mizu_banned
Topic Starter
Спасибо :3 Если хочешь - делай
Если нет особых предпочтений в сложности, не против сделать Экстру или Фантазм?
Если нет особых предпочтений в сложности, не против сделать Экстру или Фантазм?
Сноси белый цвет.
Прочитал весь топик, как я вижу с таймингом беда, вон тебе джеричо скинул 4 тайминг секшна, а тут только 2, . Я конечно не думаю что он прав, лучше спросить реальных профессионалов. Зекира, Думсдей, Либидос или Хеппи30, они мастера в этом деле. Доступность по возрастанию: Либидос, Думсдей, Хеппи30, Зекира. Карднфорс не так уж и про, как и джеричо.
Опция в таико должна выглядить вот так: http://puu.sh/17P6
[Taiko]
01:05:831 - сноси нафиг эту зелёную линию, киа мод и так на красной начинается
01:08:425 (1) - add finish
00:05:513 (1) - ^
00:08:108 (1) - ^
00:10:378 (4) - ^
00:12:000 (3) - ^
00:13:297 (2) - ^
00:12:973 (1) - ^
00:18:162 (3) - remove finish
00:18:486 (4) - add finish
00:23:675 (2) - ^
00:26:270 (1) - ^
00:28:540 (4) - ^
00:31:135 (1) - ^
00:44:432 (1) - ^
00:57:405 (1) - ^
00:57:891 (3) - ^
00:58:378 (1) - ^
01:04:378 (3) - ^
01:05:831 (1) - ^
Also some critical mistakes: http://puu.sh/17PX
[Easy]
00:20:756 (1) - сноси эти два финиша с этого слайдера
00:53:189 (3) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - здесь в конце убери
00:56:108 (2) - оба фишина к чёрту
01:00:000 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:425 (1) - сюда добавь финиш
01:16:209 (1) - ^ клап к чёрту
01:23:830 (1) - финиш
01:26:587 (3) - убери финиши
01:50:182 - эта зелёная линия вообще никакой роли не играет
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PS
У меня складывается впечатление будто ты не знаешь зачем или куда ставить финиш хитсаунд. Не соизволь за оскорбления, но я всё же объясню, небольшой туториал на будущее
00:44:432 (1) - К примеру убери ноту сосредоточься и послушаю музыку на заднем фоне, разве не слышно как звинит громкая нота,
Будто по золотому диску треснули (http://www.automation-drive.com/EX/05-15-06/kit_v01.jpg). Таких моментов море в этой песне
00:54:810 (1) - вот ещё один к примеру. Вот по такой логике и ставишь финиш, а не просто так, как кажется. Поэтому на других диффах писать не буду, сам попробуй.
[Normal]
Не зря оно фиксируется как хард. Довольно таки высокая скорость слайдеров да и апроач рейт тоже ничего так.
Всё таки переменую в хард и сделай нормал, мой совет для нормала: AR3-4, HP drain 3-4, Circle Size 1-2, OD 4, slider velocity 0.90~1.00, Distance Spacing 1.1x. И не так много нот.
01:24:966 (1) - убери новое комбо
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PV
[Hard]
00:23:675 (1) - эта часть хочет загнутости, почитай на досуге viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 , хорошая статья
00:53:351 (6) - ^
01:03:891 (1,2,3) - может добавить прыжки? Тока в меру.
01:15:560 (1) - новое комбо тут не нужно
01:23:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - за такие путаницы ругать будут, по спейсингу лучше сделать
01:44:101 (1) - начало слайдера вот здесь, да и зачем тут ускорялка.
01:48:155 (1) - удали финиш
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PP
[Reiji-RJ'd Line]
00:18:486 (1) - финиш
00:23:837 (1) - убери финиш
01:00:000 (1) - сюда финиш на начало
01:42:157 (1) - удали финиш
01:31:776 (2,3) - если это инсейн, а это инсейн. Почему бы не воспользоваться случаем и не вставить стрим?
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PZ
У тебя на данный момент: E, H, I, I, (I). Ещё один инсейн будет лишним, не помешало бы нормального нормала.
Прочитал весь топик, как я вижу с таймингом беда, вон тебе джеричо скинул 4 тайминг секшна, а тут только 2, . Я конечно не думаю что он прав, лучше спросить реальных профессионалов. Зекира, Думсдей, Либидос или Хеппи30, они мастера в этом деле. Доступность по возрастанию: Либидос, Думсдей, Хеппи30, Зекира. Карднфорс не так уж и про, как и джеричо.
Опция в таико должна выглядить вот так: http://puu.sh/17P6
[Taiko]
01:05:831 - сноси нафиг эту зелёную линию, киа мод и так на красной начинается
01:08:425 (1) - add finish
00:05:513 (1) - ^
00:08:108 (1) - ^
00:10:378 (4) - ^
00:12:000 (3) - ^
00:13:297 (2) - ^
00:12:973 (1) - ^
00:18:162 (3) - remove finish
00:18:486 (4) - add finish
00:23:675 (2) - ^
00:26:270 (1) - ^
00:28:540 (4) - ^
00:31:135 (1) - ^
00:44:432 (1) - ^
00:57:405 (1) - ^
00:57:891 (3) - ^
00:58:378 (1) - ^
01:04:378 (3) - ^
01:05:831 (1) - ^
Also some critical mistakes: http://puu.sh/17PX
[Easy]
00:20:756 (1) - сноси эти два финиша с этого слайдера
00:53:189 (3) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - ^
00:54:810 (1) - здесь в конце убери
00:56:108 (2) - оба фишина к чёрту
01:00:000 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:425 (1) - сюда добавь финиш
01:16:209 (1) - ^ клап к чёрту
01:23:830 (1) - финиш
01:26:587 (3) - убери финиши
01:50:182 - эта зелёная линия вообще никакой роли не играет
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PS
У меня складывается впечатление будто ты не знаешь зачем или куда ставить финиш хитсаунд. Не соизволь за оскорбления, но я всё же объясню, небольшой туториал на будущее
00:44:432 (1) - К примеру убери ноту сосредоточься и послушаю музыку на заднем фоне, разве не слышно как звинит громкая нота,
Будто по золотому диску треснули (http://www.automation-drive.com/EX/05-15-06/kit_v01.jpg). Таких моментов море в этой песне
00:54:810 (1) - вот ещё один к примеру. Вот по такой логике и ставишь финиш, а не просто так, как кажется. Поэтому на других диффах писать не буду, сам попробуй.
[Normal]
Не зря оно фиксируется как хард. Довольно таки высокая скорость слайдеров да и апроач рейт тоже ничего так.
Всё таки переменую в хард и сделай нормал, мой совет для нормала: AR3-4, HP drain 3-4, Circle Size 1-2, OD 4, slider velocity 0.90~1.00, Distance Spacing 1.1x. И не так много нот.
01:24:966 (1) - убери новое комбо
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PV
[Hard]
00:23:675 (1) - эта часть хочет загнутости, почитай на досуге viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 , хорошая статья
00:53:351 (6) - ^
01:03:891 (1,2,3) - может добавить прыжки? Тока в меру.
01:15:560 (1) - новое комбо тут не нужно
01:23:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - за такие путаницы ругать будут, по спейсингу лучше сделать
01:44:101 (1) - начало слайдера вот здесь, да и зачем тут ускорялка.
01:48:155 (1) - удали финиш
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PP
[Reiji-RJ'd Line]
00:18:486 (1) - финиш
00:23:837 (1) - убери финиш
01:00:000 (1) - сюда финиш на начало
01:42:157 (1) - удали финиш
01:31:776 (2,3) - если это инсейн, а это инсейн. Почему бы не воспользоваться случаем и не вставить стрим?
Также парочка критических ошибок: http://puu.sh/17PZ
У тебя на данный момент: E, H, I, I, (I). Ещё один инсейн будет лишним, не помешало бы нормального нормала.
Topic Starter
Спасибо огромное, все вроде исправил. Мне ужасно надоела эта песня
[Easy]
01:23:830 (1) - make a slider (x:192 y:200) instead of a circle, an arrow at 01:24:236,.
01:25:128 (2) - ^(x:280 y:240),an arrow at 01:25:533.
01:26:263 (1) - delete
[Normal]
00:20:756 (1) - make 2 circles instead of slider.
01:12:479 (4) - some parts cover the next slider.
00:34:864 (4) - add a note.
00:37:459 (4) - ^
[Insane]
01:28:858 (1) - add an arrow.
01:30:641 (7) - add 2 arrows.
----------------------------------------
Fine .
Star~☆
01:23:830 (1) - make a slider (x:192 y:200) instead of a circle, an arrow at 01:24:236,.
01:25:128 (2) - ^(x:280 y:240),an arrow at 01:25:533.
01:26:263 (1) - delete
[Normal]
00:20:756 (1) - make 2 circles instead of slider.
01:12:479 (4) - some parts cover the next slider.
00:34:864 (4) - add a note.
00:37:459 (4) - ^
[Insane]
01:28:858 (1) - add an arrow.
01:30:641 (7) - add 2 arrows.
----------------------------------------
Fine
.Star~☆
Mod Queues:
Hey (:
Easy:
00:13:297 (1) - I would make the Sliders so: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62588 But it is up to you ^^
00:15:891 (1) - ^
00:18:486 (1) - ^
00:34:054 (1,2,3) - End the sliders 1/1, much better.
00:42:162 (2) - ^
00:42:973 (3) - begin the slider on 00:43:135 and end this 00:43:783
00:43:783 (4) - move to 00:44:108
01:06:966 (3) - begin 01:06:803; end 01:07:776
So I think the sound is better if you begin all Sliders 1/1 and end 1/1 , but it is up to you
Normal:
I thik its okay =)
Hard
01:13:290 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
I don't have more to say
A really nice map :3 you have a Star
Hey (:
Easy:
00:13:297 (1) - I would make the Sliders so: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62588 But it is up to you ^^
00:15:891 (1) - ^
00:18:486 (1) - ^
00:34:054 (1,2,3) - End the sliders 1/1, much better.
00:42:162 (2) - ^
00:42:973 (3) - begin the slider on 00:43:135 and end this 00:43:783
00:43:783 (4) - move to 00:44:108
01:06:966 (3) - begin 01:06:803; end 01:07:776
So I think the sound is better if you begin all Sliders 1/1 and end 1/1 , but it is up to you
Normal:
I thik its okay =)
Hard
01:13:290 (1,2,3) - I don't like how they sounds, they doesn't seems to follow anything T_T Replace them with something else, please.
I don't have more to say
A really nice map :3 you have a Star
Hi there!
Wow, there's a lot of mods before me, and I'm not sure what I find might help you at this point, but here goes:
I like some of the maps' notes placing, and I also like the song, despite being Engrish...
Also, I don't want Yukari to come get me for not doing so , so here's a star for you~
All the best with your maps!
Wow, there's a lot of mods before me, and I'm not sure what I find might help you at this point, but here goes:
kurohacker's mod(^^)
[Easy]
0:47:027 [1&2] - Move these two one grid left (grid level 3).
[Normal]
0:14:108 [4&5] - There's a jump here. Also, maybe you can align them.
0:38:270 [4] - Move one grid up (grid level 3).
0:42:810 [2&3] - Arrange them like so -->
1:03:567 [3] - Maybe you can align this with slider [2] before it, or follow the pattern of [2&3] at 1:01:621?
1:12:479 [4] - Move one grid up.
1:17:830 - Add a circle here.
1:36:966 [spinner] - The spinner's kinda short for a Normal. Maybe change it to sliders instead?
[Hard]
0:19:946 [5] - Move this so that it's in a straight line with [3].
0:20:756 [1-2, next 1-3] - Maybe you can arrange them like so -->
0:31:459 [1] - Move 2 grids up.
0:32:916 [6] - Same here.
0:35:189 [4] - New combo here.
0:37:783 [4] - Same here.
0:56:432 [2&3] - I suggest you rearrange them so that they are symmetrical to the [2] and [3] at 0:55:135.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
I'm not really sure about using 1/6 beat spacings for this map, but I guess that's just me.
Also, I suggest that you avoid putting a note 1/6 beat after a large 'don' or 'ka', like at 0:13:351; it's hard to actually see them this way.
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
1:47:993 [spinner] - I suggest pushing the slider two 1/4 beats back. Then, put a circle here instead.
0:47:027 [1&2] - Move these two one grid left (grid level 3).
[Normal]
0:14:108 [4&5] - There's a jump here. Also, maybe you can align them.
0:38:270 [4] - Move one grid up (grid level 3).
0:42:810 [2&3] - Arrange them like so -->
1:03:567 [3] - Maybe you can align this with slider [2] before it, or follow the pattern of [2&3] at 1:01:621?
1:12:479 [4] - Move one grid up.
1:17:830 - Add a circle here.
1:36:966 [spinner] - The spinner's kinda short for a Normal. Maybe change it to sliders instead?
[Hard]
0:19:946 [5] - Move this so that it's in a straight line with [3].
0:20:756 [1-2, next 1-3] - Maybe you can arrange them like so -->
0:31:459 [1] - Move 2 grids up.
0:32:916 [6] - Same here.
0:35:189 [4] - New combo here.
0:37:783 [4] - Same here.
0:56:432 [2&3] - I suggest you rearrange them so that they are symmetrical to the [2] and [3] at 0:55:135.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
I'm not really sure about using 1/6 beat spacings for this map, but I guess that's just me.
Also, I suggest that you avoid putting a note 1/6 beat after a large 'don' or 'ka', like at 0:13:351; it's hard to actually see them this way.
[Reiji-RJ's Line]
1:47:993 [spinner] - I suggest pushing the slider two 1/4 beats back. Then, put a circle here instead.
I like some of the maps' notes placing, and I also like the song, despite being Engrish...
Also, I don't want Yukari to come get me for not doing so
, so here's a star for you~All the best with your maps!
god song
Oh god, the taiko diff's notes are after resnapping on the wrong place...... I replaced it by my own now.
Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Download: 709sec. - Draw the Line (Ch1ka) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
No problem. I hope this will get ranked soon. :<
Can't find anything wrong with the taiko map except the sliders, they are to close to the next note. Need to be at least a measure apart.
[General]
- • mp3 bitrate is unrankable; please reduce it to 192kbps.
• Set the same combo colours on all difficulties.
- • Slider Tick Rate: 0,5
• 00:15:891 (1) - Extend by 1/2
• 00:18:486 (1) - ^
• 00:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part.
• 00:36:648 (3) - Add "New Combo"
• 01:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part.
• 00:44:108 (4) - Delete this circle
• 00:47:027 (1,2) - Add a slider instead of these circles.
• 00:48:324 (3,4) - ^
• 00:49:297 (5) - Add "New Combo"
• 00:50:594 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 00:50:918 (2,3) - Add a slider instead of these circles.
• 00:51:567 (4,5) - ^
• 01:25:128 (1) - Remove "New Combo". Move 1/2 earlier and extend by 1/2
• 01:25:939 (1) - Remove "New Combo"
• 01:46:371 (1) - ^
- • HP Drain Rate: 4
• Approach Rate: 4
• Overall Difficulty: 4
- • 00:58:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part.
• 01:31:776 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Change this part in something different.
Example:
What?xxheroxx wrote:
mp3 bitrate is unrankable; please reduce it to 192kbps.
The mp3 bitrate doesn't even go above 192kbps for even a second. What the fuck are you saying.
Topic Starter
SPOILER
xxheroxx wrote:
[General][Easy]
- • mp3 bitrate is unrankable; please reduce it to 192kbps. I dont understand, im already have 157kbps-mp3
• Set the same combo colours on all difficulties. done
- • Slider Tick Rate: 0,5 no
• 00:15:891 (1) - Extend by 1/2 ok
• 00:18:486 (1) - ^ no
• 00:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part. done
• 00:36:648 (3) - Add "New Combo"ok
• 01:30:000 (break) - Delete this break and try to map this part. ok
• 00:44:108 (4) - Delete this circle ok
• 00:47:027 (1,2) - Add a slider instead of these circles. ok
• 00:48:324 (3,4) - ^ ok
• 00:49:297 (5) - Add "New Combo" ok
• 00:50:594 (1) - Remove "New Combo" ok
• 00:50:918 (2,3) - Add a slider instead of these circles. nope
• 00:51:567 (4,5) - ^ done
• 01:25:128 (1) - Remove "New Combo". Move 1/2 earlier and extend by 1/2 fixed
• 01:25:939 (1) - Remove "New Combo" ok
• 01:46:371 (1) - ^ok
[Normal]
- • HP Drain Rate: 4
• Approach Rate: 4
• Overall Difficulty: 4 fixed
- Thank you for mod!
I'm really waiting for your mapset to get ranked.
Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii
By the way I have updated the BG, this is much better.
Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii
By the way I have updated the BG, this is much better.
Topic Starter
I'm really sorry that I don't answer immediately, but I was very busy and didnt have any free time for mappingOnosakiHito wrote:
[b]I'm really waiting for your mapset to get ranked.
Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii
Soon I ressurect my maps and will continue work.
Also, tnks for BG, its really good :3
Ah! That's great!
Then I know it now. :3
Then I know it now. :3
Topic Starter
Sure, if you want it nowOnosakiHito wrote:
Do you would like to have a second easier Taiko diff.?
To have a full mapset also in the Taiko mode.
Taiko Oni // Taiko Muzukashii
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