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00:09:945 (9945|3) - better move to col 3 to avoid too many minijack at col 4
- I do not think change this part is required
00:13:581 (13581|2) - move to col 4 to avoid triple jack at col 3- ok
00:14:642 (14642|1,14793|2) - move to col 3 and col 1 to also avoid triple jack here.- ok
00:27:369 (27369|3) - should be at col 3 here, because you usually use double jack at 00:25:096 - , but at 00:27:369 - you use triple jack, which is inconsistent.- ok! change!
00:29:793 - why the jack here is much more compared with 00:28:278 - ? i think you should make 00:30:400 (30400|0,30551|2) - at col 3 and col 2 instead.- ok
00:32:672 (32672|0,32824|0,32975|0) - quite sure this one is not intended, cause you don't use this triple jack at 00:35:248 - , better make 00:32:975 (32975|0,33127|1) - at col 2 and col 1 instead.- 00:32:975 (32975|0) - move to the 3col
00:36:460 (36460|1,36763|0) - make these col 1 and col 2 to avoid triple jack at 00:36:157 (36157|1,36309|1,36460|1) -- ok..
00:39:187 - how (a)bout try https://puu.sh/zc7mi/fb58572c17.png , its better pattern here.- yeap change
00:40:551 - I think having repeated pattern here is awkward, considering the sound is definitely isn't the same for each instances, how about try https://puu.sh/zc7qA/e82e32cb13.png instead- I like this repeating patterns, but I follow your opinion.
00:48:884 - Should have another LN here, try https://puu.sh/zc7sN/a033639122.png- it's better good, ok!
00:55:096 (55096|1,55096|2,55248|0) - try making [12] 2 for more variation- yeap
00:57:218 (57218|2) - better move to col 1 so that the vocal is more emphasized.- ok, and 00:58:430 - here is same too change
01:00:703 (60703|1) - move to col 1 so the pattern would be more neater here.- ok
01:01:006 - i believe this is kinda overchorded when we compared with how you patterned at 01:13:430 - , at 01:13:430 - has much louder sound, but the density is less compared with 01:01:006 - , so i suggest to reduce the amount of chord you have, like https://puu.sh/zc7D9/186daf0546.png- I mapped it mainly the vocals and drum
01:01:006 - (Ge)(3 note) 01:01:309 - (Te)(3 note) 01:01:460 - (E)(4 note) 01:01:763 - (Ko)(4 note) 01:02:218 - (O)(4 note)
i'm not think believe this is kinda overchorded
i think a little less overchorded
01:07:218 - this one also doesn't fit to have repeated pattern, try https://puu.sh/zc7EN/393d79b3a4.png- Change
01:18:581 - hmm, i need to say something bout this, the guitar snap is actually not 1/4, it has unstable snap which is dangerous to map, since the snap ruling is to be accurate with the sound, so i suggest you to just map with LN similar with fontes' Hard.- i am agree your mind. this guitar sound snap is not 1/4
but i think that this note expressed the sound of the guitar sufficiently.
I would like to keep it like this.
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00:13:884 (13884|3,16309|0) - Actually, these 2 sound has really loud high pitch synth like 00:13:430 (13430|3,15854|2) - , i recommend you change both of them into 1/2 LN.- Your words are right too
But i want to give it a 'cutting' feel to player and
actually, the tone is also short on the guitar.
00:20:854 - Pattern here kinda a bit awkward here, try https://puu.sh/zc87I/7ba8bbbf0d.jpg- ok
00:31:612 (31612|0,31612|1) - better switch column between the LN and the note so the structure is better.- ok, also other pattern too same change
00:39:945 (39945|2,40096|3) - make these 4-3 so the pattern is more balanced.- ok, change
00:42:369 (42369|1,42521|0) - mini trill seems unnecessary here, move these to col 3 and col 2.- actually your right, i see. Thank you Xd
00:52:369 (52369|0) - move to col 2 so its much more neater.- I would like to use 1col and 4col notes to express drum,
so change 00:51:915 (51915|1,52066|0) - this 2col, 1col notes -> 1col, 2col note
00:52:824 (52824|3,53127|0) - make these col 1 and col 3 so the pattern would be neater too.- I dont want long notes from 00: 52: 824 - and 00: 53: 581 (53581 | 2) to be on the same line.
Change some pattern
01:11:309 - kinda too heavy on left side, try https://puu.sh/zc8eU/b695f1a410.png- i do move right 1col 2col -> 2col 3col
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