No reply mean fixed!~Noffy wrote:
Hi~ Soontm mod from my queue as requested!
[Shogun's Normal]
Generally, I think some parts of your difficulty suffer from having too many 1/2s, at this spacing it gets rather clustered together and can make the map harder to read and follow. i just follow instruments, rhythm and vocals LUL
00:08:614 (3) - I think this should be just a circle on the 00:08:794 - as here the sudden change to drums is quite unexpected. especially when the similar ones at 00:05:919 (5) - weren't mapped. i added a 1/2 slider here 00:05:919 (5)
00:09:153 (1) - This combo, i think you're trying too hard to follow both the wind instrument and the drums, and as a result it makes the rhythm a bit dense and hard to follow for a beginner level :c. I personally suggest sticking to the wind tbh i don't see a problem at this pattern, its sound good and it's understandable (I asked to several people to play it and there was no problem)
00:12:925 (2) - Is this starting on the deeper sound? it's relatively pretty hard to hear. Maybe delete this and make 00:12:027 (1) - a reverse slider? I think that could fit the song better. but here 00:12:925 - there is a drum so i wanted to emphasize it
00:15:261 (2,3,4) - I can't really tell what this is following.. It felt like the vocals, but in that case, 3 should've been at 00:16:159 - instead.
>00:21:189 (2,3,4) - ^ though in this case it's more obvious and (4) feels like it's too early.
00:17:416 (7) - Possibly change to a circle so there's a bit of a pause before the next combo? there is a drum on the red tick, if i put just a cirlce it's sound off..
>00:23:165 (7) - ^ ^
00:19:392 (5,6,7) - This is the prime example of what I mentioned at the start. With the low sv and low spacing, having constant 1/2 sliders like this does not really work well. Consider this rhythm instead -> http://puu.sh/x6cx2/ed8ea715a4.jpg It follows the same instrument you do, while making things more spaced out and easier to follow. link doesn't work but i changed with 2 sliders renverse for emphasis instruments
00:24:602 (3,4,5) - Again, way too much 1/2 for the settings you're using. I honestly feel this results in this difficulty being harder to play than the advanced >_>; but its the music, its not my fault i just emphasize important sounds ;w;
Map is a lot better after this part, good job ^^b
00:55:861 (3,5) - stack is a bit off. not for me
01:04:663 (2) - Doesn't really start on anything particularly obvious? Maybe have a circle at 01:04:843 - instead, and possibly stack it on (3)! o: 01:04:663 - this sound :/
01:05:741 (4,5) - Again, muddling what you're following for this difficulty level by simply doing a bit too much at once. I think a 1/1 rhythm could work pretty well here.. noo there are important sound which need to be emphasize like 01:05:741 - and 01:06:100 - should be clickable for drums ~
01:21:010 (1,2,3,4) - HERE, the way you mapped it works really well cause it fits with the song reaching its climax. good \o/! Thanks!~
good luck! ^^
Thanks for modding!~
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osu file format v14
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Version:Shogun's Normal
Source:響け!ユーフォニアム
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