Nya~
[Normal]
- 00:41:420 (1,3) - maybe wanna avoid this overlap? is visible ingame and looks kinda belh
- 00:50:041 (2,3,4,5) - don't you wanna make these all blanket nicely?
- 01:02:109 (1) - aaaa maybe symmetry this or do the same shape as 01:07:627 (1) - ?
- 01:24:006 (3,4) - idk about trying to combine both of these sounds here, i would delete the 3 honestly cuz the 4 is a lot more interesting and noticeable
// 01:35:041 (3,4) -
- 01:51:937 (3,4,5,1) - i would REALLY recommend following vocals here instead, this switch is really awkward when you switch layers in the middle of a combo that is following a more prominent sound. 02:04:867 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - is a lot better imo
otherwise cool
[Hard]
- 00:25:558 (3) - not really a fan of this starting on a snare and having the synth things on the reverse and end when you mapped the synth pretty actively before - maybe circle + 3/2 slider?
- 00:42:799 (4,5,6) - this doesn't look too nice imo ;w; the 6 makes it all really weird
- 01:29:696 (3) - idk about you but an nc would be cool here imo cuz strong held note // 01:40:730 (3) -
- 02:00:558 (5,6,7) - wouldn't you follow vocals here cuz 01:54:351 (4,5) - does and the synth just gets a bit louder so you can probably change spacing/slider shape to emphasize it instead of using completely different rhythm // 02:06:075 (5,6,7) -
- 02:02:972 (5,6,1) - uu visual spacing
- 02:07:282 (1) - i'd probably just put a circle here, a slider for a breath seems a bit much
- 02:09:351 (7,1) - so close visually ;x
- 02:17:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wouldn't you have a slider-end stack like 02:20:903 (2,3) - in the first pattern or am i imagining things cuz 00:33:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - and 00:38:661 (1,2,3) - all have the thing on the first set of notes
- 02:29:351 (2,3,4,5) - isn't this inconsistent with the first kiai's rhythm? they're basically the same so it would make sense to use a similar rhythm but the first kiai ignores more sounds
- 02:36:247 (6) - pretty sure should nc this
- 02:38:661 (5) - nc may be more appropriate here rather than 02:39:178 (1) -
[Insane]
! - 02:40:141 - this timing line isn't snapped to anything
- 00:27:627 (1,2,3) - :eyes:
https://puu.sh/wslpW/436e341cc3.png- 00:33:144 (1) - rip emphasissssss
- 00:38:834 (2,1) - stack 1 with 2's tail?
- 00:47:972 (5) - i would make these two circles to be consistent with the active rhythm you used at 00:47:282 (2,3) - and a lot of other places
- 01:15:903 (5) - missing a drum hitsound
- 01:33:661 (5) - nc here might be appropriate
- 02:22:799 (1,2,3,4) - um hitsounds what
- 02:33:834 (1,3,4) - visually too close imo ;x
- 02:37:799 (3,5) - ^
- 02:38:661 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - didn't wanna hitsound this or something? o-o
- 02:58:661 (1,3,1) - equalizing this spacing would be nice
https://puu.sh/wsmoE/c873b1012a.png- 03:04:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not exactly a fan of the 90 degree flow into back and forths for the same sounds, i think one type of flow works for the repetitive sound so using two doesn't represent the sounds as well imo
[Shooting Star]
- 00:13:834 (4) - feels like should also be curved since no song change and would fit better in the pattern
- 00:15:903 (3,4,5,6,1) - would look way nicer as an actual star
https://puu.sh/wsmuz/35efb38f50.png- 00:29:006 (2,3) - nice stack
- 00:47:972 (5) - same as what i said in insane - two circles would fit the usage of the previous active rhythm mapped to these same sounds
- 00:48:316 (1,2) - why not use the drum finish for these too? (or just the same hitsound pattern you were using so far)
- 01:15:903 (5) - hmmm maybe nc?
- 01:18:661 (5) - ^
- 01:21:592 (2,3,1) - visually spacing these the same would look nicer
- 01:32:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - if you moved this whole pattern to the right of the screen more you could fit 01:34:523 (9) - underneath 01:34:006 (7) - to complete it
https://puu.sh/wsmF0/745ce2332c.png- 02:05:041 (4) - blanket the orb of the bg
https://puu.sh/wsmFY/5df2bd2512.png (im kidding)
- 02:15:213 (3) - having the last one be similar to the first two but not as curved would fit better imo like this maybe
https://puu.sh/wsmJj/f0c9b51dfb.png- 03:09:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - disagree with the flow change here cuz the sound is exactly the same as before, what would fit more is just continuing the back and forths at 03:07:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Good luck!!!