Hi, here to offering some suggestions
Nice song and i love your mapping style <3
Easy
00:05:779 (1,2) - Did you copy paste sliders? they don't look right maybe copy paste the first slider over
00:16:505 (1,2) - Doesn't look good maybe try this http://puu.sh/lNkCJ/83f4ab3122.jpg
00:22:538 (2,3) - Is this DS?
00:25:890 (6,7) - DS?
00:33:935 (3) - I would raise this note a bit for so that the 2 going into three is smoother
00:35:276 (4,5) - DS
00:37:957 (7) - check DS
00:39:298 (9,10) - DS again
00:51:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try playing around with the pattern this is kinda bland
01:04:773 (4,5) - Would make these parallel to the vertical axis
02:06:449 (13) - Raise this so that 11,12,13 make a straight line
The spacing in this difficulty is kinda iffy, sometimes its DS 1.0 and sometimes its not. For an easy diff i would try and keep the DS the same.
00:16:505 (1,2) - Doesn't look good maybe try this http://puu.sh/lNkCJ/83f4ab3122.jpg
00:22:538 (2,3) - Is this DS?
00:25:890 (6,7) - DS?
00:33:935 (3) - I would raise this note a bit for so that the 2 going into three is smoother
00:35:276 (4,5) - DS
00:37:957 (7) - check DS
00:39:298 (9,10) - DS again
00:51:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - Try playing around with the pattern this is kinda bland
01:04:773 (4,5) - Would make these parallel to the vertical axis
02:06:449 (13) - Raise this so that 11,12,13 make a straight line
The spacing in this difficulty is kinda iffy, sometimes its DS 1.0 and sometimes its not. For an easy diff i would try and keep the DS the same.
Normal
00:01:421 (4,5,6,7) - try and keep the zigzag from falling http://puu.sh/lNlhb/f69c1b4ea3.jpg this is better
00:17:846 (5,6,7,8) - Same asbove except this one is rising, i think it would look better as a consistent zigzag that runs parallel to the horizontal axis
00:25:220 (8,9) - Spacing
02:12:147 (7,8,9,10) - The 10 in this square is too low
02:15:164 (4) - Raise this abit
00:17:846 (5,6,7,8) - Same asbove except this one is rising, i think it would look better as a consistent zigzag that runs parallel to the horizontal axis
00:25:220 (8,9) - Spacing
02:12:147 (7,8,9,10) - The 10 in this square is too low
02:15:164 (4) - Raise this abit
Hard
00:19:186 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here could be better, 2,3 are closer than the rest for no reason
00:27:902 (5,6) - why is this jump so much larger than the last?
00:36:281 (5) - http://puu.sh/lNlGc/6ee17fd7a7.jpg Maybe try this
00:51:365 (1) - http://puu.sh/lNlMh/1dd98625eb.jpg try this
01:08:460 (6) - I would give this one more repeat
01:14:159 (12) - extend to next white
01:16:505 (5) - Shorten this slider from white to previous red and add a long slider on the white
01:34:270 (1,2) - End these on whites
01:35:611 (3) - End on the red
01:35:946 (4) - Make the size of the slider bigger like http://puu.sh/lNm0K/d015b317e2.jpg
02:11:477 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing
02:14:159 (1,2,3) - Try and straighten this up
02:16:840 (9,10,11) - spacing
00:27:902 (5,6) - why is this jump so much larger than the last?
00:36:281 (5) - http://puu.sh/lNlGc/6ee17fd7a7.jpg Maybe try this
00:51:365 (1) - http://puu.sh/lNlMh/1dd98625eb.jpg try this
01:08:460 (6) - I would give this one more repeat
01:14:159 (12) - extend to next white
01:16:505 (5) - Shorten this slider from white to previous red and add a long slider on the white
01:34:270 (1,2) - End these on whites
01:35:611 (3) - End on the red
01:35:946 (4) - Make the size of the slider bigger like http://puu.sh/lNm0K/d015b317e2.jpg
02:11:477 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing
02:14:159 (1,2,3) - Try and straighten this up
02:16:840 (9,10,11) - spacing
Nice song and i love your mapping style <3