A bubble already? owo Time for a full mod!
[General]*Wowww that's a long title:
http://puu.sh/Ceh Perhaps get rid of "(I Would Die For You)" and put that in tags instead? (minus the parenthesis, of course)
*I don't think that "Spyro" is needed in tags since it's already in the source.
*Source should be capitalized "Spyro: Dawn
of the Dragon". Also, since it's actually "The Legend of Spyro", perhaps add "legend" to tags?
*Scorebar-colour isn't centered on scorebar-background correctly:
http://puu.sh/Ceu*You only need one scorebar-colour if it's not an animated one. So, remove three of them and keep one as just "scorebar-colour" without a number on the end.
*Some of the numbers have white edges around the top/bottom, but it's not that big a deal.
*Expected all of the difficulties to end at the same place that "Guide You Home" does.
[Friends]*How about lowering Drain/OD/AR one tick each?
*Slider velocity is much better than last time.
*Distance spacing is still a bit higher than I'd expect for an Easy. It looks like you used ~1.07, but I'd like to see something like 0.9 here. Plus, it looks like the next diff has nearly the same distance spacing, thus this one should have closer spacing than it.
01:00:570 (1,2,3,4,1) - Accelerated spacing on an Easy? oxo
01:11:445 (5) - I really recommend avoiding short/repeating sliders like these on Easy diffs. They can be pretty confusing.
01:38:070 (4) - Even worse since it repeats on the red tick instead of the white.
01:54:945 (4) - This one isn't as bad with only two repeats, though, I suppose.
02:05:445 - I always think it's awkward to have kiai without a note to accompany it. How about adding a note here?
02:32:632 - Raise the volume of this section. It's much too quiet. =x
02:40:320 (2,3) - Even though it's the same rhythm as the previous slider, it's still a bit confusing. I'd make this a slider as well.
02:54:195 (2) - End isn't snapped right.
03:08:445 - Kiai would look better starting here (and with a note, of course).
[TraceTheKriken's Allies]*How about lowering Drain/OD/AR one tick each?
01:06:570 (8) - The clap on the end of this sounds really awkward. How about a finish instead?
02:01:320 (1) - Expected this to be moved back to the red tick and lengthened.
02:14:070 (8) - same finish suggestion
02:25:882 (1) - A bit too long for a spinner, imo. Also, why does kiai end before the spinner does? (And where is the hitsound?)
02:39:195 (1) - expected a finish
02:50:820 (1) - Too far from the end of the spinner. If the note was in the center (or close to it) then it would be much better.
03:06:757 (1,2,1) - A bit too confusing for a normal. If you want to keep the repeating slider, though, you could try removing the two single notes and extend the slider.
03:17:070 (8) - finish the end?
03:23:820 (1,2) - spacing? 2 is too close to 1
03:35:820 (2) - not snapped right
03:36:945 (3) - looks like this one isn't either
03:38:445 (3) - ^
03:51:195 (4) - Decided to make this symmetrical for you. In the editor, go to File->Open .osu in notepad. Hit ctrl-f and find "230445" (that's the ms time for note 2). Delete the following three lines:
408,120,230445,1,0
408,120,230820,1,0
480,160,231195,2,0,B|496:336|344:376|200:384|8:368|40:168|40:168,2,660and replace them with the following three:
408,128,230445,1,0
408,128,230820,1,0
480,176,231195,2,0,B|460:376|256:440|52:376|32:176,2,660Then save, close the notepad file, and reopen your difficulty to see the changes. (2) and (3) were up too high and I completely remade (4).
03:56:820 (2,3,4) - (nazi) spacing is a bit inconsistent between these
04:00:288 (1) - move to the red tick and shorten
[Alliance]*Lower difficulty settings than the last map? Raise drain 2 ticks, AR 1 tick, and OD 1 tick (that should be a bit better, so easy is 2/2/2, normal is 4/4/4, hard is 5/6/5, and insane is 7/7/7).
00:46:695 (5) - Both of the repeats are partially covered by the hitbursts (100/300s) from the previous notes. Not unrankable, but slightly hidden/confusing.
02:12:945 (4,5,6,7,8) - A bit unexpected/confusing
02:27:945 (1) - Kinda long, and also 02:32:632 (1) being only half a beat after the end of the spinner is too difficult.
02:32:632 - Raise the volume of this section. It's much too quiet. =x
02:55:320 (1,2) - spacing? (2) looks like it's only half a beat away instead of a whole white tick.
03:14:445 (7,8,9,10,1) - Clustered and hard to read.
03:24:195 (1) - Again, try to avoid notes only half a beat after a spinner. It's fine on Insane, but not really expected in here.
03:33:570 (1) - move back to the red tick and extend.
03:51:007 (1) - move to the white tick and shorten.
03:53:445 - Why are these notes soft instead of normal?
*Overall, the spacing is a bit too large for a "Hard", but it would be a bit harsh to ask you to re-distance the entire map at this stage...
[Guide You Home]*Better than the last difficulty, at least.
00:38:820 (6,1,2) - Spacing? 1 is much too close to 6.
01:30:570 - This section is a bit too quiet.
04:01:320 - Much too quiet in here
04:09:195 (1) - Sounds kinda awkward since the bpm is slowing down and the sliderticks are really off. Maybe replace this with a spinner?
04:12:195 (1) - Expected this to be much longer, maybe to 04:15:945?
Not bad for your first map, but this could still use quite a bit of improvement. However, I'm not sure how much you'll be able to improve this since you'll be gone once January comes. Hopefuly this mod helps, though!
