_underjoy wrote:
Pew's Another01:15:287 (75287|0,76699|6) - I'd remove these LNs, as this part is quite dense and I would rather focus in chordtrilling rather than LNs... they're not that important here. Plus they boost the SR a little don't they
01:17:758 - you didn't follow LN here. removed, and make it spread after. nice point
02:03:287 (123287|6,123287|2,123463|2,123463|6,123993|4,123993|0,124169|4,124169|0) - Are these LNs used for percussion? I don't think this idea has much sense here, I'd rather make them normal notes. it's similar sounds before , i don't mind to change it to normal note.
02:08:934 - It seems there's a snapping mistake here. You mapped this differently than previous notes and it makes no sense to me. Fix this or explain why. it's wrong snapped, thanks to mention this part.
02:49:522 - Doesn't this feel a little underwhelming without the background flute (ocarina? I have no idea lol) mapped? I'd choose that to differ this part from the earlier one. i only focus synth and hats here, and trying to avoid long hold for fullstreams mode
03:07:522 (187522|3,188228|6) - here the LN's are fine as they finish the sequence and then disappear. ok
03:33:287 - add a note on 1 for the crash? the crash sound already in 1 notes and anther 1 is a tom ( cause no snare on this part timeline )
03:33:640 - I'd map the toms too, feels a little empty without them. remapped on this part
damn that's some difficulty scaling right there
ajeemaniz wrote:
[Pew]
03:06:816 (186816|0,187522|3,188228|6) - i don't know but i couldn't tell which sound you're following with the LN length here..? i think using short 1/2 LN would fit to the synth you should point on previous part too. Although, your point is right following exact sound ends. don't you feel weird if shorten it make column little bit empty? i prefer current one . ( the synth end or ignored on 03:07:875 - to focus other element sound here )
03:51:110 (231110|6) - move to 6, then 03:51:287 (231287|2) - move this to 7, 03:51:287 (231287|2,231463|2) - this jack are awkward dem make sense, consider to change
never thought you will map a trance song w depend on my taste
extra later /w/
thanks for mod and sorry for late replySoul Evans wrote:
[Pew's Another]
00:24:110 (24110|0,24199|1,24287|3,24375|2,24463|1,24552|0,24640|2,24728|3,24816|1) - This is a bit left hand biased, try balancing it. you can see this note as mirrored to make it balance 00:24:816 (24816|6,24905|5,24993|3,25081|4,25169|5,25258|6,25346|4,25434|3) -
00:25:346 (25346|4,25434|3,25522|4) - I kinda don't see any trills in the streams that are like this, maybe rearrange it for consistency of your patterns ^ explained above
00:40:699 (40699|2,40875|2,41052|2) - I am not really sure if this is consistent, if there isn't a specific reason why it's there maybe break the anchor for a better flow on streams. moved on beside columns
00:42:110 (42110|2,42287|2,42463|2) - Same thing basically, but now that you mention it, if it's gonna be like this then why is it so repetitive on the left hand? for the sake of balance i'd suggest making it for bother sides, or atleast make the second one on the right if possible. i think you didn't notice this part i was mirrored pattern each repeat chorus, i did on right side too ( also fixed which my part was same point on above too )
00:45:022 (45022|2,45199|2,45287|1) - You sure it's suppose to be played like that? it seems fine but i think it could be improved, i'll let you decide on how you'd do it though, lol. i have no problem to play here ( depend on someone specialities ). but if you having trouble on this part i try to change another pattern. This might be easier to play
00:45:022 (45022|2,45199|2,45287|1) - Can't really see how this is consistent, i haven't seen you do that for the rest of the mini LNs so it would be wise to avoid that sort of thing. i don't know your timeline seems wrong point or does got related with normalnote? revise this mod again
00:58:346 (58346|4) - I really suggest either you move this to column 5, or use mini jacks more frequently to be consistent. the kick sound note keep maintain on this column 00:58:346 (58346|5,58699|5,59052|5) -
01:01:169 (61169|3) - Oh wait you actually did, but on what level did you follow it? and is it for a specific sound? a kick sound note
01:06:816 - I think this should be part of the anchor stream, it's most likely on familiar ground with the rest. changed
01:24:816 (84816|0) - Can't really hear any sort of special sound for there to be a note here, it's too low i think LN would be enough. okay
02:35:316 (155316|2,155493|2,155669|2,155846|2) - Personal opinion but i think this is quite inconsistent, and a bit heavy, you should really start either go big or go home on these patterns lol. oh ya kinda bit less column used, i try to remake it again ( not guarantee you like it )
02:47:846 (167846|1,167934|2) - Maybe CTRL+G for better flow in the stream+LN stream. i can't get highlighted note here
03:35:052 - This is too heavy on the right side, i'm not sure if you're able to balance it well but i can trust a great mapper like you lol. something i need to new pattern this ending chorus to make more neat. i'll wait someone will complain this part again then i consider to remap it
03:51:110 (231110|3,231199|1,231287|3,231287|2,231287|0,231375|4,231375|1) - Maybe not a good way to start the LN stream, i kinda liked the other ways you did it so maybe for this too. i changed look like a stair, this bother me too keep missed on this part
EDIT : lol i forgot to give link diff fixed
http://puu.sh/uXAMX/a254f16893.osu