m4m my map
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/663704[normal]
consider increasing AR to 4 or even 4.2 since 3.5 is too low for a normal, even for the lowest diff on the set.
also increase OD to 3.5
you have a serious combo issue at the beginning of map, u are following a default of NCing at every downbeat when at the rest of the map u NCed in every 2 downbeats, consider fixing it.
e.g 00:02:079 (1) - remove
00:05:216 (1) - remove
00:08:354 (1) - remove and so on...
apart from the combo, seems clear.
[hard]
hp 4 is too low for a hard, maybe you could use 5.
00:02:863 (3,4) - why is spacing here smaller than 00:01:295 (3,4) ?
00:05:805 (2) - this is 1/8 I think
00:27:765 (4) - my personal thoughts, but u could do this slider less curved, it doesnt fit the mapset/song
00:33:844 (2) - replacing it for two notes would make the rhythm better, the gap right not is kinda weird, and slider is also ignoring important vocals at the end of it.
00:41:099 (5) - DS error, it's smaller than it should be for no reason.
00:47:863 (2) - you could remove that note if u ask me, doesn't fit that well for a hard considering that there is a hyper already. better keep the rhythm as clean as possible
00:59:922 (1,2) - consider adding some hitsounds here, feels realyl empty.
[hyper]
hp 4? hp 5.5 would fit much better for a hyper, considering hard should be 5
00:05:805 (3) - again, pretty sure it is 1/8 but it needs more check
00:28:158 (3) - placing this slider like that would flow better imo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/901745400:33:452 (1,2,3,4) - why sudden low spacing?
00:44:040 (7,8) - the beat seems too low for using a spaced stream like that, consider doing something smaller for these.
01:18:942 (3) - nc for start of new vocals.
01:20:903 (2) - placement seems weird, what about to put right to the left of (1)?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9017473[insane]
HP 6 would fit better for a 4.4 insane, especially for that BPM
00:50:511 (1) and 00:52:079 (1) - needs more emphasys imo
01:18:942 (3) - nc for start of new vocals.
clean
[alolan]
od 9 seems to big for the map itself, consider using it 8 or 8.5 instead
consider using a bigger HP rate like 6.5
00:05:805 (1) - 1/8. snap is very tricky here, u should check it better with someone else
00:09:922 (1,2,3) - where r the hitsounds?
00:39:530 (2) - move this note up a bit, it flows bad the way it is right now, like that >
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/901736000:43:256 (2,3) - the jump seems to big for me compared to the rest of the map
00:47:373 (1,2,3) - i honestly dont think that spacing the stream like that in this part of the map is a good idea, it doesn't play that well as expected.
01:00:903 (2) - remove nc
01:05:903 (5,1) - nazi: move a bit to the right to stack better with 01:05:412 (3) - lol
01:08:354 (2,3) - again another big jump with no apparent reason, neither being on the kiai can explain it the big spacing for me
01:13:844 (1,2,3,4) - i feel like a spaced stream like that doesnt make much sense with map, it is overdone if u ask me. do it like here 00:06:393 (1,2,3,4) -
01:14:628 (2) - ctrl g flows better imo
01:18:942 (1) - nc for different vocals
good luck