L y s wrote:

저는 평소에 캇을 Clap으로 하는데 Whistle로 하려니 헷갈리네요. 그냥 버릇이라... 근데 다들 clap 쓰시는 분들이 많으니 다음 맵부터는 그쪽을 사용하는걸로...
막상 하려니까 다른 분들이 하신게 너무 많아가지고 많이 작성을 못했네요. 죄송합니다.
d,D = 동 | k,K = 캇

[Daybreak Oni]
00:43:716 (338,339,340,341,342,343,344) - k d k k d d k 으로 해도 좋을 것 같아요. 사실 이게 이렇게 된 이유는 위의 븐 모딩에서, 00:42:516 파트 부분을 드럼이 아닌 멜로디가 음이 더 인식이 잘된다는 이유로 바꿔달라는 소리가 있어서 초반 패턴이 확실히 미묘해진건 사실이지만, 개인적으로는 초반 노트 2개를 제외하고는 지금 상태가 더 낫다고 생각합니다. 그래도 00:43:716 (338,339) 같은 경우에는 스트림 기준으로 봤을때는 애매한 감이 없잖아 있기에, 예외적으로 서로 위치를 바꾸는걸로 전체적인 느낌을 조정해두겠습니다.

00:47:488 (369) , 00:58:459 (438) - k보단 d가 어울림 확실히 d이 나은 느낌이 있긴 한데, 이것에 맞춰서 패턴을 두려니 여러가지로 어려움이 생기네요. 일단은 그대로 냅두고 모딩을 더 받아보는쪽으로 하겠습니다.

00:50:145 (385,386) - Ctrl+G 위와 동일, 후에 나오는 비슷한 부분도 마찬가지로 보류

03:01:716 (211) - 삭제 이곳에 노트가 있는 이유는 02:39:431와는 밀도면에서 차별을 두기 위해서입니다. 게다가 없는음도 아니기 때문에 굳이 지우지 않아도 된다고 생각합니다.

03:07:202 (257) - 03:07:631 여기로 옮기는 것도 좋을 것 같아요. 옮길 위치에 매핑되는 음이 임팩트가 좀 적은것 같아요.

03:09:345 (273) - d → k 처음에 했던 내용과 동일한 대처로 해뒀습니다.

03:15:859 , 03:26:831 - k 추가 확실하게 노트 있는편이 낫네요. d으로 추가했습니다.

03:31:288 (456,457) - Ctrl+G 위에서의 비슷한 부분을 수정하지 않았기에 일관성 문제로 보류

03:35:659 - k → d 키아이 타임부분을 보시면 아시겠지만, 이부분은 가사가 없는 부분은 보컬에 맞췄기 때문에 일관성을 위해선 안하는게 낫습니다.

04:27:002 - k 추가 일단 후반부 전체적인 느낌을 위해서 일부로 무시한 음이긴 하지만, 들리는걸 무시하자니 좀 걸리는게 있기도 하네요. 일단 보류해두도록 하겠습니다.

04:37:716 (985,986,987,988) - 여기 뭔가 아쉬움. k kdK로 하면 좋을 듯 한데... 일단 k kdk으로 바꿨습니다. 제가 스트림 뒤쪽에 큰노트 좋아하는걸 좋아하진 않아서...

04:43:802 - k 추가 04:27:002와 비슷한 이유입니다. 그리고 여기서부터는 거의 끝나가는 부분이라 앞부분과 다르게 밀도를 줄인것도 이유 중 하나네요.

04:50:059 , 04:52:802 - d 추가 위와 동일

04:51:516 , 04:54:259 - k 추가 마찬가지 이유로 변경 없음


그 외엔 이러면 좋겠다 하는 부분은 찾을 수가 없네요.

Skylish wrote:

Re-check here:

[Daybreak Oni]

> 01:05:316 - try kdd here, 01:04:802 - / 01:05:402 - / 01:05:488 - share the similar drum hit sounds (d works quite well extraordinarily) Changed 01:04:974 to kdd.

> 01:39:774 - you may try linking up this gap with kdd K, K at 01:40:116 - for stating a new section. A little break is given already at 01:38:574 - , so you may consider this suggestion with the BGM. Added d on 01:39:945.

! 05:00:345 - change it to a Spinner (to 05:01:716 - ), or your map length cannot reach 5 minutes. Added spinner to 05:00:516 instead. I wanna leave it a finisher to emphasize the last note.

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The mapset is pretty much fine, the new changes are smooth and enhance the spread across sections well. Call me back when things are settled.

Skylish wrote:

Bubbled~!

Structure is solid and variations are done well after the latest bunch of mods. Well done!

Rhytoly wrote:

I want to see it ranked

Faputa wrote:

d Don
D Big Don
k Katsu
K Big Katsu
Suggestions
Issues

[General]
I believe this map is mostly fine, after the mods from two BNs
however I have a few suggestions to point out

1. I am not sure about these two tags you have put in, Underflow and Sylphi. I did a little search on the Internet, and they seem to me are not related to the song. Do tell me if it is otherwise. Those are my previous username.
2. I am curious about this. Any reasons using 5.3 as HP? 5.5 and 5 are appropriate as well, so for me I generally tend to use those instead. Changed to 5.5.

[Daybreak Oni]
00:03:516 (17,18) - 00:07:631 (48,49) - 00:09:002 (58,59) - 00:14:488 (106,107) - 00:18:602 (139,140) - 00:19:974 (149,150) - I don't think these are appropriate. Changed them all to kd.

You may be doing this for pattern progressions, and I notice that you have kd s after all these, but these are not fit to the music, as 00:03:516 (17) - lies in the exact percussion as 00:03:345 (16) - and 00:03:602 (18) - is a low base drum. This also apply to the other few 1/4 duplets. Moreover, I don't see you reusing this pattern choice at the very end of the song, which also has similar sounds as this beginning part.

So I strongly suggest you change them to kd instead

00:05:316 (31,32) - VS 00:16:288 (120,121,122,123) - I really like the idea that you leave blanks in 31,32 to emphasize the bass sounds, but it is the only place where you place breaks here in the beginning section.

No more breaks at 00:16:288 (120,121,122,123) - will loosen the structure and make that blank seems odd overall.

A quick fix is to change 00:16:288 (120,121,122,123) - to only a d at 00:16:288 - and a d at 00:16:631 -, which sounds quite nice as well. Changed 00:16:288 (120,121,122,123) to d.

01:27:602 (676) - There is a very notable cymbal sound here. I personally would map this D and delete 01:27:688 (677) - , but it is up to you. Same for 01:16:631 (581) - It has a cymbal sound actually, but I don't wanna use finisher on the end of any 1/4 stream. It can be expressed in other way, probably. well....

01:28:802 (688,689,690,691,692) - This has very similar sounds as 00:44:916 (350,351,352,353) - but you mapped it differently.

It is fine to have different patterns, but I do think the usage of finishers should be consistent throughout the map, so that it creates a stronger coherence throughout the map.

I suggest changing 01:28:802 (690,691,692,693,694) - to rhythms that are similar to 00:44:916 (352,353,354,355) - Same for 01:17:831 (595,596,597,598,599) - Okay.

02:13:374 (895,896,897,898,899,900,901,902,903) - This part can be better arranged. Changed to dkkdk dk dk for consistency.

I notice this stream while test-playing. It creates a strange feeling because of the non-meta pattern and especially the offbeat 1/4 quintuples, which is not a common one that you used throughout the map. 02:16:116 (919,920,921,922,923,924,925,926,927) - This one however flows better and the melody is represented better because the two 02:16:631 (924,925,926,927) - duplets are currently mapped in such a way that it makes it clear to players.

I strongly suggest you change the pattern at 02:13:374 -

02:24:002 (990) - This is another place where I will consider putting a finisher and remove 02:23:916 (989) - . It is up to you. Same as 01:27:602.

02:32:745 (1060) - 02:33:002 (1063) - Switch these two notes' position? The music is still blurred until 02:32:916 (1062) - and it would make more sense that you map more dons than kats here. So the map is more related with the music in this area. 02:32:745 has slightly different melody as previous one, but 02:33:002 doesn't.

03:21:602 (373) - Should have finisher, just like 03:20:059 (361) - and 03:20:745 (364) - , for consistency. You may want to remove 03:21:516 (372) - as a result. I don't think It's worth to express a cymbal, to ignore some sound.

And the rest are fine.

Please pay attention to the finisher usage throughout the map, I did not point out all of them because those I didn't point out are similar to the ones above-mentioned, but mostly after the calm part in the middle of the song.
Call me back when you have applied my mod

Sorry for the huge delay. I did not intend to ignore your request. Very sorry. It's okay

1. Change all patterns which have similar melody as 01:16:631 for consistency.

Nifty wrote:

I'm here to give the map attention, so here's a few things that could better the map in my opinion

03:26:745 - You can make the a kkkkd pattern to follow the snares here.
03:37:716 - The same thing as above occurs in multiple random section of the map, so I will link each section I think should be changed to a 5 note pattern for these snares:
03:48:688 -
03:59:659 - Fixed all.
04:43:545 - this one could stay the same since the end of the song is decreasing in density and stuff. Removed 04:40:545 and 04:43:288.
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03:49:374 - You could make this a 7 note pattern possibly, right now the absence of a note 03:49:716 - on this vocal threw me off the first time playing through it. Changed to k ddkdk.
04:15:431 - It is unclear what this 1/6 is following, so I suggest removing it. The only thing I think it could follow is this fall effect, but I believe that can be mapped appropriately without the 1/6, a 1/4 dkd would have the same effect without the unnecessary difficulty. Changed.
04:37:716 - 1/8 pp doubles when lol. lol
04:59:145 - feels like this 1/6 counteracts the decrease in density you started in this ending section, the sudden spike in difficulty is kind of confusing and doesn't fit very well, so consider changing this to just 1/4 kkd. If you are worried about similarity, you could make 04:59:916 (1115) - just k d so that the density continues to fall until the end. Since there was the patterns increasing density higher once in the previous part (04:32:916 -), It's no problem in overall, probably.

Other than that, looks pretty good. Inbox me when you've responded to this and let's get it ranked owo

Stefan wrote:

we're living in the future, far ahead of our time

Faputa wrote:

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