Well hello there. Nice map!
[General]
01:14:514 - Put a red point here and omit it, since they are two overlapped lines with different speeds due to the BPM and SV.
01:38:201 - End the kiai here maybe, since the intensity of the song is lowering down.
You could use 1.20 SV on Futsuu and Kantan instead of changing all the green points lol
[Inner Oni]
[Oni]
Nothing to say about here, I like the diff.
[Kantan]
00:45:458 - How about adding a note here? It will make the kiai ending a bit stronger.
Pretty good mapset, call me when you apply this mod.
[General]
01:14:514 - Put a red point here and omit it, since they are two overlapped lines with different speeds due to the BPM and SV.
01:38:201 - End the kiai here maybe, since the intensity of the song is lowering down.
You could use 1.20 SV on Futsuu and Kantan instead of changing all the green points lol
[Inner Oni]
- 00:20:640 - This k ddd k ddd k seems a bit random here compared to the rest of these rhythms. Try making them similiar like k ddk d kkddk or something.
[Oni]
- 00:23:504 - Hmm, using the triplet instead of it's current place, use kkd starting from this spot to emphasize an actual sound. What I mean is, 00:23:299 (96) - move this note to 00:23:572 - here and 00:23:504 (98,99) - apply ctrl+g on those.
- 01:29:474 - The first part of the section is too easy compared to Inner Oni. It has 1/4 1/6 streams while Oni only has 1/4 3-plets maximum. (not talking about the next part.) Try increasing the density by using 5-plets and the spread will be more clear.
- 00:10:822 ~ 00:18:731 - Between those two parts there is no 3/2 break, which requires at least one considering the intensity of the kiai. The first part is harder than that, due to breaks. Same applies to the next section until kiai.
- 00:43:004 - I think something like k d kkk D fits here better, and it'll create some variation between this and the first one.
- 01:02:640 (31) - I strongly recommend kat on this for two reasons: 1) There is a noticeable high sound on it, 2) You mapped that note as kat on every other diff.
- 01:16:486 (1) - I recommend moving this spinner to white tick. Plus, it's unsnapped.
Nothing to say about here, I like the diff.
[Kantan]
00:45:458 - How about adding a note here? It will make the kiai ending a bit stronger.
Pretty good mapset, call me when you apply this mod.