00:00:418 (1) ~ 00:15:033 (3) - here sounds too loud. can you try to make this moment's volume more more quiet? heres 50% but notes from 00:15:648 (1) ~ 00:44:725 (4) - are 25%
00:15:187 (4) - why is this note only 25%? 00:14:725 (1,2,3) - this 3 notes are 50% 0ㅁ0
00:32:264 (1,2) - there should be a difference between this notes and 00:28:571 (1,2) since you made a difference between 00:30:418 (1,2,3) and 00:26:725 (1,2) i think
00:35:956 (1,2) - ^
00:49:606 (1) - try to use a circle instead of a slider. this slider's end has no special sound
00:55:606 (1) - removing this circle and making spinner in front of this note longer will be more clean owo!
00:56:806 (1) - ^
01:16:306 (5) - nc here because you put hitfinish here too
01:42:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - why did you nc on every 6,4 notes? ncing on every 8 or 4 notes would be
fit
03:10:906 (1) - this spinner's end should be 5%. I think its end has no special sound
03:32:206 (1,2,3) - irregular distance :3
03:52:306 (1) - triple should start from here but heres a kickslider
04:24:331 (1) - how about keeping previous combo color?
05:06:556 (1,2,1,2) - why did you made this section different with 05:01:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) and 05:11:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) ? theres no difference.
06:33:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3) - try to remove this notes and keep break time here. this section is same with previous break time and theres no reason to put notes here i think. if you wanna keep notes please put notes on previous break time either .
07:21:256 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i think making this sliders 3/4 or using circles here is better
07:25:756 (4) - I would make this slider repeat only once because its hard to react to next stream if you keep it repeat twice
07:40:456 (1) - this slider should end on 07:41:056 i think