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ohlol ... версия Sunny Holic мне нравится больше ...
карта больше 4 минут анранкбл)
[Нормал]
00:38:504(4) - вообще не желательно заканчивать слайдеры на синих тиках ... продолжи до белого ...
01:00:211(3,4) - удалить , поставить возвращающийся слайдер
01:08:0169(7) - заменить слайдером ... звучит ужасно х.х
01:47:772 - слишком долго ... хоть брейк вставь ...
[Инсейн]
Лучше назови хардом )
00:48:382 - хлопок совсем не звучит ... хотя звучит но это так ужасно >.> сдвинь этот слайдер на 00:48:016 ... естественно сёркл удалить.
01:19:967(1,2,3) - сделай их хотябы на одном расстоянии ...) и тут ~ 01:23:870
01:47:772 - и опять этот несчастный пробел ... игрок будет бится в конфузии не зная от куда вылезит следующее ... карта не интуитивная совсем ...
01:54:480(4) - перевдинь слайдер на 01:54:358
01:55:33 - можно добавить сёркл
02:34:114 (1,2,3) - ты понял о чём я ...
вообщем норм ...
карта больше 4 минут анранкбл)
[Нормал]
00:38:504(4) - вообще не желательно заканчивать слайдеры на синих тиках ... продолжи до белого ...
01:00:211(3,4) - удалить , поставить возвращающийся слайдер
01:08:0169(7) - заменить слайдером ... звучит ужасно х.х
01:47:772 - слишком долго ... хоть брейк вставь ...
[Инсейн]
Лучше назови хардом )
00:48:382 - хлопок совсем не звучит ... хотя звучит но это так ужасно >.> сдвинь этот слайдер на 00:48:016 ... естественно сёркл удалить.
01:19:967(1,2,3) - сделай их хотябы на одном расстоянии ...) и тут ~ 01:23:870
01:47:772 - и опять этот несчастный пробел ... игрок будет бится в конфузии не зная от куда вылезит следующее ... карта не интуитивная совсем ...
01:54:480(4) - перевдинь слайдер на 01:54:358
01:55:33 - можно добавить сёркл
02:34:114 (1,2,3) - ты понял о чём я ...
вообщем норм ...
Try and keep the kiai time between your 2 difficulties the same
Don't have any commas between your tags, just have spaces
Add kotya to tags on every difficulty
Normal:
OD + 1, it doesn't need to be the lowest
00:36:553 (1,4) - would look nicer if these didn't overlap
00:38:504 (4) - extend to white tick
00:42:406 (6,1) - space out more
00:53:138 (4,1) - ^
01:15:821 (2,3,4,5,6) - continue clap pattern here
01:22:894 (1) - add finish?
01:39:480 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern from earlier (or remove all those other new combos you have at this point)
02:25:333 (1) - add finish
02:33:137 (1) - ^
02:49:723 (3) - new combo
02:51:430 (7,8,1,2) - spread this part out more if possible
02:57:040 (9,1) - spacing
03:17:772 - doesn't really need a kiai fountain here
03:19:967 (1) - add finish
03:36:553 (3) - new combo
03:51:187 (8) - ^
03:52:162 (1) - remove new combo
Mostly same stuff at different parts of the song
kotya's Hard:
Try not to use more than 3 unique slider speeds
00:40:211 (1,2) - odd jump
00:46:309 (7,1) - spread out more
00:48:016 (3,4,5) - spacing?
00:55:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make spacing more equal
01:18:992 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal when possible
01:20:943 (1) - add note? - same for part repeated after this
01:51:919 (7,8) - spacing (0.5 can mess up distance snap at times)
01:54:358 (1,2) - I wouldn't put a jump here, it doesn't fit
02:29:236 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
02:31:187 - add note- same for part repeated after this
03:04:114 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing
03:22:894 (11,1) - space out more
Go through map and make sure all the spacing is consistent (some of the jumps are fine)
Insane:
Try not to use more than 3 unique slider speeds
00:48:138 (3) - clap sounds wrong on repeat
01:24:845 (4) - new combo
01:36:553 (4,1,1,2) - doesn't need the new combos
02:06:553 (6,7,8) - double check minor spacing errors like this
02:13:016 (1) - move to white tick
02:14:358 (4) - extend to white tick
02:27:041 (5,6) - space out more
Again won't hurt to go and double check spacing on everything~
Some parts more nazi than others, up to you which parts you want to follow
Maps don't look too bad but need some improvements made
Call me back after all fixes and I will star~
Don't have any commas between your tags, just have spaces
Add kotya to tags on every difficulty
Normal:
OD + 1, it doesn't need to be the lowest
00:36:553 (1,4) - would look nicer if these didn't overlap
00:38:504 (4) - extend to white tick
00:42:406 (6,1) - space out more
00:53:138 (4,1) - ^
01:15:821 (2,3,4,5,6) - continue clap pattern here
01:22:894 (1) - add finish?
01:39:480 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern from earlier (or remove all those other new combos you have at this point)
02:25:333 (1) - add finish
02:33:137 (1) - ^
02:49:723 (3) - new combo
02:51:430 (7,8,1,2) - spread this part out more if possible
02:57:040 (9,1) - spacing
03:17:772 - doesn't really need a kiai fountain here
03:19:967 (1) - add finish
03:36:553 (3) - new combo
03:51:187 (8) - ^
03:52:162 (1) - remove new combo
Mostly same stuff at different parts of the song
kotya's Hard:
Try not to use more than 3 unique slider speeds
00:40:211 (1,2) - odd jump
00:46:309 (7,1) - spread out more
00:48:016 (3,4,5) - spacing?
00:55:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make spacing more equal
01:18:992 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal when possible
01:20:943 (1) - add note? - same for part repeated after this
01:51:919 (7,8) - spacing (0.5 can mess up distance snap at times)
01:54:358 (1,2) - I wouldn't put a jump here, it doesn't fit
02:29:236 (1,2,1) - keep spacing equal
02:31:187 - add note- same for part repeated after this
03:04:114 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing
03:22:894 (11,1) - space out more
Go through map and make sure all the spacing is consistent (some of the jumps are fine)
Insane:
Try not to use more than 3 unique slider speeds
00:48:138 (3) - clap sounds wrong on repeat
01:24:845 (4) - new combo
01:36:553 (4,1,1,2) - doesn't need the new combos
02:06:553 (6,7,8) - double check minor spacing errors like this
02:13:016 (1) - move to white tick
02:14:358 (4) - extend to white tick
02:27:041 (5,6) - space out more
Again won't hurt to go and double check spacing on everything~
Some parts more nazi than others, up to you which parts you want to follow
Maps don't look too bad but need some improvements made
Call me back after all fixes and I will star~
[attachment=0:682c4]Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [Kotya's hard].osu[/attachment:682c4]
done
done
*бессмысленный пост со звездочкой*
[Misja's Hard]
00:42:650 (2,3) - stack
00:49:480 (1) - new combo
00:50:943 (4) - remove new combo
00:51:675 (6) - new combo
00:52:284 - add note?
00:55:821 - add note?
01:13:138 (4) - move 1/2 beat back
01:12:894 (4) - add note
01:22:894 (1) - new combo
01:46:309 (12) - weird slider, looks bad
01:52:894 (2,3) - stack
02:23:382 (4,5,6) - same situation as before
02:33:138 (1) - new combo. I think I missed some of ncs before anyways, set them properly
02:56:553 (12) - weird slider again
03:25:333 (5) - sounds bad. maybe delete it?
slider velocity seems too slow, but it's ok cuz you need to remap the entire map to fix it
lazy mod -.-
00:42:650 (2,3) - stack
00:49:480 (1) - new combo
00:50:943 (4) - remove new combo
00:51:675 (6) - new combo
00:52:284 - add note?
00:55:821 - add note?
01:13:138 (4) - move 1/2 beat back
01:12:894 (4) - add note
01:22:894 (1) - new combo
01:46:309 (12) - weird slider, looks bad
01:52:894 (2,3) - stack
02:23:382 (4,5,6) - same situation as before
02:33:138 (1) - new combo. I think I missed some of ncs before
anyways, set them properly02:56:553 (12) - weird slider again
03:25:333 (5) - sounds bad. maybe delete it?
slider velocity seems too slow, but it's ok cuz you need to remap the entire map to fix it
lazy mod -.-
[General]
Off count down (Song Setup > StoryBoarding)
[Normal]
Approach rate +3
Overall difficulty +2
00:41:431 (4,5,6) - too high, they touch the HP bar, odd feeling
00:48:016 (2) - delete the note
00:47:528 (1) - increase 1 return
[Hard]
00:46:309 (7) - reduce 1 return
00:49:723 (2) - It overlap with the previous slider, odd feeling
00:57:284 (10) - 1 grid down
00:58:016 (2) - move to 00:57:894
01:21:919 (5,6) - clap at the start
01:24:358 (4) - remove the clap at the end
01:33:138 (1,3) - add clap at the start?
you need to improve your space. especially slider,
eg, 00:48:016 (3) -
[Insane]
00:45:089 (7,8,9) - consider to overlap (8) (9) with (7)
In my view, your rhythm is ok, but you need to improve you spacing, also the sliders
eg, 00:45:333 (9,10,11) -
star.
Off count down (Song Setup > StoryBoarding)
[Normal]
Approach rate +3
Overall difficulty +2
00:41:431 (4,5,6) - too high, they touch the HP bar, odd feeling
00:48:016 (2) - delete the note
00:47:528 (1) - increase 1 return
[Hard]
00:46:309 (7) - reduce 1 return
00:49:723 (2) - It overlap with the previous slider, odd feeling
00:57:284 (10) - 1 grid down
00:58:016 (2) - move to 00:57:894
01:21:919 (5,6) - clap at the start
01:24:358 (4) - remove the clap at the end
01:33:138 (1,3) - add clap at the start?
you need to improve your space. especially slider,
eg, 00:48:016 (3) -
[Insane]
00:45:089 (7,8,9) - consider to overlap (8) (9) with (7)
In my view, your rhythm is ok, but you need to improve you spacing, also the sliders
eg, 00:45:333 (9,10,11) -
star.
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
[Normal]
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
[Normal]
- 00:47:528 (1,2) - This, not under slider beginning...it's little too much confusing for normal imo.
- 01:10:211 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 02:20:455 (1) - ^
- Maybe start hard with capital letter in diff name. It looks ugly.
- 00:57:528 (1,2,3) - In this combo, between 2 and 3 spacing is confusing is looks more like 1/4 than 1/2.
- Sometimes single-note new combos are overused imo.
- and sometimes there are some cosmetic things like here 00:41:919 (1,1,1) - these notes don't make perfect triangle, and i guess they're supposed to make it. Maybe use more sparse grid?
all done :3
[attachment=0:3703f]Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [Kotya's Hard].osu[/attachment:3703f]
[attachment=0:3703f]Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [Kotya's Hard].osu[/attachment:3703f]
star
Topic Starter
aesopl19193 wrote:
[General]
Off count down (Song Setup > StoryBoarding) No
[Normal]
Approach rate +3 Ok
Overall difficulty +2 Ok
00:41:431 (4,5,6) - too high, they touch the HP bar, odd feeling Ok
00:48:016 (2) - delete the note No
00:47:528 (1) - increase 1 return No
[Hard]
00:46:309 (7) - reduce 1 return
00:49:723 (2) - It overlap with the previous slider, odd feeling
00:57:284 (10) - 1 grid down
00:58:016 (2) - move to 00:57:894
01:21:919 (5,6) - clap at the start
01:24:358 (4) - remove the clap at the end
01:33:138 (1,3) - add clap at the start?
you need to improve your space. especially slider,
eg, 00:48:016 (3) -
Done
[Insane]
00:45:089 (7,8,9) - consider to overlap (8) (9) with (7) No
In my view, your rhythm is ok, but you need to improve you spacing, also the sliders
eg, 00:45:333 (9,10,11) - Ok
star.Thank you~
ShaggoN wrote:
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
[Normal][kotya's hard]
- 00:47:528 (1,2) - This, not under slider beginning...it's little too much confusing for normal imo. Ok
- 01:10:211 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
- 02:20:455 (1) - ^Ok
Done
- Maybe start hard with capital letter in diff name. It looks ugly.
- 00:57:528 (1,2,3) - In this combo, between 2 and 3 spacing is confusing is looks more like 1/4 than 1/2.
[Insane]But anyways map is good :3 Star
- Sometimes single-note new combos are overused imo. Ok ^^
- and sometimes there are some cosmetic things like here 00:41:919 (1,1,1) - these notes don't make perfect triangle, and i guess they're supposed to make it. Maybe use more sparse grid? Ok
Thanks a lot °▼°~
hi :3
thx mod reqest
Normal
00:38:504 (4) - cant follow song. start 00:38:260~
01:02:650 (1) - remove newcombo
01:03:382 (3) - newcombo
Hard
00:34:602 (1) - remove newcombo
00:36:309 (4) - new combo
00:36:797 (1) - remove newcombo
01:14:114 (1) - ^
01:22:894 (1) - why use kiai from here..?
if you want to use kiai, use from 01:18:992~ better
02:08260 (4) - cant follow song so put 02:08138 here
02:24:358 (1) - remove newcombo
02:38:748 (1) - ^
02:45:821 (1) - ^
insane
00:38:504 (4) - start 00:38:260~
00:39:358 (x) - add note
00:39:480 (x) - ^
00:43:870 (2) - new combo
00:46:797 (x) - add note
01:03:382 (6) - new combo
01:05:089 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:284 (8) - new combo
01:15:821 (2) - ^
02:26:065 (2) - ^
02:48:748 (1) - put far
03:50:699 (1) - remove new combo
03:51:187 (3) - new combo
03:58:504 (1) - remove newcombo
03:58:992 (3) - new combo
poor english sorry Q.Q
good luck :3
thx mod reqest
Normal
00:38:504 (4) - cant follow song. start 00:38:260~
01:02:650 (1) - remove newcombo
01:03:382 (3) - newcombo
Hard
00:34:602 (1) - remove newcombo
00:36:309 (4) - new combo
00:36:797 (1) - remove newcombo
01:14:114 (1) - ^
01:22:894 (1) - why use kiai from here..?
if you want to use kiai, use from 01:18:992~ better
02:08260 (4) - cant follow song so put 02:08138 here
02:24:358 (1) - remove newcombo
02:38:748 (1) - ^
02:45:821 (1) - ^
insane
00:38:504 (4) - start 00:38:260~
00:39:358 (x) - add note
00:39:480 (x) - ^
00:43:870 (2) - new combo
00:46:797 (x) - add note
01:03:382 (6) - new combo
01:05:089 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:284 (8) - new combo
01:15:821 (2) - ^
02:26:065 (2) - ^
02:48:748 (1) - put far
03:50:699 (1) - remove new combo
03:51:187 (3) - new combo
03:58:504 (1) - remove newcombo
03:58:992 (3) - new combo
poor english sorry Q.Q
good luck :3
ohi~ some suggestions ^.^
Insane:
- Add speed up/slow down warnings
00:57:528 - you used this jumps sometimes. its kind of boring, cause they're in the same place (almost) everytime. try to change it a little.
Kotya's Hard:
Quite repetitive, but nothing wrong x3
Normal:
Good~
Star ^.^
Insane:
- Add speed up/slow down warnings
00:57:528 - you used this jumps sometimes. its kind of boring, cause they're in the same place (almost) everytime. try to change it a little.
Kotya's Hard:
Quite repetitive, but nothing wrong x3
Normal:
Good~
Star ^.^
star
star~☆
check
nice~
nice~
nice
good luck~
good luck~
star! kakkoi~~ 
D
DGeneral
20 метров весит вся папка, по критериям конечно подходит, но мне кажется это многовато, видео можно сжать (хотя я думаю БАТы или МАТы потом решат)
сделай бг 1024х768, требуют
на счет тагов так же не уверена, я бы посоветовала убрать Korea, pop (когда карта ранкуется ей назначают стиль)
и проследи чтоб Kotya было во всех диффах в тагах
Normal
00:41:919 (5,6) - замени на один возвращающийся слайдер 00:41:919 - 00:42:894
00:45:821 (5) - а это на возвращающийся слайдер и круг (00:45:821 - 00:46:309 - слайдер, 00:46:553 - круг)
00:49:967 (6) - не стакуй, помести рядом со слайдером
01:18:992 (1,2) и т.д.- вот эти комбо по 2 круга не очень вписываются, я думаю их надо "смешать" с остальными комбо
01:42:406 (1) - сделай симметричнее( достаточно просто поместить средний квадратик слайдера на середину)
01:44:602 (3) - новое комбо
01:55:089 - сюда круг (иначе не звучит)
01:55:821 (5) - а этот слайдер 01:56:065 - сюда
02:25:333 (1,2,3) - на одну клетку ниже
03:16:065 (1,2,1,2,3) - не для нормала такие моменты, каждое комбо нужно расстаковать
Kotya's Hard
слайдеры..косые т_Т поровнее надо сделать
лучше если киаи будет везде одинаковое
00:46:309 (7) - 3 возвращения тут не звучит, я бы убрала их
01:04:114 (7) - убери новое комбо
01:05:089 (1) - поставь новое комбо
01:22:894 - эмм, внезапное киаи? лучше уж тогда его вообще не использовать тут
01:28:504 (1) - сделай этот слайдер такой же угловой как предыдущий
и опять непонятное киаи
02:38:748 (1) - то же самое
03:22:894 (11) - хорошо бы было продлить до белой линии его, для лучшего звучания (но тогда он длинный сильно) можно что-то другое тут придумать
Insane
к слову, киаи должно заканчиваться/начинаться на ноте,а не на пустом месте
OD поставь на 2 черточки меньше
00:42:284 (1,1) - не делай тут новых комбо
00:57:893 (1,1) - ^
01:01:187 (8) - 1 клетку вправо
01:02:162 (3) - смотри чтоб этот слайдер был симметричен кругу
01:02:894 (4,5,6) - прыжки мне кажется тут не к месту
01:33:626 (1,1) - ...
01:42:406 - зря использовал снижение скорости, слайдеры и так не быстрые,а это так вообще тормозит все
01:56:431 (1,1) - ... (дальше думаю сам поправишь все)
02:48:748 (1) - спейсинг
02:52:650 - опять про скорость
03:39:480 ^
03:47:772 (2) - клетку вверх
вроде все, стар
20 метров весит вся папка, по критериям конечно подходит, но мне кажется это многовато, видео можно сжать (хотя я думаю БАТы или МАТы потом решат)
сделай бг 1024х768, требуют
на счет тагов так же не уверена, я бы посоветовала убрать Korea, pop (когда карта ранкуется ей назначают стиль)
и проследи чтоб Kotya было во всех диффах в тагах
Normal
00:41:919 (5,6) - замени на один возвращающийся слайдер 00:41:919 - 00:42:894
00:45:821 (5) - а это на возвращающийся слайдер и круг (00:45:821 - 00:46:309 - слайдер, 00:46:553 - круг)
00:49:967 (6) - не стакуй, помести рядом со слайдером
01:18:992 (1,2) и т.д.- вот эти комбо по 2 круга не очень вписываются, я думаю их надо "смешать" с остальными комбо
01:42:406 (1) - сделай симметричнее( достаточно просто поместить средний квадратик слайдера на середину)
01:44:602 (3) - новое комбо
01:55:089 - сюда круг (иначе не звучит)
01:55:821 (5) - а этот слайдер 01:56:065 - сюда
02:25:333 (1,2,3) - на одну клетку ниже
03:16:065 (1,2,1,2,3) - не для нормала такие моменты, каждое комбо нужно расстаковать
Kotya's Hard
слайдеры..косые т_Т поровнее надо сделать
лучше если киаи будет везде одинаковое
00:46:309 (7) - 3 возвращения тут не звучит, я бы убрала их
01:04:114 (7) - убери новое комбо
01:05:089 (1) - поставь новое комбо
01:22:894 - эмм, внезапное киаи? лучше уж тогда его вообще не использовать тут
01:28:504 (1) - сделай этот слайдер такой же угловой как предыдущий
и опять непонятное киаи
02:38:748 (1) - то же самое
03:22:894 (11) - хорошо бы было продлить до белой линии его, для лучшего звучания (но тогда он длинный сильно) можно что-то другое тут придумать
Insane
к слову, киаи должно заканчиваться/начинаться на ноте,а не на пустом месте
OD поставь на 2 черточки меньше
00:42:284 (1,1) - не делай тут новых комбо
00:57:893 (1,1) - ^
01:01:187 (8) - 1 клетку вправо
01:02:162 (3) - смотри чтоб этот слайдер был симметричен кругу
01:02:894 (4,5,6) - прыжки мне кажется тут не к месту
01:33:626 (1,1) - ...
01:42:406 - зря использовал снижение скорости, слайдеры и так не быстрые,а это так вообще тормозит все
01:56:431 (1,1) - ... (дальше думаю сам поправишь все)
02:48:748 (1) - спейсинг
02:52:650 - опять про скорость
03:39:480 ^
03:47:772 (2) - клетку вверх
вроде все, стар
General
- You could do with an easy - I can make you one if you want, just let me know.
- Replace the bg with this: you won't get the ugly black bars at the top and bottom.
- A lot if your streams (e.g. 01:12:772 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , pretty much all of them in the chorus etc) don't really follow anything prominent in the music, don't fit the mood of the song and map as a whole and are really just there to add fake difficulty. Keep in mind that maps are fun because they nicely follow the music, not becuase they're as hard as possible.
I could go and point them all out, but I trust you to go through and fix them up yourself - The speed changes seem unneccesary and extreme. Remove or lessen them (0.75 and 1.5 are good choices)
- 02:03:626 (6) - Not sure whiy you don't just start the slider here
- 03:11:919 (1) - End 1/4 earlier
- No (reasonably sized) breaks?
- Same as insane with the streams, and many of the triplets. A hard shouldn't really have much 1/4 at all, let alone random unfitting 1/4
I reccomend removing all the 1/4 that doesn't follow the lyrics. - The speed changes are unneccesary and unfitting. Lessen or remove them (Again, 0.75 is a good choice)
- 02:08:504 (1) - Would fit much better as a slider
- 02:13:626 (4,5) - This jump's a little out of the blue
- 03:39:480 (1,2) - ^
- 02:17:528 (1) - end 1/1 earlier or 2/1 later
- 03:03:626 (1,2,3,4) - Okay, most of the streams are pretty bad, bur srsly what
- 03:37:528 (6,7,8,9,10) - Very confusing all stacked like this
- Very low difficulty settings for a normal
- Mapping on this diff gets a bit square at times - mix up the patterns a bit?
- 00:47:528 (1,2) - Spaaaacing
[General]:
- tags: Korea remove? Korean would be the genre, but Korea @_@, as Seoul is a city of Korea?
- 00:48:138 (2) - spacing
- 03:18:016 (6) - new combo
- claps in this diff is a bit random, and I admit Normal has a much better using of claps
- 00:57:528 (1,2,3) - ok, at some part of this song like this, following the vocal is a better way ;w;, I mean 00:57:528, 00:57:894, 00:58:260.
- 01:01:431 (1,2,3) - ^ and there are a lot in this song so meh.. I won't list all of them
- 00:46:309 (7) - reverse arrow is covered by the hitburst of 00:45:333 (5)
- 02:17:528 (1) - end this at 02:19:480
- 02:21:431 (1,2,3) - spacing
- 02:38:748 (1,2,3) - ^
- overuse of claps
- more than 3 slider speed, so consider to use x0.75 instead of x0.5 sliders
- 01:44:845 (3) - place this with your shift button down
- 01:51:431 (6) - ^
- 01:55:577 (7) - ^
- 02:03:382 (5) - ^
- 02:46:065 (4) - ^
- 02:49:967 (4) - ^ remember to adjust the following ones
- 03:20:943 (3,4,5) - new combo on 3 and the spacing
- 03:24:602 (2) - place this with your shift button down
- 03:25:577 (4) - ^
- 03:50:943 (2) - ^
- 03:58:992 (3) - ^
- 04:01:919 (4,5,6) - spacing
[attachment=0:6a0f4]Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [Kotya's Hard].osu[/attachment:6a0f4]
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Topic Starter
RandomJibberish wrote:
GeneralInsane
- You could do with an easy - I can make you one if you want, just let me know. Please. Do it
Thank you.
- Replace the bg with this: you won't get the ugly black bars at the top and bottom. Ok
Kotya's Hard
- A lot if your streams (e.g. 01:12:772 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , pretty much all of them in the chorus etc) don't really follow anything prominent in the music, don't fit the mood of the song and map as a whole and are really just there to add fake difficulty. Keep in mind that maps are fun because they nicely follow the music, not becuase they're as hard as possible.
I could go and point them all out, but I trust you to go through and fix them up yourself- The speed changes seem unneccesary and extreme. Remove or lessen them (0.75 and 1.5 are good choices) Done
- 02:03:626 (6) - Not sure whiy you don't just start the slider here
- 03:11:919 (1) - End 1/4 earlier Done
Done
- No (reasonably sized) breaks?
- Same as insane with the streams, and many of the triplets. A hard shouldn't really have much 1/4 at all, let alone random unfitting 1/4
I reccomend removing all the 1/4 that doesn't follow the lyrics.- The speed changes are unneccesary and unfitting. Lessen or remove them (Again, 0.75 is a good choice)
- 02:08:504 (1) - Would fit much better as a slider
- 02:13:626 (4,5) - This jump's a little out of the blue
- 03:39:480 (1,2) - ^
- 02:17:528 (1) - end 1/1 earlier or 2/1 later
- 03:03:626 (1,2,3,4) - Okay, most of the streams are pretty bad, bur srsly what
- 03:37:528 (6,7,8,9,10) - Very confusing all stacked like this
NormalThank you~
- Very low difficulty settings for a normal Everything is fine. D:
- Mapping on this diff gets a bit square at times - mix up the patterns a bit? Done
- 00:47:528 (1,2) - Spaaaacing Done
Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:[Normal]:
- tags: Korea remove? Korean would be the genre, but Korea @_@, as Seoul is a city of Korea? Done
[Kotya's Hard]:
- 00:48:138 (2) - spacing Done
- 03:18:016 (6) - new combo Done
[Insane]:
- claps in this diff is a bit random, and I admit Normal has a much better using of claps
- 00:57:528 (1,2,3) - ok, at some part of this song like this, following the vocal is a better way ;w;, I mean 00:57:528, 00:57:894, 00:58:260. Done
- 01:01:431 (1,2,3) - ^ and there are a lot in this song so meh.. I won't list all of them Done
- 00:46:309 (7) - reverse arrow is covered by the hitburst of 00:45:333 (5) Done
- 02:17:528 (1) - end this at 02:19:480 Done
- 02:21:431 (1,2,3) - spacing Done
- 02:38:748 (1,2,3) - ^ Done
Thank you~
- overuse of claps
- more than 3 slider speed, so consider to use x0.75 instead of x0.5 sliders Done
- 01:44:845 (3) - place this with your shift button down Done
- 01:51:431 (6) - ^ Done
- 01:55:577 (7) - ^ Done
- 02:03:382 (5) - ^Done
- 02:46:065 (4) - ^ Done
- 02:49:967 (4) - ^ remember to adjust the following ones Done
- 03:20:943 (3,4,5) - new combo on 3 and the spacing Done
- 03:24:602 (2) - place this with your shift button down Done
- 03:25:577 (4) - ^ Done
- 03:50:943 (2) - ^ Done
- 03:58:992 (3) - ^ Done
- 04:01:919 (4,5,6) - spacing Done
star~
На счёт 20 мб - согласен.
Да,по правилам - подходит,но правила не все верно трактуют.Сжимать надо желательно всё,что можно.Я почти уверен,что маты/баты будут придираться.
[Normal]
00:37:528 (2) - Неожиданно и не в ритм как-то,я бы убрал отсюда и поставил на 00:38:260 лучше.
00:43:382 - Для поддержания ритма я бы добавил ноту.
00:53:870 - ^
00:54:114 - ^
00:54:602 - ^
00:55:089 - ^
00:58:992 - ^
01:27:284 (1) - Исправь дистанцию,слишком близко.А вообще,я бы ещё добавил ноту на 01:26:797 с финишом.
01:47:772 - Здесь бы тоже добавил ноток? Хотя бы на 1/1.
01:53:382 - Ноту.
01:53:626 - ^
02:19:480 (1) - Слишком близко,исправь дистанцию.Дальше тебе не дает поставить размер поля,поэтому расположи ближе к центру.
02:58:016 - Ноту?
03:44:845 - ^
Вообщем следовать вокалу - это хорошо,но и про ритм забывать не надо.
[Kotya's Hard]
Апроч рейт слииишком низкий,из-за этого слишком много объектов на экране сразу,нужно поднять.Да и остальные показатели тоже.
Очень много ошибок с дистанцией.
Начиная я самого начала:
00:38:260 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Тут везде разная дистанция,должна быть одна.
И такое часто по мапе встречается.Желательно хорошо просмотреть всю мапу и исправить каждый объект,который хотя бы визуально кажется не по дистанции.
01:01:919 (2) - Сдвинуть на синий тик(01:01:797) и добавить ещё ноту на 01:01:797 ?
01:09:480 - Такие короткие брейки неранкабельны.Убирай.
01:18:992 (1) - Финиш.
01:22:894 (1) - ^
01:26:797 - ^
01:34:602 (1) - ^
01:48:992 - Тоже слишком короткий брейк.
02:29:236 (1) - Финиш.
02:33:138 (1) - ^
02:37:041 - ^
02:44:845 (1) - ^
02:48:748 (1) - ^
03:01:431 (2) - Слишком близко к предыдущему объекту.Исправь дистанцию.
03:01:431 (2,3,4) - И что с ними вообще? Конец (2)-го слайдера не попадает в тик,и (4)-ый тоже.Исправь.
03:04:114 (3) - Плохо звучит,лучше закончить на 03:04:358.
03:07:041 (1) - Опять дистанция,слишком близко.
03:08:016 (2) - ^ Тоже самое.
03:07:041 (1,2) - Опять окончания слайдеров не снапнуты,заканчивай их на красных/белых тиках.
03:19:967 (1) - Финиш?
03:31:675 (1) - ^
Хлопки не всегда логично расставлены.
[Insane]
00:36:797 (1) - Это прыжок такой?
01:00:699 (5) - Исправь дистанцию.
01:09:236 (1,1,1,1,1) - Комбо спам.
01:14:114 (1,1,1) - ^
01:47:528 - Такие дыры убивают четверть полоски хп.Как и в нормале,я бы посоветовал замапать эти части.
02:19:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - Комбо спам.
02:24:358 (1,1,1) - ^
02:30:211 (3,4,5) - Выдели в новое комбо,иначе дистанция не верна.
03:17:041 (3,4,5) - ^
Звезда.
Да,по правилам - подходит,но правила не все верно трактуют.Сжимать надо желательно всё,что можно.Я почти уверен,что маты/баты будут придираться.
[Normal]
00:37:528 (2) - Неожиданно и не в ритм как-то,я бы убрал отсюда и поставил на 00:38:260 лучше.
00:43:382 - Для поддержания ритма я бы добавил ноту.
00:53:870 - ^
00:54:114 - ^
00:54:602 - ^
00:55:089 - ^
00:58:992 - ^
01:27:284 (1) - Исправь дистанцию,слишком близко.А вообще,я бы ещё добавил ноту на 01:26:797 с финишом.
01:47:772 - Здесь бы тоже добавил ноток? Хотя бы на 1/1.
01:53:382 - Ноту.
01:53:626 - ^
02:19:480 (1) - Слишком близко,исправь дистанцию.Дальше тебе не дает поставить размер поля,поэтому расположи ближе к центру.
02:58:016 - Ноту?
03:44:845 - ^
Вообщем следовать вокалу - это хорошо,но и про ритм забывать не надо.
[Kotya's Hard]
Апроч рейт слииишком низкий,из-за этого слишком много объектов на экране сразу,нужно поднять.Да и остальные показатели тоже.
Очень много ошибок с дистанцией.
Начиная я самого начала:
00:38:260 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Тут везде разная дистанция,должна быть одна.
И такое часто по мапе встречается.Желательно хорошо просмотреть всю мапу и исправить каждый объект,который хотя бы визуально кажется не по дистанции.
01:01:919 (2) - Сдвинуть на синий тик(01:01:797) и добавить ещё ноту на 01:01:797 ?
01:09:480 - Такие короткие брейки неранкабельны.Убирай.
01:18:992 (1) - Финиш.
01:22:894 (1) - ^
01:26:797 - ^
01:34:602 (1) - ^
01:48:992 - Тоже слишком короткий брейк.
02:29:236 (1) - Финиш.
02:33:138 (1) - ^
02:37:041 - ^
02:44:845 (1) - ^
02:48:748 (1) - ^
03:01:431 (2) - Слишком близко к предыдущему объекту.Исправь дистанцию.
03:01:431 (2,3,4) - И что с ними вообще? Конец (2)-го слайдера не попадает в тик,и (4)-ый тоже.Исправь.
03:04:114 (3) - Плохо звучит,лучше закончить на 03:04:358.
03:07:041 (1) - Опять дистанция,слишком близко.
03:08:016 (2) - ^ Тоже самое.
03:07:041 (1,2) - Опять окончания слайдеров не снапнуты,заканчивай их на красных/белых тиках.
03:19:967 (1) - Финиш?
03:31:675 (1) - ^
Хлопки не всегда логично расставлены.
[Insane]
00:36:797 (1) - Это прыжок такой?
01:00:699 (5) - Исправь дистанцию.
01:09:236 (1,1,1,1,1) - Комбо спам.
01:14:114 (1,1,1) - ^
01:47:528 - Такие дыры убивают четверть полоски хп.Как и в нормале,я бы посоветовал замапать эти части.
02:19:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - Комбо спам.
02:24:358 (1,1,1) - ^
02:30:211 (3,4,5) - Выдели в новое комбо,иначе дистанция не верна.
03:17:041 (3,4,5) - ^
Звезда.
star
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
when you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, choose the beats and then add whistle plz. because this problem happens a lot i won't list them
[Normal]
00:43:138 - add a 1/2 slider?
00:47:528 (1,2,3) - change these notes to a circle + 3/4 repeat slider would be better to hit.
01:07:772 (6,7,8) - a 1/1 slider should works fine here.
01:26:309 (9,1) - spacing?
there's not so many "mistakes" in this diff. but the notes was placed not so good and could be more various. (now only straight sliders, 0 or 90 degrees, really boring)
[Kotya's Hard]
00:37:772 (3,4,5,6,7) - change this to sliders? (since it's the first time to get 1/4s)
01:07:284 - 01:11:187 - remove the short break
01:47:041 - 01:50:455 - ^
02:14:358 (5) - too far for a Hard, maybe ctrl+r?
02:17:528 - maybe a spinner here instead of a sudden break?
03:02:162 (4) - sth must be wrong in this part. and 03:04:114 (3), 03:05:821 (8,1,2). i guess you forget a BPM changing timing point.
03:22:406 (7) - 1 grid up nazi.
[Insane]
HP-1
00:45:089 (7,8,9) - just stak all the 3 notes or put 8 somewhere between 7 & 9 plz?
00:57:284 (5,1) - what spacing? and this happens a lot. the rhythm is not changed that much so why the spacing(from 1.2x to 4.0x??)
01:00:333 (4,5) - spacing is wrong and may cause misreading.
01:55:089 (5,6) - spacing
03:13:870 (1) - end 1/2 earlier and mute plz.
03:17:041 (3) - new combo
03:38:992 (7,1) - spacing. no one know it's 0.5x slider before hit it
03:41:675 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - really not good. it's placed kind of random
try to make your maps more various, get more patterns instead of simple linear slider + lots of notes, it should be much better.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
when you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, choose the beats and then add whistle plz. because this problem happens a lot i won't list them
[Normal]
00:43:138 - add a 1/2 slider?
00:47:528 (1,2,3) - change these notes to a circle + 3/4 repeat slider would be better to hit.
01:07:772 (6,7,8) - a 1/1 slider should works fine here.
01:26:309 (9,1) - spacing?
there's not so many "mistakes" in this diff. but the notes was placed not so good and could be more various. (now only straight sliders, 0 or 90 degrees, really boring)
[Kotya's Hard]
00:37:772 (3,4,5,6,7) - change this to sliders? (since it's the first time to get 1/4s)
01:07:284 - 01:11:187 - remove the short break
01:47:041 - 01:50:455 - ^
02:14:358 (5) - too far for a Hard, maybe ctrl+r?
02:17:528 - maybe a spinner here instead of a sudden break?
03:02:162 (4) - sth must be wrong in this part. and 03:04:114 (3), 03:05:821 (8,1,2). i guess you forget a BPM changing timing point.
03:22:406 (7) - 1 grid up nazi.
[Insane]
HP-1
00:45:089 (7,8,9) - just stak all the 3 notes or put 8 somewhere between 7 & 9 plz?
00:57:284 (5,1) - what spacing? and this happens a lot. the rhythm is not changed that much so why the spacing(from 1.2x to 4.0x??)
01:00:333 (4,5) - spacing is wrong and may cause misreading.
01:55:089 (5,6) - spacing
03:13:870 (1) - end 1/2 earlier and mute plz.
03:17:041 (3) - new combo
03:38:992 (7,1) - spacing. no one know it's 0.5x slider before hit it
03:41:675 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - really not good. it's placed kind of random
try to make your maps more various, get more patterns instead of simple linear slider + lots of notes, it should be much better.
you could really do with making an Easy.
Normal
00:38:260 - the space in this combo felt really odd and i kept hitting too soon, maybe add a note here
02:10:699 - again really feels like a note need to be here
03:17:041 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern
Kotya's Hard
this diff needs sooooo much work on it
first off the timing is different, this has 2 timing sections while the other diffs have one
........why is this map not even as long as the Normal....please map it to the end
00:40:455 (2,3,4,5) - (2) and (5) is the identical shaped slider but completely different timing, this is really not advised, when playing its very Hard to notice the different of the speeds fast enough, and thus this plays really bad
00:53:382 (5) - this sliders speed feels too slow :/
00:57:528 (1,2,3) - due to the spacing on the combo before this, it makes this combo very hard to read, this spacing makes the player want to use 1/4 timing even though the pattern is 1/2 respace please
01:01:431 (1,2,3) - timing of these notes play really bad, please follow the vocal like this
02:21:431 (1,2,3) - these need to all be the same spacing atm (1,2) is too close
02:58:992 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this whole area is completely out of time, once you have fixed the timing you REALLY need to remake everyone of the sliders in this area
this diff needs so much work :/ and i see the guest diff maker has not replied to the last few mods, contact the guest diff maker so this can be fixed up
Insane
00:36:797 (1) - move closer to the (4) before it, the jump feels too far and by moving it closer it helps to make the flow better
00:38:260 - add a note here ;p
00:53:260 (4) - remove this note, really does not suit
01:02:894 (4) - new combo here to split the vocal line change and the spacing, also not keen on the spacing change at the end of this combo
01:12:772 (5) - slider is out of time, need moving forward to 01:12:894 (red tick) and end on 01:13:260
01:14:602 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:699 (1) - not really a good idea to stack this, think about spacing it somewhere else
01:55:089 (5,6,7) - spacing again plays odd due to the huge jump between (5,6) compared to (6,7) when they are the same timing, think about giving them the same spacing
02:10:821 (7,8) - this timing does not really suit very good, it improves a lot of you remove (7) then put a note on 02:10:943 (red tick)
02:24:845 (1) - remove new combo
02:29:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - all these notes have identical spacing but (3,4,5) are double the speed of the others, this really does not play good, i advise you to give them closer spacing or space (1,2) more
02:40:943 (1) - again not the best stacking this, maybe space it somewhere else
03:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - plays ok i guess, but again these having the identical spacing yet completely different timing dont really feel good
03:33:626 (4) - new combo for pattern then new combo at 03:36:553 (3) now you see a nice pattern
03:39:480 (1,2) - really played bad as a stack, think about spacing these normally
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ok lot of work i kno, but once you have done all that it will improve the maps, sorry i cant star just yet due to the amount of problems, fix these up and get a few more mods first
Normal
00:38:260 - the space in this combo felt really odd and i kept hitting too soon, maybe add a note here
02:10:699 - again really feels like a note need to be here
03:17:041 (3) - new combo to follow your pattern
Kotya's Hard
this diff needs sooooo much work on it
first off the timing is different, this has 2 timing sections while the other diffs have one
........why is this map not even as long as the Normal....please map it to the end
00:40:455 (2,3,4,5) - (2) and (5) is the identical shaped slider but completely different timing, this is really not advised, when playing its very Hard to notice the different of the speeds fast enough, and thus this plays really bad
00:53:382 (5) - this sliders speed feels too slow :/
00:57:528 (1,2,3) - due to the spacing on the combo before this, it makes this combo very hard to read, this spacing makes the player want to use 1/4 timing even though the pattern is 1/2 respace please
01:01:431 (1,2,3) - timing of these notes play really bad, please follow the vocal like this
02:21:431 (1,2,3) - these need to all be the same spacing atm (1,2) is too close
02:58:992 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this whole area is completely out of time, once you have fixed the timing you REALLY need to remake everyone of the sliders in this area
this diff needs so much work :/ and i see the guest diff maker has not replied to the last few mods, contact the guest diff maker so this can be fixed up
Insane
00:36:797 (1) - move closer to the (4) before it, the jump feels too far and by moving it closer it helps to make the flow better
00:38:260 - add a note here ;p
00:53:260 (4) - remove this note, really does not suit
01:02:894 (4) - new combo here to split the vocal line change and the spacing, also not keen on the spacing change at the end of this combo
01:12:772 (5) - slider is out of time, need moving forward to 01:12:894 (red tick) and end on 01:13:260
01:14:602 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:699 (1) - not really a good idea to stack this, think about spacing it somewhere else
01:55:089 (5,6,7) - spacing again plays odd due to the huge jump between (5,6) compared to (6,7) when they are the same timing, think about giving them the same spacing
02:10:821 (7,8) - this timing does not really suit very good, it improves a lot of you remove (7) then put a note on 02:10:943 (red tick)
02:24:845 (1) - remove new combo
02:29:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - all these notes have identical spacing but (3,4,5) are double the speed of the others, this really does not play good, i advise you to give them closer spacing or space (1,2) more
02:40:943 (1) - again not the best stacking this, maybe space it somewhere else
03:16:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - plays ok i guess, but again these having the identical spacing yet completely different timing dont really feel good
03:33:626 (4) - new combo for pattern then new combo at 03:36:553 (3) now you see a nice pattern
03:39:480 (1,2) - really played bad as a stack, think about spacing these normally
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ok lot of work i kno, but once you have done all that it will improve the maps, sorry i cant star just yet due to the amount of problems, fix these up and get a few more mods first
Uh, the kiai's different on my diff intentionally, and you messed up my hitsounds. Please revert it to how it was :/
Download: Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu
Just a heads up, but it's generally considered impolite to change guest diffs without the original mapper's permission.
Download: Super Junior & SNSD - Seoul Song (Zorlok_) [RJ's Easy].osu
Just a heads up, but it's generally considered impolite to change guest diffs without the original mapper's permission.