Sorry for being super late, I have too many duties irl...
[Daybreak Oni]
> 00:10:888 - change it to d to give extra impulse on 00:10:802 - which has a strong base hit.
> 00:21:859 - same as above
> 00:42:688 - / 00:43:202 - / 00:43:716 - change to kat for sure to match with the melody 1/2 beat before them. Else, explain the rationale of using don since it is a bit unharmony. 00:42:431 - could be changed to d to emphasize k k afterwards (if you adopt the change)
> 00:44:574 - how about kddkkdk to match the 3/2 melody at the background? That works well with the drumset and improve the flow too!
> 00:47:145 - / 00:49:888 - / .... repetitive usage of dkkdk k is quite boring, let's try alternating it with ddkdk k at the even sequence.
> 01:05:831 - / 01:06:516 - change them to kat since they are absent with vocal 'arh', and the flow could be polished, not just simple dkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkd
> 01:16:631 - / 01:16:888 - imo you can add notes to link up the whole stream as the music fluency continues until 01:18:174 - . 01:16:459 (225) - maybe like:
> 01:27:602 - same as above, try doing some small variations if needed.
> 01:48:345 - / 03:07:888 - refers to 00:42:516 -
> 01:50:574 - / 01:50:916 - change to k to improve general note flow and follow the pitch.
> 02:24:002 - Start doing decrescendo here
> 02:35:145 - add some green timing points gradually with crescendo, the current spinner with 70% volume is way too loud.
> 03:09:088 - refers to the change you made in 01:16:631 -
> 03:09:945 - a small break is required after a long chain of notes. 03:09:945 - k _ _ kd k D would be nice.
! 03:10:631 - I need the variation of dkkdk k in this section as well. You actually did once dkddk k at 03:26:231 - . Try imitating it among the whole part.
> 03:32:231 - keep it as dkkkd since it would be easily recognized by players already. Consistent!
> 03:42:002 - same as 01:16:631 -
> 03:51:774 - the current pattern is very blurred, and the emphases shifting to the vocal are not that wise. 03:51:774 (627) - let's try: [img]https://puu.sh/zUKvQ/5acb820b07.png[img]
Consistent mapping style across with previous Kiai, link up the stream with 1/6 notes in my example.
> 04:13:716 - same as above
> 04:15:774 - another break is needed for a better degration of density. K K D on major melodies here is good to go.
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Basically that's all, other patterns are pretty solid. Gather a few mods after you fix the above major issues, then call me for a re-check. I like this mapping style! Well done!