Hi , Sylphi~
tbh , I can't mod this flawless map.
Here is only my opinion, might be rejected it all if it's ruin your mapping style.
[ Daybreak Oni]
00:03:945 (20,21,22) - Change to ddk as 00:04:116 have a similar pitch to 00:01:545
00:09:744 (64,65) - Ctrl+G , similar pitch to 00:07:031 (44,45)
00:11:488 - Change to k might be good , since the pitch has been changed in this point.
00:19:374 - Change to d might be better , in order to emphasize 00:19:545
01:41:659 (777,778) - Ctrl+G , I think that 01:41:659 have a similar pitch to 01:41:145
01:49:545 - A strong finisher sounds appear here, should make this note as a finisher note too.
01:50:916 - Maybe k , seems like the pitch is is different from 01:50:745
02:11:916 / 02:12:602 - Maybe add a note here for the variation of patterns.
02:22:631 moves to 02:22:545 - A noticeable pitch is stand on 02:22:545
04:05:488 - A strong finisher sounds appear here, should make this note as a finisher note too. Maybe it have a similar to 03:32:574
04:38:059 - How about emphasize the clap sound here my using d here to make this note become dominating.
04:50:145 / 04:50:516 / 04:52:888 / 04:54:259 - Add k , similar pitch to 04:50:402. And since the music pitch doesn't going down yet like 04:54:859
04:57:431 - Maybe change to k , to emphasize 04:57:602 by using the difference of the color.
Good luck!
tbh , I can't mod this flawless map.
Here is only my opinion, might be rejected it all if it's ruin your mapping style.
[ Daybreak Oni]
00:03:945 (20,21,22) - Change to ddk as 00:04:116 have a similar pitch to 00:01:545
00:09:744 (64,65) - Ctrl+G , similar pitch to 00:07:031 (44,45)
00:11:488 - Change to k might be good , since the pitch has been changed in this point.
00:19:374 - Change to d might be better , in order to emphasize 00:19:545
01:41:659 (777,778) - Ctrl+G , I think that 01:41:659 have a similar pitch to 01:41:145
01:49:545 - A strong finisher sounds appear here, should make this note as a finisher note too.
01:50:916 - Maybe k , seems like the pitch is is different from 01:50:745
02:11:916 / 02:12:602 - Maybe add a note here for the variation of patterns.
02:22:631 moves to 02:22:545 - A noticeable pitch is stand on 02:22:545
04:05:488 - A strong finisher sounds appear here, should make this note as a finisher note too. Maybe it have a similar to 03:32:574
04:38:059 - How about emphasize the clap sound here my using d here to make this note become dominating.
04:50:145 / 04:50:516 / 04:52:888 / 04:54:259 - Add k , similar pitch to 04:50:402. And since the music pitch doesn't going down yet like 04:54:859
04:57:431 - Maybe change to k , to emphasize 04:57:602 by using the difference of the color.
Good luck!