Daelin1337 wrote:

У тебя неправильный тайминг. Я советую расставить красные линии так:
1) бпм114, оффсет168
2) бпм114, оффсет51661
3)бпм114, оффсет151738
4)бпм114, оффсет212170
5)бпм114, оффсет212349
6)бпм114, оффсет215927
7)бпм114, оффсет219046
8)бпм114, оффсет220071
9)бпм114, оффсет224543
10)бпм114, оффсет233296

Удачи в дальнейшем продвижении мапсета!

Пасип

1. Fix the Background Image. Its not placed.
2. 00:01:220 (5) - could be a 1/4 reverse slider for fit the beat and pad sound.
3. 00:02:799 (1) - same ^^
4. 00:04:773 (8) - move to 00:04:904 -
5. 00:11:089 (9,10,11,12) - make the flow straigh or curve it properly to looks fine
6. 00:17:799 (2) - remove the overlap
7. 00:19:378 (7,8,9) - curve it in parallel, not aleatory like that actualy is
8. 00:22:273 (3) - remove the overlap
9. 00:23:589 (7) - ^same
10. 00:25:167 (4) - u are ending the slider at a strong beat that would be clickable
11. 00:25:431 - to 00:42:273 (11) - u are following a rhythm that dont fit the sound, i suggest to u remake this part and follow specialy the pad sound
12. 00:45:825 (8,1) - i suggest u make it the inverse, like give large space from the last slider to the circle and a short space of the circle to the slider or stake the circles in the sliders. Examples:slider-longspace-circle-shortspace-slider / Circle Stacked at slider
13. 00:46:483 (2,3,4) - this flow is realy bad, try make it better
14. 00:51:220 (4,5,6,1) - make the spacement the inverse, actualy ure reducing the spacement, make increasing the spacement
15. 00:53:766 (9) - use 1x snap distance and make it perfect parallel with 00:53:239 (7) -
16. 00:54:424 (10) - use 1x snap distance
17. 00:57:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use 1/8 reverse sliders is better than that
18. 01:00:082 (1) - to 01:33:108 (12) - u made totaly random distances, Pls remake everything using fixed distances for every sound. some partterns are overlapped and some blankets off position.
19. 02:05:871 (3) - use the blanket correctly
20. 02:09:555 (1) - too close to the blanket
21. 02:12:713 (9) - copy the shape from 02:12:187 (8) -
22. 02:17:976 (2) - improve the blanket
23. 02:21:660 (1) - too close from the previous
24. 02:22:187 (2) - ^^same
25. 02:22:713 (3) - use the blanket
26. 02:23:239 (4) - fix the blanket
27. 02:24:818 (7) - ^^same
28. 02:31:738 (2) - stack correctly
29. 02:45:290 (11) - use the blanket
30. 02:45:948 (3) - remove the overlap
31. 02:53:316 (9) - same ^^
32. 02:56:474 (10) - ^^same
33. 02:59:632 (1) - use the blanket
34. 03:12:659 (1,2) - remove the overlaps
35. 03:17:527 (9) - use 1x distance
36. 03:19:501 (6) - overlap
37. 03:20:290 (8,9,10,11) - weird flow
38. 03:21:080 (12) - fix the blanket
39. 03:25:816 (6) - same ^~
40. 03:27:395 (12) - decide between blanket or a straight flow
41. 03:29:501 (9) - fix the blanket
42. 03:29:632 (10) - remove the overlap
43. 03:30:159 (13) - use the blanket
44. 03:38:163 (10) - seems off to the timming
45. 03:41:913 (8) - almost overlapped
46. 03:47:700 (5) - use 1,1 x distance
47. 03:49:279 (1) - move to the blanket
48. 03:49:806 (3) - overlapped
49. 03:50:858 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - WTF?
50. 03:56:059 (5) - fix the blanket
51. 04:10:796 (10) - fix the blanket
52. 04:12:374 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - WTF again
53. 04:20:269 (8) - overlapped
54. 04:25:269 (7) - stack correctly at x404 y:224
55. 04:26:980 (2) - fix the blanket
56. 04:27:111 (3) - remove the overllap
57. 04:28:164 (8) - same ^^
58. 04:42:111 (9) - almost overlap
59. 04:48:164 (1) - remove the overlap
60. 04:49:611 (6) - ^^same
61. 04:55:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fix the hits to the timming
62. 05:06:980 (1) - remove the overlap

1. 00:25:036 - add circle
2. 00:25:694 (6) - Finish the slider at 00:25:957 -
3. 00:25:694 (6,7) - either increase the distance between these two or put a circle at 00:26:089 -
4. 00:30:825 (11) - start this slider from the red tick ~ 00:30:957 - and finish it at 00:31:220 - and put a circle here maybe 00:31:352 -
5. 00:48:457 (8) - remove this circle
6. 00:48:983 (10) - ^
7. 00:50:167 (2) - ^
8. 00:49:904 (1) - finish this slider at 00:50:167 -
9. 00:57:976 - use 1/8 snap sliders like
   
10. 01:22:713 (1,2) - increase distance between these
11. some of the combos are really long .. like here 01:42:187 - and here 01:45:082 - , consider changing colors more often
12. 03:44:413 (4) - this circle is not necessary , i recommend u remove it
13. 03:50:858 - use 1/8 snap sliders here aswell like before http://puu.sh/oengE/3c2957eb9e.jpg
14. 04:55:401 - the 1/6 stream doesnt even match the song , use 1/4 jumps instead

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Here we go

Get Up! :

1. 00:25:036 - add circle
2. 00:25:694 (6) - Finish the slider at 00:25:957 -
3. 00:25:694 (6,7) - either increase the distance between these two or put a circle at 00:26:089 -
4. 00:30:825 (11) - start this slider from the red tick ~ 00:30:957 - and finish it at 00:31:220 - and put a circle here maybe 00:31:352 -
5. 00:48:457 (8) - remove this circle
6. 00:48:983 (10) - ^
7. 00:50:167 (2) - ^
8. 00:49:904 (1) - finish this slider at 00:50:167 -
9. 00:57:976 - use 1/8 snap sliders like
   
10. 01:22:713 (1,2) - increase distance between these
11. some of the combos are really long .. like here 01:42:187 - and here 01:45:082 - , consider changing colors more often
12. 03:44:413 (4) - this circle is not necessary , i recommend u remove it
13. 03:50:858 - use 1/8 snap sliders here aswell like before http://puu.sh/oengE/3c2957eb9e.jpg
14. 04:55:401 - the 1/6 stream doesnt even match the song , use 1/4 jumps instead

thats all from me . Good luck :>