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Sorry for the late mod.
General
wiki:Pika's Advanced
Agatsu's Hard
Shira's Light Insane
Insane
WORSTPOLACKEU's Insane
Yamicchi's Insane
Linada's Extra
Hope this helps.
Good luck!
Sorry for the late mod.
General
- Perhaps add the opening video of the anime, as most tv-size maps do that.
- 00:08:796 (4) - This slider isn't parallel to the slider before. An easy way to fix this would be copy-and-pasting the slider before and scale it by 0.5. This way it'll be the same slider shape, just smaller in length.
- 00:10:053 (4) - I think this is better if it's a copy-and-pasted slider of 00:09:515 (2) - that is flipped vertically.
- 00:25:503 (2) - Perhaps make this the same as before since they both sound similar.
- 00:04:147 - Add circle as to emphasize the strong sound on the red tick.
- 00:45:981 (4) - Perhaps make this as 2 circles instead as the white tick the slider ends at has a strong sound and that it'll be a symmetry to 00:45:442 (2) - .
- 00:13:824 (2,3) - A higher spacing here since circle 3 is a strong sound. Right now, it seems as if it's the same intensity as before.
- 00:20:291 (8) - Perhaps make this as two circles instead as the sound in the slider's end is similar to the head and 00:19:752 (5,6,7) - .
- 00:53:885 (1,2) - I think the spacing here is just lacking. Both sounds are strong yet the spacing is shorter than the previous jump. The spacing should be higher.
- 00:54:603 (1) - Perhaps make this as a 1/4 slider since there's a sound on the blue tick.
- 00:58:017 (1,3) - Perhaps make these as a blanket to 00:56:938 (2,3) - than overlapping them. I think it's better as 00:57:657 (4,2) - is a blanket, not overlap. Of course this means adjusting later objects, hopefully it's not hard.
- 01:04:663 (2,3) - Consistent in blanket distance would be preferable here. Look more organize.
- Also, perhaps reverse them? No reason, I just think it looks nicer and flow better. You don’t have to follow this if you don't want. x)
- 01:18:136 (1,3) - Perhaps make these as the same slider just longer. Easy way would be copying one slider and multiply/divide them. For example, you can just copy the 1/1 slider and scale it by 0.5x to make it the same slide just 1/2.
- 00:06:280 (1,3) - Just a suggestion, but perhaps make the second slider a copy and flipped horizontally of the first slider. Since it seems you made them to look similar, why not do this instead so that they'll be perfectly the same?
- 00:08:974 (8) - Perhaps make the curve to flow down instead of up? Just a suggestion, you can ignore this.
- 00:09:154 (1,5,6) - I think it's neater if they're not overlapping. Overlapping them just kind of give the vibes of "no spaces left".
- 00:19:393 (2,3,4) - I think it's better if the flow of the the triple here is the same as 00:19:393 (2,6) - . Picture if it makes no sense: https://i.gyazo.com/ffb14c06b3258803a23 ... a7f45f.png
- 00:25:501 (1,2,3) - A suggestion, but perhaps you can make this triple move to the right instead of left as the sound here sounds more on the right channel than left.
- 00:27:298 (4,3) - Overlap suggestion.
- 00:39:334 (1,2) - There's a wind/brass (idk) instrument on the first four 1/2 beat. I think it's better if you emphasize those as it's different than 00:37:897 (1,2) - . This one has this particular instrument while the one before doesn't.
- 00:49:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I find it quite weird that the rest are expansion from previous placement, while 00:49:753 (3,6) - aren't. I think it's better if they're the same as right now 00:50:292 (6) - looks randomly placed.
- 01:01:250 (2) - Instead of this looking random, why not make this the center of the triangle or 01:01:969 (7,8) - ?
- What's up with the weird overlaps on the beginning? Personally, if there's no purpose for overlapping I consider it as messy. Perhaps there is, but I don't grasp it. Anyway, something like 00:03:406 (1,4) - and 00:04:147 (3,1) - overlaps look unnecessary and can be easily avoided. 00:08:614 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - has a lot of overlapping. I can understand 00:08:974 (6,2,5) - and other similar parts, but 00:08:614 (4,5,1) - overlaps look random.
- 00:05:201 (2) - I think two circles would suit this better as they are similar to 00:05:560 (3,4) - but are emphasize differently.
- 00:19:931 (3,4) - I think it's nicer if (3) overlaps with 00:19:033 (5) - end.
- 00:33:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps make it like this so that the vocals are emphasize too: https://i.gyazo.com/f0d01b809ab5f792c6f ... bb1319.png
- 00:39:514 (1,5) - Perhaps blanket this.
- 00:59:633 - I think you should emphasize this strong sound rather than understate it with the slider end.
- 01:06:190 - There's a sound here so the streams should last two beats without any 1/2 gap in it.
- 01:19:394 - A circle here as there's a vocal and a drum sound.
- 00:01:071 (2,3) - I think it's better if both of these are spaced from the blanket the same.
- 00:03:407 (1) - I think it's better if you don't use red points as they make the slider body to have those sharp edges. The second red point is not needed in this case. Unless it's intended, you can ignore this.
- 00:07:716 (1,3,5) - These have strong sounds in them, so subjectively the pattern of it gradually increase in spacing wouldn't work. I think it's better if the increase in spacing of to strong and weak sounds are different and not constant. The increase of spacing on weak sound can be made almost unrecognizable, while the strong one is bluntly obvious.
- 01:17:417 (1) - How about making this slider slower and the next one faster with the third one being the same as currently. I think it's better as the two 1/2 sliders sound similar and have that hold-and-release effect. (Hope this make sense lol)
- 01:18:137 (1,2,3) - Perhaps align them in a straight line.
- 01:27:298 (5) - I think this circle could use more spacing as it looks similar to 01:26:759 (1,2) - . (5) is much stronger than (2), so it should be more spaced to emphasize it. Or you can do the other way around which is shortening the spacing of (2).
- 00:04:483 (4) - I think stacking this with circle (3) is more suitable as this circle doesn't have the brass sound while the rest do. Also spacing wise, it'll be weird as it's more spaced than 00:03:968 (1,2) - .
- 00:04:663 (1) - The flow from the last object to this circle is uncomfortable with the slider body changing the circular flow.
- 00:06:818 (2) - I don't think this circle is needed as there's no sound and the spacing hints player about the possibility of a 1/1 gap.
- 00:12:567 (3) - There's a really strong sound here, so it's weird for it not to be emphasize. You could use a 1/2 slider there as the sound is almost similar to 00:12:567 (3) -
- 00:20:202 (3) - This isn't necessary as there's no sound. It also makes 00:19:393 (2,3,4) - not really stand out as they are mapped similar.
- 00:24:783 (1,2,3) - Kinda weird that this one is stacked while the rest isn't. Since 00:24:783 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - sounds the same, I think the mapping should to.
- 00:27:657 (1) - I think this should be spaced more as the spacing of 00:27:477 (5,1) - looks similar to 00:27:298 (4,5) - .
- 00:29:992 (3,4) - I think the spacing here is a bit much. Reducing it would make a fair comparison to the spacing of 00:30:352 (5,1) - .
- 00:39:334 (1,2) - There's a wind instrument playing on the first four 1/2 beat. Emphasizing them would be better as it stands out well and to make it different than 00:37:897 (1,2) - .
- 00:42:208 (1,2) - ^
- 00:51:549 (2) - This would be better if it's stacked to the circle before or deleted as the sound doesn't have the brass instrument like the rest. Both would show that the sound here isn't important and to make the others stand out.
- 00:55:501 (3) - Reverse select this would make it flow better. Since it's not a NC or have a strong sound, I don't think it needs to break circular flow.
- 01:22:986 (1) - Slider end should be on the red tick.
- 01:23:705 (2) - Circle here isn't necessary as there's the lack of instruments here and you seem to not map to the vocal. So this circle is out of place.
Good luck!