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[Final Destination]
00:33:156 (33156|3,33787|3) - Move to col 2? the jack doesn't fit if you combine it with 00:34:103 -
00:38:366 (38366|0,38445|1,38524|0) - Try 2-1-2 here? the col 1 jack felt too excessive here. even if you try to runningmen the pattern, the right hand jack at 00:40:734 - felt much lighter
00:56:998 - I really don't recommend the burst you make at this part, the trill is around 380 bpm here, even if for highest diff, for myself it really drops me from S to A tier, i think you can still use the burst you did before and be fine. you may apply till 00:59:208 -
01:31:892 - although you may want to focus the secondary drum with jumptrill, i still think you can sort of mix the triple for the finish sound so it would have some sort of twist mix interesting things in, try
https://puu.sh/ywYQ7/f7bc6d2a4d.jpg01:42:156 (102156|0,102313|0,102392|1,102471|0,102550|1,102629|0,102787|0,102945|0) - Well since you mixed the anchor with the one hand trill, think you can nerf the OH trill so that the anchor isn't too nasty to hit there.
01:44:524 - I'm not sure bout whether the burst play nice here or not, for me it's kinda shocking and really excessive, it would be nice if you nerf here a bit.
[CS' Another]
00:39:945 (39945|3) - Move to col 3 here? the 4 note col 4 anchor felt awkward.
00:43:024 - I kinda have suggestion around this part, how about
http://puu.sh/ywZpd/2d8d3b72b9.jpg , it felt much nicer to play
00:51:866 (51866|3) - This note doesn't feel sync if combined with the trill at 00:51:629 (51629|2,51708|3,51787|2) - due to their sound differences. I would recommend something like
http://puu.sh/ywZtw/4470ff1668.png00:54:313 (54313|3) - it would play nicer if you move to col 2 here, it would require less alternation to hit each burst part around the tricky part.
01:34:340 (94340|2,94498|2,94656|2,94813|2,94971|2,95129|2,95287|2) - Kinda not sure bout this, the anchor cause the pattern too excessive to hit around the jumpstream, nerf it would be really nice.
01:37:261 (97261|3,97419|3,97577|3,97734|3,97892|3,98050|3,98208|3,98366|3,98524|3) - This too, i'm assuming because of the lot of usage in the OH trill causes this, think you can nerf it without break the pattern.
01:41:287 (101287|1,101366|0,101445|1) - Try 1-2-1? for the handstream balance here.
[KK Envy with 32 ssr cs]
00:50:524 - 00:54:313 - 00:58:103 - these 3 part is the nice part to be made 1/4 here, since the 1/8 sound is much longer than usual, it would be balancing the spread more if you make it 1/4.
01:00:550 - you should still map this one i think, it's too noticeable to be ignored.
01:44:208 - I'm not the one that normally say this, but the hyper and another diff gap is too big to be ignored for me, 1/1 long note to non-stop 1/6 jumpstream is too big even for me, i recommend you to make constant 1/3 in this section to accomodate that.
[Normal]
00:37:261 - You can make additional LN or 1/2 pattern here for the 1/4 a bit for the spread.
00:56:998 - 00:57:313 - 00:57:629 - 00:58:892 - 00:59:208 - 00:59:524 - You can fit in the LN for the variation and 1/4 emphasizing, i think it would be nice.
01:31:892 - Well i really recommend you to make 1/2 pattern here, i'm kinda worry if the gap becoming too big here.
01:43:261 - 01:43:577 - 01:43:892 - Try make the note double for each section here to accomodate the music that getting even more intense here?
01:47:050 - Well, the same as 01:31:892 - , try make
https://puu.sh/yx08k/adf9d0a6f5.png01:54:629 - The same again as before.
[Easy]
00:45:471 - Considering there's so much of the music going on, it felt like really underwhelming around here. having constant 1/1 note here will be nice.
00:53:366 - it is the same here
01:17:998 - Well, for the kiai here , every 1/1 i think you can add note for spread purpose again here.
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